Ariya : BEPANAH... (No pms)...NOTE ON PG 20.. 17/5 - Page 10

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Posted: 7 years ago
#91
Nice update
Arjun ne achha sunaya un ladies ko

Omg Riya attempted sucide
Hope Arjun will bring her back to herself
Sorry for late comment

Cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: nicronyariya

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Guys I have decided to send PMS of this story...
And thus change of my mind is all beciz of u ppl who supported me a lot and showered ur unbearable love on me and my writings... So I decided to provide pm for this story...
Hope u ppl will keep loving and supporting me through out my journey in I-F...

Love
Ni😳



Dhannya ho gaye hum... aapka itna badha ashirvad paa k... *wink*

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Posted: 7 years ago
#93
Aah! at least update with pm.. kya shocking surprise dia aapne .. Ariya have a past??? Arjun kis k bareme soch rahe hai?? jo v ho ye saab clear karne ka kaam aapka hai... superb update .. thanks for pm.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#94
Wow superb amazing fabulous update
Loved it
Thanks for update
Nd pls send pm me
Eagerly waiting for next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#95
Mind blowing fabulous update...
Arjun ne bahot achhe se Sabak sikhaya unn ladies ko... Yaar Sach me aise kese koi lady dusre lady pe itne bure accusations laga sakti h... But arjun ne achhe se samjhaya sabko...
Ohh poor riya kitna depression me h... Pahle Aman ka dhokha phr uski death phr Ghar se beghar nd phr ye ladies... Hope sab jaldi thk ho Jaye... But Mera abhi bhi wahi doubt k Ariya ek dusre ko pahle see jaanate h Kya???? Qki last part me riya nd abi Arjun bhi aise hi hint de RHA h... Like arjun us riya ko yaad kr rha h jis see wo Shimla me mila tha... Iska Matlab yahi na k Ariya ek dusre ko jaanate h?? Hmmm
Continue soon and thanks for PM...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#96
Superb
Arjun save riya from those ladies
Riya try to suicide
Continue soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#97
Awesome
Continue soon
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 7 years ago
#98
nice update
arjun ki past me aisa kuch huva tha kya
aur arjun aur riya ek dusre ko kaise jante hai
thanks for the pm
update soon

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Posted: 7 years ago
#99
Oh god those ladies disgusting
Riya tried to commit suicide this is not good
Ariya already know each others
Awesome update
Cont soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 5
Doc called arjun in his cabin

" dekhiye Mr rawate she is very much in depression and uske chalte unhone aisa kadam apanaya hai... Lagta hai unhe apane life ka sabse bada jhataka laga hai jisse woh bhula nahi paa rahi hai... Apko kaise bhi karke unhe is situation se bahar Lana hoga... Warna unke bachane ka chances bahot hi kam hai... Ya fir ye kahun ki unme jaise jine ki koi ichha hi nahi hai...agar aise hi chala toh it is very dangerous for her... I hope aap samjh rahe hai joh mein kehna chah raha hun...

Arjun nodded his head and was determined to bring the lively bubbly riya back whom he met in shimla...
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He went to riya's ward.. He was in tears to see her like this bcoz she is not the real riya whom he met in shimla... Who was so strong and could face any problem... Who Forced him realise that life never stops for any1 we have to jel along the situations... Yes it was Riya who made him realise that he can't live like a lifeless body for his past he have to accept his past and move on in His life to lead a beautiful life but now the person is trying to snatch her own life... Where is that riya who used to fight against the odd and live for a good thing... He was lost in his thoughts and didn't knew when he came towards her bed and held her hand... But luckily at that moment itself he realised that riya is moving her hand means she is coming to conscious state.. Now he was determined that no matter what but he is going to bring back the old riya with a new ray of hope to live her life happily...

Riya was slowly opening her eyes...

Arjun " riya... Riya aaram se .. Kuch nahi hua hai tume.. Tum bilkul tik ho"

Riya came to her senses but she remembered her past and started yelling at him
" kyun bachaya aapne mujhe arjun...kyuuunnn... Mujhe nahi jeena aise jhoote duniyan mein.. Kyun bachaya aapane mujhe and she started to cry... Marjane dete mujhe"

It was enough for arjun his anger has no bound and he burst out
" SHUT UP... JUST SHUT UP... Kya kaha tumne . tume marna haina ... Toh maro ye lo (he gave a knife which was lying beside her bed on table)

Riya was horrified to see him like this...

"Kya hua ab nahi marna???" He cupped her face ...
"Kya ho gaya hai tume riya... Ye toh meri riya nahi hai... Ye meri riya ho hi nahi Sakti...kyunki meri riya ko musibaton se ladna aata hai.. Woh kabhi kaayaron ki tarah mushkilon se nahi bhagti hai balki woh toh uska DAT kar saamna karti hai... Toh fir mujhe nahi lagta hai ki tum meri riya ho... Mein iss riya ko jaanta hi nahi hun joh mushkilon se baagh jaaye... Mein USS Riya ko jaanta hun joh past mein nahi present mein jeeti hai... Joh har dukh ko bhulakar apani aane wali jindagi ko khule bahon se apanati hai... Kahan hai woh riya joh ek din iss so called great cop arjun suryakanth rawate ko jindagi ki sahi maayne bataya tha...Kahan hai woh riya jisne ek jindalaash insaan ko fir se Jine ki nayi maksat di... Mujhe nahi lagta ki tum meri riya Ho... Meri riya tumhari tarah kayar nahi ho Sakti ... Kabhi nahi..."

Riya was staring him without blinking her eyes... Bcoz she know some where He is correct she is not the one who run away from problems... But what she should do now... Her whole world is shattered... At this time her mind is blank but she definitely know that she is wrong ... Giving up on Her life was not a solution for her problem... She is a fighter and she can't give up so easily... But she some where know that now she is not the same bold riya... But she'll try her level best to come out of it...

Arjun knows that his words r doing their effect on her mind so he decided to cont... Holing her hand...

" tume yaad hai riya jab hum shimla mein mile the...

FLASHBACK

arjun was on a undercover mission ... He was there in shimla bcoz he got an information that a bus full of orphan children was on tour for shimla and terrorist were planing to hijack it to save their team members from police ... So arjun had to enter into that bus.. So he acted as if his car had got some problem and asked lift from that bus... This way he entered the bus... When he entered the bus he saw so many children happily enjoying themselves... But his sharp eye got hold of a pretty Women who was enjoying with those children who mingling with those kids was looking like a cute little angel... Who couldn't take his eyes from her but soon recovered and took his seat beside her which was empty...

The girl " hi i'm riya ... Aur aap"

"Hi i'm arjun... Woh actually meri gaadi kharab ho gai thi toh iss bus pe aana pada"

Riya " oh it's alright...Shayad aapki gaadi isliye kharab ho gai hogi kyunki aapka iss Bachhon se milna likha tha.. And she gave her pretty dimple smile to him..."

Arjun was mesmerised to see her full of positivity... How dose she manages to do it...

Throughout the journey arjun was admiring her
.. Riya kept on blabbering and arjun just listening to her... And while talking to her he came to know that she is married and don't know why .. His heart was paining like hell to see her saying she is married... He wanted to stop her at the same time the bus came to an hault with a sudden brake ... Arjun knew what was going to happen ... And as his expectation the bus was hijacked... The children were hell afraid and riya was the one who was consoling them... All the children hugged riya bcoz they were hell scary...

Riya " nahi nahi bachhon aise nahi rote ... Aapko meine kya sikhaya tha ki kabhi apane daro ko hamare mind ko control karne nahi dena chahiye... Aap log toh bahot strong hona.. And make them a little relieved ... She said " aap logon ko pata haina bhagwan bachhon se sab se jyaada pyaar karte hai toh i'm sure woh apane iss pyaare bachon ko bachane keliye kisina kisi super hero ko bhej hi denge... Right bachhon..."

Every1 nodded a little...

Arjun mv " ye ladki itani mushkil halaton mein bhi itani strong kaise hai... Aur toh aur ab bachhon ko bhi yahi kaha ki mushkilon se kabhi nahi darna chahiye... Kaash mujhe bhi koi aisa samjhane wala tab mila hota jab mein unn halaton se guzar raha tha.. Jab duniyan mujhe kisi mujarim ki tarah dekh rahi thii jab ki galati kisi aur ki thi..."

Arjun's thought was broken when he saw one of the terrorist took one girl at his gun point just to tell govt that they could do anything... And the other one started fitting bomb in their bus...

It was enough for arjun now he have to come to action... While acting as innocent he came to a goon who was alone there inside the bus and kill him with his gun which was having a silencer fitted...every1 was shocked to see arjun with gun specially riya ...

Arjun soon one by one killed every1 ... And to his luck back up was there at right time to help him... All the children were saved and those terrorist were shot...

Children ran towards arjun and hugged him tightly saying that riya didi was right u r our superhero...

Arjun had a smile on his face looking at so many innocent faces... He safely made all the children to go into their bus... And left from there without turning back once...

He was unaware of the fact that one person was following him just to thank him... But to his bad luck when he was just passing through the market he saw some ppl harrasing a women for the bad deed of her husband... Seeing that scene arjun's blood boiled like anything... He went towards them and gave them his peace of mind... Soon Every1 were sorry for their misbehaviour... And the crowd was nowhere now... The lady thanked him and went away with the tear filled eyes...

But the fact was that arjun was reminded of his past ... He remembered how his mother was accused for his father's deed... How she was tortured for what she hadn't done.. It was his father who joined a bad company and destroyed so many ppl's lives and when he was dead ppl started torturing his mother... At that time arjun was just 12 yrs old ... But still those scenes had made big impact on his brain... He was dipressed to see his mother suffering a lot and he was very much helpless...
And one fine day his mother couldn't take it anymore and gave up on her life... That day was the horrible day for arjun bcoz after his mother's death ppl targeted arjun... They literally wanted to kill him for his father's deed bcoz they thought that will be the right revenge... But they were stopped by a kind person who was just passing from there ... Seeing the crowd he had arrived to see what was going on... And it was him the great business tycoon SURYAKANTH RAWATE AND HIS WIFE NIRMALA RAWATE... Nirmala saw this brutal thing happening with a innocent boy and rushed towards them to save him... Her words were enough to make ppl's mouth shut and soon they took arjun with them... It was nirmala and surkanth who supported arjun a lot and told him that he should become strong and show ppl that how wrong they were it was then arjun decided to change ppl's mind and erase the dirt filled in this country... And the way to that was joing the police force... Rawate family took care of arjun same as their own son bcoz nirmala could never conceive...Arjun had cleared his training... And the biggest shock he got was that suryakanth and nirmala r dead in an accident... His whole world was shattered again... It was sameer who became his support system who was His best buddy and told arjun to not to give up and stay determined to fulfil his parents dream of seeing him as a sincere police officer... Though he was in depression he tried to come out of it just to fulfil his parent's dream..."

His thought was broken by a sudden pull on his arm and he fell on the ground with a girl...

And he was shocked to see it was RIYA...

" pagal ho gaye hai aap ... Apka dhayan kidhar tha... Mein aadhe ghante se aapaka peecha kar rahi hun aur aapko awazein de rahi thi lekin aap hai ki... Aisa kya ho gaya ki aapko ye tak dhayan nahi tha ki aap ek truck ke aage aagaye the..."

Arjun was not knowing what to tell her... But now he needed sme1 to Share his sorrows at this point of time... So in a flow of feelings he narrated everything to riya...

Riya" aapka iss tarah se apane past se mooh mode lene se sachai nahi badal jaayegi arjun... Aapko apane past se bahar aana hoga... Usse accept karke apane future ke baare mein sochana hoga... Dhyaan rakhna hoga ki past ki wajah se aap apani present aur future ko kharab na kare... Jindagi bahot badi hai arjun... Aur aapko kya lagta hai ... Aap ko iss halat mein dekh kar aapke parents khush honge?? Bilkul nahi ... Sochiye woh kitani dard mein honge aapko iss tarah ghut ghut ke jite hue dekh kar... Apko toh ye sochna chahiye ki bhagwan ne aapko doosara mouka diya hai apane jindagi ko kushi se Jine ka...apane parents ke sapane ko poora karne ka... DON'T LOOK BACK ARJUN , MOVE ON..."

and from that day ariya became frnds... Even though they were frnds they never got a chance to meet each other once they reached Mumbai... But still they used to call each other whenever they felt lonely...

FLASHBACK END


I know it's a bit long... But couldn't drag it More and couldn't make u guyz wait more... So this is it... Now it's ur turn to tell how is it??? Plzz do hit like button if u liked it and do tell what u feel about this update... Whether it was entertaining or boring??? Will be eagerly waiting for ur reviews...


LOVE

NI😳


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