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Posted: 7 years ago
#61
Never mind but kya tum ye story firse shuru karna chahti ho?? agar Haa to meri ye kehna hai ki life me kya hone wala hai hume pata nahi so I don't think ye firse shuru karne se kuch hoga .. after all jis tarha se tumhe bich me jana padha agar firse jana padhe to?? taab kya firse shuru karogi ?? yeah story me naya turn n twist la sakhti ho paar firse shuru karne ki kya jarurat ?? Waqt kisi k liye rukta nahi so hume v isse sahi tarha se use karna chahiye ..
plz don't mind but ye meri point of view hai .. jo mujhe samajh me aaya aur jo Mujhe sahi laga mein sirf wahi kaha.. aage tumhara marji n mein kisi ko meri baat se hurt v nahi karna chahti hu.. aur nahi kisi ko kaha hai.. as a reader mujhe jo sahi laga wohi bola mein ne...
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Posted: 7 years ago
#62
I agree with Ariya dear
Tumhari story hai agar tum change karna chaho tho its ur wish
Par as a reader I want u to cont this story aur jo twist tum dena chahti ho wo do aur doosre nayi story ahi agar cont karna chahti ho wo tumhari marzi
We will wait for ur update it may be either this story continuation or new story
Sorry if u hurt
Bye take care
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Posted: 7 years ago
#63
Samhitha chalo draft dorikesinda
Jaldi update chesey
If it is the draft which u sent me
Then buddies u gonna read the gud one
Twaraga chey or else sammy i will kill u (champutha)😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
#64

Originally posted by: Sahanashaleen

Samhitha chalo draft dorikesinda

Jaldi update chesey
If it is the draft which u sent me
Then buddies u gonna read the gud one
Twaraga chey or else sammy i will kill u (champutha)😉

Vaishu dorikesindi
Yup samee story
Aina chadivav kada
Tnx abha for ur support
U r my wall
Luv u bhabi (vadina)
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Posted: 7 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: Aayat.ariya14

Never mind but kya tum ye story firse shuru karna chahti ho?? agar Haa to meri ye kehna hai ki life me kya hone wala hai hume pata nahi so I don't think ye firse shuru karne se kuch hoga .. after all jis tarha se tumhe bich me jana padha agar firse jana padhe to?? taab kya firse shuru karogi ?? yeah story me naya turn n twist la sakhti ho paar firse shuru karne ki kya jarurat ?? Waqt kisi k liye rukta nahi so hume v isse sahi tarha se use karna chahiye ..
plz don't mind but ye meri point of view hai .. jo mujhe samajh me aaya aur jo Mujhe sahi laga mein sirf wahi kaha.. aage tumhara marji n mein kisi ko meri baat se hurt v nahi karna chahti hu.. aur nahi kisi ko kaha hai.. as a reader mujhe jo sahi laga wohi bola mein ne...

Actually i didnt mean to write it in a hurry but i was in a hurry that time
And i wont leave it this time and wait u will lyk it fr sure
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Posted: 7 years ago
#66
PART 1 (REBOOTED REWRITTEN VERSION)
7.00 am 20 jan 2014
ABCDEF BANK
Everybody r busy with their work . Suddenly a man came running there and started yelling loudly. All members gathered there and started their queries about him. Among all employees a man with curly hair came and asked his identity
Man: what happened ? Y r u yelling ?
2nd man: hello sir i am ravi kanth just before an hour i collected 50 lakhs from this bank . I went to my daughter's school to pick her . But there i was beaten badly by sone thieves . They abducted my money along wid my daughter . I have to pay that money in our showroom today itself (he is apnting heavily ) .
7.00 am SOMEWHERE IN THE CITY
Dream sequence
Girl : junno baby utto na
Boy: rosh aaj sunday. Come on let's do something interesting
Rosh : intresting (innocently ) kis ke bare mein baath kar rahe ho arjun
Arjun : yaha deko city ka view yahi dekhne ke bare mein bol rahe hun (naughtily ) tum kiske baare mein soch rahe hun
Roshni : badmash ...😡 mein tumhe chodunga na
Arjun (running ): pehle pakadke dekho
She dissappears suddenly from his view. He woke up from his sleep panting heavily. He was totally covered with sweat . He got down from his bed and started to move towards his restroom brushing away his thoughts .
Finally he stood ready infront of the mirror in his cop avatar. Suddenly he found a watch unwrapped it from its cover . The cover looks a bit dusty but not the watch he would just gaze it daily but today he placed it on his wrist . And her words started ringing in his ears
Girl: sir this is not just a present but a token of gratitude for tge help u have done .thanks a lot for making this simple girl riya into a complete officer riya mukharjee sir thanks alot
He running away from his thoughts and feelings he got into his suv and moved towards his office
9.00 am ETF OFFICE .
SHREE : please sit down . I will be back in 2 mins. Mein tumhare baare mein mere cheif se baath karna hai mr ravi
Shree moves to a cabin brightly written
SAMEER DAMSINGH RATHORE, CHEIF ,EMERGENCY TASK FORCE
Informs him about this. He asks shree to bring that man to the conference room. Arjun stares that man through the glass pane and leaves from his cabin to the conference
room .
Rathore : ayesha come on move to that plaxe with chotu and collect any evidence about this thing from people near by
Shree :and chotu uss bank mein uska acc no give it
Chotu : fine shree i will get it .
CONFERENCE ROOM
Rathore : ab hame boliye yeh kaisa hua
Ravi : sir i am a sales manager in a gold and diamonds shop.yesterday there was a bulk order of 50 lakhs sir we yesterday itself delivered the jewels and today morning i went to collect that money and all this massacre happened
Arjun : did u find anything strange
Ravi : no sir
Arjun :rathore i have some work shree follow me
Rathore : carry on
ETF PANTRY :
shree : yaha ewww sir u said we r going out and u bought me 2 this cabin
Arjun : i said we r moving out of that room so stop behaving like a teenager
Shree : sorry sir. kya kaam hai boliye
Arjun : uss ravi ka background check karo i mean his last calls transactions etc
Shree : I'll get them in 10 min
Arjun's cabin :
Arjun m.v : kuch toh choot raha hai agar yeh admi sach kehrahe toh us admi ko apne beti se jyaada paison ka fikar horaha hai. Toh...tohh.. god whatt god not again arjun ... arjun soch soch some thing is missing in this puzzle
Suddenly his phone vibrates this bring him out of his thoughts and he looks at his phone and moves towards conference room determinedly . He pushes the door and enters ..
Rav : did u recover those money sir
Arjun :yes
Ravi : thank You Sir . WHere Are MY MONEY

Edited by SamhithaWRIER - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#67
God vachesava
Nenaithe champedam ankunna asalu
and update is too small ya
But satisfied le sammy
And update it asap

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Posted: 7 years ago
#68
Awesome update dear
loved it
arjun is missing both rosh and riya interesting
cont soon
thanks for pm
bye take care
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Posted: 7 years ago
#69
Sach mein ajeeb hai beti se zyada paiso ki chinta etf mein sab hai siway Riya ke nice restart dear eagerly waiting for nxt and thanks for pm and hope u will give update regularly
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Posted: 7 years ago
#70
Tera paisa jail k bedroom me hai beta... jaa.. jaa k le aa... Hahaha !!

nyc update .. but be regular n thanks for pm.

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