# T3 JID TERE PYAR KI last part on page 52 6/8/2020

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Mdmadona

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Posted: 8 years ago

#151

Aww ansh is so cute

Is that arjun in hospital???

Whose name he remembers n why he is in hospital for one year???

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#152

first of all sorry for such a long gap..but its not only about marriage but some other problems involved me so i couldn't visit forum ..but now all is well n I'm finally back n try to be regular ..hope i still have reader here...

n about all your pm's my dear writer I'll surly leave comments after reading them ..i really missed u all..

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#153

part 38

riya hug ansh tightly who is sobbing in her arms..all look at them n feel bad..

ri - ansh beta now plz stop crying ..ap to masa or babasa k strong baby ho na.chup ho jao..apke babasa apse bahut pyar karte hai .or ap is duniya k sabse special bacche ho..

ansh look at her

an - sacchi masa..

ri - hmm sacchi mucchi..now smile

ansh smile n ri too smile

an - masa mai kitna spel(special ) hu..

ri - abhi batati hu..

she take him in her arms n stand up..put him down n hold his hand n start singing

Ho...

Na woh akhiyan ruhani kahin

(she kiss his eyes)

Na woh chehra noorani kahin

(she take his face in her both hand he look exactly like arjun so she remember n imagine arjun n sing)

Kahin dil wali baatein bhi na

Na wo sajri jawani kahin

(ansh saw her lost so press her hand she look at him n smile n take him in lap n twirl him)

Jag ghoomeya thaare jaisa na koi (x2)

(ansh smile n she also smile n sing)

Na toh hansna rumaani kahin

Na toh khushboo suhani kahin

(ridz come n take ansh in her lap n sing)

Na toh rangli adayein dekhin

(karan also come n pinch his nose n sing)

Na toh pyari si nadaani kahin

(both karid sing)

Jaisa tu hai waisa rehna

Jag ghoomeya thaare jaisa na koi (x4)

all clap for them ..party get over they return home ridz n ansh sleep due to over tiredness..riya complete her work n come to close windows..it starts raining outside..she see arjun outsite her house n cup his face n sing

Baarishon ke mausamon ki bheegi hariyali tu

(he kiss her cheek n smile ..she blush hard)

Sardiyon me gaalon pe jo aati mere lali tu

(she hug him )

Raaton ka sukoon

Raaton ka sukoon bhi hai

Subah ki azaan hai

(he too wrap her in his arms..she feel alot peace)

Chahaton ki chaadaron mein kare rakhwali tu

( she look at him like eternity )

Kabhi haq saare rakhta hai

Kabhi samjhe begaani kahin

Tu toh jaanta hai marke bhi

Mujhe aati hai nibhani kahin

Woh hi karna jo hai kehna

( her eyes ask many questions n his eyes assure her..she smile n he twirl her)

Jag ghoomeya thaare jaisa na koi (x2)

( she stop n found herself alone under rain..she compose herself n come inside..she change clothes n stand infront of arjun's pic )

Apne naseebon mein yaa

Honsle ki baaton mein

Sukhon aur dukhon wali

Saari saugaaton mein

Sang tujhe rakhna hai

Tere sang rehna

Meri duniya mein bhi

Mere jazbaaton mein

( she look at ansh who is arjun's part for her..)

Teri milti nishani kahin

Jo hai sabko dikhani kahin

Main toh jaanti hoon marke bhi

Tujhe aati hai nibhani kahin

Woh hi karna jo hai kehna

Jag ghoomeya thaare jaisa na koi

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#154

scene shift

Ayurvedic healing center mumbai

one man is looking at sea continuously n here is only one name on his lips n heart :- shona...

one man n lady come to him ,he too look at them but next min he again turn his face toward sea ..both sigh n leave him alone again..they come to doctor's cabin

dr - are mr sameer ,aisha ji..come

sam - dr arjun mai koi bhi improvement nahi hua hai..

dr (sadly ) - mr sameer aap to jante hi hai arjun ki condition kitni kharab hai or uske thik hone k chances bhi bahut kam hai..hum to bas apni koshish kar sakte hai..

ai - ap dr hokar itna negative mat boliye dr

dr - negative nahi bol raha aisha ji . sacchai bata raha hu..or maine ye nahi kaha ki koi chance nahi hai..but haan only miracle can heal him...

both take his leave n again go to arjun n left for home..

rathod mansion

samsha return home..a two year girl come n hug Sam's leg..he take her in his arms..n she kiss his cheek

gi - baba

sam - are baba ki gudiya uth gai,,

she smile at him n aisha look at her dirty hand

ai - saisha ..ye kya kiya apne ..aaj fir mitti khayi garden mai jakar..

saisha make innocent face n look at sam

sam - its really wrong sai ..apko aisa nahi karna tha ..n aisha ab sai aisa nahi karega right sai

sai nod n run from there

ai - aap humeha aise hi karte hai sameer..

sam - bacchi hai aisha..

ai - par abhi se gndi adat sikhegi to badi hokar kya karegi..

sam - badi hokar sudhar jayegi,,

ai - kitni sharartien karne lagi hai sameer wo

sam - uski yahi sararatien to ab jindgi jeene ka sahara ban chuki hai..warna arjun ko us haal mai dekhne k bad se aaj tak ek pal ko sukun nahi aya hai mujhe ..

both drift in flashback

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#155

both drift in flashback

one n half year ago.

samsha n etf team come to a village for a case..after finishing it they are returning from hospital where they go for some papers ..suddenly Aisha's eyes land on something n she get numb n clutch sam's hand..sam look at her n then in direction of her eyes he too get numb

sam - arjun..

arjun is laying on bed lifeless..dr come there

dr - aap jante hai inhe

sam - haa mera chota bhai hai ye ..par ye yaha kaise

dr - do sal pehle gao walo ko ye bahut hi buri condition mai chattano k bich mai mila tha..shayad nadi mai behta hua kahi se aya ho..tab se ye yahi hai..iski shinakht hi nahi hui..

sam - wo thik to hai na dr

dr - nahi bas keh sakte hai saans chal rahi hai..uska shareer (body) puri tarah kam karna band kar chuka hai par uska dil jaise dhadakna chodta hi nahi.,uski atma jaise jid par adi hai ki shareer nahi chodegi

sam - hmm..jid hi hai dr..kisi k pyar ki jid jo use aaj jinda rakha hai us upar wale ne..i want my brother dr.

dr nod n they do all formalities n bring arjun mumbai..

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sam - pure ded sal ho gaye aisha ..drs ne use fir se khada kar to diya par aaj bhi wo kisi jnda lash se kam nahi..

ai - haa sameer .but uska us blast mai bach jana , physically thik hona miracle hi to hai..iska matlab hai bhagwan bhi chahta hai wo shona k , humare sath rahe..to ek din wo bhi hoga..ek miracle fir hoga sameer jo hume humara arjun wapas waise hi hasta khelta wapus mil jayegi..or humari riya bhi..

sam - kahan or kaisi hogi riya ,kitna dhunda use aisha ..par jane kahan chup gayi hai..itna ruth gayi hai kya wo humse

ai - nahi sam riya humse kabhi nahi ruth sakti..ek din wo hume jarur milegi

sam - kahi bahut der na ho jaye aisha..kahi riya aage to nahi bad gayi hogi..

ai - sameer ap arjun or riya k pyar par shak kar rahe hai..aap to mujhse jyada us pyar k sakshi hai..wo pagli to aaj bhi usi shiddat se apne arjun ka intjar kar rahi hogi ..chahe duniya k kisi bhi kone mai ho...

sam - tumne sahi kaha aisha..par kash wo mil jati to arjun shayad jaldi wapas aa jayega...wo kisi bat par react nahi karta.ek jinda lash hai wo..bolta hai to bas shona, ..

ai - hum bas koshish or prayer hi kar sakte hai sameer...

he cry n aisha console him..

scene shift

today is Sunday .so its off for both ri n ridz . ansh is sleeping as its also his holiday ..

ri - ridz kya hua kya soch rahi hai..

rid - di kal jo hua wo thik nahi hua. ansh abhi bahut chota hai..uske masum man par kitni chot pahuchi hai

ri - hmm ..sahi kaha ridz,.or meri majburi to dekh mai apne bacche k liye kuch nahi kar pa rahi..

rid - abhi ansh chota hai di jaise jaise wo bada hoga uske sawal badenge

ri - uske har sawal ka jawab hai ridz..

rid - di tum maan q nahi leti ki arjun bhaiya ab nahi hai..

ri - kaise man lu ridz ki wo nahi hai jabki meri har ek saans kehti hai ki kahi to mere arjun ki saanse chal rahi hai..

rid - to q tum aisi rehti ho ..na tum suhagan ho di na hi widhwa

ri - mera pati jinda hai ridz to mai widhwa kaise hui..or rahi bat mere suhagan hone ki to maine apne suhag ki chijon ko choda nahi hai..wo mere arjun ki amanat hai jab wo lautega to wo hi sab fir mujhe pehnayega..

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#156

rid - di us blast mai bachna namumkin tha. sab maan chuke hai tum hi q nahi manti

ri - tum janti ho na ridz us bhagwan se meri banti nahi..qki usne mujhse mera har apna har khushi chini thi..par jab arjun meri life mai aya to wo jung tham si gayi..dosti na sahi par jung bhi nahi hai..mai chahe use puju ya nahi par itna vishwas jarur hai ki agar wo mere arjun ko chinta to mere samne jaise ma baba ko china tha.wo mujhe dard de sakta hai dhoka nahi..mere arjun ki lash kahi nahi mili ridz

rid - di tum khud officer reh chuki ho mujhse behtar janti ho..itne bade explosion mai body bachti hi kahan hai

ri - mai tumhari batan bhi lu ridz par ye dil nahi manta ,.is dil mai arjun se dur hone ki takleef to hai par use kho dene ka dard nahi..wo lautega ridz wo jarur lautega apni shona k liye apne ansh k liye..

she cry n run from there..ridz aslo sob

rid - kash di agar mere bas mai hota to mai apni sari khushi qurban karke badle mai arjun bhaiya ko mang leti,,par mai kuch nahi kar sakti ,..par bhagwan ji aap to sab kar sakte hai miracle bhi..to kar dijiye na ye miracle , khatam kar dijiye apni or di ki ye jung..or jeet jane diye di k pyar ko ..ho jane dijiye puri unke pyar ki jid..

here ansh listen all their conversation .he come to ridz

an - macchi

ridz clear her tears but didn't understand that ansh listen all

rid - haa beta bolo

an - macchi aap lo q lahe ho

rid - bas aise hi beta kisi ki yad aa gayi

an - yad ane se dald hota hai macchi ..mujhe dald hota hai to mai lota hu na..

rid - haa ansh yadien chot se jyada dard deti hai..kabhi na bharne wala dard..tum abhi nahi samjhoge..chalo mai tumhe milk n toast deti hu..

she give him breakfast n ansh leave for playing ..but he go on roof n sit in corner

an - masa to mujhse bhi jyada babasa ko miss kalti hai.aap kab aaoge babasa masa or mai apko bahut miss kalte hai..

he sob ..he hear some sound n come at balcony of roof..a lil boy of his age is playing with his father..both are playing cricket ..boy is too much happy

an - mele babasa bhi pas hote to hum bhi khub khelte,ol masa ko sale kam akele nahi kalne palte,,hum teeno bhi bunty ( his friend ) ki talah ghumne jate,,

he sob more n sleep there,,ri come there to dry clothes n find ansh sleeping there,.his cheeks has dry tears marks..her heart pinch seeing her child in that vulnerable condition ..she pick him in her arms n make him sleep on bed..

few hour later ansh wake up n all behave normal so that other can feel happy ..

an - masa mai babasa jaisa hu..

ri - hmm ..bilkul arjun ki tarah..wahi ankhe, wahi smile ..unhi ki tarah naughty ,waise hi batien banane mai mahir or utne hi jiddi bhi.,,

ansh get happy to listen that he is just like his babasa

an - babasa bhi jiddi the

ri - bahut jyada ..wo sirf jid karte hi nahi the use puri tarah hasil karke hi dam lete the..apni jid nibhana unhe khub aata tha..

an - sacchi

ri - haa ..sacchi mucchi..accha chalo ab khel aao thodi der fir night mai homework complete karenge..

an - nahi masa mai abhi hw kalunga

he run to his room..he complete his work n his eyes land on arjun's pic

an - babasa masa kehti hai mai apki talah hu..ap jo bhi jid kalte the nibhate the...ab meli bhi jid hai jise mai pula kalunga..

he look at arjun's pic determined ...