ARIYA SS DIL KI AWAAZ PART 13 PAGE 40 16/06 - Page 7

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Posted: 8 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: rvss

Nice..

Update. .

Waiting for next part.


Thanks
Will update soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#62
This is a movie story right???
I felt sad for that couple who got separated
So in this, it's Sam n jeny poor them
Eagerly waiting for ri entry n ariya meeting
Awesome update
Cont sooon
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Posted: 8 years ago
#63

Originally posted by: madmadona

This is a movie story right???

I felt sad for that couple who got separated
So in this, it's Sam n jeny poor them
Eagerly waiting for ri entry n ariya meeting
Awesome update
Cont sooon


NOT exactly... it's my own version... I've mentioned this in the prologue
Yeah... thanks a lot di... keep reading
Will update soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#64
Awsome update

Love it..

Riya was a studious girl in past..

What had happened in past with ariya?

My guess was right rohit has lucamia ..

Precap is interesting

Plz update soon

Thank you for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
#65

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

Awsome update

Love it..

Riya was a studious girl in past..

What had happened in past with ariya?

My guess was right rohit has lucamia ..

Precap is interesting

Plz update soon

Thank you for pm


Yup di... what happened with ariya n the past that will be revealed as the story progresses
Thanks
Will continue soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#66
PART 5

Arjun and sameer on the car... arjun is driving and sees sameer who is unusually silent

Arjun: kyu re kya huva... jab aa rahe the tab to bade maze le raha tha mere taang kheezhkar... ab kya huva??? Aise chup kyun hai???
Sameer: kuch nahi yaar...
Arjun stops the car...
Sameer: oye ghaadi kyun rok diya???
Arjun: ab jab tak tu yeh nahi batayega ki tu aisa chup kyun hai??? Main ghaadi start nahi karunga...
Sameer: arjun yeh tum...
Arjun: soch lo maasa rah dekh rahi hogi...
Sameer: achcha batata hoon... yaar mere dil pata nahi kyun aise lag raha hai ki mein yeh Shaadi karke galat kar raha hoon...
Arjun : kyu kal tak to teek tha sab...
Sameer: haa yaar manta hoon par jab jenny ko dekha to purani sab baatein yaad aagayi...
Arjun: Sam ... tu ne to bataya ki tu aage badna chahta hai... phir achanak aise doubt kyun aaya dimag mein???
Sameer: vahi to... mein samaj nahi pa raha hoon...
Arjun : dekh ab jo bhi decision leni hainna dil mein Ayesha aur maasa ko rakhar karna...
Sameer:hmm ab chalein???
Arjun: ha chalo..

Sameer goes into flash back...
Sameer's first day in college he has already become friends with arjun as they are room mates and met the previous day already...
Arjun: Sameer voh dekh canteen chal vahan chai peethe hai... class shuru hone mein abhi adhe ghante hai..
Sameer: ha chal...
They were going to order coffee when Sameer sees a beautiful girl with top and palazzo
Arjun: Sameer tu Kya lega cold coffee ya cappuccino???
Sameer is lost in the girl...
Arjun: Sameer and shakes him...
Sameer: ha
Arjun: kahan ko gaya and he sees the girl and smiles ...
Sameer: voh voh...
Arjun : samaj gaya chalo yeh bata tu kya lega???
Sameer: kuch bhi ...
Arjun shook is head disbelievingly
Arjun : 2 cold coffees please...
They get it and goes to the seat..
After 5 min 2 girls come...
yeah it's Jenny whom Sam saw and fell in love at first sight with her...
Jenny: hi Kya hum yahan bait sakte hain...voh actually bakki sab seniors hain...
Sameer: yeah yeah sure...
Arjun sees roshni and falls for her
Jenny: hi Jennifer Roy
Roshni : hi roshni Singh
Arjun: hi arjun
Sameer: hi Sameer
Arjun: aapko kaise pata ki hum first years hai...
Roshni: yeh aapki I card...
Arjun checks in his pocket and understands that his I card is missing
Arjun: thanks a lot
Roshni: dosti mein no sorry and no thanks
Arjun : hmm yeah thanks vaapas...
Arjun and roshni turn to see Jenny and Sam lost in them selves they shake them both and they come to present
Arjun: Sam... and shakes him
He comes to present
Arjun: kahan kho gaye ??? Ghar aagaya...
Sameer: oh sorry
Arjun and sameer enter the house
Arjun: maasa bhuk lag rahi hai
Maasa: haa beta khaana taiyyar hain...
Arjun and sameer have dinner and go to their respective rooms...
Arjun: arey mein to bhul gaya kal to mera conference mein presentation hai... god and he opens his cupboard and an album named memories catches his eyes...
He opens the album and sees the photos. One photo with him beside his bike..
Arjun remembers his change after the accident
Riya: rosh sab teek heinna ???
Rosh : ha yaar bus voh rest karne ko keh rahe the voh bilkul toot gaya yaar kal uska police selection hai...
Riya: teek hai tum jao...
Sameer: chutki yeh lo uske liye khaana...
Riya: aap sab class jaiyeye Varna attendance shortage ho jayega...
They all go..
Riya goes to Arjuns room...
Arjun is going to slit his veins...
Riya: arjun ... yeh tum kya kar rahe ho...
Arjun : chodo mujhe riya...
Riya: tu pagal ho gaya...
Arjun: nahi Riya mera dream job
Riya: tum itne mein hi himmat har gaya???
Arjun looks on ...
Riya: arjun ... har kissi ko voh milna jaroori nahi hai jisse voh chahta ho... par jo mila hainna usse hum khush hona chahiye... kitne log AIMS ke liye try Kar rahe hein ?? Tujhe mila na ... phir kyun Kar Raha hai??? Kya huva agar tum police nahi bana us Din dr mishra ke talk ke baad tune hi to kaha tha ki tu neurosurgeon banna chahta hain... to banke dikha shaayad Tum uske liye hi pad rahe ho... bhagvaan khud yehi chahte hein tumhaare liye ...
Just think over it ... she starts feeding him the food... he eats thinking about riyas words..
Next day morning

Riya gets up to see arjun seeing her ...
Arjun: good morning riya...
Riya: kya baat hai??? Aaj seedha riya na chashmish na behenji..
Arjun: I'm sorry riya meinne tumhe bahut hurt kiya Hai...
Riya: nahi arjun... muje accha lagta tha... haa thoda sa bura bhi ...
Arjun : sorry...
Riya: its okay

After feeding him breakfast ..
Riya eats diary milk
Arjun : tum khane ke baad sweet khate ho??
Riya: yeah...
Arjun: smiles and calls her candy..
Riya: candy???
Arjun: because u eat sweets
They Laugh... but arjun feels pain in his stomach
Riya: tu bhi na arjun..

Arjun comes out of his thoughts

Arjun: candy jaldi aajao... can't wait to see you...
And prepares for his presentation...

Next day

Arjun and sameer at the breakfast table
Arjun : maasa to mein chalta hoon...
Maasa: rukhiye yeh leejiye dhai shakkar...

He eats and goes

PRECAP

RIYA IN INDIA...
Edited by balan04 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
#67
awesome update...
ariya flash back..lovely
continue soon..
waiting for next..

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Posted: 8 years ago
#68

Originally posted by: Gaurilagade

awesome update...
ariya flash back..lovely
continue soon..
waiting for next..


Thanks will continue soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#69

Originally posted by: Shanafr

awesome update

loveit
cont soon


Thanks will continue soon 😊
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Posted: 8 years ago
#70
awesome update
loved it
Sameer is having second thought about marriage
Arjun aur Sameer dono ko love at first sight hua
omg Arjun was going to commit suicide but riya stopped him
dono ki dosti ne naya mod liya
cont soon

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