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Posted: 8 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: syndeyshine00
[DIV]Yesss[/DIV][DIV]Awesome update[/DIV][DIV]Continue sooon[/DIV][DIV]Waiting for new entry to their lives[/DIV][BR]

thanku
will continue soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: neelpari
very nice update[DIV]ayugdha abeer missing anuj[/DIV][DIV]anwita n her family moments so nice[/DIV][DIV]update soon[/DIV][DIV]thanks for pm[/DIV]

thanks dear
glad u like moments
will continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

#163

Originally posted by: nitris23
Awesome update[DIV]Loved it[/DIV][DIV]Plz cont soon[/DIV][DIV]Thnx 4 pm[/DIV]

thanks dear
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Posted: 8 years ago

#164

Originally posted by: sorathsheikh
<font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="3">Awesome update sis , as usual[:$][:D]beautifully written each and every single description ... loved the beginning wala conversation between ayu and vir[:$]loved the fb wala part too[:$]and abeer and anuj's beautiful conversation and the wish part of happy birthday The girl was pissed off from her work[;)][LOL]hehe[LOL][LOL]Thanks for pm</font>

thanks dear
gald u loved moments n fbs
hmm she is really
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Posted: 8 years ago

#165

Originally posted by: Kasturi.gupta
Dying to read the story...[DIV]PLEASE UPDATE SOON..[/DIV][DIV]Waiting for anvisha entry in SAAT...[/DIV]

sorry dear for late
bt today sure
anu will enter but lil wait

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Posted: 8 years ago

#166

Originally posted by: bloomie
awesome update[DIV]loved it[/DIV][DIV]Ayugdh ne akele hi sabki band baja di[/DIV][DIV]abeer missed his brother[/DIV][DIV]saat ka formation ho gaya[/DIV][DIV]cont soon[/DIV]

thanks dear
yeah ayugdh one man army hai
sath formed officially
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Posted: 8 years ago

#167

Originally posted by: Kasturi.gupta
[BR][DIV]UPDATE SOON...[/DIV][DIV]WAITING TO MANY DAYS...[/DIV]

hmm aaj pakka

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Posted: 8 years ago

#168

Originally posted by: Shalvisharma97
Dii when u gona update this story[DIV]Plz continue soon[/DIV][DIV]Waiting for the update[/DIV]

will continue soon
sorry for making u wait

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Posted: 8 years ago

#169

part 4,

one year later ..

present day

saat team is now perfectly traind team and in just a year they handle very crucial cases..all are very professional n strict in their work..they are team a best team but only for work .they don't know each other except their name their working capabilities n some lil thing..

now let us have a look on life of them .n all pov

bhumi is sitting on her bed , sleep is far away from her eye..she look at date on her phone n think

bhumi pov

ek sal ho gaya mujhe yaha aye..I'm happy ke roj ke tano ,roktok or dikhawe se dur hu..par ek sal ho gaya jisne mujhe janam diya usne janne ki koshish bhi nahi ki ,ki mai kaha hu. khair unse yahi ummed to thi mujhe .. I'm happy here ..yaha mai kuch to hu..meri ek pehchan hai jo maine khud banayi hai..or yaha par wo bhi to hai...,,

she fall thinking

her pov continues

bhumi tujhe jyada nahi sochna hai..bhul mat wo wada jo tune khudse kiya tha.or q tu wo soch rahi hai jo tere liye hai hi nahi...

she sigh n close light n her eyes n sleep..

abeer's room,

he is talking on phone

ab - haa mom hum bas abhi kuch der pehle hi free hue

os...

ab - yeah mission accha raha as always . or ayugdh bhi thik hai

os...

ab - accha wo thik hai..

he ask tensely

os...

a smile appears on his lips..he is walking in corridor n passing through bhumi's room whose door is lil open..

his mv uff door bhi close nahi kiya mosquitoes ghus jayege to so nahi payegi..he stare at her n forget he is on phone..

os...

ab - sorry mom wo kuch kam karne laga tha

he lies

ab- ab rakhta hu..bye..

he again stare at her

his pov

kya hai jo tumhe itna pareshan karta hai..i know yaha sab dukhi hai..sab bahut struggle kar rahe hai apni personal life mai .par tum sabse alag ho. kuch hai jo tumhare face par maine ek bhi smile nahi dekhi is ek sal mai..kash mai kuch kar pata sabke liye specially tumhare liye..jab se tumse mila hu tabse parayi si ho gayi meri jindgi mai kuch apnapan sa lagne laga hai..

he remember something

his pov continues

nahi par tum mere liye wo sapna hai jise mai dekh bhi nahi sakta..bas tum mere samne ho yahi sukun hai..kab tak ho nahi janta..

he sigh n close door n left for his room ..

nalin 's room

neel is siting on chair near a table where idol or ma durga is kept ,.he take it in his hand

nee - ma aaj mujhe is team k sath pura ek saal ho gaya. apna sab kuch to kho diya tha maine..waha se soch kar nikala tha ki life mai kuch to karunga. dekhna chahta tha sab khatam hone k bad kuch shuru kaise hota hai..pata nahi ye shuruat kahan le jayegi mujhe..saat humari team ko ek sal ho gaya hai ma..kabhi kabhi lagta hai ye ek pariwar ki tarah hai .par mai apne pariwar hone ki chahat ko kabka dafna chuka hu,.isiliye jya close kisi k bhi nahi hota..par sab k sath bahut accha lagta hai.

ayugdh sir, abeer sir ,bhumi , sharad or wo ajeeb si ladki shivya.,ha wahi ladki jo mujhse humesha ladti rehti hai. use wahi pasand hai jo mujhe chahiye..uff pata nahi kis janam ki dushmani nikalti hai mujhse. din mai ek do ghanta hum lade to chalta hi nahi use..uff mai us pagal ki bat hi q kar raha hu,.pata hai sharad k sath mai aksar kam karta hu.wo bahut shant hai .kya kam karta hai.or bhumi mam by god ma kya ladki hai..ek misal hai par fir bhi kisi se thik se bat nahi karti..abeer sir to best hai ek dum friendly or polite but ayugdh sir unke pure opposite har dam strict face bana kar ghumte hai..ek paheli hai wo..kya sach mai hum ek family hai..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#170

some voice echo in his ear

agar anatho ke nasseb mai pariwar hote to aise ashram nahi bante..

nahi tum ek anath ho..

mai nahi kar sakti kaise mai...a sob,.

he close his ears a lone tear fall from his eyes..

nee - nahi mere liye koi family nahi bani..

he sleep on bed hugging idol of ma durga..

ayugdh's room

he is completing some file n close when its done..he took a bracelet from a box n crease it

ayu - aaj to tum bahut khush hoge na,,dekho aaj saat desh ki best security team hai..iske agents ki asliyat koi nahi janta but unke code name se hi corrupted officers or desh k dushman darte hai. humari koshish yahi hoti hai ki ab koi anuj is tarah shaeed na ho..koi pariwar ka apne bete ke aane ka intjar adhura na rahe ..koi ayugdh fir bebas na ho ..i know ye puri tarah se possible to nahi par..hum koshish kar rahe hai ki inki quantities kam ho..or agar ek bhi anuj ko hum bacha pate hai to lagta hai aaj humare anuj ko humne ek khushi di hai..miss you bhai...kaha chala gaya..sach mai tu meri life ka spice tha tere bina meri jindgi fiki ho gayi hai yaar..chal happy birthday..tu enjoy kar waha ..

he put it down n head down on table he was working on..

shivya's room

she is sitting on bed n having a photo of her family ..she cry n talk to pic

shi - amma appa i miss u alot ..mai thatha ko bhi bahit miss karti hu or apne bhai behno ko bhi..kya aap log mujhe miss nahi karte.,kya itni nafrat hai mujhse,ek saal ho gaya kitni bar aap logon ko phone kiya maine par meri awaj sunte hi ap sab phone kat dete hai.kya yahi kasur hai mera ki mai dr ki bajaye ek cop bani..kya mere sapne or junoon ki kimat mera pariwar tha..aaj bhi bahut guilty hu mai thatha ki mai q selfish ho gayi..par believeme maine bahut koshish ki thi apki chuni life jeene ki..par nahi kar payi mai.,,i miss u alot.

she hug photo frame tightly n cry alot...n don't know when she sleep..

sharad's room

he is standing near window..he glane his phone screen again which is showing email

bhaisa

kaise hai aap.waise humare yaha to sab thik hai ,par sab apko bahut miss karte hai. par ye email ye batane ko kiya hai ki meera jiji ke dada sa ki death ho gayi hai..or aap jante hai unke liye jiji kya thi or jija k liye wo.,jiji bahut dukh mai hai ..kya aap ek bar aap unse mil jayenge..shadi ka mana kar diya to kya apne unse dosti bhi tod li..plz bhaisa ho sake to ek bar aa jaiyega..

he keep his phone aside..

sharad - kya karu kuch samjh nahi aa raha..meera is waqt kis haal mai hogi ye mujhse behtar koi nahi samjh sakta par kya mera jana sahi hoga..ek sal ho gaya nahi mila usse ..ab to babasa ne bhi humari shadi ki jid chod di..i know meera ne unhe convince kiya hoga..mere liye kuch bhi kar sakti hai wo baawri..pata nahi kaisi hogi.,