#T2SATHI KHUSHI OR GAM KE part 27 on pg 95 4/3/17

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Originally posted by: nitris23
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Posted: 8 years ago

#62

Originally posted by: kashvi19
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kya kahu words nahi hai brilliantly written
sare emotions asusual perfect
mujhe rona aa gaya.baki bad mai detail mai
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Originally posted by: aashi24
nice update.
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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#64

amazing update

Riya khud hi apne aap se argument aur counter argument kar rahi hai

woh Arman aur shilpa ke paas Arjun se bachne gayi

par woh bhi shaamil the

use sab pata chal gaya

Arjun ne bhi use apni dil ki baat bata di

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sorry for late bit busy with examz

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thanku so much

he he kya kare bechari ri confused hai

yeah now ariya confessed

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dont be sorry dear i can understand do well in ur exams

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part 15

next morning

ariya is sleeping in each other arms. alarm of his mobile wakeup him. he off the alarm n try to getup but feel her hand tightly holding him. he want to getup but don't want to disturb her sleep so he kiss her forehead n again drift in sleep. its peaceful n tensionless sleep for both of them.

one hour later

riya wakeup n look she was sleeping tightly holding him n he too. she take her hand back n this broke his sleep also.

he get up

ri so..rry wo aapki neend disturb

she feel awkward ,as thinking n looking about their condition .

ar - relex riya, plz don't feel so awkward . we are husband n wife.

she feel somewhat relief .

ar - riya do u regret

she look down n move her head in no

ri - i know arjun sir humari shadi or y,,ye sab kuch ajeeb halat mai hua but isse bhi bada fact ye hai ki we love eachother. n it was pure bliss

ar - thanks riya for understanding . i am sorry but mujhe jaldi jana hai. warna sam aah i mean rathod 100 sawal puchega.

ri - aapne abhi rathod sir ko sam kaha??

arj sigh

ar - is bare mai hum jarur bat karenge riya par plz abhi nahi.

ri nod

ri - mm mai breakfast banati hu. woo meri

arjun give her dress n close his eyes. she wear her dress n go for bath..she take bath n then rush to kitchen . she is having difficulty but she has to make breakfast for him coz no one in house

she cut vaggie

arjun come there

ar - riya mai bahar se kuch le aata hu

ri - nahi aap roj bahar hi to khate hai bas ho hi gaya

ar - riya you very sick or kal

he stopped abruptly .its still awkward for them

ri - pura din aram hi to karna hai . bas kuch der or

ar - ok par mai bhi help karunga

she prepare breakfast n he help her

both are having breakfast silently .

arjun is about to leave

ar - accha riya chalta hu shil aati hi hogi

ri - amm arjun sir

ar - haa riya

ri - apna khayal rakhiyega. plz kuch bhi karne ke pehle ek bar sochiyega koi hai jo aapka intzar kar raha hai.

arj nod,,

ar - or tum bhi apna khayal rakhna or dhyan rakhna koi hai jo tumhe fir se pehle ki tarah dekhna chahta hai.,,

she also nod.he left house.she come to room .she is so much tired. she sleep on bed it still has his fragrance n warmth of his love she sleep as she is sleeping in his arms peacefully .

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Posted: 8 years ago

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after that day riya hope increase for getting her desired life with him. he love her n ofcourse his love is her biggest cure.

here arjun is more tensed he has fear that she will be fine or not. he can't afford to loose her. he call her whenever he is free n alone from his another secretphone.

after one month

shil call him hospital .he rush hospital tensely

ar - shil kya hua .riya thik to hai,

shil hug him like a kid n he get confused arman smile

shi - dada aap baba banne wale hai.

ar is standing there shocked n trying to register her word

arm - arjun its true ,tum baba bane wale ho n mai mama

arj hug shil n arman tightly . trio share group hug.

ar - riya kaha hai

shi - vahini ghar par hi hai.test kal hue the abhi report ayi hai

ar - she know it??

arm - its ur right arjun ,tu hi use batayega.

he nod n about to go

ar - shil wo thik ho jayegi

shi - of course ho jayengi dada aap unhe itna pyar jo karte hai. or mujhe yakeen hai is bar aapki khushiyan apse koi nahi chin payega, waise actual recovery time k sath pata chalegi.

arjun get happy to hear n leave

shil hug arman n cry

shi - arman maine dada se keh to diya she will be fine par mujhe bhi dar hai. agar dada ne vahini ke sath baby ko bhi kho diya to jee nahi payenge. waise bhi ye ek chance hi hai.we are not sure

arm - shil don't cry . you know what aaj tumne arjun ko bahut imp chij di hai hope ,ye hope hume bhi rakhni chahiye. dekhna riya or baby dono thik honge. or waise bhi meri shona rote hue bahut danger lagti hai

she pout n hit him

arm - oye hoye ye hui na bat shona to aise jungli billi ki tarah jhapatte hue hi acchi lagti hai. i love this shona,

shil hug him n both hope for best.

arjun is driving his suv with a constant smile on his face . yes they take this decision for her cure n he was not thinking abt that .but since when he recieve this news he is feeling like on top of the world. its amazing feeling to be a father .to have his on flesh ,his own blood. he is very much happy.

he reach home n run directly to his room. all get shocked to see him running like this. they decide to follow him but suryakant recive shilpa phone

shi - bade baba humare pas ek news hai jise sunte hi aap nachne lagenge . par wada kijiye hume corner wale halwai ki jalebi khilayenge

sur- pehle news to suna

shi - nahi wada karo

sur - pakka wada.

shi - to news ye hai bade baba ki aap asoba banne wale hai or hum attya

sur shout - kya mai asoba banne wala hu?

here riya parents don't understand

kav- asoba matlab dada, badhai ho aap log nana nani banne wale hai.

ri parents get happy n all wish each other,

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ariya room

arjun enter n happily hug riya. she get stunned. he start kissing her face n muttering thanku to her. she is confused stunned plus shy .

ar - sorry wo mai

ri - aa..aap kya bol rahe the

his eyes shine again he cup her face

ar-- riya we are going to be parents our princess our angel is coming in our life

she sit on bed shocked tears are brimming from her eyes .arjun feared to see tears in her eyes.

ar - riya

her hand automatically reach her abdomen .she want to feel her baby.

ar - riya u ok

she suddenly hug him tightly n he too hug her back.

they leave eachother on hearing noice on door.

all enter n wish both of them n happy.ladies are instructing riya n blessing her.

arjun phone ring n he has to leave fast.

now both ariya feeling heavenly . both are hoping for best.

arjun feel very happy plus worried about her health . now his two imp people's life is at stake. but he is getting calm .but sometimes in tension n helplessness he shout on all..so no one is getting doubt on him.coz arjun is like that.he see shree in pain coz of that serial killer it raise his anger he shoot him dead.he now behave lil less rude with sakshi coz with riya he learn to give happiness to whom who are close to him.he only blast when something related to sik come infont if him. he losse his control

its three month passed

now riya is in her fourth month of pregnancy . its her second report it is showing some positive sign.both ariya are happy

ri is sitting on bed her hand on her abdomen . she is creasing it lvingly n talking with her baby,,

ri - baby aapko pata hai aapke baba kafi badal rahe hai. wo ab jyada gussa nahi karte . or meri to itni care karte hai.pata hai baby aapke baba dikhate kam hai but wo shuru se hi caring hai. or loving bhi. wo aapse bahut pyar karte hai. i knw aap janna chahte ho wo aapse milne q nahi aate, wo aapse milne isiliye nahi aate qki wo thoda busy rehte hai..abhi hume apki pari ma(roshni) or uncle ki maut ka badla lena hai na..or aap to aayi baba ki samjhdar princess hai na .

he is standing on door leaning on door in his signature pose of folded hand.watching n listening to his old riya smilingly. yes nw she again become bubbly n chripy riya.she get up from bed n take his photograph in her hand

ri - arjun sir plz aaj aajaiye baby is missing her baba ..

ar - or baby ki ayi

she look at him n get happily shocked

ar - tumne jawab nahi diya kya baby ki aayi bhi uske baba ko miss kar rahi thi

ri node shyly . he come forward n hug both his princess in his arms. both ri n baby can feel his care love n promise to protect them in his hug.now both of them become comfortable with each other. they talk on phone in night when he is free.

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

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ri - kab aye aap,

ar - jab aap princess se bat kar rahi thi. par mujhe kuch correction karne hai

he sit on his knee n put his hand on her belly

ar - or corrections yeh hai princess ki apke baba to usi din se badalne lage the jab se apki aayi unki life mai aayi thi . par wo kya hai na apki aayi har bat thoda der se samjhti hai

ri pout - arjun sir

ar - hmm par aapki aayi k aane se aapke baba fir se jeene lage. or ab aapki aayi apko dekar baba ki life ko pura karne wali hai . ek or correction baba sirf aapko hi nahi apki aayi ko bhi bahut pyar karte hai.

ri eye filled with tears. he get up n clear her tears

ar - ye galat bat hai. tum janti ho na i can't see ur tears, fir q ro rahi ho,

ri - ye khushi k ansu hai arjun sir

ar - nahi mujhe ye bhi nahi chahiye

ri - aap kaise hai arjun sir.

ar - ek dum thik..par ye kya ghar par bhi sir hi sunna ho isse better hai mai office mai hi rahu.

ri - to or kya bolu

ar - uff riya ayi baba ne mera nam arjun rakha hai arjun sir nahi.

ri - par aise kaise ,mujhse nahi hoga

ar - ruko mai ayi baba se kehkar aata hu aapki sunbai ko mera naam accha nahi lagta badal do

he is about to go..but ri hold his hand

ri - arjun rukiye

arjun smile n stop

ar - kya kaha fir se bolo

she blush n call his name again.

ar - hmm its good now.

ri - ok to ab aaiye or mujhe bataiye etf mai sab kaisa chal raha hai.

arjun talk with her about etf n cases n she is enjoying his talk.

ri - wow kya case tha kash mai bhi hoti

she pout

ar - tum bhi hogi riya . dekhna jaldi hi sab thik ho jayega. waise dig sir puch rahe the tumhare bare mai.

ri - mai bhi excited hu apni life fir jeene ke liye or us sikandar ko saja dene k liye.,,

ar - sab hoga riya bas tum apna or princess ka khayal rakhna .

ri -hmm..arjun aaj aap humre sath rukenge kuch der.

ar - jo hukum mere aaka

ri - aaj na aayi ne apke liye apka fav khana banaya hai or ma ne rasgulla

ar - riya rasgulla to mai kha lunga no problem .par ma humesha mera naam q bigarti rehti hai. mera naam arjun hai orjun nahi.

ri laugh n he make faces.

ar - riya

ri - ok ok. ab ek bengali ladki se shadi ki hai to uske kuch sideeffect to jhelne honge na apko . jaise sweet dishes n humarai laguage. wo kya hai na arjun hum bengalis ko har bat ko rasgulle ki tarah gol ghuma k bolne ki aadat hoti hai..

ar - yeah yeah mai samjh gaya.

n both laugh n hug each other

tbc..

precap - ariya family moment n some more trouble n action.

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Posted: 8 years ago

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Finally it seems that ariya can welcome a new dawn with a ray of hope in life.

Just loved the way arjun tried to remove the awkwardness b/w them. Just as riya said, all that happened starting from the marriage didnt take place under normal circumstances so their behaviour was quite justified. Their mutual concern was beautifully depicted di. Arjun started opening up. He spilled beans when he called rathode as sam and get immediately caught by an ever curious ri.

Oh congrats, at last ariya are on a family way. Arjun was overwhelmed by the new found feelings that he was gonna be a father and his actions spoke volumes of his unsaid emotions. The way he was surprised, drove the car, ran inside the house and hugged riya was amazing di and u portrayed it so brilliantly.

Arman was right the biggest gift one can give is the gift of hope and a reason to strive. This hope and consequent wish to see everything all right can break mountains. Even if they r taking a chance but the will to live and arjun's love will definitely cure riya.

Its lovely how the entire family was rejoicing the good news. Poor arjun, its a pity that he is going through such a emotional upheaval. Not fully certain about the future, he cant even celebrate his happiness and the joy completely. Oh ariya moments were lovely, the way he teased riya and chatted with his unborn child was heart touching. He he he he bechara arjun , he is even willing to change his name so that ri doesnt add sir while adressing him.

Ri missing all the action and fun badly. Ha ha ha ha orjun and side effects of marrying a bong girl was too funny di. On the whole it was a very positive update. Do updt the next part soon di though i know its needless to say but mujhe kuch zyada hi jaldi hai. He he he he and thanks for the pm also. Gud day.

Edited by utsha - 8 years ago