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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#521

Originally posted by: neelpari
nice update
very emotional love the word using by you
that's why riya told choree not to reval her secreat
update soon
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thanks dear

glad u like it..

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#522

Originally posted by: bloomie
awesome update
loved it
sab ek saath hokar bhi kitna dur ho gaye
RIya sach jaankar dukhi thi
aur Arjun kuch na jaankar bhi dukhi raha
cont soon

thanks dear

hmm savhi bahut dukhi hai

life mai humara socha nahi hota

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#523

Originally posted by: kashvi19
awsm n emotional update di
ariya face so much pain
par i know unka pyar jarur jeet jayega
pls jaldi update karna
mujhe janna hai kaise arjun ko sach pata chala
update soon
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thanks dear

hmm unka pyar jarur jeetega

bilkul agle update mai u will kow

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#524

part 67

ar - fir maine us din court mai teen ladkiyon ko dekha.unme se ek ki ankhe dakh kar mai shocked ho gaya. mere man mai ek hi khayal aya riya..

par wo aise identity chupa kar bayan dene q ayi. jahan tak maine use jana hai wo darti to nahi hai or sikna jail mai hai. fir mai uske pas aya or hath mai wo stich mark dekha or shocked ho gaya.ye wahi tha jo jiya k hath par tha.

sam - isiliye tune roshni kaha tha .qki us waqt roshni hi tere liye jiya thi.

ar - haa par roshni k hath par koi stich mark nahi tha maine pucha to usne kaha ki ek accidnt mai wahi fir chot lagi thi or surgery hui to chala gaya. maine bhi jyada nahi socha.par us din us ladki ki ankhe or wo stich mark deka kar mai shocked ho gaya. ha is duniya mai kuch logon ki eyes match hoti hai. but wo stich mark ka usi place par hona next to impossible n yaha to do chijen jiya ki or ishara kar rahi thi

fir maine sam se bat ki n sam ne bataya jab mera or jiya ka accident hua tha delhi mai us waqt roshni delhi mai thi hi nahi. mai bahut shocked tha matlab roshni meri jiya nahi. aisa kaise ho sakta hai usne aisa q kiya. isi kasmakash mai tha ki maine dekha riya apni seat par kuch bhul gayi hai. maine check kiya to wo wahi ganesh murti thi jo ayi ne mujhe di thi or maine jiya ko.

sam - par use to roshnj k pas hona tha riya ne sab use de diya tha

ri - sab nahi wo ganesh murti nahi.qki wo arjun k liye bahut mayne rakhti thi , mai use na pa saki to uski ek nishani rakhna chahti thi. usse mujhe arjun ka sath milta tha

ai - arjun apne roshni se nahi pucha

ar - pucha tha usne kaha wo murti blast k waqt ghar mai thi or usi k sath khatam ho gayi.

kar - fir kya hua

ar - mai shocked tha ye sab kya ho raha hai. sare sabut is bat ki taraf ishara kar rahe the ki riya hi meri jiya hai. par ye kaise ho sakta hai. sawal to kai the par jawab ek ka bhi nahi tha. mera uski taraf yun khicha chala jana bewajah nahi tha. mujhe ye sab ab janna tha. riya se puch kar koi fayda nahi wo nahi batane wali. to maine khud investigation karne ki sochi

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#525

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ar - fir maine wo murti wahi rakh di or mai chup kar dekhne laga. kuch der mai riya waha daud kar ayi. or use aise dhund rahi thi jaise uski life is par depend karti ho. fir maine dekha use pakar riya ki ankho mai ek ajeeb chamak thi. meri di hui chij ko itni shiddat se meri jiya hi chah sakti hai. mai samjh gaya yahi meri jiya hai. par abhi bahut kuch janna tha. dil to kab ka apni jiya ko pehchan chuka tha par dimag is bar sure hona chahta tha.

isiliye mai delhi gaya. waha maine nikhil ko bulaya or use riya ki pic dikhai.

nik - sir aap jiya ji ko aaj bhi pyar karte hai.maine news paper mai dekhi thi unki pic unke or unke pariwar ki ek blast mai death hui thi. bada brutal accident tha. delhi mai kai din tak wo charcha thi. aap us waqt coma mai the na.

ar - haa

nik - sir fir apne roshni mam se shadi kar li thi. tabhi to hum mile the aapko itna khush dekha kar maine jiya ji ki bat nahi nikali . par aap aaj unki pic q dikha rahe hai.

ar explain him all thing n nikhil get shocked.

ar - i want ur help nikhil

nik - any thing for you arjun sir.

ar - mujhe tum dig dustin coelo ki family or mishra family ki ek ek information la kar do

nik - yes sir.

he left..

arjun reach the hotel where he arrange a virtual date for riya.

ar - acp arjun rawte. 5 sal pehle maine yaha ek program arrange kiya tha a virtual date . mujhe uski recording chahiye.

( actully arjun ask manager to record all moment of jiya. he dont want to voilate the rule fixed by jia but he want to live the moment later when they meet face by face .)

man - sir us bat ko 5 sal ho gaye ab kaha milegi wo recording

ar - dekhiye us k kuch din bad mai aa nahi paya fir mission par chala gaya ,fir meri life mai kai mod aye to mai aa nah paya plz aap dhundiye to sahi.

man - sir ye possible hi nahi.

arjun get angry n put his gun in his mouth

ar - mujhe nahi pata ye possible hai ya nahi, ya tu ye kaise karega par ha tere pas 3 ghante hai wo recording dhund warna samjha ya samjhau

manager get frightened n nod his head

arjun left from there.he then meet the cops whom he sent to threat riya.

( when riya challenges him that he can't even catch her.so arjun sent some cop to pco where riya used to come to irritate him,)

they also recognized riya as same girl whom they see that day.all dots are joining now.

three hours later arjun again come to hotel n manager is ready with a cd.

man - sir aapki cd.

ar - hmm thanks..n sorry for that

man - its ok

he said frightened .

arjun take cd n start watching it.he look at the decorations which is same as his hotel decorations.

few min later riya enter in white party gown looking like fairy. her face is shining like new bride.ishita is with her. but she left her in few mins.

riya is talking with arjun on Bluetooth n here arjun is noticing her antics her blush her style. he lost in her. some time later cd finished n reality strike. actually he was lost in moment n feel like his jiya is infront of him.

he meet nikhil n nikhil get detail of both family.

arjun has karan photo as karan coelo. but he is not shocked to know karan is kady. bcoz now he already know the truth.

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

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arjun n nikhil then reach dr vani's clinic.

nik - sir hum yaha q aye hai

ar - ye dr vani ka clinic hai , dr vani ishita n tani sharma ki mom.

nik - par wo to ab yaha nahi rehte.

ar - ha par unhone ye clinic band nahi kiya hai.wo wahi se operate karte hai.n dusre drs yaha hai. us din jiya ghar par hi thi. I'm sure wo us hadse mai kuch to ghayal hui hogi or use surely yahi laya gaya hoga dr vani k clinic par. hume yaha kuch na kuch jarur milega.

ni - ok sir .

they enter clinc. arjun call shree

ar - shree tumne jo signal jammer diya tha uska jammed code do.

arjun jammed all signal of clinic so that no one can call.

ar - acp arjun rawte , kuch puchna hai tumse kuch records chahiye .

res - yes sir kaise recorda.

ar - 4.5sal pehle k records.

res - sure sir..

some time later

res - sir ye lijiye

they check all

nik - sir inme to kuch bhi nahi hai.

ar - kuch to chut raha hai nikhil.ek min kya yaha staff mai koi hai jo 4 sal pehle bhi job karta tha.

res - waise to sara staff naya hai par ha sister sara yahasabse.purani hai wo yaha 10 sal se kam kar rahi hai.

ar - unhe bulao.

they call sister . she came n greet them

ar - sister aap yaha 10 sal se hai. yad karke bataiye 4.5 sal pehle 22 june 2012 ki rat ko yaha kya hua tha.

sis - 22 june 22 june...are haa us din to tani baby or unki family ki ek hadse mai maut ho gayi thi. tani baby dr vani ki beti or yaha ki gynecologist thi. bechri wo or unki family. bade acche log the.

ar - us rat yaha kuch hua tha.

sis - tani baby ki death ki news to hume next day mili par haa us rat vani madam or dr sahab yaha rat mai aye the hum hairan the ki bina case wo yaha kya kar rahe hai. ishu baby bhi unke sath thi.

ar - aapko yad hai

si -waise to kai sal ho gaye is bat ko.par wo din hume isilye yad hai qki us waqt yaha bahut si ajeeb chijien hui.

ar - jaise

sis - pehla to dr vani dr sahab or ishu baby achanak aa gye bina kisi case bina karan.dr vani ati to kuch ajeb nahi tha. par sab fir hospital ka ek hissa achanak band kar liya gaya. waha sirf wo teeno hi the. fir karan baba k papa or karan baba aye .are ishu baby k mangetar karan baba. fir pure 15 din tak clinic ka wo hissa band raha .

ar - kisi ne kuch pucha nahi

sis - pucha tha na . par madam ne kaha waha kuch problem hai. par sir waha medicines or kai bade equipment gaye. wo sab piche k door se he aate jate the. tani baby ki khabar sun kar 2 din clinic band raha par un dino mai bhi madam or sir yahi the. qki jo patient the unke liye mai yahi thi. mujhe to khub ashchrya (shock) hua ki unki beti ko khone k bad wo roj yaha kya kar rahe hai.

someone call sister

sis - sir do min

ar - hmm

nik - sir ye to tay hai riya mam ka treatment yaha hua par isse jyada kuch pata nahi chalega

ar - kuch to hai jo chut raha hai..kya kya

sis - sir

ar - sis kya us dauran koi or dr yaha aya tha.

sis -shayd yad nahi. aap visiting register mai dekh sakte hai

they check visiting register n find dr verma's name.

sis - are ye to famus vocal surgeon hai.

ar - unka address milega

sis - sure..geeta wo dr dairy lao.

arjun get address n they left. but nikhil got some call n arjun ask him to left n arjun go alone.

at dr verma hospital

dr - aaiye acp sir..kya janna hai aapko humse

ar - dr aaj se 4.5 sal pehle 22 june 2012 ko aap inayat clinic gaye the.

dr - dekhiye acp mai kai jagah operations k liye jata rehta hu, 4 din pehle ka yad nahi aap 4.5 sal purana kaha se yad hoga.

ar - plz dr koi to rasta hoga.mere liye ye janna bahut jaruri hai.

dr - let see.

he search for some thing n he find a old dairy . he turn some pages

after 20 mins.

dr - hmm yad aya. mai gaya tha dr vani k clinic. waise to mujhe itna purana yad nahi rehta par wo case bahut alag tha.

ar - matlab

dr - matlab us ladki ko bhul pana itna asan nahi. use pure clinic se ya yun kahun duniya se chupa kar treat kiya ja raha tha.mai waise aisa kam nahi karta par dr subhash k kai ehsan hai mujh par.or upar se policecommissioner bhi the to mujhe laga confidentialhai.

ar - patient k bare mai bataiye

dr - uska gala strangled kiya gaya tha. uska vocal chord kharb ho gaya tha maine operate karke badal diya .

ar - apne aisa q kaha us ladki ko bhulna asan nahi,

dr - actually she was brutally raped n physically tortured. uski halat bahut kharab thi. meri to rooh bhi kanp gayi thi us ladki ko dekh kar. aisa case maine apne carrier mai na dekha tha na hi ab ab tak face kiya. i wonder wo jinda kaise thi. her condition was wrost. unhone mujhe kuch nahi bataya na maine pucha but i am a dr itna samjhna badi bat nahi.

arjun get numbed to hear this.

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arjun get numbed to hear dr word. he lost all his senses n standup n leave that place like zombie..

dr - acp .acp ,sir excuse me. ajeeb hai inhe kya hua.

but.he is all lost ,so he ddidn't listen to him.he even don't take his car he is walking in a Terence till long time. he reached a desertedplace.

it start raining but he is unaware of it. he is drenched in water. dr's word is ringing again n again in his mind.

she was brutally raped n physically tortured. uski halat bahut kharab thi. meri to rooh bhi kanp gayi thi us ladki ko dekh kar. aisa case maine apne carrier mai na dekha tha na hi ab ab tak face kiya. i wonder wo jinda kaise thi. her condition was wrost

arjun sit on his knee n satrt crying.

ar - jiya jiya...

he rore at outmost voice . n cry loudly.

he cry for hours.

next day he returned mumbai n sam informed ri left mumbai n etf so he.search her.n take her n make her accept that she is jiya. ( which we have already read)

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ri - to tumhe kaise pata chala mai kaha hu.

she ask him suspectly.

ar - tumhe kya lagta hai tum hi mujhe samjhti ho. mai bhi smjhta hu tumhe. us din jis tarah tumhe lag gaya tha ki mai sach jan chuka hu. mai bhi samjh gaya tha ki tum ye bat jan chuki ho or kuch aisa hi kadam urhane wali ho isliye maine us murti mai transmeter fix kiya tha .or usi se tumhari location tarace ki.

ri move her head in disbelief .

ri - ab to sab sun liya na . ab mujhe jana hai.

she start.leaving

ar - jiya..

ri- jiya mat bulao mujhe nahi hu mai jiya. use to sikna ne mar dala. mai to koi or hi hu.

ar - nahi tum meri jiya ho or humesha rahogi. or koi bhi bat ya sach mera pyar nahi badal sakta tumhare liye

ri - nahi arjun mai ab pure nahi hu. un dono ne mujhe ganda kar diya .mai tumhari jiya nahi rahi.

ar - ji

ri - nahi. ab yahi sach hai dur raho mujhse ,dur raho.

she left he house of arjun immediately . arjun follow her..

all looked at them n get sad for them

she reach her home n close the door . he bang door but she don't open

ar - jiya tumhe kya lagta hai ye door mujhe tum tak pahuchne se rok sakta hai . nahi par mai aisa nahi karunga..

he sit one side of door n ri sit another side of door..both start crying..

Paas aaye..
Dooriyaan phir bhi kam naa hui
Ek adhuri si hamari kahani rahi
Aasmaan ko zameen, ye zaroori nahi
Jaa mile.. jaa mile..
Ishq saccha wahi
Jisko milti nahi manzilein.. manzilein..

Rang thhe, noor tha
Jab kareeb tu tha
Ek jannat sa tha, yeh jahaan
Waqt ki ret pe kuch mere naam sa
Likh ke chhod gaya tu kahaan

Hamari adhuri kahani..
Hamari adhuri kahani.. (x2)

Khushbuon se teri yunhi takra gaye
Chalte chalte dekho na hum kahaan aa gaye

Jannatein agar yahin
Tu dikhe kyon nahin
Chaand suraj sabhi hai yahaan
Intezar tera sadiyon se kar raha
Pyaasi baithi hai kab se yahaan

Humari adhoori kahaani
Humari adhoori kahaani.. (x2)

both are helpless n touch door on their side.at same place..

tbc...