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Suzie

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Posted: 8 years ago

#31

Superb as usual.. amazing update dear

Arjun is excited for first UC..maybe there he meet sikander's brother

Ohk..Anurag return from UC..aww..Riya is naughty.. hehehe

Awesome dear

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#32

scene shift

heavens art gallery

roshni is learning painting here . she is sketching something . one boy arround her age come

ro - are vikram tum,aao dekho maine kuch naya banaya hai, kaisa laga batao,

vik - bahut khubsurat hai ,

while starring at her but she didn't notice

ros - ohh how sweet of you, tum humesha mera tareef karte ho, you are my good friend

vik - tum bhi to kitni acchi ho, tumhe mere appereace se koi fark nahi padta , or na hi is bat se ki mai stammer karta hu

ro - offo vikram tum bhi na , kitni bar kaha hai , ye sab batien mat kiya karo, you know you are great artist i have ever meet.

vi - ok baba

both get busy in paintings

scene shift

riya is practicing on her guitar , her phone ring

ri - arme aise ho

ar - thik hu tum kaisi ho

ri - kya bat hai arme aaj office hours mai call kiya

ar - mai aayi baba se milne aaya hu

ri - is waqt .sab thik hai na

ar - hmm, wo na mujhe kal uc mission k liye nikalna hai. aabhi kuch der pehle sir ne bataya

she get silence

ar - jiya ,kya hua. plz bolo na

ri - is uc na meri naak mai dum kar rakha hai uff. pehle papu , bhaiyu or ab tum bhi, mai na

she get frustrated

ar - jiyu ye humare kam ka hissa hai

ri - hmm, i know . tum jao arme .

ar - accha jiyu rat mai call karta hu aayi ko mandir le kar jana hai

ri - hmm bye

both cut call.

at evening

roshu n ishu pushing ri to hall where amit priya ,anurag n tani are having chitchat

ish - come on teddy bol de aaj sabko

ri - i m feeling nervous

ro - not fair riyu tune hi kaha tha na ki arjun k jane se pehle tujhe sbko batana hai,

ri - ha par

roshita - no par no war

n they drag her before all

amit - to baccha party kya shaitani chal rhi hai tumhari

ro - shaitani nahi papa riyu ko apse

i mean aap logon se kuch kehna hai

all look at riya who is hell nervous .

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#33

all look at riya , she gulp her saliva

pri - kya hua riya beta bolo

anu - haa princess bolo na

tani ( teasingly ) - ab bol bhi do riyu

ri - momi ,papu , bhaiyu wo mai wo

ami - kya bat hai riyu beta itna stammer q kar rahi ho

ri close her eyes n murmur to herself

ri - come on jiya you cn do it

all look at her n egar to know the things bcoz they see ria like this first time

ri - i am in love

she said in a go.all look amiya n anu look at her shocked whole tani n roshita smile

ri - yesss..finally bol diya, papu momi bhaiyu kuch bolo na

anu - kya bole princess tune itna bad shock jo diya hai thoda digest to karne de

pri - riyu agar ye koi prank hai to i am warning you

tani - nahi mummyji ye sach hai

now trio look at her, she look at them with nervous ness

ami - ohh to ap bhi janti thi

anu - princess kaun hai wo ,or kya kart hai , kab se chal raha hai ye sb

ri - aap use jante hai bhaiyu

amit - kaun hai beta

ri - arjun suryakant rawte

anu - what arjun

amit - wahi tumhara student

anu - haa dad . or riyu baki kuch bolne ki jarurat nahi meri taraf se haa hai, dad i assure you isse accha ladka humari princess ko nahi mil sakta

amit - agar sabko yahi lagta hai to hum jaldi hi unse milne jayenge

pri - haa or kya , mujhe isi ki chinta thi ki kaise shadi k liye manegi, kaise hum iske liye ladka dekhenge jo ise jhel le , par humari poblem solve

ri - momy

ami - meri beti ko tang mat karo priya

pri - haa haa jaise bas tumhari hi beti hai,

ish - are.uncle aunty n jiju pehle inki interesting love story to sun lo,

ri tell them what happened , all get impressed by their love n relation

pri - mujhe pura yakeen hai ye ladka meri beti ko khush rakhega humesha. hume 1-2 din mai unse milne chalna chahiye

ri - wo kal uc par ja raha hai,

anu - ohh. par phone par bat to kar hi sakte hai

he dails arjun no n put on speaker

anu - hello arjun kaise ho

arj - thik hu sir , aap kaise hai

anu - mast , wo kya hai na maine tumhe apni behno ki shadi mai invite karne k liye call kiya hai,

ar - kyaa?? kab kaise achanak

all supress their laugh

anu - haa bas abhi rishta tay hua hai pehla invitation tumhara hai,

ar - no sir aisa nahi ho skta .plz

anu - q arjun

ar - bcoz i love jiya

anu - jiya par meri behno ka nam to roshni or riya hai

ar - sir means you know all or aap meri leg pulling kr rahe hai,

amit - are waah beta tum to badi jaldi samjh gaye,anu tumhari sahi tareef karta hai,

ar - namaste papu i mean uncle

ami - mujhe papu jyada accha laga, i know meri beti ne tumhe aadat dal di hogi

ar - ji

pri - beta jaldi mission se aao fir tum dono ki sagai kar denge

ri - ek min koi bhi mera nam nahi batyega

ar - ye kya jiyu ab to sabko pata chal gaya na,

ri - mr arjun suryakant rawte ye aapki saja hai ab ap jab lautenge tab hi humse milenge or mera naam bhi janene. sys

ar - as u wish jiya

he talk with all , all are happy for ariya

arjun give good news to ayi baba

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#34

some where in delhi.

two men are siting in a lavish bungalow , doing some imp discussion . they are sikna

sik - dilip yar ek khabri ne information di hai ki police ke kisi department ko humare bare mai pata chal gaya hai , kaun hai wo ye pata lagana hoga or ye bhi ki wo kya janta hai

ran - ha sik ye humare liye dangerous ho sakta hai , kuch karna hoga mai apne contacts use karta hu

sik - waise chote ne aaj kal nayi art gallery join ki hai shamu ne mujhe bataya

ran - haa yar . dekh na usme hum dono ki jaan basti hai or wo hai ki humse bat nahi karna chahta, kehta hai ki hum galat kam karte hai, pata nahi kya bhut sawar hai us par imandri or acchai ka,

sik - haa yar badi yad aati hai uski , kabhi kabhi hi milta hai humse, taras jate hai use bat karne k liye

ran - wo to shamu sab details de deta hai yahi santushti hai,

sik - ha yar,

both talk like this.

scene shift

next day arjun leaving for uc, so he is talking with riya

ar - jiya mai ja raha hu,

ri - mat jao na arme

ar - jiyu plz mera jana mushkil mat banao, tum janti ho ye imp hai

ri - hmm, i know par pata nahi q mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai , jaise tumse akhiri bar bat kar rahi hu

ar - shut up jiya aisa kabhi mat bolna , hum kuch waqt k liye dur ho sakte hai par hum fir milenge, chahe kuch bhi ho humre raste kabhi alag nahi honge , wo kahi bhi shuru ho par ek dusre se jarur mil jayenge.

ri - ok arme , you go, apna khayal rakhna , n i love you

ar - i luv u too jiyu

both cut call

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manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#35

present

ri - or fir tum mission par gaye or sikandar or rana ne hum par humla kiya ,or sab kuch khatam ho gaya.

sh - tumhe roshni ko q bheja

ri - humme se wo hi bachi thi or mai nahi chahti thi sikna ka bura saya bhi us par pade. isiliye use jiya bana kar bhej diya

ai - par tum arjun k pas aa sakti thi

ri - mai arjun ko in sab mai nahi fasana chahti thi.

sak - par tumne ye sahi nahi kiya riya

ri - i know isiliye bad mai bhi kuch nahi bataya,

all question ri n ri answer them n then all look at arjun who is fuming in anger

tbc,,,

precap - guess what :??

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manasvi..

@manasvi..

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Posted: 8 years ago

#36

IMP notes

HELLO GUYS

another long update , an imp thing for you all

friends next part thode violent hai to maine socha hai next part will be pm part, or pm sirf unhe hi send hoga jo is part par comments karenge, ya is story ke regular readers ko.

bcoz i dont wnt to feel ignored after alot of hardwork . hope you understand .

plz correct me if i am wrong,

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rinku95

@rinku95

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Posted: 8 years ago

#37

Superb
Why is Arjun angry?
I think what Riya did by sending Roshni is right?
Continue soon please
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spatika

@spatika

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Posted: 8 years ago

#38

awesome update.
continue soon.
thanks for pm in advance

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gauri

@ariya143

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Posted: 8 years ago

#39

awesome update...finally riya ne rosh
ko kyu bheja pata Chala...but
arjun gussa kyu hai..
n what next part..I m waiting...update plzzz...

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

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Posted: 8 years ago

#40

awesome update
look like vikram had feeling for roshni
but she didn't know abt it
so vikram didn't like his brothers illegal works he wasn't happy
wow finally anu came back from mission 😃
yippee riya told her families abt her & arjun love 😃
loll anu pull arjun leg by telling him that he fix his sisters marriage 😆
poor arjun really got sacred for a moment 🤣
yippee riya's families was really happy for ariya 😃
now arjun went for UC mission 👍🏼
in present everyone was confuse that riya send roshni to arjun
but why arjun got angry? 😕
continue plz

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