#T3 JINDGI EK PAHELI-ATEET KE PANNEnew banner n teaser on pg 97 13/12 - Page 22

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

Awsome update..
Love it..

But feeling sad..
They told rosh that Riya is dead..

Precap is interesting..
Plz continue soon

Thanks for pm


thanks dear
great u like it
hmm they told her lie
will cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: bloomie

read both parts together

awesome updates
oh my...kitna saha hai sabne
iska matlab Roshni ko bhi nahi pata tha ki riya zinda hai
bichari abhi abhi pata chala ki behan zinda hai aur firse...
cont soon


thanks dear
hmm sabne bahut saha hai
nahi rosh ko pata hi nahi chala uski riyu jinda hai
will cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai

Very emitional update dear


thanks dear
yup its emotional
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: kashvi19

amazing update di

loved it
but same time its very sad
riya condition is very bed
i feel pity on all , everyone face alot
omg riya voice chord change thats why arjun not recognize her when they meet
roshu is very upset
omg all fake ri death to rosh
di its going great
pls update asap
thanks for pm


thanks dear
yup all faced a lot
yup ri voice change thts also reason
yup ri fake her death
thanks dear for support
will update soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: aarushi04

Superb update!!!
Riya condition was so horrible...
N wat she did was commendable...
She did so much sacrifice!!
Felt lyk crying...
Luvd it...all emotions!!
Continue soon
Thnx for pm


thanks dear
yup her cond is she faced alot
yup she is too brave else we cn say that she had no choice left
will cont soon
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ajuswa19pm

di!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1🤗

ohk now this update was shocking!😳
like ri was raped!😭 n Arjun
was in coma! so damn heart wrecking
this was! hope to read gud things ! plz
post soon! love u!😳


thanku dear
yup she was , good wil come later dear
will post soony
luv uuu
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: ajuswa19pm

oh yes! congo for the thread too di!🤗


thankuu dear😊
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: neelpari

amazing update

riya is gone through so much
so that way she send roshni to arjun
roshni condition is too bad
karan and ishita support riya very much
i love your story
please update soon


thanks dear
yup she faced alot
thanks for loving it n supporting me
will update soon

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: chand91

plz pm me part 55

i missed it coz of my newborn

congratulations dear
n i hv sent u pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Part 59



after karan told her riyu is dead.roshni cry alot .

she faint after constant crying of whole night, sam come and make her lay on bed n call kiran

actually sam come to meet roshni after hearing about her family . kiran tell him about her condition and direct him toward her room..he.enter n see her unconscious on floor .

kiran come n call dr

after some time

she gain conscious

sam - roshni

ro - sameer riyu sameer wo

sam - hmm abhi aunty ne bataya, yakeen nahi hota rockstar sach mai nahi hai.

ro - sameer tum to mere bahut achhe friend ho na plz meri riyu ko la do plz.

she again faint

same time in clinic

karan shout

kar - dekha tumne kya halat hai uski , pagal ho gayi ho tum , q dukh de rahi ho use itna teddy

ri - haa pagal hi ho gayi hu mai, jo maine dekha or jo mere sath hua uske bad mai sach mai mar gayi, ab jo shareer tumhare samne hai uska ek hi maksad hai sikandar or rana ki barbadi or apne pariwar k liye insaf.

her voice soften n it has emotion
or rahi bat use itna dard dene ki to ye jaruri hai ,taki uski aage ki jindgi sanwar jaye. mere jinda hone ki khabar sun kar wo arjun k pas kabhi nahi jati. or agar use galti se pata chal gaya ki mere sath kya or q hua ,wo seh nahi payegi. wo mar jayegi. ek jindgi barbad ho gayi ek to sanwar jaye


ish - or arjun ka kya ? uska kya riya bolo.

ri - un dono k liye hi to ye sab kar rhi hu. you know wo humesha kehta tha mai bahut acchi hu ek dum achai or sacchai ki tarah pure. par ab mai pure nahi rahi undono ne ganda kar diya mujhe, ab mai arjun k layak nahi rahi.

karan n ishu cry hearing this but riya has no tears in her eyes. her eyes are just emotion less.

ish - par ye galat hai

ri - janti hu mai jo kar rahi hu wo galat hai. par koi or rasta nahi hai mere pas. roshu ki jaan khatre mai hai.is waqt arjun hi use save kar sakta hai. or roshu ko bhi pyar or apnepan ki jarurat hai,

kar - par tum use apni behan ke taur par bhi bhej sakti ho, i am sure arjun use waise hi protect karega, or yaha tum apna kam karna

ri - ha bhej sakti hu ,par tumhe lagta hai arjun jee payega apni jiya k bina , or agar roshni ne meri condition ka jikar bhi kiya to wo sab samjh jayega or is case ki tah mai jayega. wo apni jiya ke shareer par ek kharoch bhi bardash nahi kar sakta ,wo ye sb kaise sahega,wo pagal ho jayega. mita lega khud ko ya sikandar or rana k piche jayega, apna sab kuch kho chuki hu.un dono ko khona nahi chahti..wo dono khush rahe safe rahe bas. ab yards meri akhiri khwahish hai

kar - or tera kya

ri - mera to waise bhi kuch nahi hai, jo hai wo bas badla or ye cursed life.

ish - tujhe lagta hai buddy apni jiya ko nahi pehchanega wo roshni ko asani se jiya man lega

ri.- asan to nahi hai par tum logon ko meri help karni hogi,



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