ARIYA SS BANDHAN DILON K . Part 4 on pg 28. 8/11 - Page 5

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Intresting concept..
Plz continue soon
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Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

Intresting concept..
Plz continue soon
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Thanku so much dear
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Part 1



Location Mumbai

A flat in posh area of mumbai.he is sleeping on his bed. Suddenly he felt something soft on his forehead n then hairs. He want to sleep bcoz he is very tired .but sound of bangles n fragrance of someone beside him more over that touch made him open his eyes
lazily.
He saw a blur figure of a girl in front of him. He open his eyes but that girl turn around n abt to go. He sat on bad n call her

He - ruko .kaun ho tum

She don't turn or answer him he can see her perfect figure in red saree .she is playing with corner of her saree .it make him guess that she is nervous. Her long silky hair , the sound of her bangles n payal make him urge to see her. But but she start walking

He - ruko .plz kaun ho tum .kaha jaa rahi ho.

She - arjun pakdo mujhe

She ask him lovingly n run from there.he stood there freezes because name sound so sweet so heavenly in her voice. Her laugh is like some soft soothing music to him.He come out of himself n run to find her.

He follow her n reached at a deserted place.she stop feeling him after her.it made him stop too. He is feeling like he is in strong spell. She is driving him crazy to see her to listen her. Suddenly he hear sobs then a painful scream.

She - arjunnn

N now she is no where he but her painful scream n sobs is still echoing in his ears .he hold his ears n shout

Ar - nahiii

He open his eyes n find himself on his bed .he is all sweating.

Ar- to wo ek Sapna tha.kitna ajeeb ek dum saccha sa.

He try to sleep but that fragrance ,that touch ,her voice don't let him sleep. After so many struggle he finally sleep n awake late in morning.

He fastly wakeup n get ready for etf. He reach little late at office.

Sam - kya hua arjun aaj tu late ho gaya strange .

Ar - haa yar kal rat ko neend late ayi or fir late neend khuli.

Sam - its ok itna tough case tha na .kabhi kabhi jyada thakan se bhi neend nahi aati. khair mujhe meeting mai Jana hai yaha tu dekh Lena.

Arjun nod n he left .arjun is in deep thought

( some bg information- samjun are best friend from college . understand n love each other very well.but arjun work with cbi mumbai n sam was in crimebranch banglore from past 2 years n when etf is formed 6 month ago they meet again n from 6 month they n rest members of etf working together.etf is doing very well job)

Etf discussion room

All are free after a very tired n hectic week . today no case n no big work.

Shree is making list of needed gadgets n software on his tab. Chotu is checking list of his exercise machine n tools. N his commando list.
Aisha is reading some casefile . sakshi is preparing her report of previous case n Lisa is preparing final report of case.

All done now so start their chitchat

Ch - baba re kitna kam tha last week mai .na mai chain se kha paya na hi apni ruby ko time de paya..

Sh - Chote tune Jo chote Chote biscuits , snacks k packet rakhe the Jo tu apne sath hi rakhta tha wo kaha gaye.

Ch - wo to bas thoda sa hi tha.

Sh - ha ha .bechara Chotu .or mujhe to apni is week ki do dates cancel karni padi uska kya.

He pout n smile but one has no smile on her face n its Lisa.
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Sak - thank god kal chutti hai mai to khub soungi.tum log kya karne wale ho.

Sh - mai to kal Nisha k sath date par ja raha hu.

Ch - maine new dishes sikhi hai wahi try karunga or aayi k sath ghar ki kuch shopping.

Ai - mai kuch kas nahi pata nahi.

Li - kal mai church jaungi waha dad k dost ki beti ki wedding hai.

All chitchat like this n doing their work also.

In arjun cabin.

Arjun is sitting on his rocking chair . he completed his file n close his eyes .he again engrossed in that dream girl thought .

After some time he felt some weight on his cheek

He abruptlh open his eyes n he see its sam who is patting his hand to wake him up.

Sam - arjun arjun uth kya hua

Ar - kya hua i am fine.shayad neend lag gayi thi.

Sam - itni gehri neend mujhe to laga to unconcious tha.Dr k pas chale shayad

Ar - no i am fine now mujhe dr ki jarurat nahi.

Sam - ok .you go home n take rest. Tera kam bhi ho gaya hoga.

Arjun silently standup n left for his home.sam sigh worriedly.

After a hour he give off to all.
He is in parking lot. He see Aisha waiting for taxi

Sam - Aisha mai us side hi to rehta hu come I'll drop you.

Ai - its ok sir .maine taxi book kar li thi aati hi hogi.lijiye aa gayi. Thanks n bye

She left a thinking sam behind

Sam - kitni ajeeb ladki hai. sabse dur dur rehti hai. Or pata nahi mai q uski or khicha chala aata hu. Kabhi ye mujhe rude lagti hai kabhi bahut dard mai akhir ye hai kya.??


He sigh sadly n left the place.

In taxi

Ai POV akhir rathod sir mujhse chahte kya hai roj mai mana kar deti hu fir bhi roj lift offer karte hai. Is this just in sense of humanity hai ya.. No no Aisha tujhe ye sab nahi sochna hai apna wada yad hai na.



Here shree chotu sakshi n lisa left .

Sak - kya hua shree ye bandar jaisi shakal q bana rakhi hai

Sh - sakshi mai dukhi hu yar.

Ch - kya hua?

Sh - are maine apne dost k samne khub jhaki mari thi ki kal mai ek hot si ladki ko date par le ja raha hu par Nisha mana kar diya

li - q ??

Sh - are ek hafte se usse bat nahi ki na to gussa hai wo .par ab mera kya hoga jatin ( his friend ) k aage to mera majak ban jayega

Ch - to kisi or ladki ko leja.Lisa ko leja.q lisa

Lisa get happy to hear this .she is about to say yes but

Sh - chotu tu akal ka andha hi rahega

Chotu is about to open his hairs

Sh - are mere bhai mera matlab wo nahi tha. Dekha Maine hot ladki kaha or Lisa
kaha se tum logon ko hot lagti hai.ye to seedhi sadhi koi bhartiya naari Lahti hai in her jeans n loose kurtas .

Lisa face fall hearing this

Saktu - shree

sh - ok I am sorry Lisa but you are not my type.

Li fakely smile try to hide her pain n insult

Li - even you are not my type shree or Chotu maine kaha tha na mujhe dad or amma k sath wadding mai jana hai.

Sh - ek min sakshi tu chal na plz plz

Sak - hay I don't believe in love n date .mujhe na ye sab bakwas lagta hai.

Sh - offo sakshi mai kaun sa tujhe gf banne k liye keh raha hu .tu to meri bff hai .Hume bus us jatin se milna hai or use jealous karna hai or aajaana hai.

Sak - hmm okie.

Shreetu leave on their bikes n sakli on theirs.

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Arjun's flat

Arjun is still thinking abt his dream its like that girl n dream is not leaving him.his tarance is broken by his phone's ring.

Ar - hello acp arjun

Os - arjun ye kya tum mujhse bhi apne acp tone mai bat karoge

Ar - roshni

Ro - jee haan arjun ji wahi roshni Jo apke bachpan ki dost hai or apki hone wali lifepartner.or aap use bhul gaye

Ar - its not like that roshni wo ek week se case mai busy tha n abhi bhi ek imp chij k bare mai soch raha tha that's why.

N they talk like this more

Ar - thanks rosh tumse bat karke bahut accha laga you are my best friend

Ro - wo to hai or wo sam

Ar - wo bhi tum dono barabar ho.

Ro pout - aww mai bachpan se janti hu tumhe or wo college se fir bhi barabar

Ar - tum bhi na rosh.

Ro - ok baba bye.

Both cut call

Ro MV best friend .humari shadi hone wali hai or ajtak mai is best friend k level se a age nahi bad payi.

Arj POV grip on arjun tujhe kuch nahi sochna hai .Teri shadi rosh se hone wali hai.but mai kya karu usko sochkar ek ajeeb sukun mil raha hai kai dino bad

Mumbai Commissioner office

Com - riya tumhare kam ko dekhte hue him tumhe promote kar rahe hai. Tum do din bad etf join kar rahi ho.

Ri smile - thanku sir.

She come out of office n start her activa n go to a deserted place.

She stop active n jump in air

Ri - wow finally etf. Police ka reputeted depart .bahut suna hai uske bare mai .surf 6 month mai itni progress. Baba Maine apka Sapna pura kar diya finally. Aaj ap bahut khush honge na.

She look toward Sky with smile.

She hear a scream n look in that direction he saw one man is forcing a girl.she immediately go there n beat that man n save girl. He run from there.girl hug ri n cry.

Gi - thanks di apne mujhe bacha liya.warna mera kya hota.

Ri - wo tumhe yaha jabardasti laya tha

Gi - no wo mera padosi hai usne mujhe kaha acchi naukri dilwayega

Ri - or tum uski man kar itni rat ko nikal ayi.

Gi - mujhe laga wo humara accha chahte hai.

Ri - you know hum girls k sath jyadatar crime isiliye vote hai qki hum janne walon par vishwas karte hai.sirf janne se kuch nahi hota pehle unhe parkho fir vishwas karo or fir bhi bina soche samjhe mat jao kahi .or jao to seafty ka saman sath mai rakho or kuch unusual hone par daro nahi lado.samjhi

Gi- ji Didi

Ri - good tumhe chord deti h.

She leave that girl at her home n return her home happily.

TBC...

Precap -
Etf person holiday

ri entry in etf.

N all relationships status its complicated.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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very nice
loved it
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow didu
mast cs tha n update bhi ek dam dhasu
ye sapna kya tha wo
ye samjh aaya ki wo riya thi but sapne ka last part wo kya tha
future me kuch hoga kya uska indication tha wo???
samjun ka relation acha laga
ye shree ka bacha huh
bechari liza ka dil dukha raha he
aayesha ka kya chakkar he ishq ki gali kyu nahi jana he inhe
arjun usi ladki ke bare me soch raha he n rosh called him
wo use best friend manta he n rosh think ki itna waqt ho gaya n ab unki shaadi hone wali he fir bhi unka relationship status wahi he
so ri ki entry bhi ho gayi hmm ri etf join karne wali he thats great
ri ne ek ek word sahi kaha us ladki se
kya mystry he uski
lets see aage kya hota he
continue soon didu
thanks 4 pm

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Posted: 9 years ago
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awesome update.
continue soon.
thanks for PM.
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Posted: 9 years ago
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what was that dream abt??? the end???
was ariya married already???
read cs again, what dadu is hiding from Arjun???
sam is a good friend
awesome update
cont sooon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow
awesome updated
loved it
plz cont soon
thnx 4 pm

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