ARIYA FF BIKHRE MOTI. Part 2 onpg 14 28 / 10 - Page 5

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Part 1



One man is standing out side a chawl type area seeing a board in curve shape .mini india colony name written on board.

Somoone put hand on his shoulder . he look at hand on his shoulder n then that man. He is a well built man.
He sigh n took his luggage n
Another man also has some luggage. Both enter a house in a chawl n second man come forward n take their blessings. Then first man also bend down n take their blessings.

2 man - mama ji ye mera best friend hai arjun jiske bare mai aapko bataya tha. Ise hi room rent par chahiye par abhi iske pas deposit or bhada dene k paise nahi hai.
Par ye aapko jarur de dega. Bachpan se janta hu ise.

Dd ( damodar ri's baba) - koi bat nahi Chotu beta tu laya hai to pakka accha hi admi hoga. Koi bat nahi paise ka to koi vanda hi nahi .bad mai de dena.

Ch - haa mamaji Badi mushkil mai hai abhi is waqt.

Sar - koi bat nahi badda ( son) tera dost hai na to him iski help karenge . naam kya hai iska

Ch - arjun rawte

Shr - maharastrian ahe

Ch - ho mami . rohan riya or adi kaha hai.

Dd - rohan to kam par gaya hai. Riya apni saheli k sath aaj use dekhne ladke wale aye hai. Adi bhatiya associate gaya hai. Wahi se internship kar raha hai na.

Sharda offer them tea n breakfast then dd give them keys of their roomwith kitchen n latbath attach to them. Chotu n arjun take luggage n shif to room which is beside their house.

Ar sit on bad defeatedly n Chotu put his hand on him.

Ch - sambhal khud ko . Ab chod wo sab.I am sure tujhe yaha bahut accha lagega.

Ar - thanks Chotu tune mujhe is waqt itna support kiya hai thanku. Warna mai ye kabhi nahi kar pata .

Ch - dost hai arjun or Jo tune mere lite humesha kiya uska kya maine Jo ye to uske aage bahut kam hai.

Ar - tu bhi na Chotu kab tak wo sab lekar baitha rahega. Khair sorry yar meri wajah se tujhe apne mama Mami ko jhut bolna pada.

Ch- chal bhi. Maine jhut nhi bola bas sach chupaya hai.

Ar - mai kaise wo sach k sath yaha rehta

Ch - chal chod .dekh sab set ho gaya hai.or ye prati ne tere liye dabba bheja hai kha Lena .mai chalta hu.

Chotu leave n arjun settle himself n take food sent by Prati.

At evening

Arjun is laying on back n starring at ceiling

Knock knock

Knock on door

He stand up n open door a young man with smile at him.he also try to smile

Ar - aap

Man - ohh hii mai rohan Chotu ka cousin n damodar ji ka bada beta.

ar - ohh hi I am arjun please come in

Ro - so all set .kaisa lag raha hai mini India mai.

Ar - its fine here .waise maine abhi is room or apke hall k alawa kuch nahi dekha.

Ro - ohh koi nahi no fear when rohan is here.waise bhi is colony ka naam mini India hai jaise humra India sabko khule dil se apnata hai waise hi humari colony bhi yaha ane walo ko dil se gale lagati hai.so welcome to our heart arjun

He hug him.arjun smile n feel his geniun warmth n hug him back.

Ar - thanks mm

Ro - tum Chotu k dost ho he call me dada to tum bhi mujhe dada keh sakte ho ya what ever u want

Ar - I'll call you dada.

Both smile n Rohan jokes make him smile n reduce his uncomfort to new environment.

Ro - waise mujhe Chotu ne call kiya tha or bataya tha tumhe job chahiye.

Ar - haa wo bhi urgent

Ro - tumne kiya kya hai.

Ar - MBA in business management.

Ro - good yar.aisa karo kal mere sath chalna meri company k malik se tumhe introduce kar dunga.dekhte hai kya hota hai.

Ar - thanku Dada

Ro - its ok yar.to kal thik 10 baje humare ghar aa jana.ab mai chalta hu.

Next morning

Arjun wake up at 7 am .he freashnup n come out .he see sharda

Ar - good morning aunty

She smile n wish him back.

Sh - beta mai batana bhul gayi.peene ka pani k nal 8 baje ayenge pani bhar lena

Ar - ji aunty

She smile n go to her house

At 8 am

Arjun come out of his room with 2 buckets.

He is shocked to see a big line in front of him his face show a shocked expression

Tabhi

Ha ha ha kya dekh rahe ho kabhi chawl mai nahi gaye kya aaj se pehle.

He see in voice direction its rohan .Arjun move his head in no mechanically.

Ro - ohh to aisa hai mere bhai ye line pani k liye lagi hai.yaha pani ki Badi Mara mari hai. Aise hi bharna padega .or kabhi kabhi to pani bharne k lite dance competition bhi hota hai.

Arjun face show horror.

Ar - par mujhe dance nahi aata.

Rohan laugh

Ro - sorry yar joke tha. Dance competition to nahi par ye line competition jarur hota hai. Humare yaha to riya or adi ye kam karte hai.ab jaldi jao.

Arjun move his head obediently.he goes to line.

He wait for his no.but one man come

Man - ye meri jagah hai yaha mai lagta hu.

Ar - ok

Or wo ek no piche chala jata hai.

Aise hi kuch log ise fool banate hai.

Or jab arjun ka no aata hai nal chale jate hai.

Ar - what nal chale gaye ab pani

Tabhi

Use ek khanakti hui hasi Sinai deti hai wo us taraf dekhta hai.waha ek ladki Jo mid or early 20 mai hogi khadi hui has rahi hai. Usne brown suit pehna hai. Side Choti n small bindi on forehead bangles in hand.looking very beautiful.

arjun look at her

Gi - aise kya dekh rahe ho.tumne Jo kiya hai uske bad hasungi hi na.

Ar - Maine .Maine kya kiya

Gi - kya kiya. Laugh. Are aise sabke liye apni jagah chodoge to bhar liya pani. Laugh.

Ar - par un kaka ka no or un Dada ko imp kam tha.or
Wo

Gi - unhone tumhe buddhu banaya bholu ram

Ar - kya mujhe buddhu banaya .or ye bholu ram kya hai.

He is confused n irritated

gi - bholu ram tum .kitne bhole ho inlogone tumhe buddhu banaya na isiliye. Ye lo mujhse pani le lo .par kal se time par aa Jana mai sikha dungi tumhe kaise pani bharte hai.

She give her beautiful dimple smile.

Ar - mera naam arjun hai.

Gi - or mai riya

Ariya - matlab tum meri makan Malkin /mere kiraydar ho.

Ariya - haa

Both laugh .

Ar - by the way thanks smily

Ri - smily ..ye kya hai.

Ar - jaise mai bholu ram waise tum smily

Ri - matlab

Ar - matlab tumne mujhe pani dekar meri help ki or mere face par smile layi or tumhari smile bhi kitni cute or beautiful hai isiliye smily

Both smile n go to their houses.

TBC...


Precap - Arjun's job interview. Arjun effort to adjust in chawl.



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Posted: 9 years ago
#42
nice update soor
so arjun kya choopa rha hai
wow chotujun mast jodi
aur arjun pani bhar ne gya
can't Imagine wo line me laga hai wo bhi pani bahrne ke liye
how bholu arjun sbko apni jagah dedi air NAL chal le bye
bichare ka badluck bad
and ariya convo loved it
thanks for pm
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#43
Awesome and very cute update
Every body are helpful except chawl wale.
Nice name Buddhu ram and Smily.

Waise mai bhi kisi ko Buddhuram kehti hu..

Thanks for the PM

LADDU
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow..amazing update
love bolu ram n smily
cute
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow sweet one love it thnx for pm cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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OMG.., nice didu loved it... Arjun in chawl and chottu s friend
Riya smiley arjun bholuram...,
Thanks for the pm
Continue soon 😊 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb update
Fantastic starting
Thanks for pm
Please continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Loved it dear
What an update
Arjun in chawl
Or pani wala scene mazedaar tha
Update soon
Thanx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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wow
awesome updated
loved it
plz cont soon
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Oh.. Its like a fresh breathing air.. no ETF background.. Something new... Looking forward for it.. loved the starting.. Continue soon.. Thanks for PM..

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