ARIYA SS -SAATHI KHUSHI OR GAM KE part 14 on pg 102 16/12 - Page 57

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next day

its ariya marriage
riya is getting ready for patri patra (engagement) in bengali attire . she is looking so pretty . only ariya family , arsh , shilpa parents n a reliable friend of arjun. he is actually cousin brother of arjun n friend also.

she get ready n see herself in attire .she drift in fb

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riya tell his father that she is not going to marry avi. her father blast on her. but avi tell him truth and accept he love some one else
shakti - avi tum aisa kaise kar sakte ho . tumhe riya se shadi karni hogi.

ri - q karni hogi, ap use yaha laye uski parwarish ki to kya ab uski keemat chahte hai acp sir.

sha - riya tum bich mai mat bolo

ri - apka matter hota to kabhi nahi bolti, baat meri aur avi ki hai, toh mai aapse kya bhagwan se bhi lad jaun,aap avi ko force karke haan bulwa bhi lenge par mai ye shadi nahi karungi samjhe aap.

n she angrily rush out of room.

sha - thik hai mai shadi k card ki printing rukwa deta hu. or baki arrangements cancel kar dunga.

he left , n avi get happy. he come to riya's room

avi - riyu riyu riyu kaku raaji hoe gachen. Kintu tor opor khub rege achen re. ( riyu riyu riyu bade papa man gaye.
his face fall
par wo tujh par gussa ho gaye)

ri - Arey char na acp sir. Emni o amake niye kokhon khushite thaken uni? Anyways ebar taratari amake Pakhi r shonge alaap kora. Ami kintu tor opor already rege achi je tor kauke pochondo hoeche r tui amake eto deri kore janacchish. Ami toh ei sob byapare stupid, tui toh janish, kichui bujhi na. ( are chod na acp sir wise bhi kaun sa mujhse khush rehte hai. wo chod ab jaldi apni pakhi se milwa .mai waise hi tujhse naraj hu tujhe pyar ho gaya or mujhe itna late bataya.mai to is mamle mai stupid hu kuch nahi samjhti)

avi - Sorry re, ami prothom e sure hote chaichilum r tui jokhon prem e porbi na tokhon tui o bujhte parbi. ( sorry. bas mai sure hona chahta tha. or waise bhi jab tujhe pyar hoga tab samjhegi.)

ri - Amar oi sob prem trem hobe na re ( mujhe nahi hone wala pyar pyar)

avi - Biye toh korbi naki?? (shadi to karegi na..?)

ri - No way , ami biye tiye korchi na. (no way mujhe nahi karni shadi wadi.)

avi - Chal chal jokhon tor biye r functions hobe na tokhon ami tor sob theke beshi leg pulling korbo. Pati potro r shomoy jokhon tui ready hobi na tokhon tor sob make up kharap kore debo. Tui chitkar korbi r ami bolbo, tui toh biye i korbi na tai na sheje i chole ja biye korte. (Chal chal ab jab teri shadi ki functions ho rahe honge na tab dekhna teri sabse zyada legpulling mai hi karunga.sabse pehle wo kya tha mmm ha patri patra hoga na usme tu jab ready hogi or apne apko saja rahi hogi to mai aunga or tera sara makeup kharab kar dunga or jab tu chillayegi mai bolunga tujhe to shadi nahi karni thi na to ab asie hi chali ja rituals mai .)

ri - he he very funny . Ami toh ready i hobo na tui r ki noshto korbi?? ( mai nahi ready hone wali .to tujhe bigadne ka mauka hi nahi milega.)

avi ruffle her hair n she get irritated

ri - Ovi toke kotobar bolechi na amar chul elomelo korbi na. (avi kitni bar kaha hai mere hair ruffle mat kiya kar..)

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ri - Ovi toke kotobar bolechi na amar chul elomelo korbi na. (avi kitni bar kaha hai mere hair ruffle mat kiya kar...)

she make angry face n look here n there but no one is there. a drop of tear flow from her eyes. her mother come to take her n

rita - Riya , cholo shona , shobai wait korchen. (riyu chalo beta sab tumhara wait kar rahe hai.)

ri nod

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scene shift

arjun room

arjun is getting irritated .

.ar - aai baba kae garaz hoti lagnachi sagi riti karechi, kiti kathinai ne sutti dhetali ahe etf varun, purn team shock made hoti ki mi sutti ghetli aahr, ani ite mahabaleshwarchya farmhouse made yaychi kar garaz hoti (ma papa kya jarurat thi shadi ki rituals karne ki . badi mushkil se etf se leave liya hai. team to shocked thi ki maine leave liya hai. or yaha mahabaleshwar wale farmhouse par aane ki kya jarurat thi)

kav - bag bada, tujya sathi ha dusra lagn ani mazburi aahe pan, pan riya aani tichya kutum saathiriya ha pahila lagn aahe, ani dusri maae jashish rita jincha pan kaahi armaan aselas, ani riya ticha ta vichar kar (dekh beta , tere liye ye dusri shadi or majburi hai par. par riya or uski family ke liye to ye pehli shadi hai. or har ma ki tarah rita ji k bhi kuch arman hai or riya uska bhi to soch)

arjun understand n get ready

arsh make arjun n riya sit in middle of hall n start ritual. at last rita n kavita feed both of them rasogulla n mishti dohi. arjun's friend and lawyer forward some papers n ask ariya to sign.

rit - orjun beta ye kaun sa paper hai,

ar - wo aunty hum abhi sabke samne shadi nahi kar rahe , or humari job bhi aisi hai. to riya ki security ke liye jaruri hai ki hum shadi ke legal documents sign kar de. taki kal koi hum par, humare rishte par point out na kare. or inme meri savings n account ke bhi legal pappers hai. in short wo sab jin par wife ka hak hota hai.

all get sentimental to hear arjun's concern for riya's future. riya look at him with utmost request. no matter what is the condition of their marriage n what track their relation will go, but today she is proud to be his wife. he give her indication , he will always be with her n that's enough for her. his sath is more than any love or promise to her.

they sign documents. at evening shilpa n rita helping ri to get ready. her mother left after she get ready.

shi - vahini aap thodi der wait kijiye mai dada ko dekh kar aati hu.

she left

some time later
armaan knock door n ri open

arm - sorry mai shilpa ko bulane aya tha.

ri - mm wo to abhi arjun sir k pas gayi hai.

an awkward silence is there which is broken by ri

ri - i am sorry.

arm - y r u sorry

ri - ap roshni ji ke bhai hai or meri unke pati se shadi ho rahi hai. i can understand apko bura lag raha hoga. but i promise mai unki jagah kabhi nahi lungi. or arjun sir bhi unse bahut pyar karte hai.

armaan smile,

arm - tumhe kisne kaha mujhe bura lag raha hai.infact mai toh bahut khush hu ki mere arjun ko tum jaisi sathi mil rahi hai. or arjun or roshni ka rishta mai acche se janta hu. arjun ne ye decision lene se pehle mujhe sabse pehle poocha tha.or nahi bhi poochta to bhi mai khush hota uske liye. roshni ab nahi hai ja chuki hai wo, iske liye arjun ki jindgi ko nahi rukna chahiye. roshni bhi yahi chahti hai. or mai janta hu tum uski jagah kabhi nahi logi. par mai chahta hu tum arjun ki jindgi mai wo jagah banao jo kabhi roshni nahi bana payi. jo wo kabhi jee nahi payi.wo khushi tum arjun ko do

he smile put his hand on her head.riya get touched by his words n his gesture.

she come in her room again n look herself in bridal attire.she again drift in fb


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when avi is leaving for army training.

he is doing his packing.n riya is unpacking his bag.

avi - Riya eta ki hocche? Ami pack korchi r tui unpack keno korchish? (riyu what is this mai pack kar raha hu tu bar bar unpack.)

ri - Ovi jaas na re, theke ja na. Ami ekdom ekla hoe jabo re. (mat ja na avi. mai yaha akeli ho jaungi.)

avi - Ekla keno hobi ? Tor oi boka boka friends gulo ache na! (akeli kaha tere wo faltu dost hai na)

ri giggle

ri - Accha toh ovi babu r hingshe hocche. Tui theke ja na. Ami r o ther shonge kotha bolbo na. Promise. Tui amar shonge police training join kor na. Amra ek shonge kono job korbo. IPS e army r theke risk kom. ( Aww avi babu jealous of my friends. tu mat ja na mai unn sabse bat nahi karungi.pakka. tu na mere sath police training karna hum dono sath mai job karenge.isme army se kam risk hota hai.)

avi - Riya ami army join korchi karon eta amar baba r amar shopno. R tui chinta korish na ami eto taratari morbo na. Ekhon o toh amake biye r shomoy tor piri tulte hobe na. (mai army ja raha hu qki ye mere baba or mera sapna hai. or don't worry mai itni jaldi nahi mar raha.abhi to mujhe teri piri uthani hai shadi mai.)

ri - Ami biye korbo na. ( mujhe shadi nahi karni .

avi - Ami biye korbo na. (mujhe shadi nahi karni .)

he copy her

avi - Chup kor. Dekhbi tor biye prithibi r sob theke bhalo chele r shonge hobe r toke piri te boshiye biye r mondop e ami i niye jabo. Ami toh tor bff, tai na? R toke tor bor er shamne khub tease korbo, dekhish! Tui shudhu tor weight ta ektu koma. Tui eto mota na , amar shorir er sob haar bhenge jaabe. (chup kar dekhna teri shadi duniya k sabse acche ladke se hogi or tujhe piri par bitha kar mandap mai main hi le jaunga. tera bff hone k nate. or tere dulhe k samne tujhe khub tease bhi karunga. bas tu na thoda weight kam kar lena.bahut moti hai meri haddiyan tut jayengi.)

ri - avi tu na.

present

she smile at his word.

ri - Ovi dekh , aj amar biye. Tui toh sob theke pagol chilish amar biye niye r aj tui i amar kache nei. ( avi dekh aaj meri shadi hai or tujhe to sabse zyada craze tha meri shadi ka. or tu hi mere paas nahi hai.)

avi - Ke bollo toke je ami tor kache nei. Dekh ami toh ekhanei achi , tor haashi r modhey. (tujhe kisne bola mai tere paas nehi hu , dekh mai to yahi hu teri dimple smile me.)

she smile n look in mirror but avi is not there only her smile.she get sad.

he ma enter


rit - Riyu , ovi r kotha mone porche? (riyu , avi ki yad aa rahi hai beta.)

ri - Haan ma. Jodi o ajke amader modhey thakto tahole tomader theke o khushi hoto. Tumi toh jaano . (ha ma . kash avi humare sath hota ap to janti hai aaj wo hota to apse bhi zyada khush.hota

her ma also have tears in her eye

rit - Shona, ajke kaadish na. Ajke tor biye na. Toke kaad te dekhle ovi o dukkho pabe. ( beta ro mat teri shadi hai aaj.isse avi ko bhi dukh hoga.)

just than shil enter

shi - vahini chaliye all set.



they bring riya on a piri. riya has two beetel leaves in her hand with which she covered her eyes. they make her take 7 rounds around arjun n then stop infront of him. riya slowly remove leaves and both ariya look at each. arjun first time look riya like this n riya look him he is wearing Maharashtrian dress. she always seen him in formal one it is new arjun for her,

pandit chant some mantras , riya feel someone pinch her lightly she look side of hers , she see avi is holding piri n giving har naughty teasing grin , her eyes shine but avi is not there n her trance broke by pandit voice,

after that they exchange varmala.ri father do her kanyadan. though he is paralyzed, ri ma help him to do so. then sindur daan ritul. arjun fill her partition with sindur.

then shilpa do their gatbandan.

pundit - onjoli bharne k liye ladki k bhai ko bulao.

ri , n her parents look at each other. arman come forward n take khoi n give it to riya . riya eye filled with tears. arman assure her n ask her to continue.

by following all rituals .ariya get married . both sleep in seperate room as its their kaal ratri.

next day they performed all ritual post wedding with bride n groom .they visit a temple n take blessings . arjun stay out of temple but then enter for all sake. rita ask riya to take arjun blessing n she come forward but arjun ask her not to do this. both of them are equal in this marriage.

then ri parents give arjun totto ( gifts) .n ri feed all food made by her.n all praise her n give her shagun.

at night

arjun 's room is decorated with flowers n candles . n here kavita gift ri floral ornaments according to Bengali ritual. shil make her ready with beautiful red saree n floral ornaments . they take her to arjun room. n they left her there arjun look at her n she is seeing ground.

both ariya are hell nervous.


tbc...
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Posted: 8 years ago
hii

so here is marriage part of ariya. first of all i want to thanks two people utsha n ramya for bengali n marathi conversation respectively .you both guys really very good. ur word decorate my this part,,

hope all of u guys loved it. aviya friendship part is very important to show ri state in future part

thanks
Edited by sur1911 - 8 years ago
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Posted: 8 years ago
Awesome. Continue soon. Thanks for pm
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Posted: 8 years ago
Thanks for updating this story mini di. As u already knkw its one of my fav. Loved the bonding b/w arsh and arjun. Arman is such a true friend and a brave soul with a genuine heart. Good that riya and shilpa gelled so well in such a short span of time.
Avi and riya's fb were too much fun but highly emotional. Their convo s were so realistic. Completely overwhelmed at the small encounter of arman and riya. Arman left me speechless with his words and i couldn't help admire and respect this man who not only said but also did maintain his promise and fulfill his duty as a brother and true friend by helping riya giving onjoli.

Even arjun too desreves respect for arranging the legal papers though for boh of them it is more or less a forced marriage. Still he didn't compromise with his responsibilty. May be he is getting inclined to riya very much unknown to himself. Anyways nothing to worry i guess, arsh is there to give him the reality check when needed.

The way u portrayed each ritual was very nice. But lets see how the life of ariya shapes up post marriage. Whats in store for them in the future. Stopping here today. Will be waiting for the next update. Do pls cont soon if possible and thanks once again for updating it.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: sur1911

hii


so here is marriage part of ariya. first of all i want to thanks two people utsha n ramya for bengali n marathi conversation respectively .you both guys really very good. ur word decorate my this part,,

hope all of u guys loved it. aviya friendship part is very important to show ri state in future part

thanks


U r welcome but not welcome. He he he he he. It was a lovely update di. And i should thank u for giving me a chance to help u. I feel myself lucky.
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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: utsha


U r welcome but not welcome. He he he he he. It was a lovely update di. And i should thank u for giving me a chance to help u. I feel myself lucky.



aww that's so sweet of u dear.,
I'm glad u like it
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Posted: 8 years ago
awesome update
continue soon
thanks for pm in advance
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Posted: 8 years ago
wow lovely chapter
awe riya & shilpa bonding really fast 😃
poor riya missing avi badly 🥺
avi had all dream abt riya's wedding now he isn't there for her wedding 😭
finally ariya got married 🥳
I love Bengali wedding ❤️
arman is such a understand person 🤗
poor ariya now feeling awkward in their wedding night
continue plz

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