# T2 ARIYA FF JINDGI EK PAHELI - ATEET KE PANNE.Part 54 on pg 95 22/9

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Part 50

Anurag sit on bench tensely. He call tani

Anu - hello Tani

Ta - ha anu boliye.

Anu - mere ek cop par serious attack hua hai. Mai hospital mai hi hu . aaj ghar nahi aa paunga . ma papa bhi relative ki shadi mai gaye hai or pari bhi kaki k ghar hai. Princess ghar par akeli hogi tum chali jaogi ghar jaldi

Tani - haa mai bas nikalti hu. Mere duty hours khatam hone wale hai.

Tabhi

Dr tani ek min.

She cut call n after 10 min she call anurag

Ta - anu ek emergency aa gayi hai . meri patient ka urgent operation karna hai. She is very critical . waise to delivery next month thi but wo sidiyon se fisal gayi. Complication jyada hai shayad rat bhar ghar na ja pain

Anu - par princess ghar par akeli rahegi .WO to dar jayegi.

Ta - mai aisa karti hu ishu ko phone karke ghar Jane ko bolti hu .dono masti bhi kar lenge or hume b tension nhi hoga.

Anu - hmm ye sahi rahega

Scene shift

Rish reach temple which is near to hospital. Riya is broken n weak. She arrive at temple n fall on knee in front of god . she join her shivering hand. Her lips are also shivering badly. Her vision is blur due to constant crying.

She close her eyes but tears are still flowing from her eyes. Ishu is also crying n praying lord to save arjun .she know very well if something happen to arjun then ri also can't survive. She is tensed for both ariya.

Her phone ring. She compose herself

Is - haa didu bolo. ( MV - kahi didu ne ri ka puchne ko call nhi kiya ki wo ye ghar q nhi pahuchi. Kya bolungi mai didu ko.)

Ta - ishu beta aaj emergency aa gayi hai to mai ghar nahi ja paungi or anu bhi ek hospital mai gai aaj ghar nhi ja payenge. Riyu ghar par akeli hogi tu kaha hai abhi

Ish - mai wo mai haa book lene ayi thi riyu or mai

Ta - tum dono sath ho.ok to dono ghar nikal Jana maine ma ko phone kar diya tha ki tu aaj riyu k sath humare ghar rahegi

Ish - ok didu bye

They cut call. N a fakir who take care of mandir ( its durga ma mandir) come n look at their face.

Fak - kya bat hai baccha aap log lagta hai kuch bada mangne aye hai or is bacchi ki halat to bahut kharab lagti hai.( pointing toward riya)

Ri open her eyes n look at baba tearily.

Ri - baba mere pati ki jindgi khatre mai hai. Dr koshish kar rahe hai par unhone kaha hai unhe ab dua hi bacha sakti hai.

Fak - tum bilkul sahi jagah ayi ho beti. Ye mandir bahut chamtkari hai. Yaha har murad puri hoti hai. Par yad rakhna kuch pane k liye kuch khona bhi padta hai. Wo tujhe bahut ajeej hai to kya us ajeej insan ki salamti k liye tu kuch ajeej chij chod sakti hai. Agar haa to mang le ma se mannat .

He point toward burning coal..

Rishi gasped seeing them.n what he say

Ish - nahi riya ye sab andhvishwas hai

Fak - beta mano to ye devi hai or na mano to patthar. Sab kuch manne na manne par nirbhar karta hai. Kuch log ise andhvishwas kahenge par mai Ise Shraddha kehta hu aage tumhari iccha. Jai mata Di

N he left for his sandhya pujan.( evening prayer)

Ishita look at riya fearly.

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Ishita look at riya fearly.n riya face show some determination

Ish - dekh teddy tu kahi kuch ulta sidha to nahi karne wali na .ye sab bas jhooti manyata hai

Ri - tere liye hongi ishu. Par mere liye ye mere arme ko bachane ka akhiri rasta hai. meri akhiri ummed.

Ish - par

Ri - ma ek vrat rakhti hai ishu usme ek kahani sunai jati hai jisme savitri nam ki lady ne apne mare hue pati ki life wapas layi thi. Mai chahe andhvishwas ko na manu par haa mai sacche pyar or Shraddha ki takat mai vishwas rakhti hu. Chahe arjun mere rituals se pati nahi par mai unhe tan man dhan or vachan se apna pati hi manti hu. Na unke pehle koi tha na unke bad koi hoga.even unke bad to khud riya hi nahi hogi.

Ish - par unhone kaha wo jitna tujhe pyara hai utni pyari chij chodni hogi. Or tujhe sabse jyada pyar to

ri - arme hai.

Is - matlab tu. Nahi riya tu aisa nahi kar sakti. Tum dono ek pal nhi jee pate ek dusre k bina tu kaise ye sab . mai tujhe aisa kuch nahi karne dungi.

Ri - uske liye mai kuch bhi kar sakti hu. Par ishu mujhse alag hokar wo waise bhi mar jayega

Ish - haa wahi to isiliye aisi filmy batien or behuda mannat mat mang

Ri - par kuch to chodna hoga to mai

She close her eyes n pray to ma durga n start walking on burning coal. Ishita look at her teary eyes n pain is easily evident on ishu face also. Riya take 3 round on coal n sit on floor. Bcoz her leg get burned.

She close her eyes n join her hand n pray .ishu look at her helplessly. She also start praying. After some min ishu phone ring

Is - yes insp vinay.

Ish - kya...

N she cut call

Ishu goes to ri

Ish- teddy teddy insp vinay ka phone tha

Ri open her eyes immediately

Ri - ishu kya hua mere arme ko. Wo thik hai na. Ma ne meri prayer ans ki na.bol na ishu chup q hai

Ishu smile

Is - ab tu bolne degi to bolungi na.bilkul thik hai tera arme wo ab khatre se bahar hai.

( actually ishu before coming for tample give her no to vinay so that he can inform them when arjun get well)

Ri smile n join her hand toward ma n thanks her then she happily hug ishu very tightly.

Ish - wo thik hai teddy tera arme thik hai. Ab tu bhi hospital chalkar bandage karwa le dekh kitne peir jal Gaye hai

Ri - nhi mujhe ek bar arme ko dekhna hai.

Is - par

Ri - plz ishu..

Is - fine

Ishu take ri hand n put her own shoulder n give her support to walk. Ishu drive ri scooty n ri sit on back. Both reach hospital . anurag is still there. Arjun is fine but he is still unconscious

Is - teddy jiju. Mujhe lagta hai tu unhe bata de

Ri - nhi . mai bas arme ko dur se dekh kar chali jaungi. She take ishu scarff n wrap her face n limbly walk toward arjun ward. Vinay n anurag is talking with Dr.so riya go till arj ward n look at him from outside . many instruments attached with his body. Tears flow from her eyes.she look at him n silently walk toward ishu.

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Amirashah

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Hey nice update

Update the remaining part soon waiting!!!

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Bloomie

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Originally posted by: sur1911

Hii dear

Hmm rosh marry arjun as jiya.
Ha sam ko pata hai wo rosh hai n arjun ko bhi pata tha wo rosh hai n riya uski sis ka nam tha..
But use laga rosh hi uski jiya hai qki rosh ne use aisa sochne par majbur kiya.

Sam ko arjun n jiya ki luv story k bare mai kuch nahi pata tha .if u remember arjun ne uske or jiya k bare mai first time sam ko sikna k Marne k bad bataya. N sam shocked hua tha or uusi k bad arjun ko shak hua rosh jiya nhi thi.

N sam ne ri ka q nhi pucha. To ans hai Mishra family accident mai mar gaye the . if u remember sik ne etf ko bataya tha ki unhone hi Mishra family ko Mara or use accident sabit kiya. To samjun ko laga rosh ki family including ri mar gayi

Sam k liye wo tang karne ka kisaa wahi khatam ho gaya tha.he even forget abt that. Acc to him arni uski wajah se mile .n they fall in luv n marry each other.

Hope maine tumhara doubt clear kar diya. Or baki ye sab q kaise or kya hua tumhe story k progress hone k sath pata chalega .
Plz read n enjoy story till then.

Hope u wait.

N abhi bhi kuch doubt hai to feel free to ask me

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manasvi..

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Posted: 9 years ago

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Ishu look at riya shocked

Ish - tune arjun ko thik se dekha bhi nahi or usse mili bhi nahi.

Ri - ishu plz ghar chal

Ish - riyu tu kuch aisa vaisa to nahi kar rahi na.

Ri - ishu plz mere liye mushkil mat bana or mujhe ghar le chal plz. I beg of you

Ishu get silent n give her support. Both reach misha house. It 1 am of night.

Both change their cloth n ishu did riya dressing n give her medicine.

Ishu - bata ab kya kiya tune

Ri - ishu plz abhi nahi. I promise you mai sab bataungi but abhi nahi.

Ishu sigh .

Is - thik hai .kuch kha le mai bread butter lati hu.

Ri - mera man nahi hai.

Ishu insist but ri don't agree her.

Ish - fine mat kha par thodi der so to ja.

Ri - neend nahi aa rahi. Or mujhe nahi sona. Mere arme ko kuch ho gaya to.( its her fear)

Ish - ye kya pagal jaisa logic hua teddy. Tere na khane or sone se kuch nahi hoga. Samjhi tu.or use pata chala to kitna hurt hoga use.ek to subah accident ho gaya fir ro ro kar ye hal bana liya or coal par bhi chali. Dono paer injured hai. Na khana hai na sona hai. Chahti kya hai tu.

Ri - ek glass pani la de.

Ishu glare her n go to kitchen to take some water for her. She is about to enter ri room but she move toward anurag room n take a sleeping pill from tani's medical kit. N mix in water n give it to riya.

Riya drink it n sleep after some min due to medicine effect. Ishu put hand on her head n look at her pale n feared face with teary eyes.

Ish - sorry teddy par tere liye filhal yahi sahi tha.pata nahi tune kya kiya .or kya hoga.

She also lay beside riya n thinking about ariya. N she don't know when she fall asleep.

Next morning.

7:30

Arjun get conscious. Till then his ayi baba also arrived. They were very heart broken on seeing him like this .anurag take care them.now all are in arjun room

Arjun open his eyes slowly.he first saw his aayi baba who has tear in their eyes.

Ayi - kaisa hai beta tu. Jyada dard to nahi ho raha tujhe.

Ar - aayi ro mat. Tune mujhe kitna strong banaya hai mujhe dard kaise hoga. Or baba apko apne bete par proud hona chahiye usne ek bahut bade gunde ko panda hai. Bas uske bhai ne mujh par dhoke se humla kar diya.

Ba - are tu to mera sher hai beta .I am proud of u

Ay - mera baccha

N she hug him lightly now arjun see anurag who look at him

Ar - anurag sir

Anu - kaisa feel ho raha hai arjun

Ar - I am fine sir. Thanku mere liye yaha ane ko

Vi - sir dcp sir to rat bhar yahi the or apke liye khub bhag daud bhi ki

Ayi - thanku beta apne mere bacche k liye itna kuch kiya .nahi to pata nahi kya hota

Anu -nahi aunty isme thanks kaisa .arjun humare desh ka saccha or bahadur police officer hai or usse bhi jyada mera favourite student hai .Ise dekh kar bahut accha feel hota hai. Or waise bhi jis k sath acchai or sacchai ki takat ho or apke jaise mata pita ka ashirwad use kya ho sakta hai.

Vi - or sir jiya mam ka pyar bhi.

Arjun get shocked n look at vinay then anurag. Ayi baba smile n anu get shocked

Anu - jiya

Ayi - humari hone wali bahu

Anu - kya bat hai arjun congrates .tumne bataya nahi .Delhi ki hi hai.

Arjun don't understand what to say.but vinay

Vi - sir Delhi ki hi hai.kal wo or unki dost aye the sir ko dekhne. Unhone to nahi bataya wo kaun hai par unki condition dekh kar lag raha tha ki wo sir ko khud se bhi jyada pyar karti hai. Bar bar keh rahi thi arme apni jiya ko chodkar nahi ja sakta. Tabhi pata chala unka nam jiya hai.

Arjun get worried to think about ri.

Arj MV jiyu oh damm pata nahi uski kya halat hogi use Sab pata hai usi se to bat kar raha tha kal mai jab ye hua. Shit pata nahi kaise sambhala khud ko usne.par ab WO kaha hai

Anu - par wo mujhe nahi dikhi or abhi bhi nahi hai.

Vi - sir k liye Dr ne bola ki inhe dua hi bacha sakti hai ab to mam ko kisi ne pas mai tample hai waha Jane ki bola.mam or unki dost waha gayi. Or jab maine unhe sir k thik hone ka inform kiya to wo dono ayi thi. Us waqt aap dr se discuss kar rahe the. Mam ki halat bahut kharab thi or wo to jalte angaro par chali thi shayad qki unke pair jal Gaye the.

He said worriedly n all look at him shocked n arjun in most pain

Arj - kya jiyu angare par chali .pagal hai wo uspar ek Chot lage uske pehle mai marna pasand karunga or WO mere liye angaro par chali. Jiyu kitna pain ho raha hoga use.

Ayi - sambhal beta khud ko .jiya k pyar or tyag ko bigad mat .jaldi thik ho fir hum uske ghar rishta le kar jayenge.

Anu - haa aunty sahi keh rahi hai. Bahut lucky ho tum or tumhari jiya bhi. You are made for each other.

Arj - thanks sir.( MV ab kaise kahu wo apki hi behan hai sir. Pata nahi ap kaisa react karenge jab apko sach pata chalega)

He look at him worriedly.

Ayi baba take care of arjun .n anurag vinay left for their home. Ayi baba hier private plane for arjun to take him Mumbai bcoz they want to consult their Dr. So they take him hurriedly. Arjun is upset bcoz he missed chance to meet jiya.

Anurag pickup tani n reach his home.they directly reach ri room n find rish sleeping. They wake them n shocked to see riya condition

Anu - princess ye sab kaise kya hua. Tera hath mai stich n pair mai bandage.

Ta - kya hua beta

Ri - wo kuch nahi bhaiyu bhabhi chota sa accident ho gaya tha.

Anu - or tumne hume bataya bhi nahi. Pair mai itni bandage hai or tum Chota keh rahi ho.

Ta - ishu tune bhi nahi bataya

Is - wo didu aap log busy the or humne dr ko dikha diya dekho unhi ne stitches lagaye hai. Or maine rat mai bandage kar Di thi

Anu - ab do tin din bahar nikalna hai princess samjhi

Ri - hmm bhaiyu .waise apka wo cop ab thik hai.

Anu - hmm ab thik hai.kal to hum dar hi gaye the.uske ayi baba use Mumbai le gaye.pata hai tani uski hone wali wife hai jiya wo kitna pyar karti hai usse

N he tell her all convoy

Ta - sach mai aaj k jamane mai aisa pyar

Anu - or arjun ki ankho se hi lag raha tha ki jiya ko jitna dard hua hoga coal par chalne mai usse jyada uski halat soch kar arjun ko hua.

Tears flow from ri eyes.

Anu - ro mat princess tum jaldi thik ho jaogi. I know tumse thoda bhi dard bardash nahi hota. Pata hai tani bachpan mai ise kharoch bhi lag jati thi to pura ghar sar pe utha leti thi.jara dard bardaah nahi hota Ise

Ta - to q kare wo bardash humari princess hai uske liye hum hai na uska har dard dur kar denge.

Both hug riya

Ish - didu mai aapki hi Behan hu .nanad k liye pyar or Behan k liye

Anu - mai hu na chalo tumhare liye samose laya hu

Ish - wow jiju chalo

They left

Tani - riyu tum freash ho jao fir mai tumhari bandage change kar dungi.

Ri - n no bhabhi .iski kya jarurat hai.

But tani don't aggree n open her bandage.

N get shocked.

Ri look at him

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All look at ariya shocked

Sak - omg riya kya yahi wajah hai tumne arjun k pas roshni ko bhej diya

TBC...

Precap - mmm sochte raho..mai bad mai hi bataungi...

Edited by sur1911 - 9 years ago

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manasvi..

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Posted: 9 years ago

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hi Dearie's

So here is next update. I want to clear ye story blind faith ye superstitious par nahi hai. Or na hi riya waisi hai. Its just uske arme ki life danger mai thi to use Jo sahi laga usne kiya.usne bas arme se pyar kiya or devi ma par vishwas. I just want to show riya's infinite love for arjun by this part.

Hope maine kuch over nahi likha

Plz jaldi jaldi review dijiye. All positive n negative reviews all welcomed.

Thanks