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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: etfr

<font color="#333333" size="7">again u proof it...</font>
<font color="#333333" size="7">that u r superb..no more than superb awesome</font>
<font color="#333333" size="7">brilliantly wrote the story</font>
<font color="#333333" size="7">mst say the way u think</font>
<font color="#333333" size="7">abt these all twist n</font>
<font color="#333333" size="7">turn</font>
<font color="#333333" size="7">the way express each n</font>
<font color="#333333" size="7">every moment , emotions</font>
<font color="#333333" size="7">every emotional scene</font>
<font color="#333333" size="7">mostly made me cry..or my eyes moist ..</font>
the way u wrote ariya moments n
the way u showed the love between siblings
i luv it all..u r brilliant..i m jst jst SPEECHLESS
u r super dooper..lovely update till now
plz write more..n update soon
eagerly waiting for next update
plz plz plz update so sooon..plz
love the way u add rajat n anu, aarav n veera...
superb concept..luv it
plz update it too soon
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that's really sweet of you that you write such big reply for me
thank u so much
hope you like upcoming parts too
thanks I'll update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
guys your wait is over

here is next part

hope you all like it.

all suggestions n reviews are most welcome.
plz read n do comment
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 48



Aisha drop ri at home n call arjun.

Ai - arjun sir aap kaha hai.

Ar - mai bas etf se nikla hu ghar pahuchne wala hu. Or Maine kaha na tum mujhe arjun bulaya karo.

Ai - OK arjun.

Ar - Aisha don't mind you are sounding sad or nervous

Ai - no nothing like that aap aisa kijiye apke ghar se 10 min dur Jo cafe hai waha aa kar miliye mujhe .

Ar - ok.bas 15 min lagenge mujhe.

After 15 min arjun reach cafe

Ai is sitting there nervously

Ar - kya hua Aisha

Ai - arjun apka fav song kaun sa hai

Arjun get confusef

Ar - what tumne mujhe yaha ye puchne bulaya hai or tum aisi q

Ai - offo wo sab badme abhi Jo pucha hai uska ans do.

Ar - mera fav song tum mile dil khile

Ai - yyes yes I know.mai uhi dar rahi thi..

N she hug arjun in excitement n he get more confused.

ar - Aisha mujhe bataogi hua kya hai.tum itna ajeeb q behave kar rahi ho.

Ai - aaj na hum game khel rahe the etf mai.

Arjun glare her n she smile

Ai - puri bat to suniye ye glare bad mai dena.haa to game ye the ki sabko apne loved ones ka fav song gana tha n you know ri ne kaun sa gana gaya

She smile at him

Ar - really

Ai - yes really

Both hifi each other n all look at them.both get embarrassed.

Ai - or bhi kuch hai n she told all thing about ri she know n observe

Ar - thanks Aisha

Ai - are apne mujhe dost kaha hai na to thanku nahi boliye . haa par chaho to mujhe treat de sakte ho.

Ar - done.

Ai - so congratulation

Ar - thanks.

Arjun return home happily.all look at him n get confused why he is so happy. After dinner four of them sitting in hall

Anu - bhai aap kuch jyada hi khush lag rahe ho kya bat hai.

Ar - kuch khas bat nahi. Bas ab life mai sab accha lag raha hai to mai khush hu.

He said smilingly n all also smile.

Raj - waise arjun tu kal ja raha hai na case k liye chutki k sath.

Ar - ha of course .but mujhe kal subah jaldi ek kam se nikalna hai

Rianu - kis kam se.

Ar - ek informer se milna hai or bhi official work hai.

All nod n chat little.

Next day

Arjun left home early n not go to
Office also. at evening he reached etf

Ar - riya are you ready.

Ri - yes sir Maine sare micro equipment le liye hai or case n strategy to hum kal hi discuss kar chuke hai.

Ar - OK. So get ready for party..meri dress liye ho

Ri - hmm.ye lijiye.

Ariya take their dress n go to respective change room for get ready. After 15 min arjun come out n all look at him shocked.samjat in sam cabin

Ar - kya hua aise q dekh rahe ho sab.

Ab arjun k aage bole kaun to sab chup hai but Aisha

Ai - sir aap bahut acche lag rahe hai .aaj she pehle apko itna
accha ready hote nahi dekha.

All get scared ki Aisha ab gayi but arjun smile at her

Ar - thanks aisha .riya ready ho jaye to bata dena mai sam k cabin mai hu

N he left .all get shocked tha he don't scold her.

Sh - baap re Aisha khadus ne dantne ki bajaye smile di or thanku bhi bola

Ai - tu bhi na shree ab arjun sir pehle jitne khadus nahi infact bilkul khadus nahi rahe.

Ch - ha ye to hai.

All agree with aicho


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At sam cabin

Arjun enter

Sam - kya bat hai arjun bada accha lag raha hai.

Raj - haa or pehle ki tarah ready bhi hua hai.clean shave n all kya bat hai.kuch to chut raha hai sam

N both samjat hifi

ar -Dekho tum dono jyada bolo mat warna mai nahi ja raha party mai.

Samjat - nahi nahi tu ja mere bhai

Ar - that's batter.( uff tu bhi na arjun kya karta hai agar ye dono bol dete mat ja to kya hota.such samajh kar bola kar)

N they talk about case n samjat again tease arjun

After 20 more min ri also get ready n she is looking so stunning in her black gown .all praise her .

That time samjunjat also arrived. Arjun look at ri n lost in her

Raj - are waah chutki Badi pyari lag rahi hai.

Ri hug him

Ri - thanku bhai.

Sam - acchi lag rahi ho riya .so ready

Ri - yes sir all ready .n thanku

Sam - arjun

Ar - uhu

Raj - arjun.

Ar - haa mai ready hu chalk riya.

Arjun left immediately n ri sigh n follow him.

Arjun reach at car( not SUV bcoz they are at uc) n sigh

Ar- uff. Pata nahi sam kya bol raha tha mai to riya mai hi kho gaya tha. Thanks to my anger n attitude kisi ko samajh nahi aya.

Here ri

Ri mv shayad arjun mere sath aise mission parnahi jana chahte isliye gussa hai or mujhe akela bhi chod aye.

She reach till car n sit in car silently .he is on driving seat.he start car

After 5 min

Ar - kya hua

Ri - aap is mission par mere sath aise nahi ana chahte the na.

Ar - aisa kuch nahi hai ye humara kam hai riya.or tumhare sath q nahi aunga

Ri - wo kalki devi case mai aapne isiliye gussa kiya tha na qki wo aunty ne apko mera husband kaha or aaj. Pata hai usne meri koi galti nahi this

N she told him whole matter

Ar - sorry riya.Maine bina sach Jane tumhe hurt kiya. Mai na gusse mai kuch bhi kar jata hu par I promise you ab aisa nahi karunga kabi

Ri - I know aap kabhi kisi ko jankar hurt nahi karte.

Ar - tum mujhe sabse jyada samjhti ho riya .thanks .

Ri smile

Ar - to discuss kare.

They discuss case n reach party

At party ariya keeping eye on suspect n their starring session also on

In party someone spike riya's soft drink which arjun drink by mistake.

So riya inform sam about this n take arjun to home.here sam n Rajat take care of suspect.

Next day

Arjun wake up with heavy head.he get up. Anu come to his room running .she is crying. Arjun get scared seeing her crying

Ar - kya hua cutie tu ro kyu rahi hai

Anu - bhai wo riyu Di WO


Ar- kya hua riya ko anu wo thik hai.

Anu - wo apne room mai nahi hai or unka saman bhi

Arjun get shocked n tansed.n anu hug him crying.

TBC...

Precap - all in search of riya. Will they find her soon? Where is she? N why she left all ??

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Posted: 9 years ago
Hello guys

I know today's part is less ariya. But I promise you next will be full of ariya. N next will be the one for which we was waiting for.

Thanks to all for linking this story
I am very glad to get your response feedback . plz drop your suggestion also if any.


Thanks 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome part...
Woah... Arjun doing happy dance after talking to ayesha...
Someone spy Riya drink and Arjun have it...
Very good... Ab pta nai kya bola hai ki, Riya chali gyi...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Wow Aisha & Arjun bonding very well
Aisha help Arjun to get to know riya
Awe Arjun was happy know riya also love him
Everyone shocked to see Arjun behavior
Ariya moment was cute
Now what happened? Why riya left?
Hope they will find riya soon
Continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome updated
loved it
oh god riya kyun chali gayi
plz cont soon
thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
Oh no Riya where did she go????
Hope Arjun finds her soon
Riya teek tho hogi na...
Thanks for the pm di
Continue soon 😛
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Posted: 9 years ago
hawww...riya kyun chali gayi...kahan chli gayi...

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