#T2. ARIYA SS JANE ANJANE RISHTE part 54 on page 94 2/10 - Page 24

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Posted: 9 years ago

Originally posted by: arsh4heaven



m waiting eagerly didu
update na plzzz😳😳


Will update soon dear
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Posted: 9 years ago
Part 45




ra - aaj mai apni chutki ko khud apne haath se khilaunga.
He start feeding her with his hand she eat n her eyes filled with tears . he move his head in no n wipe her tears . she hug him n cry more in his arms he put his hand in her head n console her.
Ra - bas chutki bahut ro liya ab chup kar , mai hu humesha tere sath har dukh sukh mai takleef mai. Waqt ko piche to nhi kar sakta par wada karta hu humesha tere saath rahunga,
She mile n he again wipe her tears.
Ri - bhai
N she forward spoon n both take their lunch.
Ri - bhai aapko yad hai ma ka birthday hai kal( their orignal mother)

Ra- hmm mai har sal puja karwa kar gareebo ko daan deta hu, is bar hum dono chalenge
Ri - bhai maa kaisi thi
Raj - wo ek dum seedhi sadhi pyari n he tell him about their mother
Ri- maine to ma ko jana hi nahi sirf 2 sal ki to thi jab wo chali gayi.

Ra - hmm mai bhi to chota hi tha sirf 6-7 sal ka.

N they share about their mother
Ri - bahi hum bachpan mai humesha sath hote the na hume kisi ki jaruraat nahi padti thi. Aap mai or di hum teeno perfect for each other
Ra - hmm kitne pyare the wo din wo khelna sath rehnaa or duniya ki koi parwah nahi. Or tu tu to hume jabardasti barish ke pani mai nehlati thi qki tuhjhe bahut pasand thi. Apni fav dishes khilati thi hmm humesha apni bat manwana apni cute dimple smile ddikha kar huh
Ri - or aap humesha mere or di ki choti khich kar bhag jate the , hume darate the uska kya

Rajat smile naughtily n pull her hair n run
Raj - bilkul aise na
Ri - bhai ab aap gaye
N both run ri chase him, here arjun come to put tray n dish in kitchen n rajat come n hide behind arjun
Raj - arjun bacha
Ri - arjun aap bich mai se hat jaaiye aj mai inhe nahi chodne wali.
Ar - are par mai bich mai kaha hu ye mere piche chup gaya or tum aage khadi ho
He asked confused
Ri - jo bhi ho ap mera sath dena
Ra - nhi mera
Ri - mera
N both fight mera mera
Arjun shout
Ar - bas bahaut hua dono chup agar tum dono ki ladai se meri cutie or bacche uthe to tum dono ko mai nahi chodunga.

Both rijat make cute puppy face n arjun smrik inwordly
Ri - aap bhi na arju hum lad nahi rahe ye humara pyar hai bhai behen ka
Raj - or nahi to kya tu bhi na
Ri - ha dekhiye pehle bhai ne mere bal kiche or ab mai
Rajat kuch samjhe uske pehle ri uske hair pull kareke bhag jati hai.
Ra - chutki ki bacchi tu gayi ab
N he run after her till garden n chase her n tickle her she too tickle him n both laugh n laugh. Arjun watch both happily
Ri - wow bhai kitne dino bad maja aa gaya
Raj - haa yar chutki tere jane k bad maine itni masti kabhi nahi ki. Mai or roshni karte the par wo ,maja to tu apne sath le gayi. We both missed you so much.
Ri - kaisi kismat hai na bhai pehle aap or roshi di sath the or mai alag or ab di hume chod gayi or hum dono sath hai.
Ra - usne hume nahi choda riya wo humare sath he humesha yaha humare dil mai. Aarav ke rup mai.
Ri - hmm arav meri di ki akhiri nishani unka akhiri arman .
Both hug remembering roshni.after some talk they come to ri roon n clean it n he take veera to his room n arjun also take anu n make her sleep to her room
All sleep with smile on their lips.
At late night
Arjun is sleeping peacefully someone try to wake him up. He is in half sleep. Open his half eyes n look its riya

Arjun smile in sleep n mutter I love you..
Ri - arjun arjun uthiye mai riya hu di nahi ,uthiye
Ar - riya kya hua
Ri - wo aarav ko tez fever ahi
Ar - kya kaise he asked panicly
Ri - relex ,aaj usne bahut masti ki na isiliye its normal ab operation k bad hi sab theek hoga
Ar - ohh to use dr k pas le chale
Ri - hmm isiliye aapko uthaya hai
Ar - chalo
He take car key n volet n pick aarav n come to car n ri sit n take arav n he drive till hospital. Dr treat aarav n discharge him
Dr - har 1 hour mai ye tab deni hai bukhar utarne tak or pani ki patti bhi karte rehna
Ariya bring arav n take him to arjun room n give him tablets n pani ki patti.
Arv - paapu mummaa
Ariya - so jao arav hum dono yahi hai.
Arav talk for some time n sleep holding his parents hand. His fever gone n ariya don't know when sleep on bed n arav is between both like a perfect family.

Next morning
Anuraj wake up n think why ariya is not wakeup so they go to wakeup them n find in arjun room sleeping
Anu - shayd raat mai aarav ko fever hoga wo jab bhi jyada exertion bad jata hai wo bimar ho jaata hai.
Raj - anu humare chote se bacche ko kitni takleef hoti hogi na
Both get emotional
Anu - haa rajat par ab wo jaldi hi thik ho jayega
Ra - haa anu .
N both left room , don't want to disturb ariya sleep bocz their face is looking so much tired.

At 9:30
Arav wake up n ariya too, they find anuraj is ready to go to etf

Ra - arju chutki hum nikalte hai tum aaj off le lo.
Ri - nhi bhai mai ruk jati hu arjun aa jayenge
Ar - par riya
Ri- arjun ill handle or jarurat lagi to mai call kar dungi,
Anuraj left n after some time arjun also left

In etf
Arjun is very tansed n asking arav condition in every hour. He is perfectly fine till evening n now arjun n all relex.
Arjun call aisha to his cabin
Ai - sir
Ar - aisha aao baitho. Mujhe tumse kuch help chahiye
Ai - haa sir boliye
Ar - aisha aj tak tume mera bahut support kiya hai kya meri ek help karogi
Ai - sir plz no need of formalty , aap boliye
Ar - aisha actully I ilove riya n want to marry her
Aisha get shocked but happy n guesture him to continue
Ar- but as you know riya ki life simple nahi rahi usne bahut kuch khoya or miss kiya hai..uske bhi kai sapne honge jo har ladki ke hote hai. Mai wo pure karna chahta hu , kya tum meri help karogi.
Ai - ofcourse si I will help you
Ar- ok mujhe uski har pasand na pasand or icchao ki details chahiye , par ye bat humare bich hi rehni chahiye.maine uske bffs shree lisa or chotu ko isiliye nahi help ka pucha qki riya k aage unke pet mai kuch nahi pachega . n tum ye kam perfectly kar logi
Aisha smile n
Ai - I will sir
She left n arjun smile.
Ar - bas riya kuch waqt or fir mai or tum humesha sath honge
He smile n take a photo frame of riya in it. He kissed it n hug it n put it back in his drawer
At night trio come home n arav is fine n playing with veera n riya is doing her work . she serve all tea n coffee n kids milk.
All share happy n family time togather
Aisha call riya
Ri - hii aisha
Ai - hi riya ,arav kaisa hai ab
Ri - he is fine now
Ai - ohh great so ab tum meri help kar sakti ho
Ri - kaisi help
Ai - tum to janti ho meri shadi hai to kal office hour k bad kuch shopping ka socha hai kya tum mere sath chalogi. Actully sakshi abhi k sath kahi ja rahi hai or lisa k parents aye hai usse milne to tum or anu aa jaoge kya
Ri - actully any or bhai to kal outing par jaa rahe hai 2 din k liye ,humne hi force kiya unhe ek dusre k saath time hi nahi mila. But I will come surely
Ai - thanks ri , see you in office
Ri - ok bye.
(actully aisha know that anuraj is going on mini vacation but she don't want ri to know that
Tbc...


Edited by sur1911 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Imp note

Hello all

Actually its a request plz give me your feedback . plz tell me kahi story over stretched to nahi lag rahi hai na .I mean kahi aisa to nahi lag raha arjun love her or for bhi propose nahi kar raha .but mainesocha the ki as ri ne kafi suffer kiya hai to she need best n what she lost in her life.

So basically guys I want to know kya aap bhi wahi chahtehai Jo mai chahti hu .ya mujhe ye ss jaldidi close kar dena chahiye. Qki ab isme koi new twist nahi bacha hai agar nai aage continue karungi to it will be only ariya cute little romantic moments

Plz leave your feedback

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spatika thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update.
continue soon.
thanks for the PM..
balan04 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update di...
Hope Arjun confesses his love to Riya
continue soon
😊
Edited by balan04 - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb part...
Arjun want to propose Riya after fulfilling her wishlist that simply superb.
Cont.soon...
Thanks PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
Amazing update!!
Luvd it...
Continue as u r thinking di...
V r enjoying every part!!
Continue soon
Thnx for pm
chand91 thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
so cute prt
thnks 4 pm
ramshaasrar thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Story. Bilkul sahi track per chal rahi hai
Ab bas dekhna hai ke arjun ka confession
N plzzz jaldi jaldi ke chakker main bht point miss Ho hate gain
To aaram.se update Dena ok
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awsome update..
Love it..
Plz continue soon
Thanks 4 pm

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