T2 Ariya FF::Lazmi..part 45 on page 98 on 17/5 - Page 14

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Posted: 9 years ago

HELLO THERE.😊

FIRST OF ALL LET ME SAY THIS TO YOU THAT I LOVE YOUR WRITING, I JUST LOVE IT!!!
YOU KNOW FROM SO VERY LONG I WANTED TO TELL YOU THIS, BUT UNFORTUNATELY COULDN'T DO SO.
COMING TO THIS UPDATE LET ME SAY TAKE A BOW FROM MY SIDE FOR THIS.
WHAT I LIKED MOST IS DIALOGUES AND CHARACTERS INTERPRETATION AND INPUT IN THE STORY.
BOTH RIYA AND ARJUN WERE AT FAULT, THEY WERE HURT BECAUSE OF ASUMING THINGS AND NOT UNDERSTANDING OTHER PERSON. THEY WANTED EACH OTHERS HAPPINESS BUT IN THE END THEY LANDED UP IN HURTING EACH OTHER.
SAM I REALLY LIKED HIM, THE WAY IN THIS WHOLE STORY HAD PLAYED CUPID FOR ARIYA, HIS CONCERN FOR RIYA THINKING HER AS HIS SIS, SERIOUSLY YOU NAILED IN HIS PORTRAYAL.
EVEN CHOREE AND GIRLS ARE DAMN AMAZING, CARING FOR RIYA AND ARJUN, LOVING THEM UNCONDITIONALLY. CARING FOR EACH OTHER LIKE FAMILY.
FIANLLY THE MOMENT CAME. WHERE NOW ARJUN AND RIYA'S NEW JOURNEY OF PARENTHOOD WILL START.
VERY EAGRLY WAITING TO WITNESS THIS JOURNEY WITH YOUR WONDERFUL IMAGINATION.
STAY BLESSED
MUKTA😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
nice update
continue soon
thanks for PM
manasvi.. thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
Its really nice update
First of all I wanna say that you n your this story always tounge tight me.
About this part. Its awesome as always
Its very painful update.
Poor riya how she feel when she come to know that he is just doing duty not love her
N arjun is realising his mistake but not taking any steps
Love samaksi they are so sweet
But plz ariya ko alag mat karna .
Plz update soon.
Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awwwsssmmm Update
Loved It
Continue Soon
angelshah thumbnail
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update
both mu each other
Riya is pregnant
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
OMG !!!! Riya is pregnant ...
Wow !!!! Mind Blowing ...
Super - Duper Amazing ...
Awesome Update ...
Loved it...
Continue Soon...
Thanks for the PM... 😳
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Posted: 9 years ago
Fabulous update..
Feel bad for riya..
Arjun acts so rude to her..
Hope Arjun realize his feelings before it's too late..
Thanks for the pm..
Continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Teaser 1 for part 29:-

Arjun(worrily):-doctor..Riya thik he na..??

Doctor:-Riya is now out of danger..par..

Arjun:-par..?

Doctor:-I m sorry Mr.rawte..baby ko ham nahi bacha paye.. Riya ka miscarriage ho gaya..

Arjun n all others get shocked..n sad..

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Posted: 9 years ago
now I really want the full update..
plsss update soon...
eagerly waiting
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Loved it
Cont soon
Thanx for pm

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