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Posted: 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
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:. Part 1 .:


Rawtes visited Malhotras the next day along with Raghuvinder Kapoor who was a very old friend of Arnav and he was one who knew about Riya's family and when he thought of her getting married to Arnav's family...he was relieved somehow now she can lead a better life out of this mess...he never liked the malhotras except he had good acquaintance with Riya's parents before they died..

Riyaa was asked to get ready in a saree and greet them.

Raghu-ji Namaste ravi ji'maaf kijega aise achanak se aney ka plan ban gaya

Dadi-arey bhai ismein maafi ki kya baat hai aise shubh kaam ke liye kisi muhrat ki thori zaroorat hoti hai'
Ji Namaste main ravi ki maa hun aur yeh meri bahu Nina..Riya meri eklauti poti hai...

raghu-namaste maaji..yeh Arnav Surkyakant Rawte hai maine shayad bataya tha Ravi Ji ko inke baare mein...

Ravi-jeee inko kaun nahi janta'.balke inke saamne humari kya haesiyat,'

Arnav-arey aap sharminda mat kijiya humein'balke jinke paas betiyaan hoti hai woh to sabse zyada dhanwaan hote hai..main bhi is baat ko mantahun..dekhiye na humari bhi ek hee beti hai..ab bahu ajayegi ghar mein to dusri beti ki kami bhi puri ho jayegi... kyun Naina...

Nainaa-jiii'..

karnav-aa yeh meri patni hai Naina.aur yeh humare suputra Arjun beta paer chuo inke...bas kuch din pehle lauta hai MBA karkey...ab agey jaakey isiko sambhalna hai mera kaam...

Arjun touched dadi,ravi and Nina's feet and they liked him very much

Dadi-bhaii dil khush ho gaya arnav ji'apke bete ke ache sanskaar dekhke'warna aajkal ke bachchen...waise bitiya ko bhi le ati...mil lete hum..

naina-ji bilkul'hum bhi yehi soch rahe thay lekin woh kya hai na...shaadi ho chuki hai uski to humare damaad ka business wahi delhi mein settle hai aur yahan ana matlabh...bas shaadi pakki hui to ajayenge..

Arjun was getting a bit bored in this usual talks'Ravi noticed this and asked Nina to bring Riya.

He almost stopped breathing after seeing the beautiful sight in front of him.
She was standing there with eyes lowered in a pink saree looking cute and beautiful at the same time'it was evident from her face that she was hell nervous and he could figure it out.

She was feeling very nervous and scared..what if they dislike her'she had to listen to dadi and their taunts then..but what if they choose her for their son'how can she get married then..she wants to study further'become a doctor'will her husband allow her to do that'in fact is he even aware that he is getting married to a 19 yr old girl?goddd she didn't evn sw him for once'

Dadi-yeh hai humari beti Riya...bete paer chuon sabke'

arnav-arey bas bas'humare yahan betiyaan paer nahi chooti'god bless you

naina-bohot sundar hai'.yahan ao humare paas baetho'

She was now sitting middle of arnav and Naina and could feel someone's continuous gaze on her...her eyes were glued to the floor and for few seconds she mustered courage to lift them up and what she saw...he was there sitting...staring at her...that smile on his face...more like goofing...he was goodlooking...the black blazer along with black tshirt and jeans was making him look dashing...even had a well toned physique..oh why was she even thinkng all this?

arnav-hmm to riya bete aap kya par rahi ho'.

riya-ji who main'.mainn medical mein hun

naina-bhai wah..yeh to bohot acha profession choose kiya hai apne..doctor banna hai...

arnav-hmm that's really good.to doctor banna chahti hai aap'

Just then Riya lookd at Dadi,Ravi and Nina'

Dadi-arey ab kya bataye jabse mere bte ki maut hui hai'tabse leke aaj tak ise kisi bhi chees ki kami nahi hone diii Ravi aur Nina ne'..chahe who uski parayi hi kyun na ho'.ab to bas yehi chahte hai ke ache se iska sansaar bas jaye phr chaen se yeh saansen ruk sakengi

Before arnav or naina could inquire abt her studies anymore they distracted them and asked they liked riyaa or not
Later everything got fixed and all were very happy'except two people..arjun and riya..

Riya was already in tears thinking her life will be destroyed now'marrying an unknown person at this age

On the other hand arjun was not happy'he wanted to meet her..talk with her..ask her what she likes or not but when asked Arnav told them that they follow old customs so wont allow to let him talk to the girl before anything gets fixed'

Still there was something in that girl which made him say yes to this alliance in one meeting only

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Aisha-I cannot believe it momm aaploug next week shaadi karwa rahe ho bhai ki and why this hurry..i mean koi bhaaga thori ja raha hai


Naina-aisha...thora to bharosa rakho na apni mom pe..tumhare bhai ki shaadi hai..itna zyada mat soho aur enjoy karo...tumhare papa aur maine sab pata kar liya hai...barey ache hai loug aur Riya...bohot zyada pyari...

Aisha was still not satisfied'she felt something was fishy'.

Naina was working in kitchen'.

Aisah-mom are u sure ke aap ne aur dad ne ladki waalon ke bare mein ache tarah se pata kiya hai'I mean they are well off na'

Naina-haan'aisa kyun pooch rahi ho beta'.

Aisha-look mom I don't know but I had this feeling'.abhi itne kam waqt mein shaadi'na hum unlogon ko ache se jaante hai aur na who humein'strange thing is that ke koi apni beti kisiko is tarah se itni jaldbazi mein kyun dega'hardly ek ya do baar miley ho aap loug unse..isi mein shaadi ka decision..mom I don't think so ke itni jaldi yeh sab hona chahiye'

naina-aisha.. tum na bilkul apne papa pe gayi ho'.baap re baap itni shakki..beta main aur tumhare dad hai na aur sach kahun to humein kuch kehne ki zaroorat hi nahi pari'ladki to itni pyari hai ke dekhte hee jee bhar gaya..phir tumhare Kapoor uncle hai na...unkey pehchan wale hai..saalon se jante hai woh uneh...ab aur kya pata karna...

aisha-aur bhai? usey ladki pasand hai'.woh to mila bhi nahi ussey'

naina-arjun..arey uske liye hee to itna sab hai'.pata hai uska bas chalta to wahiin pe shaadi kar leta ussey'beta main samajhti hu ke tum behen ho uski fikr hoti hai per trust me larki bohot hee achi hai..seedhi saadhi'aur humare arjun ko pasand hai aur kya chahiye humein..hmmm

Aisha-yeah ok agr kisiko koi prob nahi hai then I think its alright..well kya naam batay aapne larki ka..

naina-Riya


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Ahh kisine sahi kaha hai ke shaadi se pehle aur shaadi ke baad rishtey aur unke mayine badal hi jaate hai..uske saamne dosti kya chees hai..

Sameer singh rathod..aisha's husband as well as very good friend of Arjun...he was someone with whom arjun shares everything...lives in delhi businessman...

Arjun-abey yaar itna kyun bhao kha raha hai..ab yeh meri galti hai kya ke tere paas mere sagai pe bhi aney ka waqt nahi hai..aaj a raha hai tu shaadi pe..

arey to aur kya karta back to back meetings lined up thi meri..phir yeh naya project...can you even imagine..upar se itni jaldi shaadi..sach sach bata arrange marriage hi to hai na ya phir koi chakkar..

Aisha-Sameer..kya kar rahe ho aap yahan pe..you know apko tayiyaar bhi hona hai thori der mein barat nikalne wali hai..aur bhai..hey bhagwaaann shaadi tumhari hai if you remember then why are you sitting like this..

Rathod-aisha yaar comeon thori der baat karne do na baraat ko nikalne mein 2 ghante baaki hai tum to ab se hyper hone lagi chill..itne din baad mil raha hu dost come saaley se..itna to banta hai...

Aisha-but mumma..

Arjun-aaa aisha tu ja main tayiyar ho jaunga aur Rathod bhi ok..dont worry yaar its my wedding and I want my sis to be in a relaxing mood samjho na..

Aisha-I still cannot believe finally mere bhai ki shaadi ho rahi hai..

It was an emotional moment for both of them

rathod-a ahem ahem...agar aap dono ka bhai behen bhara pyaar khatam hua to aisha ji aap tayiyar hone ka kasht karengi kyun apko kam se kam 2 ghante to lagenge heee..

Aisha-how mean aghh..ok then main chalti hun and be on time guyz..

Arjun was looking no less than a Prince in a white sherwani with golden borders on it.Sameer was also ready now and it was turn to give his friend come brother-in-law some advice.

While fixing up his sehra

so..kaisa lag raha hai Rawte saab shaadi karne ja rahe hai

Arjun-don't know yaar'like main mom dad aisha sabke liye bohot khush hun but andar se ek ajeeb sa dar lag raha hai'cause I got to know something today itself'aur aise end pe jaake main manaa bhi nahi kar sakta'

rathod-arey aisa kya pata chal gaya tujhe

Arjunn-wohh..riya...mujhe aaj hi pata chala hai yaar ke she is just 19..can you believe it

Atul-kyaa..pagal hai kya tu.. tu khud gaya tha usey dekhne mom aur dad ke saath'to phir ab kaise pata chala yeh...

Arjun-I don't know main to bas usey hee dekh raha tha aur kisi aur chees pe dhyan hi nahi diya'but now Iam guilty yaar..Ihope main thik kar raha hu..

rathod-lekin mom dad ko bhi to yeh pata hoga na phir unohne aisa kyun kiya

Arjun-unka kehna hai ke Riya ke family ko koi problem nahi hai aur unke wahan aise age mein heee shaadi and all but unko chor..what will she think of me a jerk'I mean how can I do this yaar'

rathod-aisha ko pata hai yeh

Arjun-haan and she tried to butt in..phir as usual mom dad se jhagra ho gaya'

rathod-khaer jo hona tha who ho chuka hai..ab kuch nahi kar sakte..aur tu pareshaan mat ho yaar mujhe lagta hai ke humein positive sochna chahiye..dekh agar tujhe pata hota to tu iss shaadi se mana karta right?

Arjun-haan

rathod-lekin usey bhi to pata hoga na ke tu 25 saal ka hai 6 saal ka difference to phir usne haan kyun kaha shayad usey bhi koi problem nahi hai na isliye'

Arjun-haan lekin are u sure aisa hi kuch hua hoga

rathod-arey to phir who shaadi karti hee kyun..usne tujhe dekha bhi na?

Arjun-haaan..

rathod-then to no fikr mere dost ab bas sehra bandh ke chal aur mandap pe baith ja..phir to agey ki bhi sochni hai(he winked at him)...

On the other side here Riya was getting ready with non stop tears on her eyes.Its said that girls always have this different glow on their face during marriage but she was sitting like a dead body where no feelings existed.

Naina-Rii tu bohot khoobsoorat lag rahi hai..kahin meri nazar na lag jaye...sach mein sochte hee ajeeb lag raha hai ke aaj meri best friend mujhe hamesha ke liye chorke chali jayegi,I will miss you yaar..

Not able to control her tears anymore she hugged her tightly

Lizaa..plzzz main yeh shaadi nahi karna chahti..mujhe bachaa loo pata nahi who loug kaise honge aur wohhh arjun rawte..kitna baraa hai mujhse umr mein..main kaise adjust karungi..

Liza was helpless at the moment.She couldn't do anything for her bestie.

Liza-Rii chupp..dekh meri taraf aaj ke din rote nahi make up kharap ho jayega..

Ri-tujhe make up ki pari hai yahan meri zindagi tabah hone ja rahi hai..

Li-kisne kahaa..dekh hum sikke ka ek pehlu dekh rahe hai doosra nahi..

Ri-kya matlab

Li-matlab yeh ke tu soch na ek taraf se acha hai ke tujhe is narak se chutkara mil raha hai aur tu Rawtes ke saath ja rahi hai

Ri- yeh tu kya

Li-Rii mujhe mom dad ne bataya hai ke who loug bohot achey hai..at least apne beti ko aise treat nahi karte,in fact unki beti to kya naam haan Aisha..MBA kiya hua hai usne.. ..soch jo loug itne uchey khayalaat rakhte hai they can never mistreat you,aur rahi baat Arjun rawte ki to woh to kuch dinon pehle hee wapas lauta hai isliye uska utna nahi pata..bas tujhe ek hee kaam karna hoga ussey dur reh..aur agar chooney woone ki koshish karey na to use karate..

Ri-Lizaa..yahan meri halat kharab ho rahi hai aur tu..

Li-Riyuu ab yeh waqt ansoon bahaane ka nahi hai..tujhe haqeeqat ko apna na hoga aur uska saamna bhi karna hoga samjhi...be strong aur main to hamesha tere saathhun..kabhi bhi meri yaad ayi ya zaroorat pari to just make a call iam there theek hai..

The baraat was there and all were super excited after all they were Rawtes they had their own charms.

Li-dekhe to tera dulha lag kaisa raha hai

She was fixing her chunari and feeling damn nervous.

Li-hmm manna parega he is hot and handsome too'white colour ki sherwani pehni hai'

Ri-tu..tu mujhe kyun bataa rahi hai yeh sab iam not interested..

Li-ohoo itna gussa..tera pati to gaya

Nina comes there as usual getting angry

Ni-arey bas baatein hi karte rahoge chalo baraat a chuki hai muhrat nikla ja rahah ai ise neeche le ao'ahh akhirkaar aaj yeh bala talegi humari upar se.

Riya felt hurt hearing these words coming from her family members at least on that day when she will be leaving them forever.

Arjun and his family and friends were welcomed grandly as daadi wanted to show off in front of them that Riya is the apple of their eyes and she gets pampered by her family aloot.Aisha felt a bit weird at times specially by Nina chachis's behaviuor but later she thinks it would be better not to spoil her brother's important day.

Arjun was greeting the guests and a bit irritated also seeing the longgg list

aisha-bhai lagta hai aap to abhi se bechain ho rahe hai bhabhi se milne ke liye..abhi to kitna waqt baaki hai..

rathod-sach baat bataun tumhare bhai ka bas chale na to abhi shaadi kar le aur uski biwi ko leke yahan se uran chu ho jaye

naina-bas bas..ab aur koi nahi chirayega mere bete ko

Just then all eyes were stuck at one place only from where an angel from heaven was making her way towards them.He was finding it difficult to breath seeing such a beauty,whose going to be his soon within few minutes.With that a blush made its way to his cheeks.

rathod-ahem rawte.. I know it's a bit impossible but thora control kar le..who kya hai na sabko dikh raha hai..

Sameer's words distracted him and he was embarrassed.

rathod-waise sach kahoon... she is beautiful..



She was sitting beside him in the mandap in a red lehenga which has golden work on it and it seems that the jewelries were taking a toll on her.Their weight was more than her he guessed.Poor soul had to bear soo much.She would have looked good without these ornaments also.

naina-arjun 'beta dhyaan do'

Aisha tied their knot and they were taking pheres now when suddenly he felt something wrong.She was damn scared and her body was a bit shivering also maybe due to nervousness as many people were having their eyes on them.On their 5th phera he got it and finally caught her hands with his and then proceeded.All were touched with this sight specially Naina and arnav whereas Nina and Ravi were happy coz of some other reason only.They will be getting rid of Riya soon.Other person witnessing this was Raghu..he was genuinely happy for riya..

Done with the pheras they were asked to do last two rasms.He was given sindoor and when he filled her parted hair with red he got to see the most amazing sight ever.She has her eyes closed and in that process some sindoor fell on her nosetip.

Some ladies were saying

Arey bhai waah yeh to bara acha shagun hota hai 'iska matlab patni ko apne pati se bohot pyaar milne wala hai'

He was more happy than anything and why not he was all determined to make that thought come true.Finally he tied the mangalsutra around her neck and she was his only Mrs riya arjun rawte..

They took everyones blessings and all blessed the married couple a happy married life and bright future.

It was bidaai time and none of the members from her family were that much affected by her departure.In fact they were happy they got rid of this burden so soon.Just in order to pretend in front of others Dadi and Nina shedded a few tears and bid the daughter of their house farewell.

Riya took dadi's blessings and cried hugging her

Dadi-sunn ab yaad rakhna wahii tera ghar hai hum to paraye hai tere liye 'kisiko shikaayat ka mauk anahi dena samjhii' aur apne pati ki har baat manna,saas sasur ki seva karna..

Arjun was finding it a bit weird.Here their daughter was leaving the house and they were busy giving her instruction rather than consoling her.

Liza came and hugged her best friend.

Li-apna khayal rakhna and mujhe call karte rehna

Riya was literally sobbing hard when arjun came forward.

Li-who kya hai na waise to bohot intelligent hai bas choti choti baton pe ghabraa jati hai..bohot bholi hai meri dost

Arjun-don't worry I will take good care of your friend..

For the last time she had a look at her own house which reminded her of her parents and finally got in the car with her husband heading for her new home.


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There was pindrop silence in the car as Riya was still crying hard and arjun was feeling helpless and thinking of ways how to calm her down.Thank god Sameer was there at least he can help him in calming her a bit.
He nudged him through his eyes to riya and what to do..

aa waise arjun pata hai mujhe to yehii lag raha hai ke teri kismet to gayii

Arjun-aa kyunn

rathod-arey aur kya aisi rotlu biwi mili hai tujhe agar abhi aisa haal hai to agey jaake kya hoga..tera ghar Rawte mansion nahi daily soap ka set ban jayega..

Sameer's words made her smile a bit and she had this feeling

riya-chalo koi to hai is ghar mein jo ache hain..

It was taking them a lot of time to reach home and arjun was feeling restless..Sameer more like dozed of due to tiredness..

He opened few buttons of his sherwani and thought to rest a bit when glanced at his newly wedded wife.His eyes were not even moving an inch from her face.Those eyes,lips,cheeks and mann'.why was shee sooo breathtaking'.
He did not noticed when his hands made their way to hers and within no time he was holding them tightly

She came back to reality when the car came to a halt and saw sameer was not there.Seems that they reached home..Aisha along with some other girls was coming there to take them out of the car when she noticed a strong grip on her palms.Yes he was holding her but why

aisha-itni der lagaa di tumlogone chalee'.

chaliye bhabhi'

He left her hands giving a last look of naughtiness which made her more tensed.

All the rasms were done beautifully and her fears were coming true with each passing moment.She was now sitting in her new room which was decorated with a romantic atmosphere in it as it was her suhaagraat after all.Her hands were wet due to nervousness and she pulled her dupatta down covering her whole face.

She closed her eyes and just prayed for one thing only

Bhagwaanji plzz mujhe bachaa lena'mujhe..mujhee bohot dar lag raha hai'

She heard the click of the door'

His wait was finally over and he can see his bride now...but to his bad luck Sameer,aisha and some of her cousins were all lined up near the door..

Arjun-ab kya hai yaar don't tell me aur koi rasm baaki hai..

One of her cousin-kyun apko bohot jaldi haii'.

After lot of teasing and leg pulling he finally entered his room after paying 50 000 in cash..

He entered the room and locked it..

Armaan-goshh kya zamana hai apni hee behnon ne loot liya
Yeh itni garmi kyun lag rahi hai..AC on nahi hai kya

He switched on the air conditioner and moved to his bed.

It was first time he was like this in such a situation with a girl..he never got this much close to a girl as he wanted to give all his love to his wife only..

He shifted closer to her and felt she was shivering..

He got hold of her hands and tried to stop her from shivering and when she did not stopped he took her both hands in his and kissed them lightly..

His eyes were closed and for the first time in life he was feeling completed'
Same goes for her too but the moment reality struck her she came out of her trance..

On that process the dupatta feel from her head'.

Arjun-aa who main'

He knew show she must be feeling as these things must be new for her considering her age and he does not want to force her in anything.Right now making her feel comfortable was the most important thing.

He was still holding her hands...
There were slight tears in her eyes now she slowly said

don't touch me plz don't do anything with me plzzz

He was not getting it ..what was wrong with her

Arjun-m main

riya-plzz aap mere paas mat ao..main janti hun ke aap kya karna chahte ho lekin main who sab nahi karna chahti dur rahiye mujhse plzz..i beg you..

Arjun was shocked and more than that guilty for not being able to understand what he actually did.he was trying to make her comfortable and here she was behaving in such a manner as if he was forcing himself on her.
He tried to come closer to her

Arjun-dekho tum..

ri-plzzz paas mat ayiye mere..

She got up from the bed and was about to open the door when he stopped her.

He pulled her with such a force that she landed on her chest and both of them fell on the bed.

He was getting glost in her angelic eyes and she was trying to free herself.

riya-choro choriye mujhee...

She was hitting on his broad chest with her tiny palms

Finally he could not hold it any longer.He caught her hands

Arjun-stop it..enough is enough'pagal ho gayi ho kya'kya sochenge sab loug..kyun shor macha rahi ho aise maine to tumhe haat bhi nahi lagaya'why the hell are you creating a scene

riya-mujhe pata hai tum kya karne wale ho'lekin mujhe yeh sab nahi karna jaane do mujhe..main..main apkw saath yahan nahi rahungi leave me..

Arjun-whatt..pagal ho gayi ho kya kya kiya maine aur nahi rehna hai matlab shaadi hui hai humari and you dekho I can understand tum apne gharwalon ko miss kar rahi ho but don't worry kal hum challenge unse milne'jahan tak in sab cheeson ki baat hai to be calm'main tumhare saath aisa kuch nahi karunga at least not against your wishes'

She stared at him for a while and his words somehow convinced her but when she saw him trying to open the buttons of his sherwani she again started her banter'

riya-nahii'mujhe kuch nahi sunnaa..mujhe is kamre se bahar jaana hai tum jhoot bol rahe ho..main yahan nahi reh sakti'

This is it..there is a limit for everything'why the hell was she behaving like that'

Arjun-enoughh'just stop it now'tum itni bhi bachchi nahi ho ke kuch samajh mein nahi ata'maine kaha na I wont touch you that's it'aur agar mere saath nahi rehna hai to phir tumne yeh shaadi ki heee kyun'.

riya-main nahi maanti kisi shaadi ko..mujhe ghar jana hai wapas'

He was losing his temper now..after getting married to him in front of hundreds of people she is saying all this now..He tried to calm down a bit

Arjun-dekho riya..I don't know tumhe kya hua hai lekin tell me something kya tum is baat se pareshaan ho ke tumhari shaadi itni jaldbaazi mein hui I mean we didn't get time to know eachother is baat se naraz ho?

Ri-mujhe kisi ko nahi jaanna hai..mujhe nahi karni thi koi shaadi waadi...plzzz mujhe ghar jaana hai..

Arjun-agar tumhe yeh sab karna hi nahi tha then why the hell did you say yes for this marriage dammit 'why did you do this'

riya-kyunke mere gharwale chahte they ke meri shaadi ho jaye'.I was a burden on them from which they wanted to get rid of as soon as possible'

Her words made him lose all his senses.He was not able to get what just happened with him.Here he was so happy with the fact he got married to the one whom he loved and was expecting the same from her but why all this?He not only destroyed his own life but hers also'

The continuous knocks on the door made them come out of their trance

Arjun what happened open the door 'arjunn'.

Damn..it was his family on the door..
What will he do now...?


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Soo happy with the response thankyou guyz😳here is part 1 I hope I live upto your expectations and keep showering love with your comments :) coz they encourage me to update fast😉
-Laddoo

Ps-will send pms later..have exams so hope u can understand :)
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Posted: 9 years ago
#23
Hell I just hate riya's families to the core
Arjun was so lost in in riya when he saw her
They even fix ariya marriage so soon
Arjun parents like riya a lot
Oh on their wedding day Arjun got to know riya's age but he couldn't back out
Finally ariya got married
Uff what's wrong with riya she know her so called families doesn't love her
Still leaving the house she hugged them & cry
Arjun & Aisha felt wired but didn't say anything
Oh god now riya over reacting
Even when Arjun said he won't touch her still didn't believe him
I mean riya can probably explains everything & they can fix it
Now making issue isn't good
I mean when riya should stand for herself she didn't do that
Now what Arjun & his families will do?
Continue plz
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Posted: 9 years ago
#24
Loved it. But if Riya is so unwanted by her family, why does she want to go back? She can talk to Arjun especially when he is saying that he will not force her for anything. Please continue soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
#25
Wow nice part
Do continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#26
Amazing
Hate the family who thinks girls are burden

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Posted: 9 years ago
#27
wow really nice story
amazing
feeling bad 4 RIYA
but ARJUN is a nice guy
hope evrything wiil be fine
eagerly waiting 4 next part
plz update soon

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Part 1

Awsome..
Ariya get married..
Arjun is already fallen for Riya..
But Riya is not ready to accept the marriage..
Ab kya hoga..?Arjun ye sab apni family ko batayega..ya fir unse chupayega..?

Plz continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#29
It was an outstanding one
Loved each nd every bit of it
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Posted: 9 years ago
#30
Awesome update.. Cont soon.. Aur mujhe pm jarur dena plz..

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