Ariya SS - HUME AANA PADEGA DUNIYA MAI DOBARA part 13 on pg 27 14/12 - Page 12

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Posted: 8 years ago

Originally posted by: dmegha

Update please out at least two me if you are going to continue this or not.


actually problem was that i was getting impression that less people were liking it, so i lost my interest in this story but now if some people want to read it I'll surely update


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Posted: 8 years ago

will update soon
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Originally posted by: madmadona

Wow awesome

Update soon plz


thanks dear
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I am absolutely in love with the idea of this story❤️
Love vs destiny
The fight between whom you want and what destiny has in store for you. Absolutely brilliant.
Please continue this story😳
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Posted: 8 years ago
part 12

one month passed

now arjun visit tanu hospital in 2- 3 days.
tanun sakshi are friends, now sakshi become friend of arjun too. chini is much better now. riya try many way to meet shiny but she didn't succeeded yet. ariya didnt meet from one month.

its morning time

arjun is getting ready for his college .he wear blue denim n brown t shirt

his phone ring

ar - hello mera chini baccha good morning

ch - good morning bhaiya, how are you. are you coming to meet me today.

ar - are wahh chini English . aap to badi acchi English bolne lagi

ch - sab meri riyu di ka kamal hai . apko pata hai is bar exam mai maine top kiya hai,sirf ek month ki studies mai

ar - are wah beta . fir to aapko gift milna chahiye

ch - sacchi , par meri riyu di k liye bhi lana ,unhe na chocolates pasand hai .

ar - mai bas tumhare liye launga

ch - agar aap meri riyu di k liye nahi laye to maibhi nahi kahungi

ar - ok baba.

he cut call.

ar - ek mahina ho gaya us jungli billi se mile par uska nam picha nahi chodta. or wo nikli bhi kaun simmi ki punjab mail riya. har taraf bas riya riya

tanu - accha uska nam tera picha nahi chodta ya tu uska picha nahi chodta.tu sach bata na ajju tu jalta hai na usse tabhi ek month pehle tune usse jhagda kiya tha.

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one month before

its monthly trip of all bro-sis

actully in a month , all bro-sis spend a eve togather n enjoy alot.but today simmi bring riya with her

arjun look at her shout

ar - jungli billi ,tum yaha kya kar rahi ho.

ri - sirfire chuhe tum.ohhh no not again.

all look at both. simmi ,nihal n tanu with shock n lavanya with question eyes.

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simmi - bhai aap sirfire chuhe ho.

ta- wow so tum jungli billi ho.

ariya glare each other

ar - sim ye yaha kya kar rahi hai

si - bhai ye meri doll hai riya .

ar - ohh tumhari dost , par tum bhul rahi ho ye humari bhai behan ki personal meet hai koi bahar wala isme involve nahi hota,

sim - bhai plz aaj riya k hostel mai pest control hai. or iski room mates bhi nahi hai to mom ne kaha ki mai ise bhi le jaun.

ar - par

sim - ok bhai hum humesha ki tarah voting karte hai. mera vote - doll yahi rahegi

ar - or mera ye yaha nahi rahegi

ni - wow ri hum masti karenge mera vota yes

lav - mera bhi yes

sim - waise hum jeet gaye hai pr fir bhi tanu bhai aap bataiye

ta - mujhe koi problem nahi.

sim - ye ye hum 4-1 se jeet gaye.

she hug riya n arjun glare them,he is feeling jealous that his loving bro-sis taking miss jungli billi side.

after some time

all are enjoying , riya gelled with them very well . but arjun is not liking it. he make a plan to teach her a lesson .

he bring juice for all .its strawberry shake. he mix chilly powder in riya glass .

ar - ye sabke liye strawberry shake.

n he carefully give all.

all drink only ariya left .bcoz she go to washroom n arjun setting music system,

riya drink her n arjun get shocked .

lav - ajju tu pi q nahi raha ,ye garm ho jayega

arj mv ye aajkal ki mirchiya fiki ho gayi hai ya ,ye jungli billi is mirchi se bhi teekhi hai ki ise mirchi nahi lagi.

he start drinking while thinking n he shout

ar - ahh mirchi ,,koi pani.

ri laugh n give him bottle n tears are flowing from his eyes.

tan - ajju kya hua

simmi - bhai

nih - isme mirchi kaha se ayi ye to aap hi laye the

ri - actully ye mere liye tha.par kehte hai na ki dusro k liye gaddha khodne wala khud usme gir jata hai.

lav - ajju .

ar - par mujhe acche se pata tha tumne wahi glass piya

ri - ha .glass wahi tha par drink exchange ho gaye. actually jab mai washroom ja rahi thi tab isne meri drink mai chilly powder add kiya n jab ye baki glass lene gaya tab manine glass ki drink exchange kar di . its jaise ko taisa .

she giggle n he glare her. while all laugh at him.

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tanu laugh while remembering that incident n arjun glare him,

tan - dekh galti teri thi . ri ne bas tujhe ans dia . or tu usse uske bad mila nahi par roz yad karta hai.

ar - yad nahi karta mai use , wo hi har bat mai chali aati hai. jaise

ta - jaise usse tera koi connection ho.

ar - nahi usse mera koi connection nahi. na kabhi tha na hoga.

ta - dekhte hai ,khai chal hum late ho rahe hai.


ar - hmm. chal.


both leave

scene shift


riyakshi hostel

ri is getting ready for her college . adi also.

sak - riya adi chalo jaldi se milk finish karo

ridi make cute face

sak - ye cute face mujh par asar nahi karne wale jaldi milk piyo.

adi - di hum bacche nahi hai.

sak - milk sirf baccho k liye nahi hota balki energy k liye bhi hota hai.

ri - par di

sak - pr war kuch nahi, ye lo

n she make her drink by her end.

ri - hww di pura pila diya. aap na mom ki tarah ho

sak - ha to badi behan hu tumhari .

she put hand on her cheek.riya smile at her,

ri - pata hai di mai humesha ek badi di chahti thi . or mujhe wo aapme mil gayi.

sk - or mujhe do jiddhi bacche mile hai.

ridi pout

ridi - di

scene shift

riya college

riya n adi enter , simmi n nihal is waiting for them.all greet each other.

after some time

ri - chalo guys mai chalti hu mujhe aaj chini se milne jana hai. aaj uske new treatment k test k result ane wale hai.

she left

sim - are bhai bhi waha jane wale hai.

(now all know abt chini bcoz of ariya fight one month ago)

nik - fir to aaj bhi koi na koi hungama jarur hoga.

adi - ofcourse jab do grah takrate hai dhamaka to hota hi hai.

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hospital

riya go to chini ward

ri - hii chinu

ch - hello meri riyu di.

ri - so anna reports kab aa rahe hai

anna - bas arjun beta jaldi le kar aate hi honge.

ri - wo yaha hai.

she make face n abt to go.but chini hold her hand, she sigh n sit beside her

arjun enter happily

ar -anna report positive hai. chini ka operation ho sakta hai or 2 hafte mai ye chalne lagegi.

all become happy. he hug anna then chini , riya hug chini her mother n both ariya hug each other in excitement . n then realize what they do.

ri - wo mai

ar -haa mai bhi.

chi - bhaiya didi mai daud skungi.

ri - haa meri shakkar ki khan tum daud bhi skogi.

ch - thanku arjun bhaiya.

anna - haa beta aapki wajah se.meri chini ab chal sakegi

ch - baba daud bhi sakungi

ar - haa biklul.

ch - mera gift.

arj give her doll.she still look at him n he sigh n give her another parcel.

ch - mai nahi aap .

ar - nahi tum hi de do

ch - nahi aap

ar - ye lo

he arrogantly pass parcel to her

ri - mujhe nahi chahiye

ar - chini ki taraf se hai.

ch - nahi arjun bhaiya laye hai. par apko lena padega meri riyu di.

ri - thik hai.

she take it .

ri -par mai kuch adhura nahi chodti she open her purse n take out a beautiful keychain n give him,

ar - mujhe nahi chahiye

ch - arjun bhaiya.

he take it.

ar - tumhe kaise pata meri key ring kho gayi thi or maine nahi li ab tak.

ri -mujhe kaise pata hoga. ye mujhe pasand ayi thi to maine li thi. par abhi bas yhi thi dene k liye.

he nod n take it.

both come out after sometime.

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his phone ring

sim - bhai doll apke sath hai na.

ar - tumhe kaise pata

sim -pata hai bas. use ghar le aana. aaj mom dad, chahu - aunty , mamu kahi gaye hai .do din k liye

ar - abhi, wo to har 6 mon mai jate hai abhi 10 din baki hai.

sim - pata nahi. apko phone lagaya tha but wo busy tha. khair humne party rakhi hai sabne rat mai to aap doll ko le ana.

ar - uski kya jarurat hii

sim -tanu bhai ki dost , nihal bhai ki dost aa rahi hai. to doll q nahi. aap le kar aaiye use.

ar - ok

he cut call

ar - simmi ne bulaya hai tumhe.

ri -thik hai tum jao mai aa jaungi,

ar - bano mat mujhe tumhe le jane ka koi shauk nahi hai. par agar nahi le gaya to sab mujhe hi blame karenge to chup chap bike par baitho.

ri - ok

he sit on bike.n she also,

some min later

ri - dekh kar chalao ,chance mat maro

ar - very funny , chance.wo bhi tum par chup chap baithi rahi. gaddha tha to jhatka lag gaya.

both reach his home

sim come n hug her

sim - doll chal jaldi hum khub masti karenge aaj party mai.

ri - party ?

sim - haa . isiliye to tujhe bulaya hai

ri - kya par isne mujhe nahi bataya .mai dress bhi nahi layi.

ar - tumhara naukar nahi hu mai. or waise bhi kuch bhi pehan lo jungli billi hi lagogi.

ri - tum jyada hoshiyar mat bano mr sirfire chuhe, i know tumne ye jankar kiya hai,

ar - whatever

n he leave

sim - koi bat nahi sham mai adi aa rahi hai ,usse mangwa lena, chal abhi hume khub preparation karni .

ri - ok 'chal.

at heaven

niyati - dekha ek dusre ko do minute bardash nahi kar sakte or tum kehti ho ki ye kismat badlenge.

pri - kuch prem kahaniya shuru ladai se hoti hai par khatam pyar par hoti hai. unka dimag unke dil par havi hai par kab tak kabhi to ek dusre ko pehchaenge. kabhi to wo ek duse ki dil ki dhadkan ko mehsus karenge, kabhi to wo samjhenge ki unhone ye janam sirf ek dusre ka ho jane k liye hi liya hai. wo ek dusre k liye hi to is duniya mai dobara aye hai.

priti smile n niyati give her we will see look,

tbc,...


precap - some ariya nokjhok. sakshi entry in arjun house.

ariya past infront of them.

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Posted: 8 years ago
Nice update didu
Continue soon...
Hope ARIYA ka saath is Janam mein likha ho...
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Posted: 8 years ago
Please dhora jaldi update karo.Ariya ko thora pass lao.aur ariya as cop hi best hai.to can u please cange their dream?

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