Ariya ff. zindgi ek paheli part 35 on pg 69. 3/06 - Page 8

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Wow its super se upar
You know its my fav story
Each n every words are nice
Sak ko arj ko dekhkar Dada ki yad aayi
Rijun matching
Sam blushing. Risha scene mast
Sak so cute
Waiting for action sequence
Pls pls pls continue soonish
Waiting...
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#72

Originally posted by: Taif.aru14

Hahaha sam blush! Riya ka kya chakkar he yaar? Jaldi update karo. Nyc update. Pm me plz.

Tumhe pm nhi mila kya is part ka.

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Originally posted by: kashvi19

Wow its super se upar

You know its my fav story
Each n every words are nice
Sak ko arj ko dekhkar Dada ki yad aayi
Rijun matching
Sam blushing. Risha scene mast
Sak so cute
Waiting for action sequence
Pls pls pls continue soonish
Waiting...
Thanks for pm.

Thanks dear
Ye meri first story hai
So close to my heart
Thanks for appreciation
Its really means alot
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Originally posted by: kashvi19

Pls continue super soon

Ya I'll soon update.
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Will update tommarow

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Part 21

Ri - damm ye karan bhi na.waise mai janti thi wo nhi manega

Next day they are leaving for Rajasthan

Samsha as dileep n radha

Ariya as rajesh and meera

Shrsa as shivraj n Anita

Chotu as meera's brother niranjan

Sakshi as shresa friend milli

All sit in a bus n ready to leave

After hours they reach sultanpur. Bhairo sing personally come to recieve them.

Bs - aaiye padahriye sa ..aap sabhi ka sultanpur mai swagat hai. N
Ra - dhanyawad kakasa.

Bs - are dileep beta badi suni tum logo k bare mai par dekh kai salo bad raha hu.

Ra - kaka sa ya mari bendni radha. Ya mara chota bhai rajesh or uski beendni meera ( toward ariya) ya sabse chota shivraj or uski bendni Anita ( toward shisa)
Ya niranjan meera ka bhai or ya milli shiv or Anita ki dost. Us hadse ki wajah se humare sath aye hai hume baswane.

Bs - aaiye aaiye apki haweli ko to theek hone mai wakhat lageaga aap log maari haweli mai rukiye.

Sabhi apne apne room mai jate hai. Kuch der mai dinner karke fir sone jate hai

Samsha room
Aisha- aakhi aa hi gaye hum sik k or kareeb. Accha hua use koi shak nhi hua

Sam - ha Aisha arjun ne accha plan banaya.

Ai - par sir arjun sir or riya ek sath hope koi garbar na ho. Means in dono ka attitude

Sam - don't worry Aisha is mission se unka sab kuch juda hai WO Ise fail nhi hone denge.
Sakshi room
Sak to herself - are waah sakshi aakhir tu aa hi gayi sultanpur . bas jaldi se sik pakda jaye to mai apne bhateje ko dekh paun. Or baba bhi thik ho jaye

Chotu room
Chotu mv. Is bs ko to mai hi patak patak ke marunga bada drug dealer banta hai na dikhta bhi pehalwan hai.

Shrisa room
Sh - Lisa tum Jo bhi karo bas mere gadgets ko harm mat karna

Li - ohh god kaha fasa diya mujhe kaise rahungi mai kuch din is gadget freek k sath ek room mai

Sh - accha or agar puri jindgi rehna pada to

Li - to mai apne bedroom mai ek bhi gadget nhi rehne dungi bas mai or tum

Sh - OK. Mai mere gadgets k liye alag room banwa lunga.

Li - that's like my husband

Suddenly they remember what they are talking they get embarrassed and opposite their on bed n try to sleep.

Ariya room

Riya is pacing nervously in room from here n there. Arjun come in room after walk. Actually he go to check village atmosphere.
he enter bedroom n amused to see riya like this. She is looking like old riya
In front of her arjun sir.
But she see him n wear rudeness

Ar - kya hua aisi q ghum rahi hu

Ri - qki mujhe dinner k bad ghumne ki aadat hai or bahar nhi ghum sakti na qki mai to yaha ki beendni hu.

Ar smile at her frustration. Riya look at him

Ri - whatever n lay on bed n sleep..
Pretending to sleep. Arjun move his head in disbelief n lay other side.
But surprisingly she sleep . but again she get some nightmares and she wakeup from sleep.arjun also
Ar - riya riya are you OK.

Ri - arjun arjun wo sikandar . she is sweating badly n panicing.
Arjun hug her to calmdown .

Ar - relex riya koi nhi hai.hum pakad lenge sik ko. Tum so jao. Mai hu na.

N she sleep in his arms holding him tight. Arjun bhi use hug karke so jata hai. Surprisingly use koi nightmare nhi aate or wo jab subah uthta hai to use ajeeb sa sukun mehsus hota hai. WO jog par jata hai. Usne bad riya uthti hai

Ri MV ye kya kiya tune riya arjun sir kya soch rahe honge tu aise kamjor nhi pad sakti. Pata nhi kya kya puchenge aakar.

par arjun akar normal behave karta hai to riya bhi normal ho jati hai.

Sabhi neeche aate hai . boys jeans shirt mai hai or girls salwar Kurti mai.
par bhairo sing ki wife kamla

Kam -are beendniyo ye kya pehna hai ye tumhara shaher nhi gaon hai or meera tu to suhagan bhi nhi lagti. Chal mere sath. Wo aisha lisa ko ghagra choli deti hai par riya ko apne sath lekar jati hai.

Sak mutter to shree - shree tune dekha riya ko dekhkar aisa lag raha tha abhi kamlaji ka encounter kar degi. Pata nhi usne kaise whatever ko control kiya hoga.
Both giggle

Sh - par tujhe q change karne ko nhi kaha

Sak - qki mai beendni nhi hu na.

Mans are discussing business with bs. N sak is roming here there.
Kuch der mai aisha or lisa ready ho kar aate hai. Both looking beautiful. Shree to lisa ko aise first time dekhkar flat ho jata hai.
Kuch der mai riya bhi aati hai kamla k sath .sab use dekhte reh jate hai. Wo pariyon ki tarah beautiful lag rahi hai. Arjun to usme kuch pal kho hi jata hai. Par agle hi pal fir attitude mai aa jata hai.

Isi tarah ek week nikal jata hai.sabhi gaon k mahol mai ghul mil gaye hai. Or samjun ne bs ka bharosa bhi jeet liya hai. Samsaha shesa ek dusre k or kareeb aa gaye hai.
Riya raton wai waise hi panic karti hai or arjun use sambhal leta hai. Par subah dono fir attitude mai aa jate hai jaise kuch hua hi nhi. Par asal mai dono ekdusre ka sahara ban gaye hai.
Next day roshni ki second death anniversary hai. Samjun dono bahut upset hai
In sam room
Aisha kamla k sath hai.
Sam - aaj kya kare arjun

Ar - pata nhi sam kaise shradh kare uska. Kitna bebas hu mai .do sal pehle use bacha nhi paya or ab uska shradh bhi nhi kar paunga.

Sam - sambhal apne aap ko jun.

Itne mai ek naukar
Sahab ji nashta lag gaya hai.
Dono neeche aate hai.
Kam - baitho sa nashta lag gaya hai.

Itne mai riya.- kaki sa ye nhi kha sakte khana

Kam - q meera beendni

Ri - wo kaki sa mujhe or inhe aaj mandir jana hai aaj humne vrat rakha hai puja k bad hi todenge.

Kam - theek hai jaao.

Arjun ko ajeeb lagta hai ye mandir q jana chahti hai or vrat q.par wo dukhi hai to bina argue k chala jata hai.
Puri etf shocked hai

At mandir

Ri to pandit ji

Ri - namaste pandit ji

Pan - are meera bitiya aa gayi aap sari taiyari ho gayi hai. Accha hua apne phone kar diya tha.

Ri - ji dhanyawad panditji.

Pan - kiski shradh vidhi karwani hai beta

Arjun get shocked hearing this.

Ri - meri behen ki
Pan - kya naam tha unka or puja mai kaun baithega.

Ri - unka naam roshni tha. Or puja mai main or mere pati baithenge.

Pan - par apne kuch khaya to nhi hai na

Ri - nhi panditji hum khali pet hai

Pan - theek hai aaiye

Arjun rooted at his place. But next he silently follow pandit ji's order n perform roshni's shradh vidhi.

After puja they serve food to poor n children. After all rituals

Ar - thankyou riya .its really a great favour for me.

She nods

Ar - par tumhe kaise pata or tumne ye sab kiya kab

Ri - wo kal mujhe aisha ne bataya tha. Or aap bhi kuch restless the isiliye maine ye kiya. I know apno ko khona kya hota hai.

Arj nods.

Wo log jane lagte hai par riya ka pair fisLta hai or wo girne wali hoti hai par arjun use pakad leta hai par uske pair mai sprain aa jata hai.

Ri - aahh

Ar - sprIn hai riya ghar jakar hi kuch hoga.

N he pick up her in his arms

Ri - sir its ok mai chal lungi

Ar - shut up facture bhi ho sakta hai.so keep quite

Or wo log ghar k liye nikalte hai.or dr ko call karke haweli ane ko kehte hai.

At haweli

Dr - koi problem nhi just sprain hai 2-3 din mai theek ho jayega.
Ar - thanku dr.

Next 2-3 days pass arjun care her n she get cured.

One day
Kam - beendniyon kal humare ghar puja hai to bahut mehman avenge to tum sabko kam karna hai radha tum puja ki taiyari karogi or bhajan gaogi. Meera tu mujhe rasoi mai madad karegi. Or anita tu or thari dost mehmano ka dhayn rakhenge.or rangoli banayenge.
Sab samajh gaye.

Girls nods while boys tensed
Kya aisha puja ki taiyari kar payegi or bhajan gaa payegi.
Kya riya khana bana payegi or kya sakli rangoli bana payenge or gaon k guest handel kar payenge...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#77
wow di
awesome blosome udate
do dil mil rahe he magar dheere dheere
loved the update
ariya moment just lovely
m loving this ff
continue soon
ese hi ariya ko kareeb late raho
n thanks 4 pm di


ps : yepiee me 1st
Edited by arsh4heaven - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#78
superb
loved it
cont soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
#79
super update di.
thanks for PM..
continue soon..
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Superb. Continue soon. Than self or pm

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