Thread 2... Tere pyar mein.. (Ariya Story) updated index 30/06/2016 - Page 16

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Posted: 9 years ago
Very nice. Finally Arjun gets to know something about Riya's whereabout. Just praying all are safe and Ariya come together. As for Sakshi ...byebye. Please update soon.
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Posted: 9 years ago
awsum update di..
loved it..
love the twists here...
bass ab sab theeek ho jaaye...
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome part
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Part 32

Sameer: Vishal tum wahan javo jahan Riya ne kaha hai milne ke liye.. hum sab club jaayenge.. kyunki sirf tum aur Riya jaanthe hai Rashid ke aadmi ko.. tho tum unke har movement pe nazar rakhoge.. Samje..

Vishal: Yes Sir.. and he leaves from there..

At bluemoon club..

Everyone enters in disguise..

The music starts and here comes the diva in a black outfit looking ravishing.. This songs suits here very much..

Sexy lady on da floor

keep you coming back for more

Sexy lady on da floor

keep you coming back for more

Chori chori kiya re

Dil yeh dil liya re

Chori chori kiya re

Dil yeh dil liya re

Jadu se jadu kiya re

Kiya re

Arjun was mesmerized by seeing her.. he cant take his eyes off her.. he was looking at her longingly and whole love in his eyes.. his legs move to the dance floor automatically..

Jaagi soi rahoon

khoi khoi rahoon

uski yadoon mein uske khwaabo mein

jhome jiya re

Crazy Kiya Re, kiya re

Crazy Kiya Re, o crazy

Crazy Kiya Re

He comes out of trance when he hears Sameer on his blue tooth..

Sameer (furiously): Kya kar rahe ho Rawte.. apni aanken aur body language ko sambalo.. sab ke sab pakde jaayenge..

Choree can't help, but chuckle.. and Ayesha is very angry seeing Arjun.. but she cannot say anything to him now.. her main focus is Riya..

Arjun turns to see Choree giggling and Ayesha with red anger burning eyes.. and Sameer giving him don't you dare look.. Arjun just moves in the crowd and watching Riya's every action..

Na usko pata, Na uski khata

Mein us pe margay, Zara usko bata

Dheree dheere ikraar mein, kabhi kabhi intezaar mein

uske hi pyaar mein jhoome jiya re

Crazy Kiya Re, ho crazy kiya re..

Mein yahan bhi gai, Mein wahan bhi gai

socha pal pal use, Mein jahan bhi gai

Din ho ya raat ho, woh mere saath ho

jab uski baat ho, jhoome jiya re

Riya sees that everyone has come.. she sees Sameer is far from the floor.. and she has no choice other than going near to Arjun..

Arjun is watching each and every action of her.. he sees her looking at Sameer and then her eyes fell on him.. and coming forward.. on a cue, he also goes forward..

Riya acts as she slipped, Arjun hold her and he is totally lost in her.. she puts something in his pocket and pushes him.. and leaves from there..

Crazy Kiya Re, O crazy

Sexy lady on da floor, keep you coming back for more..

After the song.. she leaves the dance floor.. Arjun comes out of his trance and feels something in his pocket.. He signals Sameer...

They come out to secluded place where Vishal is waiting for Riya..

Sameer (tensely): Itna der hogayi hai.. Riya ab tak ayi kyun nahi.. Vishal.. tum hame correct jage pe le kea aye na..

Vishal: Haan sir.. Riya ne kaha ki party ke baad hum yahan uska itezaar kare..

Chotu: Sir.. muje kuch gadbad lagrahi hai.. kahin Riya musibat mein tho nahi...

Everyone are tensed hearing to that.. and Arjun is sweating in fear and anger..

Suddenly Vishal remember something..

Vishal: Shree. Ye code track karo..

Sameer: Ya kya hai Vishal..

Vishal: Sir.. jab mein Riya se last time mila tha.. she was not allowing me to go with her, tho meine uske handshake lene ke bahane uske braclet mein ye tracking device daldiya tha.. usne jaldhbazi mein notice nahi kiya..

All give him appericated look..

Sameer: Shree.. Jaldhi karo..

Shree: Sir.. bus do minute..

Shree: Yes.. done.. sir ye place yahan ke aadhe ghante ke doori par hai..

Arjun: Shree... iske speaker on karo.. i want to hear every conversation.. hume patha tho chale ki wahan kya ho raha hai..

Shree: Yes sir..

Shree puts it on speaker and everyone are listening, and Sameer is driving like a racer..

They hear some foot steps.. the next moment they hear a slap sound..

(Actually Rashid comes to know about his loss and everything)

All come to know that Riya is in danger..

Rashid slaps Riya very hard and she falls down.. he pulls her hair..

Riya: Aahh..

Everyone's blood boil hearing to this..

Rashid: Bol woh camera aur saare saboot kahan hai..

Riya does not say anything.. so he pulls her hair very hard..

Riya shrieks in pain.. (everyone are tensed hearing this)..

Rashid: Bol saboot kahan hai.. he slaps her again..

Riya (furiously): Saboot jahan pahunchna chahiya tha wahan pahunch gaye.. tere baap ke paas..

Rashid: Matlab..

Riya: Tera baap.. ACP Sameer Rathod..

Rashid calls up someone.. (everyone are hearing the conversation)..

Rashid: Tum jahan bhi ho jaldi yahan godown mein aavo.. and he cuts the call..

Rashid angrily marching towards Riya and pushes Riya and ties her hands to the chair..

Rashid: Ab mein bhi dektha hoon woh saboot mera pass kaise nahi aathe.. mera pass hukum ka ikka hai jo ACP Sameer Rathod ko wo saboot dene se majboor kardega..

Riya (laughs): Aisa koi paida nahi hua jo ACP Sameer Rathod ko majboor kare ki woh kisi criminal ke saamne jukh jaaye... Tuje kya lagtha hai.. muje patha nahi ki tune kisse call kiya hai..aisa sochna bhi nahi ki woh tera madad karega..

Now, Rashid and everyone are shocked to hear this.. Everyone outside are curiously listening know who is that person..

That person comes inside the room..

Person: Rashid bhai.. aapne muje ithni hadbadi mein kyun bulaya.. koi serious baath hai kya..?

Rashid: Haan Commissioner.. (Yes that person is none other than Commissioner Sir)..

Everyone are shocked to hear this.. They never expected this person could be the traitor..

Rashid moves aside and makes commissioner see Riya..

Commissioner (shockingly): Riya Mukherjee...

(Riya does not know that the conversation is listened by everyone because Vishal has kept bug in Riya's bracelet without knowing her...)

Riya: Haan.. Riya Mukherjee.. Kyun shock hogaya.. aaj tak muje patha nahi chala tha ki thu bhi hai in sab mein shamil hai.. meine tuje woh meeting mein dekha tha tab patha chala ki tu wahi kamina hai jisiki madad se ye Rashid underground hogaya tha jab humne iske right hand Imran ki pakda tha.. ab tuje koi nahi bacha saktha hai commissioner SIR...

Rashid (angrily): Ye commissioner.. kuch tho karo.. Us ACP Rathod ko kisina kisi tareeke mujh tak pahunchne se roklo.. Mein isse mardalunga and he keeps the gun on Riya's forehead..

Here in SUV everyone are shocked as if someone has pulled the ground beneath them and are cursing themselves for not able to do anything..

Riya: Tuje kya lagtha hai.. ki tu muje maardega tho tu bachpayega.. NEVER..

Comissioner pulls Rashid from Riya...

Commissioner: Rashid bhai.. kya kar rahe ho aap.. calm down.. mein kuch kartha hoon.. he thinks for sometime.. and an idea clicks him..

Commissioner: Mein bhi dektha hoon ki ye Rathod hume saaboot waapis kaise nahi kartha hai.. hum is ladki ke zariye woh saboot hasil karenge..

Rashid: Matlab..

Commissioner: Matlab ye hai ki.. Rathod isse apni behan maantha hai aur meine dekha hai ki ye usse kithna pyar kartha hai.. woh jab iske leave ke extension ke liye mera paas aya tha kuch tension me tha.. tho meine usse poocha tha.. tab muje patha chala ye sab.. lekin muje ye patha nahi tha ki woh isse undercover mein bej raha tha..

Rashid turns to Riya (smirking): Ab tho ACP Rathod ko tho mera saamne jhukna hi padega..

Riya is laughing very hard...

Rashid: Ye.. pagal hogayi hai kya..? ithna has kyun rahi hai..

Riya: Hasoon nahi tho kya karoon tumhari bevakoofi par..?

Rashid: Ye tune mujhe bevakoof kaha... teri itni himmat and tries to pull her hair...

Riya: Immediately ducks down and says.. bevakoof ko bevakoof hi kahethe hai..

Rashid: tune phir se muje bevakoof kaha and slaps her..

Riya: Aah..

Everyone in SUV hear this and are in such angry mode that they will not leave the person who is torturing their Riya...

Riya:.. Aah..ye galthi phirse math karna.. teri bhalayi ke liye hi kahrahi hoon..

Rashid: Tu aur meri bhalayi soch rahi hai.. ha ha ha ha.. apne baare mein soch..

Riya: Tuje kisne kaha ki mein Rathod sir is kamjori hoon..?

Comissioner: Muje patha hai.. woh tuje apni behan maantha hai.. aur tere liye kuch bhi karsaktha hai..

Riya gives shocking epression..

Rashid: Itna chauk kyun gayi.. ab tho muje yakeen hogaya tera ye shocked chehra dekke ki ACP Rathod tere liye kuch bhi karega..

Riya: Hmmm.. Mein tere liye aur bhi easy kardethi hoon..

Rashid: Matlab..

Riya: Matlab.. Haan.. mein mere bhai Sameer Rathod ki kamzori hoon.. aur woh mere liye kuch bhi karenge.. kuch bhi matlab.. kuch bhi..

Rashid: Dekkha.. tune kudhi aakhir accept karliya hai ki woh tere liye kuch bhi karega..

Rashid: Ye commissioner us ACP Rathod ko phone laga aur usse kisi na kisi tareeke se rok aur woh saboot hasil karle..

Commissioner: Ye ACP Rathod ki hi nahi woh sar phira ACP Rawte ki kamzori bhi hai.. uski jaan basthi hai isme.. ye dono ACP's ki jaan hai..

Riya gets furious hearing this..

Rashid: Matlab ye dono ACPs ki kamzori hai..

Comissioner: Haan.. Muje patha chala hai ki Arjun iss pe jaan chidaktha hai.. isse bahut pyar kartha hai..

He was cut by Riya..

Riya (furiously): Mein ACP Arjun Rawte ki kuch nahi lagthi samje thum.. aur woh mujhse pyar nahi kartha..

Here Choree and Vishal are shocked hearing by this relevation.. Arjun is feeling some sharp needle has pricked into his heart. And Sameer and Ayesha are in their own thoughts..

Rashid: Chalo teek hai.. agar ACP Rawte nahi.. tho ACP Rathod ki jaan tho ho na..

Riya again laughs..

Rashid: Ye.. mein kya tuje joke sunaraha hoon jo thu hass rahi hai..

Riya: Hasoon nahi tho kya karoon.. Woh ETF ka chief hai.. use ithna bevakoof samjha kya..?

Rashid: Apni behan ke liye kuch bhi karega na...

Riya: Mein ne kaha woh kuch bhi karega yahaan tak mere liye apni jaan bhi dega...lekin meine ye kab kaha ki woh mere badle mein tere khilaf jo bhi evidence hai woh dega..

Rashid: Aisa kaise nahi chodega.. mein tujhe maarne ka dhamki doonga..

Riya: Tuje patha hai aaj tak ayu ko hi patha nahi ki Rathod sir ka kamjori kya hai.. tho tum kya ho..

Rashid: Ayu..?

Riya: Ayu.. haan Ayu.. Rathod sir ki biwi jise woh sabse jyadha pyar karthe hain..are wahi jisne teri drug consignments ki band bajadi.. Nadiya..? Yaad aaya...

Rashid: Haan.. Kya.. woh Rathod ki biwi..

Riya: Kyun hawa tight hogayi uski naam sunthe hi.. Chal mein tuje samjaathi hoon..

Riya: Rathod sir ETF ke chief aur upar se rajput.. tuje kya lagtha hai..woh yunhi ETF ka chief banna..? Rajput kisiko maarne se ya marne se nahi darthe hai.. aur unki kamjori ka bhanak apne dushman ko nahi padne dethe hai.. Aur agar laga ki dushmano ko pathachalgayi unki kamjori kya hai.. woh dushman ke sar jhukane se pehele hi apni kamjori ko katham karthe hai..

Mujhe pehele laga ki Ayu unki kamzori hai kyun ki woh usse apni jaan se zyada pyar karthe hai.. lekin tuje patha hai woh duty ke liye Ayu ko bhi goli maarne se peech nahi hatenge.. lekin apni duty ke saath gaddhari nahi karenge..Ye mein isiliye kahrahi hoon kyun ki meine apni aankhoh se dekha hai..

Here everyone is having mixed feelings...

Riya: Aur tuje kya lagtha hai.. ki wo mere liye tuje chodenge..? chal..teri baat mein bhi ek point hai.. chalo thodi der ke liye maanthe hai ki mein Rathod sir ki kamjori hoon.. tuje kya lagtha hai.. woh muje aise kisi undercover operation mein jaane denge.. aree who tho apne subordinates ko apne experience ke skills aur personal training dekke bejthe hai..kaunsa time kaise react karna.. kaunsa time pe risk lena.. woh sab kuch sikake bejthe hai.. aur mein tho unki behan hoon... kya woh muje aise hi jaane denge..

Rashid: Mein aise hi haar nahi maanunga.. mein tuje aisa saja doonga ki tu kya tere bhai bhi kaap jayega.. mein teri andar ki ladki ko maardunga aur tu apne app ko aaine mein dekhna na paaye... aisa harsh karunga tera..

Riya (smiles bitterly): Rashid.. mera andhar ki ladki teen saal pehle hi marchuki hai.. aur jis aina ki baat kar raha hai thu.. uss aine mein meine appne aap ko dekhe teen saal hogaya hai.. tere saamne jo hai woh sirf ek zinda lash hai aur kuch nahi..

Here Arjun feels like someone is pouring acid on him.. he is having tears in his eyes.. Vishal and Chotu does not understand why Riya is talking like that, but Shree keeps his hand on Arjun's shoulder and press it.. Arjun understands and comes into angry arrogant cop avatar.. Sameer and Ayesha are crying in their heart listening to all this..

Rashid does not understand and in the mean time.. while talking Riya hai lossened her ropes and frees her hand..

Riya: Mein tuje ek aur baat batha thi hoon.. agar mera bhai ne kaha ki muje maardo.. iska matlab hai ki unke dimaag mein kuch chal raha hai..woh muje yahan se sahi salamath leke jayega.. Samje gadhe..

Rashid: Ye.. tera naatak bahut hogaya.. baar baar meri izzat kachra kar rahi hai.. teri tho.. he pulls her hair and slaps her..

Rashid: Ye commissioner mooh kya dekhraha hai.. uss ACP Rathod ko phone laga aur usse rok..

Riya: Agar tu phone bhi lagayega tho bhi woh phone nahi utayega..

Rashid: Aisa kaise nahi utayega.. Ye Mumbai ka commissioner hai aur tere pass iske khilaf koi saboot nahi hai..

Riya: Kisne kaha ki mere pass saboot nahi hai..

Commssioner is shocked hearing this..

Riya: Jaise tere khilaf saboot tere baap ACP Sameer Rathod ke pass pahunchgaya.. waise hi is kameene commissioner ke khilaaf saboot iske baap ACP Arjun Rawte ke pass pahunch gaya hai.. wahi jo tum logne baat kiya tha party ke pehle.. wahi sab..

Here in SUV.. Arjun remembers how Riya put the chip inside his pocket..

Arjun: Shree.. kitne door mein hai hum..

Shree checking his laptop: Sir.. just 10 min ki doori hai..

Rashid: Tuje kya lagtha hai.. ki woh tera bhai tuje yahan bachane ayega..

Riya: Lagtha nahi.. mujhe barosa hai apne bhai par.. woh zarur ayega.. lekin woh aane se pehele tu soch tu kaise bachega mujhse..

Here in SUV.. Sameer has tears hearing this that Riya has so much confidence that he comes to her..

Rashid: Matlab..

Riya: Matlab.. Ye le.. she kicks him very hard that the he falls down..

Here Sameer is driving as a race.. Everyone are waiting to reach there as soon as possible. so that they can tear apart Rashid for torturing Riya..

Now everyone are ready for the attack..

In godown..

Commissioner has not excepted this.. he tries to overpower Riya.. but Riya.. gives a karate kick under back of his knee and makes him fall down.. she takes the gun and runs and hides behind the drums..

Seeing this the goons start firing.

Everyone gets numb hearing the firing..

Sameer stops the SUV suddenly.. they reach the place and take their position..

Everyone are searching for Riya..

ETF and commandos gave tough fight to Rashid and goons..

Arjun is panickly searching for Riya.. he is killing each and everyone who comes in front of him..

Commisioner tries to escape, but Ayesha blocks him..

Ayesha: Kahan bagrahe hai SIR..

Commissioner: Ayesha.. mein abhi bhi Mumbai ka commissioner hoon..tum muje kuch nahi karsakthi..

Ayesha slaps him hard.. Sharm nahi aathi aapko aise kaam karthe huve.. chup chap apne aap ko havale kardo warna encounter kardoongi.. aur aapko patha hai mere baare mein shooting skills ke baare mein..

She handover him to the trusted officers..and goes inside..

Here Arjun is back of Riya.. thinking that she needs his support and she is still scared of using the gun.. but to his surprise.. most of her shots are directly to the head or to the neck of the criminals.. He is shocked to see her in this avatar.. He remembers the sence when Riya first time shot a goon to save his life and how she was traumatized after that seeing the blood of goon.. but now.. she cares a damn..

Arjun's trance broke when he sees someone falling in front of him.. he sees that he is the same goon whom Riya has killed just now..

Another goon comes and attacks Riya from backside.. Arjun tries to go there.. but due to firing he is not able to move from his place..

Riya pulls that goons hair from behind and gives him a punch in the stomach and brutally twists his neck.. and he is dead..

She takes another goon who has come in front of her with a knife.. she gives him a karate chop near his hand and the knife falls down.. she takes the knife and when he tries to overpower her, she just slits his neck leaving him dead..

She moves forward to take another group of goons who were attacking ETF.. she kills one by one by firing right in their head or neck.. leaving them dead on the spot..

Everyone are shocked to see this avatar of Riya.. the most is Arjun.. she was brutally killing each and every criminal without mercy..

Almost everyone were dead.. and most of them injured..

Rashid comes from no where and pulls Riya and points a gun on her head..

Rashid: ACP Rathod.. bahar nikal.. warna iski jaan jayegi.. Kameeni.. teri wajah se mein barbad hogaya.. and he slaps her very hard.. due to to this Riya hits wall and falls down..

ETF comes front in line.. they see that he has captured Riya..

Riya tries to get up, but again he hold her hair and she shrieks in pain..

Rashid: ACP Rathod.. muje jaane de.. warna..

Sameer: Warna kya.. maar doge usse.. tho maar do..

Everyone are shocked to hear this from Sameer..

Riya give a winning smile to Rashid..

Rashid remembers what Riya has said.. "Mera bhai mere liye kuch bhi karega.. lekin agar unhone kaha ki muje maardo.. iska matlab hai ki unke dimaag mein kuch chal raha hai"..

Rashid: Koi galthi nahi Rathod.. apne apne bandook neeche rakho..

While keeping the gun down.. Sameer fires a bullet and it goes between Riya legs and hits Rashid leg.. Its a very tricky shot..

By this Rashid's grip get loose from Riya's neck.. She kicks him and moves forward and falls down..

Vishal seeing that runs and tries to hold her..

Riya (shouts): Door raho mujhse.. don't you dare to touch me..

Suddenly choree also cum and hug her.. she pushes them and shouts at them..

Riya: Ek baar bola to samaj mein nahi aatha.. meine kaha na don't touch me.. door raho mujhse..

Choree, vishal are shocked to see this behaviour.. Sameer and Ayesha understands why she is behaving like this.. they glare Arjun..

Sameer comes forward.. Riya sees Sameer and runs and hugs him smilingly..

Riya: Muje patha tha ki aap zaarur aavoge bhai.. and I am proud of you bhai.. aapne apni duty nibhayi aur aap kamzor nahi pade.. muje aap pe barosa tha ki aap muje kuch nahi hone denge..

Sameer has tears... Ayesha also comes forward.. threesome share a group hug..

Arjun just does not understand what's going on.. he sees injured Rashid in front of him..

He goes and beats Rashid to death..

Ayesha and sameer comes and pulls Arjun from Rashid..

Sameer: Rawte.. kya kar rahe ho.. chodo usse..

Ayesha: Arjun sir.. ye kya kar rahe aap..

Arjun: Isne meri Riya ko chot pahunchayi hai.. mein isse zindha nahi chodunga.. mein..

He was cut by Ayesha... she was burning with anger hearing meri Riya from him.. but controls herself..

Ayesha: Agar aap isse maardenge tho iska baaki addo ka patha kaun bathayega.. don't forget videshi log bhi shamil hai in sab mein.. hume ye zindha chahiya.. agar ye margaya tho Riya ka saara mehnath mitti mein miljayega..

Ayesha arrests Rashid..

Ayesha: Chotu aur Shree isse le javo..

Ayesha: Vishal tum bhi javo.. hum Riya ko hospital le jayenge..

Vishal: Par mam.. mein bhi..

Sameer gives him understand look..

Sameer: Vishal tum javo.. hum kal lmilenge..

Vishal: Ok sir.. he too leaves from there..

Ayesha (tensely): Riyu.. bachhe.. tuje kahan kahan chot ayi hai.. dikha muje.. she is checking each and every part of her body..

Riya: Aayu chod na.. hum abhi kaise bhi hospital jaa rahe hai na..

Riya: Bhai.. pair mein chot ayi hai.. I cannot walk.. utalo mujhe and forwards her hands.. and give him puppy face look..

Ayesha and Sameer smile seeing her antics.. Sameer picks her up till the ambulance.. and they leave to the hospital.

Arjun is just only watching.. lots of things are going in his mind.. how Riya brutally killed criminals without any mercy.. how she said that Arjun does not love her.. how she said that mere andhar ki ladki 3 saal pehle hi margayi aur mein apne aap ko aina mein dekhna bhoolgayi.. how she pushed Vishal and choree.. and how she yelled.. "door raho mujhse, don't dare to touch me".. how she did not even give a look to him.. she behaved as if he does not exist at all..

He comes out of trance by ringing of his phone..

Arjun: Hello..

Sameer: Rawte.. Hum Riya ko hospital le jaarahe hai.. tum yahan par sab kuch complete karke javo.. hum kal milenge ETF mein and cuts the call..

He dint even give a chance for Arjun to speak..

Edited by Mariaakanksha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Note: Hey guys.. Riya ka entry kaisa hai, bathadena... negative comments bhi chalega... keeping fingers crossed.. waiting for your comments... 😊...
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awesome update
Love this bold and confident riya
Arjun deserve this behaviour from riya
Plz riya ka promotion kara do usne itne dangerous mission akele solvve kiye hai aur saakshi jab riya ki junior hogi to maza aa jayega
Hope riya uss saakshi(b****h) ki bhi sahi place dikha de
Thanks 4 pm
continue soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
awesome update diii
lovee yaaa
as u said it is totaly dhamakedar
and arjun ko tadapte dekh kr maza ayega
but plss zyada mat tarpana usse
kyunki usse riya ko bhi bura lagega aur humein bhi
and loved riya's entry to the core
diii sakshi ki bhi acchi khatir dari krwana riya se plsss
continue sooon
and thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
u both r going 2 be death of us 1 day
wt a part
so surprising
hats off
thnks 4 pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb
love it
riya ki entry was awesome
thnx for pm
cont soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
part-29
after reading this part i am become angry and feeling disgusting towards arjun...
how badly he hurt riya and still thinks riya easily forgive him...
i am so much angry on arjun and at the same time i am crying badly after reading this.
riya had struggled so much...she is in so much pain just because of that arjun...
precap six months leap
do continue soon...
thanks for the pm...

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Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".