NEW TS :: TERE LIYE updated last part in pg 12 on 5/9 - Page 6

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Posted: 9 years ago
#51
Wow dear...
It's awesome and mind blowing update...
Just loved it...
Continue soon...
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Posted: 9 years ago
#52
Starting was fabulous harshu
So now ariya going to meet for second time
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 9 years ago
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Fantastic update harshu
Wow finally they meet
Or miltehi arjun ne propose kar diya
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Posted: 9 years ago
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it's really beautiful dear
love it
waiting 4 next post
update soon
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Posted: 9 years ago
#55
Last part

Hey friends I'm back with last part actually I was totally confused for the ending then Utsha didu helped me in completing this TS thanks Utsha didu aur satrishi didu I hope aapko iss story ki ending accha lage so here is it...


It has been one week since Arjun came back to home .it was sunday Arjun went to his friend's house where as all other family members were sitting in dining area nd having their breakfast Riya too present there. Suddenly karan clears his throat to gain all others attention.
Karan : baba mein chahta hoon ki kyun na hum Riya ki shaadi kare meri nazar mein ek bohot acchi ladka hai kyun ki Riya ka studies b puri huyi hai ab toh isko ek acche rishta doond ker shaadi karna hamara Hi responsibility haina???haina simran????? he asks her the baffled simran who doesn't understands what is her husband saying just nods her head to him
karan : toh aap kya bolenge baba ..
by saying dis he sees Riya's face to see her expression she was totally shocked by hearing dis knowingly or unknowingly she loved him.yes she loved the great Arjun suryakanth Rawate to the core she can't imagine other one in his place she knew once a time he was an ruthless nd arrogant person,but now he changed moreover he was changed just because of her words now he was totally in love with her she can see immnese nd pure love in his eyes for her just for her
Arjun's father : tum thik keh rahe ho karan par ladka kon hai????
Then karan takes Arjun's father ,simran nd all others to another room except Riya he talks with them nd all comes out after sometime Later,Riya tries to talk with all but no ones talks with her all behaves as they are busy in their works after sometime Arjun comes to his house now all sees him weirdly
He doesn't understands wht is happening.All family members resembles in hall then karan calls Arjun
karan : Arjun kaha ho tum?????????????????
Arjun : kyun bhai??????mein toh ghar par Hi hoon.
Karan : thik hai toh hall mein aajav.
By saying dis he cuts the call nd calls all the family members to his room nd says his plan all agrees to do it.

Later in hall :

Karan : Arjun hum sab ne ek bohut bad decision liye the tumhare zindagi ke baare mein. Arjun : aisa konsa decision aapne liya bhai aur baki sab log inta serious kyun hai.sab thik toh hona
Karan : Arjun humne tumhare liyeh ek rishta tai kiya aur ladki bohot acchi hai hum sab ko bohot pasand aayi hai
Arjun : kya????????...
Bhai mein aapko bola na mujhe Abhi shadi karne ka Mann nahi hai
Aur mein shaadi nahi karoonga
by saying dis he looks at Riya who also looking tensed nd worried too
Then all says him to marry nd starts to blackmail him emotionally then Riya goes from there with teary eyes by seeing dis Arjun shouts that he doesn't want to get marry then karan asks.
Karan : kyun????? Kyun nahi karega ??????????
Arjun( frustratedly ) : kyun ki mein Riya se pyaar kar raha hoon aur ussi se shaadi karna chahta hoon by listening to dis all gives him we - know - this smile nd all burst into laugh nd all laughs like manic nd Arjun doesn't understands what is happening Later karan reveals him what happened in the room in room :
Karan : ladka koi aur nahi baba hamara Hi Arjun hai by saying dis he sees totally shocking faces of his family ...then he narrates how he had heard Ariya conversation in Arjun's room.nd again he starts speaking.
Karan : baba jis Arjun ko hum itne saalo se nahi badal sakte hai uss Arjun ko Riya ne badal diya sirf uski baate sun ker Arjun badal gaya kya iss se accha ladki hamare Arjun ko milegi aur rahi baat hamare Arjun ki hai toh haa woh toda bohot akdu aur sadu ki type hai par ab woh badal gaya na.
Arjun's buaji : haa Dada aapne dekha tha na jab se Arjun ghar mein waapas aaya woh apne gusse ko khaaboo mein rakha aur har kisi se b acchi se baat kar raha hai
Arjun's father : haa yeh b sahi hai
Then they all agreed to ariya's marriage Arjun listens to dis by opening his mouth. Karan : tumne kya socha Arjun????? Tumhari dil ki baat hum nahi jaan sakte hai???????????? Mein ne uss din tum dono ki conversation suna tha uss din mein wahi tha tumhare kamare ke bahaar Hi tha Aur tab se mein tum dono ko observe kiya woh chup chup ke ek dusare ko dekhna sab kuch...
Jao jaa kar usse bolo ki yaha shaadi tum dono ki Hi horahi hai bechari rote rote chali gayi Arjun : bhai aap bhi na kya jaroorat hai aise drama karne ka bechari aap sab ki wajah se woh toh bohot hurt huyi hogi mein aapko chodunga nahi.
By saying dis he is about to pinch mein simran comes in between as karan's saviour.
Simran : devarji aap jara jaake meri behen ko sambhal lijiyeh mein aapki bhai ko sambhalti hoon.
Arjun : thanks vahini u're the best.
Karan : oye itna kuch kiya mera kya???????
Simran : aapki toh mein batati hoon na bewajah mere devarji ko aap pareshaan kyun kar rahe hai???????
Here Arjun goes to Riya's room nd sees that room door is half opened nd sees Riya is sitting there nd crying his heart wrenches by seeing that but he composes himself nd goes to her.
Arjun: Riya ro kyun rahi ho???????????agar mere shaadi ho rahi hai toh tum kyun ro rahi ho?????????
Riya is totally baffled by seeing him in her room nd by his sudden question too
Riya : woh...mujhe...haaa meri di yaad aa rahi hai issliye ro rahi hoon iss se aapko kya????aur kon bola ki mein aap ke shaadi ke wajah se ro rahi hoon ????mein toh issliye ro rahi hoon ki meri b shaadi honewale hai aur mein meri di ko chod ker chali jaa rahi hoon .
Arjun : ohhh...thik hai mein toh yaha issliye aaya tha ki mein tumhe uss ladki ki pic dikhanewala hoon jisse meri parivaar ne tai kiya ...
but Riya doesn't sees the pic nd says...
Riya : mujhe koi shok nahi hai joh aapki honewale patni ko dekhne ka.
Arjun : arey dekho toh sahi kitni beautiful hai yeh uski eyes kitni chamak rahi hai ,aur uski nose perfect aur uski dimple cheecks toh...
When he says dimple it caught her attention nd she turns her face to see the pic then Arjun asks her that.
Arjun : Abhi tak toh mana ki thi na pic dekhne ka ab kyun moodi ho????????...
But Riya doesn't hears him nd snatches the pic from his hand nd she gets shocked by seeing her pic in his hand then by seeing her shocked face Arjun says her that ...
Arjun : itni shocked kyun ho????kyun mere honewale patni acchi nahi hai????
Riya doesn't says anything nd just hugs him nd cries then Arjun pacifies her nd says about karan's plan later he asks her
Arjun : will u marry me???????
Riya : haaa karoongi...
By saying this she hugs him nd both remains in the same position for sometime later he cups her face nd kisses her.after some months they both got married nd lived happily forever.




Edited by jeharshu - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#56
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**unres**
Harshu,awesome one. see I learned unres ing too.hehe.
I loved KaSim here. So loving they are. awww ArIya toh always best. loved the update totally. *baby is happy now* *baby is dancing*
Edited by KaViannn - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#57
Short and cute story.. 😊
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Posted: 9 years ago
#58
Welcome dearest. But story teri hai. U deserve all the credits. 👏👏👏 Moreover I should be thankful to u for making me a part of this wonderful TS.

Fabulous ending with surprising twist. Falling short of words to praise ur writing skills. 😊😛
All together it was such a sweet, complete story ki maan khushi se bhar jaye. Masti, mazak se bhari hui, very nice & gripping concept.😉

Keep gifting us such awesome stories dear.😃😃
Edited by utsha - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
#59
Karan😃😛😉 god..kitna drama karta hai. Riya ko rula diya😃 plz keep writing loved it😆😃
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Posted: 9 years ago
#60
oh very cute family tho drama karke dono ko mialdiay poor riay ko ruladiya..

arjun bhi usme milke usko tension em dala lekin famally happy ending

thanks for wonderful ts dear.

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