Arakshi SS - The Riddle of Silences - Chapter 9&10 - 24/09

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kunchu

@kunchu

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#31

The bod forming is just so sweet Ri

I really loved the pace of the story

eager to know why he kept on asking about how much she remember the past

Loving Ziya a lot

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Awesome update...

Sakshi referred Arjun as pagal...😆😆😆

After Sakshi's efforts finally Ziya started mingling with Sakshi...😃😃😃

Arjun wants to learn sign language and also want Sakshi to keep Ziya with her...😃😃😃...ans Skashi agreed...😃😃😃

Sakshi was having crush on Arjun in school time...😃😃😃

Why Sakshi was sent home that day??😕😕😕

Ziya understood very well about Sakshi's hesitance...😃😃😃

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 10 years ago

#33

I liked their meet and the little convo they had at the doorstep..It was fun reading that part.
What I liked most was the idea of narrating the whole scene wherein Sakshi and Ziya was speaking with signs, through Arjun's pov and not Sakshs'pov..Well done at that part.👍🏼
The flashback..Aww..I wish she could have got more seconds to give that rose..😔I'm curious to know what had happened that she had to go..well I gussed something..And What does he want her to remember?
Aww..Ziya..❤️she is so sweet..understanding..hugs to her..🤗
I liked the update..It had everything with exact quantity..na zyada na kam..so Good going..!
I'll say it again You are going very good..I'm liking it..others too..🤗

Oh and Thanks for pm..and Continue soon.
Also I think it was chotu sa..😒😆

Edited by Swara85 - 10 years ago

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Shreya

@shreya09

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

i am in love with Ziya ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

very very very nice chapter Ritu 🤗

the little talk they had in the morning... the sign language... Arjun's pov... it was wonderful.

waiting for more 😳

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Shivani P

@Lovelost_shivi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Really nice update..
pls continue soon...

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

This story is a fresh burst of new theme and characters.The track is indeed very captivating.The disability of a pivotal character adds to the creative ability of writer.And you have no doubt made us fall in love with the little Ziya.How I love the lines that describe her clinging to her uncle in sleep.Those lines are stupendously heart warming.While we have just peeped into their lives,there is much more to learn about them.Awaiting with bated excitement to be a neighbour in their lives and watch the characters more vividly through the windows of your words.😊😊

Thanks for the pm and Keep writing.

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

Awesome start yaar. I very much liked it

Pehle toh mujhe title hi bahut pasand aaya. "The Riddle of Silences" Yeah its very much true. Silence has so many meanings. U dnt have n u dnt need words to describe silence.

Flashback was heartwrenching. Beloved sister in ICU, uski masoom si beti jo bolnahi sakti. How come Arjun will manage all this?

Sam is really a gem. He will always be ready to do anything for Arjun

Sakshi? Why she is like this? Like keeping everything to herself n not letting it to others to know about her

Arjun knows Sakshi? Interesting yaar

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Di Where Are You...??
Missing You
Update Please...

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Areesha

@Areesha566

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Posted: 9 years ago

#39

Part 2

Oh ritu this was soo awesome
Love it
Ziya sweet angel
Thanks for pm

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 9 years ago

#40

Heyloo! Happy New Year!🤗

It feels like it has been an eternity since I posted.. do you even remember this story? 😛

Anyway, it's a new year.. hoping to get back to writing again because I cannot abandon these. For those who are still sticking around (and remember this story), here's the next chapter.

Sorry for not replying to your comments...

The next chapter is at the blog!

Shall post the rest soon.😉