Arakshi OS : Deception

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_Aditi_S

@Aditi_S

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#11

awesome OS

loved it

it was too cute😊

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#12

OH MY GOD.

Strawberryyy *screams at the top of her voice*

🤣

The last line 🤣🤣

I am so sorry I finally got time to read this.. and I ABSOLUTELY freaking loved it!!! It's so strange we both wrote an OS for Bharu's birthday and used the same names Akash and Maya (bong sister connection😉)

Anywaaay... hehe u wrote it so beautifully Strawberrryyy.. and the twist at the end hehehehee. I did not see that coming. Waise baby hotwa bhi kitna cute hoga na?😳😳

Hehehe.. anywaay.. beautiful piece of writing deariee.. I feel like I should stop writing😛😛 No, seriously! U seem to get better day by day! (Honestly)

Love this.. love u for writing this for Bharu.. I'm sure she'll love it😃

P.S - Waise kya imagination hai.. bachhon ko bhi .. ahem... aise khayal! 😆 Tell me, are u writing from experience?😉😉

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EshaalYousufzai

@EshaalYousufzai

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#13

Awesome OS ma!!

Loved it to the bit.

Superbly written.

I couldn't help but re-read it over and over again.

And that line on TV was dhasu! 🤣

I really really loved it.

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Ritu Dang

@coolRD

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#14

wat on earth WAS dat!! totally hilarious 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣 🤣

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Neha

@Asyalover

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#15

omg...totally had me there ..lol nice one

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pango

@pango

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#16

awesome update

loved it

thanx for pm

continue soon

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#17

First thank you arma dii's friend who posted this os on her behalf

Now coming to os

It was chooo cute and shweeet
I lub it a lot (in baby style) 😊

Wow arma di ise kehte hain dil ko dil se raah, I was imaging arakshi as toddlers and you present them in real
Amazing

Thanks for pm eshu
Love you yaar

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TereLiyeMINU

@TereLiyeMINU

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#18

that was not-so-seemingly innocent update but yes that was a cute one.a great couple in making probably.😃 awesome writing and definitely a commendable piece of suspense story with a shocking revelation.😊