Ariya ss : jau kaha.... part 9.... page 34&35.... 19/9 PM late

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hiii frnds
kese ho sab ?
new story suru kar rhi hu hope u guys like it
achhi buri jesi bhi lage plz comment kr ke batana jarur 😊

Part : 1 = 1
Part : 2 = 6,7
Part : 3 = 13,14

Part : 4 = 17
Part : 5 = 20
Part : 6 = 25
Part : 7 = 28
Part : 8 = 31,32
Part : 9 = 34,35
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Ariya ss : jau kaha...

in ETF office

Rathor ( gusse se) : Rawte tum kab sudhroge ? 😡 apne gusse pr controle rakhna sikho

Arjun : muje kya krna he ye tum se sikhne ki jarurt nhi he SYS 😡

Rathor : kya jarurt thi us admi ko itna marne ki agar vo mar jata to tumhe andaja bhi he kitni badi problm ho sakti thi

Rawte : mar to nhi na 😡

Rathor : mat bhulo tumhare esi gusse ne 5 sal pehle kisi ki jaan li thi agar tun apne gusse pr kabu rakhte to sayad aaj vo hamare bich hoti..

Riya : Rathor sir ye aap...

Rathor : sahi keh rha hu Riya or tum aaj plz apne pati ki side na hi lo to behtar hoga jb dekho tab apni manmani karta rehta he uski vajah se hi mene apni dost ko khoya he

Arjun : sirf tumne akele ne nhi khoya mene bhi apna pyar khoya he samje tum 😡

Ab Rathor ko or bhi gussa ata he vo kya bol rha he usko khud hi nhi pta

Rathor : pyar ko khoya he pr tumhe ab kya fark padta he Rawte tum to apni jindgi me age bad hi gayena Roshni ki jagah Riya agai tumhari jindgi me
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baki ki team shocked hoker un dono ko dekh rhi he sb ki najar ap Arjun pr hi he Arjun bhi Rathor ko dekh rha he

Rathor : ase kya dekh rhe ho jo sach he vhi bol rha hu , ab chup q khade ho bolte q nhi kya fark pada tumhe Roshni ki mot se 😡 bolo damittt...

Arjun ki ankho me anshu agaye vo kuch nhi bol paya vo chup chap apne cabin me chala gaya or Rathor bhi gusse me chala gaya Riya vha ki chair pe beth kr rone lgi

Ayesha : Ri tu ro mat plz

Shree : Ri tu ase royegi to Arjun sir ko kon sambhalega unhe es vakt teri jarurt he ja unke paas

Riya : pr shree

Chotu : Shree sahi keh rha he Ri tu ja

Riya Arjun ke cabin me jati he

Liza : ye sb kya ho gaya yar Rathor sir ko Arjun sir se ye sb nhi kehna chahiye pta nhi eska kya asar hoga Arjun sir pr

Ayesha : muje esi bat ka dar he plz god kuch galat mat hone dena

In Arjun's cabin

Arjun apni chair beth kar kuch soch rha he Riya ander ati he

Riya (darte hua) : Arjun...

Arjun : plz Riya es waqt muje akela chod do

Riya : lekin Arjun..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Arjun : i said leave me alone sunai nhi deta tumhe 😡

Arjun ko ase gusse me dekh kar Riya dar jati he or vo daud kar office se bahar chali jati he sab shock hoker usko dekhte rehte he or vo chali jati he


kesa laga guys ?
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome concept dear.. Accha laga.. Dono ACPs apne gusse pe kab control karenge patha nahi.. kya kya bol dethe hai gusse mein.. dono indirectly Riya ko kithna hurt kiya.. Rathore making riya feel guilty for taking roshini's place in arjun's life and Arjun by shouting on her to leave him alone...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Loved it a lot
post soon please
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Posted: 10 years ago
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just awsm
eagerly waiting 4 next
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update...loved it...how can rathore say that to arjun...he just blamed him for being happy...itna bhi kya gussa...sam hurted riya too blaming her for taking rosh's place in arjun life damn him...i m soo much angry on this sam...cont soon dii thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
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oh god sam 😡 what u've done!!
poor Riya 😔

thnx for ss &PM..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome concept
interesting start
samjun nahi sudhar sakte
riyu ko rulana inka copyright ban gay hai
khadoos ETF ke
waiting for the next

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