A Whisper ~ ArIya Short Shot Chap 4 Pg 20 (15 Feb, '16) *Completed* - Page 7

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Posted: 9 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: Anamkhan126

Awesome story...

i read all in one...
loved it...
bohot suspense hai khatam kardo..
n plz pm me...

Haan haan khatam karongi jaldi
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Originally posted by: sharmaayushi

Wao so nyc updares... Loved it... Riya must hv HD sum reason... Arjun loves riya... Yiiippiiieee... If possible do pm me m a huge ariya fan... Thnk u for such n amazing story... Plz continue soon waiting eagerly... If possible plz do pm me...

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Posted: 9 years ago
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Originally posted by: jeharshu

Just read the two parts

It was amazing os Abhi
Loved it to the core
But the mystery was in revealed
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
Thanks for the pm to alka di nd areesha di
Nd sorry for the late comment

Thnk u so much harshu
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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008

Omg this is freakingly awesome yaar

I love this arjun who is fully latoo on riya

Awww so cute...

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updating
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Originally posted by: KaViannn

update was good.. liked this new avatar of ArIya
please update soon.


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Chapter 3



Key Words :

Normal - Present
Bold - Flash Back
Italic - Flash Back in Flash Back



I looked at her and pulled her inside the house it's was getting quite cold outside and she was visibly freezing due to coldness. As soon as we entered the main room a hot air and homely feeling engulfed us. Though the house was abandon for years but it still had friendly and homely feeling to it.


I made Riya sit on the couch and went inside to make two cup of coffee for us. After few minutes when I came out with the mugs, I found Riya looking at our my and her life size photo frame which was hang over there and was in a very deep thoughts. I could clearly see the wheel going on in her brain because I knew she was thinking about the same day.


"Riya?" I said in process of breaking her thoughts. She turned around in a minute I did saw thousands of emotions going through her face before a blank face came on that pretty face of her. I gave her the cup of coffee I had made for her and signal her to sit on the couch, she took at place without any argument and I too followed the line too settling myself beside her on the couch keeping a majority distances though it was a bitter distaste to me to sit far from her.


We sat there in silence for what seems like hours but to be honest it was hardly 10 minutes, when I heard Riya clearing her throat and opening her mouth to say something but no words came out of her out, as if she was rethinking if she should say what she was about to say. I just kept looking at her. This was the first time I looked at her properly and now I can clearly state she have change a lot, she have gone thinner than before, there was no more the shine in her eyes which before used to be. It hurt me that still knowing the reason I did nothing but let me and her get hurt by him.


I know she wanted to hear the rest of story and I even know the minute before she was going to ask me to continue it too but I know she was unsure if she really wanted to know the story because let's be honest here it was going to hurt both of us equally but I knew she wanted to know and that was exactly what I was going to do now, tell her other half of the story of course from my side story.


"So I was saying before" I started I could clearly see the curiosity in her eyes which made me want to smile but I didn't,


*Flash Back*


I drove off in full speed towards her house, only to get the shock of my lifetime. I parked the car in the front and stormed into the house, I was in the alley of the main room when suddenly I heard a cry. Without even seeing I could tell it was Riya who was crying, but it angered yet confused me at the same time why was she crying? My heart at the moment wanted to run towards are and cuddle her crying form, but my brain was overpowered by the anger which won and made me hate her more if that was possible.


I was going to step in when I heard her dad talk with her, "Sweetie? Why are you crying?" her dad asked her with love.


"Don't call me that dad" shouted Riya, to my utter surprise, because out of all the person how much I knew Riya she respected her dad a lot she would never shout at him I knew that much but here she was doing exact opposite of it, "Dad you should celebrate today, you know why because I finally did what you had asked me to do. I broke him, his heart and along with it I broke mine too" she cried and fell down on the floor. To say I was shocked would be an understatement I was blown out of my life by her words. I was statute at the place. She broke her heart for her father? What are they talking about?


"Oh Riya" Mr. Mukherjee said and went near her to console her but she moved back.


"Don't touch me Dad" Riya flared her anger at her dad.


"Beta, I did it for your welfare only" Mr. Mukherjee said quietly.


Riya gave out a sarcastic laugh and said, "oh please dad don't bullsh*t me. If you really wanted my welfare then you would have never asked me to do what you asked me to do. I love him dad and I will always love him"


"He is bad for you Riya. Arjun is no good for you" Mr. Mukherjee said. His words took away my breath I'm bad for Riya? But why? Mr. Mukherjee always liked me so why is he talking like this about me?


"Why do you think like that dad that Arjun is not good for me? Only because he can't save Roshni? But dad I will like to enlighten you he did every single thing to save her. Roshni was his love dad he didn't leave her like that do die he was helpless" Riya flared with anger and continued, "The guy who was broken after her loved one died you really thing dad that a boy like him would not be a good for me. I pity your thoughts dad I really do"


Unknowingly to me my eyes teared up and a small drop of tear fell down. Mr. Mukherjee looked tried "Sorry Riya but" he was cut off by Riya


"Don't sorry me now dad please don't" Riya said, "I didn't do anything for you I only did it for him, if you would have not said that if I didn't leave him you will de-promote him then I would have never done it. Because I know how much Arjun loved his duty and I can do anything for him" she continued


This broke me she broke my heart, her heart, made herself the bad guy, and made me hate her only because she was saving me? My love for duty? Before I know I ran out of the house and got into the car. It was too much for me to handle in one day.


I was driving endlessly around the streets of Mumbai not knowing what to do? I was ashamed that I believed Riya's lie blindly. I was broken. I cried and cried and cried aimlessly.


Next day when I woke up I found myself in the car at the outskirts of the city. I looked at the watched it said 10:30am. I picked myself up and decided to talk out everything with Riya. I would gladly get de-promote if it would give me chance to live with Riya.


When I reached Riya's house it was nearly 12:30pm, Bahadur the watchman of Riya's house smiled at me I too gave a small smile in returned and asked "Riya madam hai gharpe?"


"Nhi saab Riya madam toh subhe hi chali gyi" Bahadur replied.


"Chali gyi par kidar?" I asked


"Saab madam toh airport gyi unki aaj subhe ki 10:00am ki flight thi New York ki" he said


The only thing that I heard was Riya went forever from my life she is not coming back. I knew but somewhere there was a hope of her coming back. And I hold on that hope and without uttering a word I walked towards my car and drove off.


*Flash Back End*


I looked at Riya I saw her crying and I can bet that I'm also crying. It hurt me seeing her go through so much alone yet me knowing everything. I swear on my luck and went towards her and hugged the day lights out of her and too my surprise she hugged me back with same powered. It made my heart happy.


"Ri, why didn't you tell me about your father's this condition?" I asked breaking the hug


"Arjun, Jun you- I didn't wanted you to get de-promoted I know how much you loved your job" Riya said crying in my arms


I cupped her face in my hand and made her looked into my eyes, "But Riya" I was cut by Riya


"Please Arjun I don't want to talk about it" Riya said and hugged me tightly.


From this night everything changed again. The day after this night was surprise for all ETFian as they saw a new me. I was back to normal all were happy. I and Riya were back on friendship term. Though deep down I knew I still loved her and she too loved me but I know it was hard for her and me to close the distance which was created in this 2 years. I just hoped that time will cure everything.


*Present*


My train of thoughts were broken by me stubbing on to a stone.


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Merry Christmas! I thought to give you guys a Christmas gift. So here it is Update. Hope you guys like it


Thank you so much for keeping up with me. I wrote this yesterday itself for you guys. I hope its amazing and you guys love it. If you guys have any question please do ask, and thank you once again. Enjoy!


A special thanks to Alka and Areesha (I dont know you too personally) still thank you for sending PMs for my work it means a lot to me.


Like always No PMs if anyone is free enough do send PMs of this story and do share with your friends if you think its worth sharing.


- Abhilasha (Abhi)


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Edited by Cieli.Santi - 9 years ago
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NOTE


Hello! Hie!
First of all Merry Christmas to all my lovely, amazing reader out here.
This is a small Christmas gift for you guys from me a update, which took years to get complete. So I hope I did justice with the update anyways from update I will come to main point of this note.

Updates? Which I'm lazy as hell to give. So here is the sequence or whatever it is of updates
I'm going to update the story in this way

1. A Whisper - All parts of this Shot will be updated first until this doesnt gets over no other story of my will be update until this is over. Given the fact this story is left with only one chapter and I guess epilogue (Not decided yet)

2. I Trust You my first ever FF on ArIya well this FF has still long way to go and not gonna end any time soon so this and Case Dairy (my another short story which I nearly forgot that its there and thank you to buterfly7 (sorry dont know your name) for reminding me of it) this two will be updated simultaneously but more my concentration will be on Case Dairy.

Anyways thats all I want to say. And yeah all update will mostly start from 2016 new year.
And Once again MERRY CHRISTMAS And HAPPY NEW YEAR to all.
-Abhilasha

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