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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
ye story mast hai
ek kand khatam nhi hota k dusra ho jata hai
part 7-10 comments pending hai to sabke ek sath hi de deti hu
first aisha yogesh k jaal me fas gyi
yogesh aisha ki soch se ek kadam aage nikla
but don't fear jab shree and sam is here
sam aur shree ne time pr aisha ko bacha lia
aur chip bhi hasil kr li
chip se bahut kuch information mili
next bomb sam ne aisha ko naukri se nikal dia 😲😲😲
ye jante huye bhi k aisha apna kam hi kr rhi thi to kya hua k wo sucessful nhi ho pai
pr kr to kam hi rhi thi...
commissioner k kehne pr sam k pass aisha ko team me rakhne k alwa koi option nhi hai
shree ko bhi aisha ki help ki zarurat hai
fir agla bomb masa babasa at sam's home 😆
iss bomb ka dhamaka to solid aur zordar hua 😆😆😆
sam ko pad bhi gyi...bechare ko pta bhi nhi hai k uski shadi ho gyi hai 😆
Arjun mission pe tha naa...uska mission kahin sam pr nazar rakhna to nhi tha 😆😆
Mission se time nikal kr usne bina check kiye hi sam ki chugli masa babasa ko lga di 😆
aur ab masa babasa sam se kuch nhi sun na chahte...sam ko ghar se nikal dia...
bechara sam jaise taise aisha k ghar pahuchta...to ek aur bomb fut gya...😆
aisha gayab...waise commissioner ne to bola tha wo railway station gyi hai
ye sam airport kaise pahuch gya...
Mr. Sameer Selfish by god...ek dum perfect naam dia hai sam ko..iss story k according
mere sam ko selfish bana dia 😲😲😲
Aisha help nhi karegi...to sameer beghar ho jayega 😆
ab aya uth pahad k niche...ab ayega asli mazaa


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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
wow, sameeksha fightn was awesome
continue soon dear...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Snehajain

Awesome update...

Sameer ko thappad aur daant padi...😆😆😆
Masa & Babasa ko Arjun ne bataya ki Sameer ne shaadi kar li hai...😆😆😆
Par Arjun toh Aisha ko janta hai na??😕😕😕
Aisha city jhodke ja rahi hai...
Sameer usko rokh raha taki woh Aisha ko apne parents ke samne wife bata sakhe...😡😡😡
Aisha ko bilkul nahi manna chahiye...🥱🥱🥱

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...



nope arjun aisha ko nahi janata
k
arjun misssion pe chala gaya tab aisha ne ETF join ki😊😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44

Chapter 11

Sameer," k...fine let's go."

Sameer drive towards Aisha's house.

Sameer was thinking about something.

Here Aisha opens door.

Before Aisha, close door Sameer enter in her house and slump on sofa.

Aisha gets shock by this.😲😲

Sameer," This is because of you only. I don't have house. So I will stay here only in your house. Your house is quite nice.

Aisha,"no, you cannot. My neighbors what will they think if they saw you. No, you should find another place.

Sameer," neighbors? You should think about it first only not now. I am homeless that is because of you only. The day you come in my life you make it hell."

Aisha," that's not my fault and you also get agree for that identity not only me."

Sameer," I do not know. I did that for only our mission."

Aisha," So what you think I become your wife that too was only mission.

Sameer come near to her.

Sameer," oh really. Fine I am going."

Sameer start to leave that place.

Aisha (in mind)," stop him Aisha. At this time where he will stay. You are not rude like him. How could you do like that?"

Aisha," sir..."

Sameer stops.

Aisha," fine. You can stay here for one night. Tomorrow we will think about your parents."

Sameer further didn't argue with her as he need her.

Aisha went towards her room.

Sameer went toward photo of Aisha and her family hanging on wall. There was her parent's photo with flowers all around, symbolizing that they are no more. One photo shows Aisha, her parents and her brother.

Next photo was Aisha and her brother. Her brother well builds man. Sameer was shock to see him. Her brother was looking like boxer and having one pony.

Next photo was of Aisha. Sameer was staring at her photo.

Sameer (in mind)," What if her brother get know that she loves me or I am staring at her photo. He will punch me or he will force me to marry her. Boss we will meet soon. I can't show my 😡😡anger by beating your sister but when you will come in front of me I will cut you into pieces."

His thought break by aisha's voice.

Aisha,"sir..."

Sameer,"hmmm.."

Aisha pointing at room," That is my brother's room you can use it and this for you. You get fresh I will make dinner.

Aisha gets busy in kitchen.

AISHA'S BROTHER ROOM

That was weird.

When he enters in room, first he saw photo of two body builders. His room was filling by this type of photos only.

He compares himself with her brother. He gets fresh. Once again, he takes look of his room. He went to balcony. He can enjoy fresh air there. There was only street lamp. All were in deep sleep. There was no one outside.

Sameer's phone rang. That was arjun.

Arjun,"ye he hurry congo my bestie get married. You didn't call me. How can you keep this big secrete to me?"

Sameer😡😡,"sale kamine who told you that I get married? tumhare vajese me buri tarah se fas gaya hu. Mujhe ek bar puch lete to kya mamala hai direct masa ko inform kar diya. Meri koi shadi nahi huyi wo sab mission ke liye tha."

Arjun,"tuze kya lagata hai me ullu hu. Teri kisi bhi story pe trust nahi karne wala. Ek toh mujhe shadi me nahi bulaya aur uparase apane tewar dikha raha he. Kal aa raha hu me tere ghar pe dekh lunga tuze vahi pe. Bye."

Arjun cut the call.

Aisha knocks door.

Sameer,"yes. Come in."

Aisha," dinner is ready."

Sameer nods and come at dining table.

Aisha serves him food.

That was delicious and mouthwatering; as Sameer smell it, He lost in aroma.

Both starts.

Aisha (in mind),"I knew it he will not utter one word. He will never praise me. This is too much. First, I gave him place now food but he did not say thanks to me. That is ur fault dump. You always think about him but he never. I will take REVENGE Mr. Sameer Rathod u will pay for this."

Sameer was eating silently.

Sameer(in mind),"delishious. i thought she only know kisika bheja kaise pakate hai but she know how to cook? Wow."

Aisha was staring at him.

Sameer feel pair of eye on him.

Sameer,"what?"

Aisha,"aapko aur kuch chahiye?"

Sameer,"no."

Sameer and aisha finish their meal.

Aisha,"😃goodnight sir."

But Sameer went to his room without saying anything.

Aisha (in mind)😡😡😡😡,"THIS IS TOO MUCH."

Aisha thinks while doing stuff in kitchen.

Aisha,(in mind),"this is too much aisha. Now your time. What he say I MAKE HIS LIFE HELL. Now see Mr. Sameer rathod what will I do."

Before going to her room she bang sameer's room door.

There room was opposite to each other.

When Sameer open, the door there was no one. Sameer knocks Aisha's door. but, no response.

Again he knock.

Aisha,"kya hai so jayiye muze nind aa rahi hai."

She yelled without opening door.

Sameer close his room's door.

Aisha again come outside and bangs his door.

Sameer,"NOW THIS IS TOO MUCH."

Now Sameer open the door but again there was no one.

Aisha was controlling her laugh.😆😆😆😆

This time Sameer did not close door lean against door.

Aisha again opens door and shock to see him.

Being normal

Aisha,"kya hua aap soye kyu nahi darwaje pe kyu khade hai. K... kk... Apki merzi me kitchen me ja rahi thi coffee banaye aap lenge."

Sameer,"pagal ho itani rat ko coffee??"

Aisha,"ha meri adat hai."

She ran towards kitchen.

Sameer went there.

Sameer,"agar tumane mere room ka darwaza firse bajaya toh mujase bura koi nahi honga.😡😡😡"

Aisha nods.

She laughs at his antic.😃😃😃

Aisha,"ab kuch aur sochana padega."

After making coffee aisha went to her room and play music in loud voice that Sameer could hear that.

Sameer woke up from sleep.

Sameer ," ye toh aisha ke kamare se awaz aa rahi he ye ladki pagal ho gayi hai."

He bang door.

No response

This time with more force

Aisha opens door

Aisha,"what happen?"

Sameer enter in her room and stops music player.

Aisha,"ye kya kar ho aap?"

Sameer,"are you mad itani rat ko music kyu play kar rahi hu?"

Aisha,"muze nind nahi aa rahi thi aur mujhe music loud me sunana pasand hai. Aur by the way ye mera ghar hai me kuch bhi kar sakti hu."

Sameer,"dekho aisha me pahalehi pareshan hu aise kam karke mujhe aur mat tang karo."

Aisha,"me tang kar rahi me... To thik hai chale jayiye yahase."

Sameer,"muze yahape rakhakar ehasan nahi kar rahi ho."

Aisha,"accha get out from here aur muzase umeed mat rakhana ke me aapke ghar aaungi chale jayiye yahase shakal nahi dekhani apki muze."

Sameer went from there and stays outside whole night.

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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
superb update...
maine itna bada comment likha but wo post hi nhi hua 😡😡😡
lo aisha sam k ghar nhi gyi to sam aisha k ghar aa gya
sam bahut zyda chalak hai
bechari aisha uske ek taraf kua aur ek taraf khai
sam k ghar kyun jaye wo sam ki biwi ban kr
aur agar sam uske ghar rahega to log kya sochenge
sam aisha ki family pictures dekh rha hai
aisha k bhai ki pics dekh kr to uski halat kharab hi hai
by god ab aisha k bhai ki entry aur karwa do mast mazaa aayega
arjun ka call...😆😆😆
sam is too much thanks bi nhi bola
aisha ne good kia
finally sam ko ghar se bahar fek dia
wo isi layak hai...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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owe, tom & Jerry fight superb continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update. ...

Aisha Sameer ke ghar nahi gayi...😃😃😃
Sameer toh blackmail karke Aisha ke ghar rukh raha hai. ...😲
Aisha ne Sameer ko rehne ke liye ghar diya, khane ko diya...aur usne thank you tak nahi bola...🥱
Aisha ne Sameer mast pareshan kiya...Hehehe. ..Rofl Rofl Rofl Rofl
Aisha ne Sameer ko ghar se bahar fek diya...rofl rofl

continue soon. ..thanks for pm...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hey read ur story in one go
so funny yaaar sam aur aisha bicchare
aisha loves sam lekin sam nahi
mission par gadbad
fir aakr sam ke parents ne ghar se bahar
aisha ne bhi nikal diyaa
arjun ne locche kar diye
continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Chapter 12

Sameer call at home.

Fortunately, babasa pick up the call.

Sameer,"I tried to make understand her but she doesn't, you tell what should I do?"

Babasa," I can understand you. Son, after marriage all men went to same situation. But I never thought this will happen to you. Good now I also get company. 😃"

Sameer," babasa I am in trouble and you are kidding. How is masa?"

Babasa," Nothing just thinking about her daughter-in-law. She will break if her get to know that she is not rajstani.."

Sameer,"wow! Great! She is not rajstani😃😃"

Babasa,"she will cut you into pieces."

Masa," With whom you are talking?"

Babasa,"wo.. wo ... Sameer."

Masa,"give me phone."

Sameer,"hello babasa what happen?"

Masa,"I am talking. First tell me she is rajstani or not?"

Sameer," Nope."

Masa," you make her understand or not."

Sameer," ya but she refuse to come at home."

Masa," How could she do like that, you don't tell her that I called her. Sameer, what type of girl you married. How many girl I show you but you refuse them and marry that girl."

Sameer,"masa..."

Masa," let it be. Tell where she lives? Give me her address."

Sameer," no masa leave it she is nut. She is crazy. I don't mind if she insult me but can't tolerate but said something wrong to you."

Masa,"ab bada pyar aa raha he muzpar. Teri masa kaha gayi thi jab tu shadi kar raha tha muzase bina puchake. Jyada natak mat kar address chahiye uska ."

Sameer give it to her.

Masa,"aur ghar aa ja fresh hoke office ko jana."

Sameer sigh as masa allow him to house.

Immediately Sameer call aisha.

Aisha," I don't want to talk with you."

Sameer,"to phone kyu uthaya dammit listen masa aane wali tumhare ghar par toh ready rehana."

Aisha,"maassa kyu??"

Sameer,"jis kam ke liye kal me tumhare ghar aaya tha usi kam ke ab dekhata hu me tum kaise mere ghar pe nahi ati. Kal tumane meri bezati ki masa ki mat karana warana mehangaa pedaga."

Sameer cut the call.

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Aisha's home

Aisha (in mind),"ab kya karu me???? Sir ki masa aane wali hai. What to do?"

She gets ready and wears white and yellow salwar kamiz.

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Sameer reach to home and saw lock on door.

He took key, hide under the mat.

He gets fresh and thinks what will happen, if masa meet aisha.

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At 11:00 PM

Masa and babasa reached at Aisha's home.

Aisha opens the door and touches their feet.

Masa,"ha... k...k.. god may bless you. You may live long."

Babasa also bless her.

Aisha welcomes them.

Masa and babasa take their seat.

Aisha went to kitchen and bought water.

Aisha," What will you take tea or something else?"

Babasa,"tea." With big smile.😃😃😃

But it vanish as masa glare at him.😕😕

Masa,"no no we don't want anything. We come here for talking about Sameer and you."

Babasa," yes, We don't want anything."

Masa," please, will you keep silent. Don't interrupt us. There is no need of men to talk between two monen. This is my fault that I bring you with me."

Aisha was shock but enjoying their quarrel.

Masa,"you keep silence. I am here to talk with her."

Masa to aisha," so where was i? hmm I want to talk about Sameer. All these men are same. They always want to quarrel with us. They think that they are man so they are always correct and we are wrong.

Babasa (in mind)," 😡😡she is insulting men in front of me and I can't say anything. Let it be Sameer is with me. Let's see what my son will do when he will get experience like me."

Aisha," no. I don' want to come. He always quarrels with me and gives order to me. Last night he came but he quarrels with me."

Aisha (in mind)," now this is correct time. You are girl; use your weapon, your tears. Aisha starts crying.😭"

Masa," hey. Don't cry. I can understand you. I also had gone through this condition."

Babasa, (in mind)," no, she always make me cry and says she had gone through such condition."

Masa to babasa," what are you thinking? Console her.

Babasa nods.

Babasa,"hmm. Beta don't cry. All will be fine. Sameer is nice boy. This type of things happens between wife and husband. Further, he continues his lecture.

Masa," 😡😡stop it now you are very talkative. I said na keep quiet."

Babasa,"😡😡😡 what is your problem huh? I am controlling my anger. You are insulting men though I didn't say in front of daughter-in law. Now you are crossing you limit. You want to talk with her personal then why you bring me?"

Masa," 😡see, all men are same. First your son quarrel with his wife now you start.

Seeing their quarrel, Aisha stops crying.

Now masa starts crying.😭

Babasa," what you said? All men are same. No all women are same. They only know how to cry, how to use their weapon, and showing of how they innocent.

Masa's shed more tear.😭😭

Aisha to babasa," don't be angry. Calm down."

Aisha calm down masa.

Masa to aisha," tell him to say sorry to me."

Babasa to aisha,"tell her I am nto going to say sorry."

Masa," tell him I will not make dinner tonight."

Babasa," no need, my daughter-in-law is there she will cook for me, aren't you?"

Masa stare at aisha.

Aisha is confusion, it is difficult for her to say yes or no.😕"

Aisha," don't worry I will cook for trio."

And give stern smile.

Babasa," but for that you have to come at home. Go and pack your luggage.

Aisha sees towards masa.

Masa,"hmm... let's go I will see him at home."😡😡😡

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Edited by meeshu55 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awsm pts luvd it
thnx fr pm
cnt soon..

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