Sikander-Shanaya SS : Dangerous Ishq [Chapter 14 - pg 28]

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Annu

@Chulbuli_Annu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#31

nice start
but disappionted with shanaya character
how could arjun treat her like this
shanaya ko arjun ko ulta jawb dena chahiye tha
don't make her second riya jo arjun ka faltu ka gussa sehti hai
arjun ko bi pta hona chahiye k shanyana bi shadi k liye majbur hai
sikki stole d whole update
ek br fir arjun sik amne samne ayenge

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

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Posted: 10 years ago

#32

Loved it Neha

Awesome Start dear

I really feel pity for Shanu & Arjun poor souls

unke parents samjhte hi nahin ki ye rishta kisi ko khushi nahin de sakta

& their EBM hey Bhagwaan

Hmm interesting so siki in the end of update nice entry planning

Well loved the bond between Shanaya & Neha

like true friends & sisters

Hmm Arjun ko Shanaya pe gussa nahin karna chahiye tha

Its not her fault

well lets see aage kya hota hai

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon

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Anjali

@Angel_Arya

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#33

Awesome

loved it

Poor Arjun...forcefully engaged

Conti soon

Thanks for the pm

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swethalovely

@swethalovely

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Posted: 10 years ago

#34

Awesome update...
Loved it a lot...
Poor arjun and shanu...
Continue soon..
Thanks for the pm

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#35

Awesome update

Loved it.

Poor Shanaya and Arjun

Kash unke parents samajh pate

So sik is into picture

Interesting

Waiting for the next part

Continue soon

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#36

Chapter 1:-

Sorry for late comment

Awosome update..

Both shanaya n arjun engaged just for their parents..

Arjun get angry on shanaya..

Neha n vik are awesome..

Sik is keeping eye on shanaya..

Plz continue soon

Thanks 4 pm

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Princess_Pataka

@Princess_Pataka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#37

wow diii

awesome concept

haar story mein roshni maar hi jati hai

kesi ladki hai roshni

shuru hone se pehle hi maar jati hai

Shanaya ki shaadi bina usski marzi ke ho rhi hai

Poor Shanaya

kuch kr bhi nhi sakati

pm me next part didu

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

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Posted: 10 years ago

#38

Naina Singh commented..

hummm

shanaya arjun forcefully engageed
roshni ko arjun naahi bhul sakta
neha trying to make things better
sikki ne shayana ke baare me pataa lagay
continue soon

Debosree Pyne commented...

i think i have forgotten to comment on the CS...nways awesome one...loved it partner...specially your hot and saucy Sikander.. ;)

now coming to the first chapter...
nice start...i am not sure of the story right now...but all that took my attention here was sikander...the show stealer as i call him.. hehehehe

i am bit confused about sanaya's character...once she opposes firmly against her father's decision...again the next time she takes in arjun's wrath fearfully...

she isnt happy with the marriage either then why is she trying to behave like a wife or a lover getting a tea for him and stuff...

i would have loved to see some attitute in her too...
neha and vikram...:D

continue soon...mere hero ke bar emain aur kya kahu...thanks for the pm...

Edited by Godly_Affection - 10 years ago