Sikander-Shanaya SS : Dangerous Ishq [Chapter 14 - pg 28] - Page 12

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

Omg neha coma me he..

Aur idhar shanaya sik ke pass..
Ab kya hoga..?
Plz continue soon
Thanks 4 pm

stay tuned n keep commenting to know what happens!😃
Edited by Godly_Affection - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

read the two pending updates together...
liked them...
they were interesting and perfectly descriptive...👏
but i felt shanaya-siki convo a bit too outspoken...
even how strong a girl is...when it comes to her her dignity she would feel the thud poke at her heart...even as much one tries she couldnt keep her self calm and composed...not even the bravest officers...😳
but shanaya seemed extreme at that part...
moreover siki was supposed to be heartless and flared with such indecent talks about him..
he was not expected to show his weakness or get emotional...
'mood off kar diya'?? really?? even when the camisole was gone??🥱
that part seemed a bit hiked for me...
otherwise well written and nicely plotted...
continue soon...😊

Glad you liked it Di😳
Sik-Shanaya's convo..I do agree with your views but it is just fantasy..yahan kuch bhi ho sakta he.. real thodi he? But will take care next time surely!😳
stay tuned n keep commenting!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Chulbuli_Annu

Nice part dear

as rimi said mujhe wahi part thoda ajeeb lga
I mean strong dikhana achcha hai...pr ise khud k pair pr khulhadi marna kehte hai
and Sikander ek ladki ne use itna kuch suna dia...aur wo apne mood ko lekar baitha hai
wo sikki hai...drug lord uske muh pr ek ladki ne itna kuch keh dia
aur wo keh rha hai mood kharab kr dia 😲😲😲
Neha pr attack and neha ko vik k ghar shift krne ki taiyari
mujhe ek cheez samjha do...kya Mr. Senior Rawte ko Vik k bare me nhi pta
k wo bhi kafi rich hai...syad uske baad unhe Vik se problem nhi hoti
and Neha ka no so called mangetar...ye to gya kam se
neha hi nhi rahegi hospital me to diwaro se milne aana 😆

Glad you liked it Di😳
Sik-Shanaya's convo..I do agree with your views but it is just fantasy..yahan kuch bhi ho sakta he.. real thodi he? But will take care next time surely!😳
Mr. Rawte ko nahi pata Vik ke baare me.. dekhte he ye jaan-ne ke baad ki wo rich he, wo mante he ya nahi!😉
haha..sahi he..aage aage dekhiye ye no so called mangetar kya karta he😉
stay tuned n keep commenting!😃
Edited by Godly_Affection - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Naina Singh

neha ki jaaan khatare mekoi
shanaya aur sikki
shanaya ne sikki ke sath jo kiyaa
sikki ki band baza di
vikram ghar superb techno hi fi
sameer and me impressed
continue soon

Glad you liked it Dear😳
Glad that you liked the house!😳
stay tuned n keep commenting!😃
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Posted: 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
YAAH ME FIRST

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Coming to update *************

Love it neha
awesome update
I am just feeling bad about Arjun
things are geting more comlicated for him
he is already tense aout Neha & Shanaya too
now Shanaya parents are also pointing him
loved the small scene of Vikram & Neha
He is really caring I really think his love will bring neha back
FBs of Vikram & Neha were too cute
lets see ab aage siki ka kya plan hai
Shanaya ko dava se sula diya aakhir Aquib ka plan kya hai
I really hope kuch galat gone se pehle ETF wahah paunch jaaye
waise bhi Aquib ke baar main they knew
waiting for the next chapter
thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊
Edited by --GOLD-- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Res! Me 2nd. 😉/ Unress! Awsum Update Chutki..!! 🤗 So Shanaya thinking abt her Chutki, But sahi hai..!! "Meri Chutki Faulad Hai..!!" 😉 Aqib and his men can try killing her and they will fail misrably! 😆 Sik-Shanaya's Scene was..☺️☺️ They have that fleeting closeness and Sparks are flying but this will take some time! 😉 Mr And Mrs Mukherjee worried for their daughter and Mr Mukherjee ka saara gussa Arjun par nikla! 😆 Neha-Viku Scene was cutest! ❤️ Me too love Atif and The Song! ❤️ Their FB was Sweet..❤️ Neha nhi sudharne wali..!! 🤣 So Sameer-Arjun cum to know that Shan was working on Sikander unofficially! 🤔 Sameer thinking that Neha might know abt the Death Threats, But Arjun knows his Sister. ETF On Work! Aqib dosed Shanaya wid Sedatives, whats his plan now? 😲 ETF finds a Dead body with Shanaya's Clothes but Is that her body? 😉 Dont think so! 😛 Vivaan. 😡😡 Yeh Aise Nhi Manega! Thanxx Fr Pm.. Continuee Soonz!
Edited by .Enchantress. - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
I really like the part...jahaan shanaya k kadpo wali body mili...
aur uska face kharab ho chuka hai
kuch derr k liye hi sahi pr etf ko distract to kr hi dia...
vik is really missing Neha...hope neha jald thik ho jaye
neha ka mangetar...ye pakka jaldi arjun se pitega...
Shanaya k dad...unhe ye lg rha hai k shanaya ko jan bujh kr chupaya gya hai
taki arjun aur shanaya ki shadi naa ho
hey ram...uper wala itna dimag kisi ko naa de
atleast wo ye to soch lete k neha bhi hospital me hai..jo ki shanaya k sath thi
neha ki condition to natak nhi ho skti...
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Posted: 10 years ago

And mujhe kya pata karna padega?

Arrey Sam ne kaha na? Shree pata lagao???

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Okay jokes apart,

I really loved the conversation between Sikandar and Shanaya *good work Shanaya!* They were realistic and pretty much what a girl like Shanaya would say...

However I think it's high time that Shana uses her brain more than her mouth. Reverse psychology of triggering Sikandar because then he wouldn't react is brilliant... but there will be a point when it would backfire and now it's close to that.

It's time Shanaya starts to analyze Sikki... it would help her more, if she keeps on talking then her expectancy of being safe will reduce drastically.

OMG, I am sure Aqib has no noble intentions! I really hope that everything is fine and Sik storms in at the right time!

Continue soon... I really love this story!

You know who 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: --GOLD--

YAAH ME FIRST

🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳



Coming to update *************

Love it neha
awesome update
I am just feeling bad about Arjun
things are geting more comlicated for him
he is already tense aout Neha & Shanaya too
now Shanaya parents are also pointing him
loved the small scene of Vikram & Neha
He is really caring I really think his love will bring neha back
FBs of Vikram & Neha were too cute
lets see ab aage siki ka kya plan hai
Shanaya ko dava se sula diya aakhir Aquib ka plan kya hai
I really hope kuch galat gone se pehle ETF wahah paunch jaaye
waise bhi Aquib ke baar main they knew
waiting for the next chapter
thanks for the PM
Continue soon 😊

Glad you liked it Di!😃
hmm.. Arjun is in complicated situation.. dekhte he ki use koun bachata he😉
yes, Vik will surely bring back Neha.. stay tuned to know how!😉
Siki aur Akib kya karte he ye pata chal jayega!
stay tuned!

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