FF : Mysty Secrets...Ch 2/ pg 5 updt 12/4/15

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Snehajain

@Snehajain

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Awesome update...

Kya start hai Thakur...dil khush kar diya...🤗🤗🤗

" idiot box "...🤣🤣🤣

LOL...Sameer ke room mein ussi ko entry nahi hai...😆😆😆

Waah...dress pe toothpaste gir gaya toh usko do rahi thi...😆😆😆

Annu must be looking sooo cute in his shirt...😆😆😆

Shree is villian...🤣🤣🤣

Annu ka 'l' aur 'r' locha khatam ho gaya...🥱🥱🥱

Aisha se toh ab Annu darti nahi ulta Aisha ko darati hai...😆😆😆

Annu mummy se jhagda karke Dost ke ghar aa gayi...😆😆😆..isko kehte hai dosti...😆😆😆

Anmol Batra ki involvement aur kuch organisations ki wajah se yeh case ETF ko mila hai...🥱🥱🥱

Anmol Batra...😉😛😆

Team can have sketches from Noor & Mona...😃😃😃

Ab yeh Sakshi kahan hai...😆😆😆

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Loved it Rimi

Awesome update

It was subtle , interesting & a very good strat

hmm so its not that simple

its high profiled case

Case details sounds interesting & also secretive

& what to say about our beloved Anu

she is really cute & smjun ko pareshaan karna wo apna adhikaar samjhti hai 😆

poor Sam uski nayi shirt ..

loved all her banters .

lets see how case progresses

Thanks for the PM

Continue soon 😊

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NainaSM

@NainaSM

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

nice part

love annu awww so cute

sam ki shirt me

aisha and annu

annu and etf bonding superb

casee interesting

continue soon

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Areesha

@Areesha566

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#24

So finally the story begins
Case is interesting
Love to see annu, she's soo cute
Di you and many more didi'swrite soo amazingly beautiful that i think my writing is nothing comparison to yours writing
Anyways leave it
Awesome update
Thanks for pm
Update soon

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ariyabestfan

@ariyabestfan

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

wah..its story me bhi annu..tank u dear..

tumne toh mera din bana diya..

just love annu..

sam bechara..lol..

hmm..case is going to be mysterious..

plz continue soon

thanks 4 pm

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Swara85

@Swara85

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Rimi..Firstly Thank You so much for bringing Annu here..🤗

"an extraterrestrial alien covered in a headless hoody"...😆
What a cute scene it was..! I liked it.!😃
Aww..! Annu and Aisha had a fight so she traveled to Sam's home..😆I love Annu and her bonding with others..Its always a treat to read her scenes.❤️

Oh the case begins..and the investigative part was nicely written..Its kind of different from the cases I have read so far..And that's what is making me get more involved in this story.
I loved the part..It was very very nice...Written well.👍🏼
Thanks for pm...continue soon.

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laila

@laila1994

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

Read the first chapter.

It was a filler, I guess.

honestly, Prologue was more thrilling than the first chap. The fire scene was simply brilliant and it was nothing like I have ever read on this forum. Your cruelity is more appealing Vamp🤪

Anyway, from the very beginning you have shown that this is not going to be another simple case. I am looking forward to it.

RR's enrty and commissioners restlessness...It all reminded me of a certain Arjun episode(I don't remember the name).

From the very beginning till the end you kept the essence of each character intact.

The case proceeding were usual and very well written.

continue soon.

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Delusional Minx

@Delusional_Minx

Stunner

+ 32

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

Awesome update Di

loved it

poor Sam.. Annu is at his home.. she's feeling 'at home' he isn't🤣 he is desparate to go.. n wants to pull her out the way she was.. but he is still a gentleman🤣

So Annu is grown up..little.. Aisha ko darati hai.. Shree villian.. so cute!! 🤣

the case details were written perfectly!

Ab Sakshi kahan gayi??

waiting to know

do continu soon

thanks for pm