Arjun ss : a new begining....(alka) part : 6 , pg : 11&12 , 10/9 - Page 5

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Posted: 10 years ago
#41
bohut hi acha
very good
just love it
sorry could not comments on previous ones
but it was fabulous
continue soon
thx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#42
Part : 4

ak ladki ke piche kuch gunde pade hua hote he , vo khud ko bachane ke liye bhagti he dodte dodte vo kisi se takra jati he or gir jati he

girl : aahhh oy andha he kya dekh ke nhi chal sakta

ladki gir gai he es liye vo ladke ke samne dekhe bina hi bol rhi he

man : me to dekh ke hi chal rha tha pr sayad tum kuch jyada jaldi me thi

girl khadi hoke ladke ko dekh ke

girl : jaldi me to hogi hi na yha jaan pe jo ban aayi he 😔

Man usko dekh ke socked ho jata he vo kuch bol hi nhi pata he tabhi kuch gundo ki avaj sunai deti he

girl : he bhagvan lgta he vo log agye ab kya karu vo bhagne ki koshis krti he pr vo ladka usko pakd leta he

girl : ye kya kr rhe ho chodo muje

pr vo kuch bolta nhi he bs uske samne dekhta hi reh gaya he to vo ladki usko jor se dhakka deke bhagne lagti he tabhi ladka hos me akr

Riyaaa keh ke chillata he

girl : (socked) esko mera name kese pata kahi yebhi to un gundo me se ak nhi

vo piche mudke dekhti he vo ladka uske piche arha he ye dekh kr vo or tej bhagti he
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Riya : ohhh kana ji kaha fas gai me ak se picha chuta nhi or dusra agaya ab kya karu, ak kam krti hu kahi chup jati hu

Riya ak jagah dekh kr chup jati he

vo ladka Riya ko hr jagah dhundta he pr vo usko kahi nhi milti he

vo Riya hi thi ya koi nhi Arjun vo Riya kese ho sakti he vo to mar chuki he 😔

Arjun : (to himself) jis kam ke liye aye ho uspr dhyan do Arjun Riya yha ho hi nhi sakti

Arjun vaha se chala jata he or Riya bhi apne ghar chali jati he

ase hi kuch din gujar jate he

in Riya's house

Riya's nani : Riya beta tum ye kam chod q nhi deti kya milega isse tumhe jo ho gaya bhul jao sb q apni jaan khatre me dal rhi ho

Riya : nhi nani jab tk me apna badla nhi le lungi muje chain nhi milega , aap bataiye nani kese chod du ye sb kese chain se rehne du un logo ko jinhone hmara chain chin liya , jisne mujse mera sb kuch chin liya 😭 , unlogo ko unke kiye ki saja diye bager muje mot nhi asakti nani

Nani : pr beta ...cut by Ri

Riya : plz nani muje mt Rokiye
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
Riya : 8 sal bit gaye us hadse ko pr aaj bhi jb bhi apni ankhe band krti hu muje vo sb dikhai deta he unki chikhe mere kano me gunjati he nani unko khone ka dard aaj bhi muje chain se jine nhi de rha he 😭

Riya : me samj sakti hu beta tum pr kya bit rhi hogi tum kitni choti thi jb ye sb hua , thik ab mebhi tuje nhi rokungi or muje pura yakin he to un guneh garo ko jarur saja dilvayegi

Riya : muje bhi us pal ka intjar he nani jb me un sb ko unke kiye ki saja dungi

Nani : kana ji (krishna) tumhe in bure logo se ladne ki sakti de

Riya : hmmm thank u nani 😊

Nani : ab jao jake fresh ho jao me khana lagati hu fir sath mil ke khate he

Riya : thik he me abhi ati hu

Riya apne room me chali jati he

Nani : (praying god ) he krishna mery bachhi ki raksha krna jis rah pr vo chal rhi he vha mot ke alava or kuch nhi he ab ak aap hi sahara he hamesa uske sath hi rehna 😭

ase hi kuch din or bit jate he
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
Fantastic update
Loved it
Like riya's emotions lot too emotional
Continue soon
Thnk for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Nice update
Loved it
Waiting for the next part
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
wah...
thnk u thnk u so much yr
Riya k liye I really want Riya back in this
I just love them nd really wanted them as a couple in this
luv u

continue soon nd thnx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
OMG
ye kya twist h Mene pehle pdha hi nhi ye hmari ri to h na
yr ab to plz jldi update krna
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
wow dear it's awsm story
really very nice
just love it
thanx 4 pm
eagerly waiting 4 next
update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Nice one
beautifully written

Conti soon

Thanks for the pm

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