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Posted: 9 years ago
Hehe I was just about to post.. I know I haven't been here in a while :(
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Originally posted by: Swara85

Part 11
Aww..I feel bad for vikrant. -- Haha, do you now? ๐Ÿ˜›
Red-i liked the way things related to it also that it has different meanings too. Not just love. I liked red from their pov.
All emotions they were going through during the shaadi, with every scene, reached out. They were so clear, it felt real. Like thinking to be in their place, feel what they felt. It was so real. It felt real.
๐Ÿ˜ณ -- I am very glad๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ To be honest, that was my favourite part when it came to writing it.


I Loved their last night at deogarh.
The letter was good..and you know how much i love letters..
-- Of course!
singh..as you said he is in disguise..toh I'm thinking he might be..
๐Ÿค”Sam is upset. he is right in his place but they all did what they could. Besides, humare ACP ke bina case solve ho aisa ho nahi sakta..Haina Ritu๐Ÿ˜‰.?

-- Aur kya!๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Oh and the dream..
๐Ÿ˜ณIt is the highlight..I loved it the most and aftermath (Arjun's) also.๐Ÿ‘๐ŸผThe song was perfect..Thank You for using it here. Do I have
to say anything about the song here..
?โ˜บ๏ธ

-- Hehehehe I know, I know.๐Ÿ˜†

The man died..well, tujhse yahi expected tha.๐Ÿ˜†
But but I loved this whole chapter to the t, even with the case thing.

๐Ÿ‘๐ŸผWell done Ritu.๐Ÿ‘ Aur kya bolu..This is one of my Fav chapters..โ˜บ๏ธโค๏ธ

Part 12
Aww..
๐Ÿ˜ณThanku sooo muchh Ritu..mere liye dedicate kiya..๐Ÿค—๐Ÿ˜ญ*facepalm*
Dev hates Sakshi so much..he is so annoying. Wat camera.? Uske card mein kya hai ye kab pata chalega..I'm guessing the obvious.
So that man died was the who asked to print photographs..so he might be Singh or might not..?The case is going good.
-- Yaay! I really look forward to your reviews because they are always so honest. Thanks re!๐Ÿ˜ณ
After reading case things it feels why now this fb, and after every fb it is like abhi case ko aana tha..lol
-- Hehehe

The street game..I remember playing it in school..rules were different though but it was so much fun. I liked their game too.Got to see different Arakshi shade.
Aam panna..I lovee it..Have you tried it ever?
-- Yesss! I absolutely love it! Unfortunately idhar milta nahi hai.. I don't remember the last time I had it.

Abhi toh Arjun ko har jagah har chhez mein Sakshi ki yaad aayegi. ๐Ÿ˜”I could feel all his emotions you know, like going through the place and things which you can relate to her. It is like you see and relate her to every little thing that crosses you even though they arent connected to her.Am I making sense?
-- Haan, I know what you mean๐Ÿ˜Š

Feel bad for Sam. Aisha and sam's scene was needed and it was nice.
The letter was so heart-felt..I really liked it.
๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
Oh My goodness..the phone call..eshh..๐Ÿ˜ณI was all smiling..
Now you imagine; Sakshi's cell..the bars are of thermocol..I walk in with white jacket and break those rods..she runs away..I'm smiling and blowing my nails
and with much attitude I put on my hood..This is wat happened imaginary after reading his letter and their scene.๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜Ž

-- This cracked me up๐Ÿคฃ
Also lets not forget..the puppet show..I wish to see it once..



Originally posted by: Swara85

Part 13:
Marine drive..
I m hoping to see it..let see..fingers-crossed.
Your description about it took me there virtually.

-- Hehe... and then we saw it together.๐Ÿ˜ณ I won't forget that day. That evening rather. I still can't believe we made it happen.

Friends..you're my wife..โ˜บ๏ธAwww..It was so So beautiful.โค๏ธ
Their fight..again at Marine drive..eshh..๐Ÿ˜ณ
Aayat..โ˜บ๏ธ
Ab maar dalogi kya..
I loved loved loved this chapter. And their story. All the while I was smiling, blushing. It was beautiful and awesome.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ˜ณ
-- Hehehe.. I loved writing it as well๐Ÿ˜ณ

Part 14:
Wow..Just wow.
๐Ÿ‘
What do I say here..? It was simply beautiful, romantic with magical touch.
I don't know what more to say but you know na..
๐Ÿค“You will understand I guess.!?
And and I'm all nervous for the trial..

--Of course, I do!

Part 15:
Hmm..Who followed her? Is it that Singh man? And that fb was painful.
๐Ÿ˜ญIt was nicely written.
I think Dev might be Rajinder Singh..
The case part was brilliant ritu.
๐Ÿ‘ At a point I had to read it twice so I could what was happening..like what all they pointed about the murder.๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿ‘

--Yaay thank you!! That means a lot๐Ÿ˜ƒ

Ahan..I really think that "she" is natasha..is she?
Ouch..
๐ŸฅบThat was so hurting..their meet at her cell..
Omg..Megha received a threat. she won't budge..haina ritu..?
The chapter was so good.. And I'm still nervous, even more.

P.s: Khamoshiyaan..
โ˜บ๏ธDo I have to say anything about it.? humara kuch nahi ho sakta.

--I might listen to it now

Originally posted by: Swara85

Part 16:
It was painful when she went to stand in the box..their moment there.
๐Ÿฅบ
Omg..Kya trial tha re.. ๐Ÿค—Brilliant girl.๐Ÿ‘
All the while I was so anxious, nervous, angry..Damn it was too good..๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
I don't know anything about law except for some simple things..So For me it was all perfect.
I m wondering if there is another crime-thriller-rom on its way...Wat say Ritu?
๐Ÿ˜‰

--Ahhh thank you so much!! This means a lot.. you know na?

Err... what? No!๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜†๐Ÿ˜† Then you'll remind me of all the unfinished stories I have lol.

Part 17:
Ah.! I so loved this begining lines. Was waiting for something like this to turn.
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Oh Ritu..It was so heart-wrenching to even read.๐Ÿฅบ.๐ŸฅบArjun's part starting mein.๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ And the letter..๐Ÿฅบ๐Ÿฅบ
You made me emotional re..๐Ÿ˜ญ
The trial part was too good..Also you have done a great job at their chudailness..๐Ÿ˜Ž๐Ÿ˜† -- Hahaha... thank you, thank you!
And why the hell did you end it here..๐Ÿ˜กcouldn't you just give one more chapter with it. -- No, of course not. Waise, aaj listened to you for the first time๐Ÿ˜†
Anyways, Keep writing Ritu..I love this story..you know na.๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
I'm so so excited for next. Please write soon
.

One more thing Cheers to Megha. Her character stood out.
๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ
-- Yaay! I am very glad! I have grown rather fond of her.

Okay so It took me soo loonng to post my comments..Sorryyy Ritu.

But seriously, You have come out brilliantly.๐Ÿ‘ I love this story. And your writing is as it is getting better, and with Ritu's magic touch still intact.๐Ÿค—

P.s. Reminder to complete one pending story, the one I wanted to be completed. 2. About Wol..Its kinda great story. So I'm hoping you work on what needs to be done and that too soon.

-- Seriously, Swaruu, it means a lot! Like a lot lot. I shall wait for your comments (whenever you do haha). Again, thanks so much for keeping me motivated! ๐Ÿค—

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwwsssmmm Chapter
Superbbb as always
Loved It
Arjun's POV... Sakshi's letter... so painful emotions perfectly described
Wonderfully Written
Loved Arakshi phone convo
"Unbelievable."
"What?"
"You still... you still trust me?"
I rolled my eyes. "Unbelievable."
"What?"
"You're still asking me that question."
Loved these lines both of them are Unbelievable n Cute
So it was Natasha who tried to threaten Arjun
Continue Soon
Waiting eagerly for next part
Thanks for the PM

Hey Niki! So sorry for the delay.. Thank you so much for leaving this comment๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ Means a lot!
Edited by SeasonOfLeaves - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Heylo!! ๐Ÿค—
It's been so long since I posted here. In fact it's been a while since I wrote as well.. Somehow managed to write out and edit these two chapters... hoping that you would like it!
I am going to be a little more regular now since I have got the next chapter written out.. and also because now it is important for you not to lose the flow of the story (if you're still reading that is!).

So yeah! Hope these two chapters mess with your mind a little bit. Learning, still learning, so there might be errors and loopholes. ๐Ÿ˜›

Hope to return soon!! Take care you all! And yes, I have PMed the links ๐Ÿ˜ณ

Looking forward to your comments if you have time to leave some!๐Ÿ˜ณ
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Posted: 9 years ago
Of course reading the story. Thrilling, beyond words. So now we have some suspects with a fair amount of motive to frame Sakshi. Please update soon, can't wait for the next part.
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Posted: 9 years ago
Hooked once again to the web..That was something totally stupefying.Does this poor girl needs so much hatred just because her base is of something incest.Just because she chose the person where her happiness and freedom laid??? Crazy world and insane people..Though I missed dearest Raina in action I am glad to see every one else in strict work mode...Too many boys after Sakshi.. ๐Ÿ˜† Well Natasha made me feel like giving her tight slap only if I could get her in real.Cheap and scoundrel..I loved how you penned it in a reader inclusive style.Felt as if sitting in the trial and seeing the developments.It's needless to say how brilliant you are at writing the emotions perfectly to core.Do update soon and thanks for the pm.Keep Writing and Keep Smiling ๐Ÿ˜Š
Edited by TereLiyeMINU - 9 years ago
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Posted: 9 years ago
Awwwsssmmm Chapters
Loved It
Superbbb like always
The trial was great I felt like everything was happening in front of my eyes
Brilliantly Written
New revelations making the case more Interesting n Thrilling
Curiosity at it's peak
Continue Soon
Waiting eagerly for next part
Thanks for the PM
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Posted: 9 years ago
superb
mene blog par comment kiya tha wo gayab ho gaya lol
interesting case isko to show me dikhana tha
superb facts making it more interesting
arakshi love it
continue soon
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Posted: 8 years ago
thank u so much for the pm wow loads of unread ll read all soonish.
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Thanks for the pm. The suspense is getting to my nerves. Please let Arjun be alright otherwise Sakshi will not be able to make it through this. Megha and Kasturi showed a great deal of courage. Please update soon.
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Posted: 8 years ago
omg vikrat was the main culprit
I hope arjun is fine plzzz usko kuch maat karna
sakshi need arjun
Megha kasturi brave girls
omg last u have made me so...
plzzz so interesting story ever read
continue soon

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