Originally posted by: _Nikita_
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Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Di update please...
Part 11
Aww..I feel bad for vikrant. -- Haha, do you now? ๐
Red-i liked the way things related to it also that it has different meanings too. Not just love. I liked red from their pov.
All emotions they were going through during the shaadi, with every scene, reached out. They were so clear, it felt real. Like thinking to be in their place, feel what they felt. It was so real. It felt real.๐ณ -- I am very glad๐ณ๐ณ To be honest, that was my favourite part when it came to writing it.
I Loved their last night at deogarh.
The letter was good..and you know how much i love letters.. -- Of course!
singh..as you said he is in disguise..toh I'm thinking he might be..๐คSam is upset. he is right in his place but they all did what they could. Besides, humare ACP ke bina case solve ho aisa ho nahi sakta..Haina Ritu๐.?
-- Aur kya!๐
Oh and the dream..๐ณIt is the highlight..I loved it the most and aftermath (Arjun's) also.๐๐ผThe song was perfect..Thank You for using it here. Do I have
to say anything about the song here..?โบ๏ธ-- Hehehehe I know, I know.๐
The man died..well, tujhse yahi expected tha.๐
But but I loved this whole chapter to the t, even with the case thing.
๐๐ผWell done Ritu.๐ Aur kya bolu..This is one of my Fav chapters..โบ๏ธโค๏ธ
Part 12
Aww..๐ณThanku sooo muchh Ritu..mere liye dedicate kiya..๐ค๐ญ*facepalm*
Dev hates Sakshi so much..he is so annoying. Wat camera.? Uske card mein kya hai ye kab pata chalega..I'm guessing the obvious.
So that man died was the who asked to print photographs..so he might be Singh or might not..?The case is going good. -- Yaay! I really look forward to your reviews because they are always so honest. Thanks re!๐ณ
After reading case things it feels why now this fb, and after every fb it is like abhi case ko aana tha..lol
-- Hehehe
The street game..I remember playing it in school..rules were different though but it was so much fun. I liked their game too.Got to see different Arakshi shade.
Aam panna..I lovee it..Have you tried it ever?
-- Yesss! I absolutely love it! Unfortunately idhar milta nahi hai.. I don't remember the last time I had it.Abhi toh Arjun ko har jagah har chhez mein Sakshi ki yaad aayegi. ๐I could feel all his emotions you know, like going through the place and things which you can relate to her. It is like you see and relate her to every little thing that crosses you even though they arent connected to her.Am I making sense?-- Haan, I know what you mean๐
Feel bad for Sam. Aisha and sam's scene was needed and it was nice.
The letter was so heart-felt..I really liked it.๐๐ผ
Oh My goodness..the phone call..eshh..๐ณI was all smiling..
Now you imagine; Sakshi's cell..the bars are of thermocol..I walk in with white jacket and break those rods..she runs away..I'm smiling and blowing my nails
and with much attitude I put on my hood..This is wat happened imaginary after reading his letter and their scene.๐๐๐
-- This cracked me up๐คฃ
Also lets not forget..the puppet show..I wish to see it once..
Part 13:
Marine drive..I m hoping to see it..let see..fingers-crossed.
Your description about it took me there virtually.-- Hehe... and then we saw it together.๐ณ I won't forget that day. That evening rather. I still can't believe we made it happen.
Friends..you're my wife..โบ๏ธAwww..It was so So beautiful.โค๏ธ
Their fight..again at Marine drive..eshh..๐ณ
Aayat..โบ๏ธ
Ab maar dalogi kya..
I loved loved loved this chapter. And their story. All the while I was smiling, blushing. It was beautiful and awesome.๐๐ณ
-- Hehehe.. I loved writing it as well๐ณ
Part 14:
Wow..Just wow.๐
What do I say here..? It was simply beautiful, romantic with magical touch.
I don't know what more to say but you know na..๐คYou will understand I guess.!?
And and I'm all nervous for the trial..--Of course, I do!
Part 15:
Hmm..Who followed her? Is it that Singh man? And that fb was painful. ๐ญIt was nicely written.
I think Dev might be Rajinder Singh..
The case part was brilliant ritu.๐ At a point I had to read it twice so I could what was happening..like what all they pointed about the murder.๐๐--Yaay thank you!! That means a lot๐Ahan..I really think that "she" is natasha..is she?
Ouch..๐ฅบThat was so hurting..their meet at her cell..Omg..Megha received a threat. she won't budge..haina ritu..?
The chapter was so good.. And I'm still nervous, even more.
P.s: Khamoshiyaan..โบ๏ธDo I have to say anything about it.? humara kuch nahi ho sakta.
Part 16:
It was painful when she went to stand in the box..their moment there.๐ฅบ
Omg..Kya trial tha re.. ๐คBrilliant girl.๐
All the while I was so anxious, nervous, angry..Damn it was too good..๐๐ผ
I don't know anything about law except for some simple things..So For me it was all perfect.
I m wondering if there is another crime-thriller-rom on its way...Wat say Ritu?๐
--Ahhh thank you so much!! This means a lot.. you know na?Err... what? No!๐๐๐ Then you'll remind me of all the unfinished stories I have lol.
Part 17:
Ah.! I so loved this begining lines. Was waiting for something like this to turn.๐
Oh Ritu..It was so heart-wrenching to even read.๐ฅบ.๐ฅบArjun's part starting mein.๐ฅบ๐ฅบ๐ฅบ And the letter..๐ฅบ๐ฅบ
You made me emotional re..๐ญ
The trial part was too good..Also you have done a great job at their chudailness..๐๐ -- Hahaha... thank you, thank you!
And why the hell did you end it here..๐กcouldn't you just give one more chapter with it. -- No, of course not. Waise, aaj listened to you for the first time๐
Anyways, Keep writing Ritu..I love this story..you know na.๐ณ๐ณ
I'm so so excited for next. Please write soon.
One more thing Cheers to Megha. Her character stood out.๐๐ผ
-- Yaay! I am very glad! I have grown rather fond of her.
Okay so It took me soo loonng to post my comments..Sorryyy Ritu.
But seriously, You have come out brilliantly.๐ I love this story. And your writing is as it is getting better, and with Ritu's magic touch still intact.๐ค
P.s. Reminder to complete one pending story, the one I wanted to be completed. 2. About Wol..Its kinda great story. So I'm hoping you work on what needs to be done and that too soon.
Originally posted by: _Nikita_
Awwwsssmmm Chapter
Superbbb as always
Loved It
Arjun's POV... Sakshi's letter... so painful emotions perfectly described
Wonderfully Written
Loved Arakshi phone convo
"Unbelievable."
"What?"
"You still... you still trust me?"
I rolled my eyes. "Unbelievable."
"What?"
"You're still asking me that question."
Loved these lines both of them are Unbelievable n Cute
So it was Natasha who tried to threaten Arjun
Continue Soon
Waiting eagerly for next part
Thanks for the PM
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