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@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

thanks skrafty...glad you enjoyed the end..😳

Could you PLZZZ give an Epilogue

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rimi

@rimi_invisible

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#82

Originally posted by: skrafty

Could you PLZZZ give an Epilogue

if you check the note before the last chapter...i have informed it is the epilogue..
the story ends there...😊

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GOLDIEE ABROL

@Gold.Abrol

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

thank you so much goldie...glad you lked the end...i couldnt have left any end loose..wo gabbu mere gardan maror deti...😛 its always a pleasure to read your comments...thank you partner..love you..

Love u too ❤️

well yes BOL jaise main loose end ki gunjaayish nahin hai

& its the best from your lot

keep writing 😊

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Swara85

@Swara85

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#84

CHAPTER 41B:
Ofcourse Christine hi Sushma hai..
The old man and his cameraman who was talking on the phone, whom Sakshi saw when she fell down..find him suspicious..
Did not get the reason why you planted this plot of Sakshi falling, old man's entry and all, but lets see.🤔
Oh God..! this girl..yaha bhi Arjun ko dekh rahi hai..Arjun is right..isse bahar phek dena chaiye..😆
Good going..was totally engrosed into it..

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

CHAPTER 41 C:
This is getting so interesting..but little scary too with Annu in the picture..why did you have to bring her here.?😡
Oh no..! that young boy was Dixit..!!!!smart planning by them..I mean you..
Liked that part where Sakshi and all were following that boy and he turned out to be someone else and the chit too..
The details about the whole scene at the auditorium and master bomb..everything was so written well.👍🏼
Every scene was projected well..wondering how you think every detail and that too without any loop holes.🤔
Annu's entry kyu..I'm scared.. Poor little girl, was so happy to meet her mom and climinal, but now so feeling so sad to know they doesn't want her here..She wouldn't even understand the situations.

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

CHAPTER 41 D:
OMG..😲! Somehow it was clear that Annu will be in danger, but this way...😲💔
Master bomb in her dress..ye kya kar diya..😡she is the weakest nerve of Aisha, Sam and even Arjun..
hope nothing happens to her..*bitting my nails*
Arjun- Sam jodi back again..hope they will save her..fingers crossed.

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Swara85

@Swara85

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

CHAPTER 41 E and 42:
Phew..! They got arrested..Amazingly well planned update..
Annu bomb se to bach gayo lekin got hurt..hope she will be safe..
5th bomb was in the car..superb planning..!
This Sushma..she desrved that slap..aur do chaar lagaane chaiye the..😡

Oh ho..Annu was hurt because she heard what Sam had said..
Finally Sushma is dead..now Sameer will live in peace with Sapna's memories and not Sushma.
Aww..!! last part of manofying Annu was sooo shweeet..😃loved it.
So it was Annu's dad's death anniversary and so the white lillies and all.
Ending was superb.!
This story was so awesome, full of suspenses, mysteries and with cute little Annu scenes..Loved this story..👍🏼
And you are brilliant as a writer..do write such stories..would love to read more from you.
And yes..Can you please give an epilogue..😳with more of Annu in it..Or you can start a new story ccontinuation from here
with more of Annu and her Dost and Climinal..
Will miss this story.
Thanks for pms..

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Tabassum Nitol

@_Tabassum_

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#88

Awwwsssmmm Ending
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Beautifully Written
Will miss Captain Spark her Dost n Climinal
Thanks for giving us such a wonderful story
Thanks for the PM

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Bhavna Antriwale-Gargate

@bgargate

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#89

Sorry for commeniting after a looong time 😳😳😳

This is one of the stories where I need full concentration to read to get the feel 😊

So as I had guessed Annu's presence at the venue was pre-planned

She was an easy target for Sushma and Dixit ... she was the weakness of entire ETF.

But I could never guess that she was with the master bomb 🤢

But why fear when Arjun is here ... he found the bomb.

It almost killed All of them to see Annu with Bomb and poor little Annu

Luckily it was diffused 😳

But last bomb couldn't be found... even I couldn't guess but when the part came up where Dixit was revealed to be Khanna's Driver, I guessed that he must have placed that bomb in his car... to make sure he dies... well he deserved to 😡

As for Dixit... he too deserved this ... he too was a traitor 😡

And I don't pity Sushma too ... she was herself responsible for her fate... and finally Sameer tricked her and killed her.

Entire operation was beautifully written... I could visualise all the scenes. Perfect detailing.

Sameer-Sushma part was nicely written.

But my most favourite part was the hospital scene (I have a comment to make. will send it in PM)... Annu in hospital ... It was like thousand deaths for Sameer 🤢

And what multiplied his pain was Annu's attitude towards him when she came back to her senses.

Poor little girl believed everything he told Sushma ... This point left me in tears

But then ... White Lillies hai na 😊

Later part was sooo cute 😊. So finally she forgave him 😊

Overall a beautiful story and a perfect ending ... and I will miss this story 😳.

I would love to read an epilogue of this story 😊

Or may be I can write my fan fiction on this story 😊

Edited by bgargate - 11 years ago

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Atisha Khan

@Shamsad1607

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#90

finished! that's it! finally i can start over reading it again...hihi...

this time, im really glad that I've kept those pms pending... it was easier to understand the entire operation.

a thick suspence, tension filled, thriller.. aaj Yan Flaming ke best sellers fail ho gaya. it was simply a brilliant work, and this is not only yours...its one of my favourite thrillers too.

first the bomb combination, tough and tricky. the search, the disappointment, the tension...you killed it.

i was actually waiting for annu to show up, but never imagined that master bomb would be in her dress. hats off to Sushma's evil brain...that sam-aisha-arjun none could even felt that when they picked her up.

and the climax...oh dear, it was awesome!

bechari annu, you hospitalised her...ok, but dil todna zaruri thi kya...but the good think is, criminal-captain spark ended up in the same team... 😆

sam encountered sushma, that part was the best part of the last chapter. sam played sushma's tricks on her... betrayer was finally betrayed. hats off dear lady!!

I'm really loved the way you completed the story, suspense, thrill, excitement, rush...it was an absolute combo pack for me...(ek aur milega? naya wala?)

thanks a ton for update pms...and sorry for keeping them pending.

keep writing.

love you.