Ariya new story Do Qadam door thay (part 2 updated 22/11) pm late

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Areesha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#161

Originally posted by: jeharshu

It's k dear
We will wait till you update
But kya kare
U stopped the story at interesting point
So we all eagerly waiting
To know what happens next
U know curiosity
But try to give update soon

will update in 2 or 3 days
thanks for waiting

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jeharshu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#162

Originally posted by: Areesha566

will update in 2 or 3 days
thanks for waiting

Eagerly waiting dear
Continue soon

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Areesha

@Areesha566

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Posted: 10 years ago

#163

aaah i forgot to update
bigger aaah i forgot what i was gonna write

can someone pleash kill me., its a request

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jeharshu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#164

Please please update
How could you

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jeharshu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#165

When you gonna update this????????????????????

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jeharshu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#166

When you gonna update this?????

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Areesha

@Areesha566

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Posted: 10 years ago

#167

Recap:

shree was angry with sameer

chotu clear up shree's misunderstandings towards sameer

sameer lost in his past and cried over his grief

liza became his strength

please read further😊

PART 3 (a)

shree finished packing and made a call to check ticket and travel arrangement, sameer had told him to go pune tommorrow morning as his help was needed regarding a case

shree cut the call made his made to get a good night sleep, he was about to when his cell rang, he without checking caller i.d cut it but it again rang the very next second,he frustratedly move a hand through his hair and inhale a deep breath to calm his anger and nerves down

not now liza, please... mein ghusse mein mein kuch aisa karna ya kehna nahi chahta jisse mein baad mein kehne ya karne ke liye regrate karoon... whisper shree to an invisible liza looking at the his cell in hand which was continuously ringing

flashes of liza came in front of his eyes, there queries, the useless and base less arguments, their fights...

a smile smile lingerd at his lips when he remember her beautiful smile and twinkles in eyes when he after their every fight gift her chocolates, teddies and flowers

it was his punishment to gift and fulfill her childish demands and he happily used to fulfill her wishes, why? that was one question which his technical mind could never answer only his heart knows why but he never dared to listen to it

shree was smiling remembering their moments but his smile faded when he remember the tears which forms in her eyes and he was the cause of them, he felt like someone crushed his heart remembering her tears stricken face for a split second he thought to attend her call which was still ringing and clear everything out

he was going to press green button but stop his move when her words

rang in his ears, all the bottle up anger came back, he cyt the call through cell on bed and moved out of room, he badly needed to chill down his nerves throbbing temple

he goes towards his terrace, blood freezing cold air touched his face but he didn't seemed to notice it at all, he lean over the the cool metallic frame and place his both hands on it watching the dark pitchy sky which today lake the brightness of stars and moon

he felt like sky was today replicating his heart tonight, he was feeling like something close to him, something very dear to him was snatch away from him, he was feeling a mild pain in his chest, he was feeling like just like the sky his world of heart too was ill-lighten and rayless

but why? why why why? that was the question for which he didn't have any answers...he sighed and walk down

but in his troubled state he failed to notice the figure who was staring at him continuously, she watched him fighting with his inner turmoil, she watched him walk past by her but he wasn't in a state to notice her presence, tears formed in her beautiful eyes thinking that she was the cause of all this mess

she remembered what her aunt had said to her a few years ago

"manhoos kahin ki, jahan jaati hai apni manhoosiyat se subki zindagiyoon mein aag laga deti hai, kalmohi... humph"

sahi kehti thi app aunty, mein waaqi mein manhoos hoon, jahan jati hoon sabki khushiyoon ko meri wajah se girhan lag jata hai, aj bhi meri wajah se shree aur liza ka jhagra hoa, sab meri awjah se...

she fell onto floor broke into sobs

Edited by Areesha566 - 10 years ago

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jeharshu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#168

It's awesome update dear
I think that girl is Riya
It's emotional update
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon
But it was small update
Next time try to give
Lambawala update
Nd thanks for updating