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Posted: 10 years ago
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Me with another new shots of story this one is dedicated to my darling sis eshu sundari as I don't know on what I am up to so please handle this story and give your reviews no matter bad or good or worse and secondly it is untitled by me I am not getting any suitble title for this hope you guys help me with it

So preseting this annonymous story with some part of reality (as first incident or accident is happened right in front of me )

NOTE - FIRST PART MAY BE EMOTIONAL BUT WAIT FOR THE STORY TO BE UNFOLD MORE PARTS

A cloudy refreshing day with the welcoming ring of new soul ,pleasure, happines and lot of love and something more a lady taking half spport of grren granite slab of kitchen counting her shopping stuffs and checking her list is she shop everything which she written on the list and murrmering something to her suddenly her door bell rang her excitement again increses as she was about to go a strong feminine voice stops her to doing her so yet it was an order from her but it was filled with concern soon that middle age lady opens the door as expected a handsome young man return from his hectic office day he was tired but not giving any single spark of tiredness on his face he entred in that lavish house,s gallery he hung his lather bag on the designer hook of the gallery then his way was upon his big leaving room two big sofa one coffee table in the middle 'kaisi ho ma ' he ask

'mujhse kya puch rahe ho apni biwi ko dekh is haal mein bhi jabadasti shopping karwayi apna bilkul bhi dhyaan nahin rakhti kuch tu hi samjha 'she told her daughter in law's complent but again concern

''to phir madam ne apni manamani ki had hoti laparwahi ki maine sirf tumhe doctor ke pass test karane ke liya kaha tha lekin tum is haal mein bhi shopping karne gayi kitna time khade rahi hogi aur billing counter par bhi khair main bhi kis bevakoof ko samjha raha hun report kaisi hai aur delivery ki date kya di hai doctor ne dekho meri princess ko tumhare karan koi problem nahin honi chaiye samjhi ' he said all these big lines in single tone just glaring towards his nine month pregnant wife and she was just standing with red and pouty cheek on a beautiful face and a twikling pair of eyes 'main toh bas aise hi party ke liye khane ka saman kharidne gayi thi itna mat danto '

'party kis khushi mein 'he ask

'are doctor ne kal ki delivery date di hai ane ke baad chota sa get together rakhenge na please kya hua operation se delivery hogi it may be risky but I knew everything will be fine hum apni choti si princess ko welcome to kareneg na 'she again make her pouty face with black mailing hint she knew that her husband will never disagree her wishes suddenly she heard some laughter voices it was her mother in law correction need here she was more than a mother to her so call her mother and her husband were laughing soon her husband give her a side hug and made her to seat on a leather couch 'of course everything will be alright '

But who know this five letter word will always remain just a words who know when you start praying for everything will be alright when you counted days to be passed soon and ready to welcome the happiness

Big operation theatre gate inside the operation theatre doctor were operating a lady and outside the theatre a loads of prayer were chanting in minds of the person who were outside soon the alarm bulb of ot signle the operation stops now everyone was waiting for the good news of the baby's yup it was the day of delivery everyone was excited but nervous too the 'hospital matter ' are scary too no matter how strong mentallyyou are but when it comes to close one you may get nervous sometime this time this husband is also dealing with the same dilema happy for his child but so much concern of his wife suddenly a nurse come holding a small baby on her gentle hand here baby was making his small yawning from his thin and tiny lips the nurse come closure to husband and the mother in law she announce 'badhai ho beta hua '

Husband was blank ...due to happiness soon the middle age lady gently pick that baby and singing some lullaby for him to concole that baby he was too looking at that grandmother and grandson bond he was about to hold that baby but his mind remind him of something he suddenly stop the doctor 'doctor how is she ' he ask

'rightnow she Is unconsious but soon she will be fine ...congratulation for a baby boy ' doctor said and left

He was on cloud seven ...ya he was dreaming of a princess but that baby with small soft hand which was drawing unknown pattern in air or was signling to hold him from her grandmother lap to father lap his small twinkling eyes just similar to her mother his tiny thin lips fluffy pinkish red cheeks soft ears everything was ready to be fallen in love he hold that baby in his folded hand lap he was nervous just like he get nervous before exam ...holding a baby was more than a exam he was to happy in seeing his eyes ...but who knows when all this gestures and responsiblites were being handle by only two persons by him and his mother

Hours pass by but she don't get up from unconsious state of her she will never woke up to see her baby to knew what she deliver is it a prince or princess who knows that baby will never be feed up by a mom but he will only get baby food stuffs from market who knows that boy will be handle on his father's lap or on his grandmother ... ...it was 31st day from the delivery same hospital same ward same gallery but the happiness which they share was a dream or could say a burden 'sorry to say this but she is in coma but we trying our best ' the best gynaeclogist of asia spoke up she was called by special request of hospital authority and pressure of that men after all the case was big mystry in its own no one could find out what exactly happen to her after her operation her inner function was happeing in her body but from outside she even did not opening her eyes she become like a statue who can only breath and circulate blood in her body someone said she got a mental shock before her operation some could say MIDAZOLEM quantity was get increase but one of the biggest to biggest say what was the exact reason behind her coma now the months were also passing by the baby just become a responsibility the visit to doctor's place was like habitual prayer to the god ...the way to hospital and the way of temple was only the way of hope which is going to die soon

The day soon came the news announce they get shock but as they are addicted to her loanliness in their sorrounding it did not effect much but from inner soul it may effect daily

'sorry we could not save her she is died '

Who knows she was not more than a died person since from one year she only breath

The husband wipe tears from his corner of his eyes then make a glance to his one year old son seems like god already make him ready for this condition as his cries were coutable

So how was it

Let me know bad or worse😕

Just guess the couple 😆

Edited by NATURESHIVANI - 10 years ago


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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome update
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
#3
Thanks rima di
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Posted: 10 years ago
#4
Fantastic update
aww such a cute family
i think arakshi were the couple as u didn't mention about any dimples 😆
or maybe samesha
lovely story
u literally made me cry
Edited by cuteangel32923 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome awesome awesome..

The mere fact that u dedicated the story for me totally floored me.

You made me totally senti..

Now back to update.

It's just mind blowing..

She is just crazy.

Even being 9 month pregnant she went to shopping..

But he scolded her so much.

But again she melted him by her cute puppy face.

Woww she gave birth of a baby boy..

So sweet...

But what is that!!!!!!!!!!

She went to coma!!!!!!!!!!!

You made me cry.

The way you described her comatose state it's wonderful.

I don't want to guess...

Or else I will totally break down.

Pliisshhh con soonz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai

Awesome awesome awesome..

The mere fact that u dedicated the story for me totally floored me.

You made me totally senti..

Now back to update.

It's just mind blowing..

She is just crazy.

Even being 9 month pregnant she went to shopping..

But he scolded her so much.

But again she melted him by her cute puppy face.

Woww she gave birth of a baby boy..

So sweet...

But what is that!!!!!!!!!!

She went to coma!!!!!!!!!!!

You made me cry.

The way you described her comatose state it's wonderful.

I don't want to guess...

Or else I will totally break down.

Pliisshhh con soonz...


I am glad so much that my work succeed u like this story I know I make little senti
But wait more to the story unfold u will love it and I bring a huge smile on your face 😊
well everything happen infront of my eye so it was easy to describe
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Posted: 10 years ago
#7

Originally posted by: cuteangel32923

Fantastic update
aww such a cute family
i think arakshi were the couple as u didn't mention about any dimples 😆
or maybe samesha
lovely story
u literally made me cry

Keep guessing
Picture abhi baki hai 😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
#8
its really sad

poor lady didn't get a chance to hold or see her baby

continue soon

p.s. I think in not arni, ariya, arakshi or sasha, its mr and mrs rawte and that baby is arjun... Right 😕
Edited by Areesha566 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome start...
Shopping in 9th month of pregnancy...😆😆😆
They wanted a princess...😃😃😃
But they were blessed with boy...😃😃😃
What happened to that girl???😕😕😕
She is dead...

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Omg
so emotinal
but ye hai kon
nice interesting
continue soon

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