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sweetpari4u97

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

emotional update.

but loved it.

thankx for pm.

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EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

Tumi khub khub khub kharap..

Abar kadye dile amake..

I couldn't stop my tears after reading it.

**grumpy face**

I am not gonna talk to you unless u write another version of this story with a happy Arakshi ending..

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Swara85

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

My God..! It was damn painful to read..had tears in my eyes..😭
Sakshi is such a selfless person..she loved him..My heart goes out for her and even for Sameer..his reactions to the whole scenario was well written..
Arjun..what to say..he is very unluckily lucky..or luckily unlucky..oh ho..what am I saying..
He is lucky yet unlucky..ha that sounds ok..
Thanks for the pm..
A nice yet hurting story..

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Snehajain

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Emotional ending...

😭😭😭 😭😭😭

" she just crossed that line to fulfill her last wish"...😭😭😭

Arjun was very confused...

Dadu...😭😭😭

Arjun cracking jokes to console Rathod...this was the only part which brought smile on my face...😃😃😃

Rathod's convo with Arjun regarding Sakshi was nice...👏👏👏

Sakshi's statement was not recorded...😲😲😲

Sakshi-Rathod both were helping each other...😃😃😃

Rathod tried to make Arjun understand about his feelings...😃😃😃

Dont have words for the last whole scene...it was superb...🤗🤗🤗

Finally Arjun learnt to live with memories & smile...😃😃😃

Liked GK & Arjun's scene...😃😃😃

Thanks for PM...

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Annu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#45

emotional ending...

sakshi arjun se ek akhiri baar milne aur samjhane aayi thi

arjun hospital pahucha to use samjh hi nhi aa rha tha k ho kya rha hai

finally sach arjun k saamne aa hi gya

dadu ki halat sach me buri hai...wo kitna chahte the sakshii ko

arjun ne ek ko kho kr zindagi ko kho dia...aur dusre ko kho kr fir se muskara sikh lia

jaise k wo dono chahte the

sam baccho ki tarah ro rha tha 😲 but sam hi hai jisne arjun ko realised karwaya

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Tabassum Nitol

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Posted: 11 years ago

#46

Awwwsssmmm Ending
Loved it
Supperbbb...
Amazing...
Terrifically Written
Thanks for the PM

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kunchu

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Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Maar daalaaa.

Allaaahhh

maar daaalaaa

Aur gau?

Even I love to kill these days

Tell me whom should I kill??

I loved Gk and Arjun ki dostana

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rimi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#48

fnally you killed sakshi...your long time wish..😆😆 even i love killing people..😉

it was a beautifully written and intriguing part...i loved it..
Roshni and Sakshi, the two women in his life who deserted him to return back again...
the emotions you have written actually made me feel heavy...ki kore likhli re??
the conversation of dadu and Sakshi was brilliant...and then SAm Arjun...loved the revealing bg of sakshi...is it same in BS??😛
a lovely end with GK and Arjun...that made me miss BS...otao de re taratari..😊

An awesome story and beautifully written...loved it..

Thank you...keep writing..

I wont mind reading the next night from you too..😃😃

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ishita

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Posted: 10 years ago

#49

sorry...i am too late

Arjun just couldnt take the fact that sakshi died..
he couldnt relate how he talked to her sometime back..
Roshni arjun parts are my favourites!
Dadu was really sad...
Sakshi used to save rathore from sher n girls😆
sharam karo..
arjun ko apne kapdo ki padi h
GK arjun..lastly dost ban hi gaye...sakshi magic😳