arakshi one shot bichadna bhi jarrori tha completed on pg 6 sorry - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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dil se very very sorry i know this the 1st time i am giving comments but what to do ? I was sooo busy with my studies that i didn't get the time 😭... again a biggg wala sorrry 😊😊😊
well coming to the os , it was superb 😃
i really liked it bcoz :- 1) it was on arakshi 2)u have described about shimla and its my fav hill station in India 😃
i felt that i m seeing the live snowfall while reading the update😛
at first i really got angry on this arjun as he behaved like a jerk with sakshi and then blaming her ...😡😡😡
but then he realised his mistakes and sending the letters and messages ... that was so sweet 😳
and at last he met sakshi and ishaani wow !👏
sakshi forgave him so easily 😲 well ... ab maaf kar diya toh kya karsakte hain?😉😉 yeh toh hona hi tha kyunki pyaar deewana hota hai...😆😆😆 the ending was emotional yet lovable😳
keep writing and will be waiting for ur other writings 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: sudikshya

<font color="#ff0066" size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">dil se very very sorry i know this the 1st time i am giving comments but what to do ? I was sooo busy with my studies that i didn't get the time 😭... again a biggg wala sorrry 😊😊😊

well coming to the os , it was superb😃

i really liked it bcoz :-1) it was on arakshi 2)u have described about shimla and its my fav hill station inIndia 😃

i felt that i m seeing the live snowfall while reading the update😛

at first i really got angry on this arjun as he behaved like a jerk with sakshi and then blaming her ...😡😡😡

butthen he realised his mistakes and sending the letters and messages... that was so sweet 😳

and at last he met sakshi and ishaani wow !👏

sakshi forgave him so easily 😲well ... ab maaf kar diya toh kya karsakte hain?😉😉 yeh toh hona hi tha kyunki pyaar deewana hota hai...😆😆😆the ending was emotional yet lovable😳

keep writing and will be waiting for ur other writings 😊

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thanks dear for ths long comment i undsrstand tht wht study pressure iz well i am happy co incidently i chossen ur fav place for my story
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
its demand for arakshiya im writing this one more
(ishani asked why they r crying so much what happened )

arjun after weeping a lot put out all his feeling guilt repent he took ishani in his lap n hug her tightly ''papa aapne mumma ko kyun choda ''this make him shock just some minute before she called him uncle n suddenly she called him papa how does she get the matter easily ''papa abh turant mumma ke bag se aap ke aur mumma ke shadi ki photo nikali ''they sign relief she was getting confuse how does she tell this to ishaani what will she think what will she ask how she will react but she take it easily n its is good for her now coming to arjun this time for him to answer ishani why he left them he take a deep breath n replied ''beta aapke papa sabse buddhu insaan hai isliye aur main aapko batana chchata hun aap kabhi wo galti mat kareiga ''
''kaun si galti ''she ask innocently
''jab aap badi ho jaogi tab bata denge ''
''main badi kab hongi ''she ask
''jab aap ye hot choclate daliy bina nakde ke khatam karogi ''arjun n sakshi said along h tickle her stomach
''oh haa ...oh haa chodo..please mumm please ''she gigled
they leave her arjun sit he take isshani to his lap and start feeding her sakshi admire them specially arjun whom she admire most the cahnge which happen to him she tought n lost in it i still remember how can i say i remember when i forgot all this incident the day i first met to arjun the day when ayesha i realized me i love her the day when i feel it i confeesed it when it hurt that he is the husband of my step sister dead sister when he killed sikander he hug me cry my father convienced him to marry me the most special day when we got married that night when we make love the morning he ordered me to stay away with him i left her my sturrgle to shimla the upbringing of ishani in my womb to when she come in my laps all the things i always cry when i remeber him when i feel him through ishaani his genes comes to her the most precious day when i was angry on ishani when she asked about his father i yelled at her n got arjjun's sorry later the later coming did not stop on that day so i can say its joke done by someone it comes every day n when ishani told me he met him he took care of her he loves her she loves her too i realized he is change now but my mind strat to say we should not forgeet his bad activites but my mind lost the battle with heart which still love him n keep loving him till my life end soon i feel some wrmth in my hand it was him ''where r u lost ''
''nothing ''i relpied
''so finish this pizza ''
''ok ''n start eating n again admiring my family
with whom i loved the most for whom i can do anything they are not my weakness but who make me strong

the end sorry i cant update this further im sick now
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
wow thats so sweet of u that u added this part and trust me now the story seems to be complete.

This part was so beautiful

loved ishaani as she is so mature in this small age

sakshi's mind version was quite emotional loved the ending... are u sick ??? get well soon and write more stories

i will be waiting for ur stories dear but before that get well soon dear 'NS'

Edited by sudikshya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#35

Originally posted by: sudikshya

wow thats so sweet of u that u added this part and trust me now the story seems to be complete.

This part was so beautiful

loved ishaani as she is so mature in this small age

sakshi's mind version was quite emotional loved the ending... are u sick ??? get well soon and write more stories

i will be waiting for ur stories dear but before that get well soon dear 'NS'


thanks for ur concern it meant a lot
n glad without pms u read it
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
loved it dear
quite emotionl
glad u added it as now its complete
loved the emotional part
Thanks for teh PM
keep writing 😊
lovely end 😊
Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Sweeettt endinggg Shivi..Thanxx fr pm!!! ..
Edited by Bubbly_Shanaya - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38

Originally posted by: GOLD.A

loved it dear

quite emotionl
glad u added it as now its complete
loved the emotional part
Thanks for teh PM
keep writing 😊
lovely end 😊


thanks di
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39

Originally posted by: Bubbly_Shanaya

Sweeettt endinggg Shivi..Thanxx fr pm!!! ..


thanks shanya di
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
Amazing yaar..

Truly loved the end part...

It added a cherry to the cake...

it's beautiful..

We got to see a perspective of everything from Sakshi's view...

It was painful but then we get to see the happy part as well..

Amazing job dear...

not well? pls take meds and take care... take rest and don't take stress dear!

Teri sickness iss bullet train pakadke bhaag jayegi :)

~ Bullet Train.
Edited by Armagadon - 11 years ago

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