Arakshi TS: Dil Mera Ektara **Completed**

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EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 11 years ago

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IArmageddonI

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Posted: 11 years ago

Amazing!!!!

Will unres the other stories fir issme ek bada waala comment :)

unres... but ami kaanuu (cry) korchi...

*sniff* na ei jonno na je eta khoob senti maar chilo... but ei jonno je tumi tomar pyaar ki dolli pooro band bajiye dile!

Yay!!! Me first

Acha now coming to the awesome first part of ur ts...

I simply loved the manner in which you portrayed the dilema of Arjun!

Brilliant dear...

Simply brilliant!

I am awed by the beauty in which you expressed the feeling of his heart... :)

Poor Sakshi had confessed - only to face the silent wrath of Arjun...

Poor thing... kya kya aasha banake beith gayi aur ussne!

But his guilt... why does he even think that he's betraying Roshni???

The truth is that once you think about something...

The entire world will just keep on reminding you about it!

At the end he found solace only on her desk...

But then everything fell before her care..

Beautiful dear... loved the way he confessed indirectly through his care...

I loved the way he looked after her..

Even bathed her... but then the senses do end up betraying you 😳

Oh WOW!!! He just called her Sakshi Arjun Rawte!

Lovely confession and ending of first part...

Waiting for the next part :)

~ Pyaar ki dolli :D

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angle1shanu

@angle1shanu

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Posted: 11 years ago

lovely dear...

it was super..

so cute and nice...

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ss_nov

@ss_nov

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow...superb os... first arjun is confused and not accepting his feelings... sameer and sakshi's conversation heard by arjun is nice...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 cute sakshi talking with his photo... how much arjun cared for sakshi????????? superb...👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 helped sakshi in taking bath and changing clothes... new way of proposing with sindoor... continue soon with some other updates!!!!!!

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sisodia_shefali

@sisodia_shefali

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Posted: 11 years ago

aww so lovely👏 u writers have kept arjun sakshi still alive by ur stories and that too such lovely stories 😃
arjun missing sakshi when she is gone after she expressed her feelings to him and also fighting his own feeling for her trying to convince himself that he cannot move on he is not in love with sakshi it is just care or may be not but then then u cannot outrun ur own feelings and so here he is in her house
taking care of her bathing her changing her clothes and feeding her
and finally accepting not only to himself but to sakshi as well that he not only loves her but cannot live without her and now he wants her in his life as his wife
waise doc ko toh usne pehle hi bol diya tha ki she is his wife 😊
thanks for pm

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angelicdeepti

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow...superb...

thanx for the pm...

hope yoou make this OS to a TS

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Seharish Fatima

@SeharishFatima

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow di 😊

it was for me😃

oh thank u sooo much

that on my silly request u wrote an os

and tht too for me seriously loved it sooo much😃

once again thnx a lot😊

and thn coming back to the story it was just sooo awsum seriously loved it ❤️

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@Arakshiya_58

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Posted: 11 years ago

lovely os appi!!!
love it so much...
first she accept hr feeling & he ignored...
bt after hearing the convo he cant hold him self...nice...
like his care..hhe is the best...
acctually arakshi best...
the prpposal is awsome...
love u ...