Arakshi TS: Bound to you.. *Complete* Pg. 8 4/8

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: vidya.anand
Awesome story B2..sorry for the late comment...I am so struck up yaar...upar se...khair chodo...🤗
thought i must say that I am surprised by the sudden story..
it was amazing and loved the last part especially
cont soon...jaldi jaldi post karo!

Hey B3.. 🤗

Kahan ho! Miss u..

No worries.. Hope things are sorted at your end..

Lol.. Aap kya! I was surprised too.. 😆

Thank you!

Originally posted by: ll-Shilpa-ll
Uff...you are imposible.
That I am.. 😎

Emm... behna there is major KC, rab ne bana di jodi situation here which I will have to discuss with you, but really, Rahul Khanna?🤪

Bwahaha.. That was epic! KC at its best.. But now, you know the difference..

Just when I have managed to move on you find a way to pull me in, and now I am hooked and if you don't update this one I will have to drop everything and fly to India to get the rest of it out of you. SYS?

Enough of my threats, lets get to the story.

Thank you! No threats please.. I'm "snowed under" heaps of files.. The darn audits! 😭

So I don't need to tell you that you got me from the very first line right? When you mentioned unrequited love I knew this was going to my most favorite two shots, or whatever you have planned here, knowing you it might be more or its my wishful thinking.

This was brilliantly written and I loved every moment of it, how tragic that both are in love but none willing to give in and take that step.

I hope that they both come to their senses before its too late.

I sense something fishy about Rahul and the blond and I have my own theory but will keep my lips sealed thanks very much.

No need to tell you again that I love this and I want an update ASAP.

Yesh, gurumata.. The eternal Mushkil kahani lover!
You did guess it right, but it isn't exactly unrequited love in their case.. It's probably lack of acceptance..
As for Rahul, told ya! 😉

Don't you think I deserve a reward for the BL update?😛

Ooi Maa.. 😲 Arakshi! Bacche ki jaan logi kya, B1.. Na ji na.. Maybe later in ASD..
But I owe you one.. 😛 You certainly deserve one for making me blush, while at work.. 🤪
I don't think it'll be as mind-blowing as BL, but I'm going to try nonetheless..

So please write, write and write,. I am waiting.

Thanks soo much, B1.. 🤗

Miss u! Hope all's well..

Edited by Fantasia_junkie - 11 years ago

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: Snehajain
Awesome start...

Beautifully written...👏👏👏

Continue soon...Thanks for PM...

Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: yas23
Awesome start
hope they both realize and confess their feelings to each other
the song was beautiful
don't like the Rahul guy
loved the last part
eagerly waiting for the next one
continue soon
thanks for the pm

Thank you so much.. Glad u like it.. 😃

Originally posted by: ...Maha-Srk...
just love it
amazing when ll
u update next part.

Thanks! 😃

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: Armagadon
Dearest Mohabbat Girl / Fantasia Junkie / Avantika ji...

Yes I am well aware of the fact that I have been pretty late in submitting my comment! And the very reason I wished to add you as my friend out here was cause I was curious to know and to get more works from such a brilliant author..

Don't worry - my praises out here won't be on hyperbole... I really and truly mean it!

And more on the update I end up commenting for the basic reason if I start liking the person as well... so yes... finally I have been able to amass all my thoughts to write here what I feel about this wonderful update of yours...

Hii.. May I know your name, coz you seem to be knowing all of mine.. 😆
Thank you.. I really appreciate that..
We may not have interacted at the forum, but trust me it's got everything to do with my hectic work schedules..

The funny thing was that the minute I was ready to re-read your story and get ready for commenting, by the end I became emotional and in short I used to become a mini Devdas! Well you barely have an idea - ok maybe you do have - about the turmoils your stories create in one's heart... be it happy or melancholic.. and many a times I have felt if only I could speak to you personally and say how much I loved this comment...

Lol.. I do, in fact.. A lot of my darling readers have been complaining for nearly 2 years now.. 😆
Jokes apart. If even one of you are able to relate to my stories and characters truthfully, my work here is done! 😊

So after my monologue do I end up to comment on the story - sorry that is one trait of mine that once I like a person I speak a lot... else I maybe equivalent to a ghost! Ok now slightly aware of the beautiful dimensions your thought process runs on - I didn't comment earlier not because of the fact that I didn't like you earlier... no way... it's just that four letter word which starts with "l" and affects most of the people in the world...

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Lazy... what did you think?

Ok am not trusting your out of the box ideas either!

*Putting tape on my mouth* Mff..fffm

Yeah so finally coming to the update...

How do you create such atmospheres that make me stare in the screen and make me realize of a flood of emotions... which I didn't know ever existed... like the one of feeling sympathy... at one point I find myself banging my head on the wall looking at their (Arakshi) reaction!

But then are we helpless out here...

But then I can trust you with one thing... that is if the beginning makes me clutch my heart... I know at the end there would be tears of happiness...

Simply hats off and kudos along with a big smile...

I know you will end up uniting the infamous Khadoos with his Publicist!

I guess I don't have to say more about how much I loved this update - else you know I might end up re-taping myself!

With Best Wishes,

Armagadon...

Lol.. I'm not as evil as these guys make me appear, trust me! 😆

Thank you for the honest feedback, however.. Really appreciate it..

I'm a sucker for happy endings.. And though I might keep them apart for years, writhing for each other, the happily ever-after is kinda inevitable..

So rest in peace, the Khadoos and his Publicist shall be united.. Tathastu baalike.. 😛

Lots of love..

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai
Awesome update didi.
U started this TS with a magic.
The scenerio of the beach and people sitting there was awesome.
The emotions you created that found it's way right through the center of the heart.
Arjun fallen in love but he think she deserves better.
That's why he is keeping his distance.
Poor Sakshi poor Arjun.
Feeling so bad for them.
Both love each other but couldn't express.
But when Sakshi agreed to marry another guy he started feeling the void.
Sakshi and Arjun both trying to move on.
In the party one of Rahul's friend started doubting!!
And Rahul introduced her as a DEAR FRIEND..
Who is that blondie.
Poor Sakshi had to take shelter of alchohol.
Arjun tried to stop her.
At last he noticed the tears in her eyes.
Hope he understand her heart feeling.
She never move on in the very first place.
The song was beautiful.
Loved it.
Please con soon and please please do PM me..**puppy face**

Thank you, Easha.. I'm glad you decided to read this one..

They've ignored their feelings, for various reasons but it seems as if it's time they realise the intensity of what they share between them.

Lots of realisations, confessions and cuteness coming your way.. 😃

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Heylo! Finally, I get to post this..

NOTE:

Thank you so much, for reading and reviewing the previous part.. Really means a lot..

Have read and replied to your previous comments. Do take a look, if you'd like to.

Without much delay, Read on!

*This one's dedicated to all my friends/readers/Gundis/BB's at AF..

Happy Friendship Day to all.. 🤗 🥳

Chapter Two..

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Edited by Fantasia_junkie - 10 years ago

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Avantika

@AeDilHaiMushkil

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

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That's it for this one.. Hoping it's what you all wished for.. Do let me know.. 😳

See you at ASD soonish.. 😉

Love.. 🤗

Edited by Fantasia_junkie - 10 years ago

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Ritu

@SeasonOfLeaves

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

For the first time everrr!

Resss😎

Unress

Hailaaa...let me breathe! Phew! That was one beautiful update..just what I needed to kill the Sunday night blues😳 I forgot for a moment that I was here on my bed and instead I got transported to the beach with Arjun and Sakshi, listening to the sound of the waves, feeling the sand beneath my feet and then..sighhh the scene at the house *thud* (I could even smell the dust in the old house)

I was smiling, crying, grinning, blushing and had butterflies in my stomach (not to mention the goosebumps) throughout the update!😳

Hold onnn I forgot to thank youuu for using Humdard in the updateee! Ahh ahhh ahhh me going nuts with the feeling🤪

And I feel like this now:

Ok, that was kinda mixed up (that's the effect of the emotions your updates caused😛) so let me start from the beginning!

First of alll, mindblowing banner again😳 Hayeee Arakshi and Humdard ..what a murderous combination

Wait u know that already.

The beginning was beautiful and intense...so much of emotions floating to the surface and yet, they hold it back...

And then she walks off to overhear the conversation..wait whaaat baby?

How dare he agree to marry her when he was wait..he was married?😲😲😲

And then our hero comes

"One look at Arjun's furious face and she knew Rahul would end up with a lot of broken bones if she didn't step in."🤣

This was awesomee loooll I had a huge grin on my face😃

Then the hug at the beach..sighhh

It was so beautiful

The way he comforted her when she was hurt...beautifully penned down!👏

And then the scene at the house...sighhh so romantic. A bench on the lawn and then the confession *thud*

And finally they confess their feelings for each other..and all the words come pouring out..sighhh

My most favourite lines were these:

"I look at you and I see someone who doesn't look at me with sympathy. You didn't see me as broken or damaged. You weren't afraid of me. You looked straight through me. And that scared me, Sakshi."

Sigh, how do you write so well?😳

The way she comforted him, held on to him and promised to be beside him always.😳 And then humdarddd.. I slipped into a lil dreamland of mine (created by you)😳

And thennn you just killed me with the end..hailaa candles in a dark room and Arakshi And then the kiss!☺️

I love you for creating that atmosphere and literally transporting me there (not to become a kebab mein haddi of course🤣)

"They had wasted a lot of time, but they still had a lifetime to live with each other..."

Sighhh...such a beautiful line.

Okay I am officially going to slip into my Humdard dreamland now and prepare for the Monday morning

This was a beautiful TS Avnii.. beautifully written from beginning to end👏

Thanks soo soo much again for including Humdard in it..I sooo wished for it when I read the first part😃

Thank you for writing this and updating it when your life is soo hectic! 🤗

P.S - As usual this became an essay. Kya karein, it was based on Humdard na🤪

Edited by ritu_24 - 11 years ago

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Natasha

@drunkiiebabe

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Amazing ending Thanks for the pm

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EshaalYousufzai

@EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

Awesome ending didi.

Loved it very much.

You portrayed every emotion beautifully.

That Rahul is such a coward.

He had no right to play with others emotions.

Arjun did the right thing by stepping in.

At last he took her his home.

Loved the way portrayed their vulnerability and Arjun's guiltiness.

At last they confess their feelings...

Two birds started arranging their nest..

It was wonderful.

Thank u so much for PM..

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kunchu

@kunchu

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Haila meri genie...tussi great ho ji

itna sweet update with loads of emotions

someone must be very happy

I loved that beach scene a lot

dil khush kar diya

and then the heart to heart talk and what came ahead...😳

hayee... maar dala...

waiting for ASD and my dear Lady

jald jaldi likho na

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Nethravathi Jagadish

@Nethravathi

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Posted: 11 years ago

#60

Fantastic update. Rahul is already married. Shukhar hai usne engagement se pehle hi sacchai bata di

Arjun took Sakshi to his house & confessed his feelings for her.

Arjun & Sakshi ek hogaye.