Arakshi TS: Bound to you.. *Complete* Pg. 8 4/8 - Page 5

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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Dearest Mohabbat Girl / Fantasia Junkie / Avantika ji...

Yes I am well aware of the fact that I have been pretty late in submitting my comment! And the very reason I wished to add you as my friend out here was cause I was curious to know and to get more works from such a brilliant author..

Don't worry - my praises out here won't be on hyperbole... I really and truly mean it!

And more on the update I end up commenting for the basic reason if I start liking the person as well... so yes... finally I have been able to amass all my thoughts to write here what I feel about this wonderful update of yours...

The funny thing was that the minute I was ready to re-read your story and get ready for commenting, by the end I became emotional and in short I used to become a mini Devdas! Well you barely have an idea - ok maybe you do have - about the turmoils your stories create in one's heart... be it happy or melancholic.. and many a times I have felt if only I could speak to you personally and say how much I loved this comment...

So after my monologue do I end up to comment on the story - sorry that is one trait of mine that once I like a person I speak a lot... else I maybe equivalent to a ghost! Ok now slightly aware of the beautiful dimensions your thought process runs on - I didn't comment earlier not because of the fact that I didn't like you earlier... no way... it's just that four letter word which starts with "l" and affects most of the people in the world...

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Lazy... what did you think?

Ok am not trusting your out of the box ideas either!

*Putting tape on my mouth* Mff..fffm

Yeah so finally coming to the update...

How do you create such atmospheres that make me stare in the screen and make me realize of a flood of emotions... which I didn't know ever existed... like the one of feeling sympathy... at one point I find myself banging my head on the wall looking at their (Arakshi) reaction!

But then are we helpless out here...

But then I can trust you with one thing... that is if the beginning makes me clutch my heart... I know at the end there would be tears of happiness...

Simply hats off and kudos along with a big smile...

I know you will end up uniting the infamous Khadoos with his Publicist!

I guess I don't have to say more about how much I loved this update - else you know I might end up re-taping myself!

With Best Wishes,

Armagadon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Uff...you are imposible.
Emm... behna there is major KC, rab ne bana di jodi situation here which I will have to discuss with you, but really, Rahul Khanna?🤪
Just when I have managed to move on you find a way to pull me in, and now I am hooked and if you don't update this one I will have to drop everything and fly to India to get the rest of it out of you. SYS?
Enough of my threats, lets get to the story.
So I don't need to tell you that you got me from the very first line right? When you mentioned unrequited love I knew this was going to my most favorite two shots, or whatever you have planned here, knowing you it might be more or its my wishful thinking.
This was brilliantly written and I loved every moment of it, how tragic that both are in love but none willing to give in and take that step.
I hope that they both come to their senses before its too late.
I sense something fishy about Rahul and the blond and I have my own theory but will keep my lips sealed thanks very much.
No need to tell you again that I love this and I want an update ASAP.
Don't you think I deserve a reward for the BL update?😛
So please write, write and write,. I am waiting.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#43

Awesome update didi.

U started this TS with a magic.

The scenerio of the beach and people sitting there was awesome.

The emotions you created that found it's way right through the center of the heart.

Arjun fallen in love but he think she deserves better.

That's why he is keeping his distance.

Poor Sakshi poor Arjun.

Feeling so bad for them.

Both love each other but couldn't express.

But when Sakshi agreed to marry another guy he started feeling the void.

Sakshi and Arjun both trying to move on.

In the party one of Rahul's friend started doubting!!

And Rahul introduced her as a DEAR FRIEND..

Who is that blondie.

Poor Sakshi had to take shelter of alchohol.

Arjun tried to stop her.

At last he noticed the tears in her eyes.

Hope he understand her heart feeling.

She never move on in the very first place.

The song was beautiful.

Loved it.

Please con soon and please please do PM me..**puppy face**

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Posted: 11 years ago
#44
just love it
amazing when ll
u update next part.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: sisodia_shefali

nice will comment in detail later 😊
it's always a pleasure to read ur stories and this one is no different how arjun sakshi's relation startes rough goes on to become comforting companionship but then somethings never change and so did their relation and it went again to square one leaving behind heartbroken sakshi whose all hopes died
she moved on at least she convinced herself that she did
kahte hain na jab hamare paas koi cheeze nahi hoti tab uski kadar pata chalti hain and so is arjun now knowing sakshi's importance in his life
hope these two realise what they mean to each other before it is too late
and that was so right what arjun said because we r fools my love
thanks for pm although had read it even before got pm 😊


Yup.. About time they both realise it.. And some people are just meant to be.. Cliche.. 😛
They just need a trigger and we wil give them one.. 😛
Thank you..

Originally posted by: rajeeviansonai

nice update yaar.
Sakshi k sath arjun ko hi accha lagta hay.
Update soon :)


Yup! 😳
Thanks..

Originally posted by: Sukhi35

OMG SOOO BEAUTIFUL CANT WAIT TO READ WHATS NEXT THAT WAS A PIECE OF ART TRULY WELL DONE KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK <3 ;) :* :) 👏


Thank you.. 😃

Originally posted by: Kiyaa-Rhapsody

ah love love loved it! There is sheer magic in your writing i swear ❤️ now i miss arakshi tremendously. :( Do update soon! :D


Aww.. Thank you.. I miss them too.. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#46

Originally posted by: ritu_24

Avniii🤗

Woman, how do you manage to leave me all dreaming and mushy mushy?😳
I'm like this right now:


Damn it! I miss Arakshi so badly now.. but then I still have Ajeeb si Dastaan to wait forrr

I am in such a happy mood right now and hence so many emos lol
First of all, beautiful writing as always - I could feel their love for each other and yet, holding it back. Sighhh...I felt for Sakshi when he threw away her roses, but then it wasn't really his fault now🥺
And omg did you HAVE to choose the name Rahul Khanna? Did I tell you I am a KKHH fanatic? You can literally put the movie on and mute it and I can speak all the dialogues🤪
So yeah that kinda ended up in me imagining SRK for a while but then Rahul seems a bit suspicious...hmmm. Also, who is that blonde girl?
And omg the end just made me:


Thank you for writing this TS...hope you update it quickies he he 🤗
P.S - These days I dream about Ajeeb si Dastaan at the oddest times lol😆
P.P.S - I was looking for a emo for the scene in Titanic when Rose and Jack are at the deck flyingg coz I felt like that after I heard the song and imagined the last scene on it...don't ask me why again😆
Oh anddd I love your siggies...Sidharth Malhotra❤️☺️
Alsooo, hope all is good at your end😳🤗


Rituuu... 🤗

Awwiee.. I can never thank you for being so generous with words.. 😳
Humdard.. 🤪 You're a lost cause.. 😆😆 But jokes apart, I was thinking of it too. 😉

Rahul Khanna! 😲 Damn! I didn't think of that at all..

Sigh! You can't blame either of them.. Mushkil kahani damn it! 🥺
But there's something in store for u in the next.. 😉 (It turned out sooo different from what I wanted it to be.. Thank God for that!) 🤣

Aah! ASD.. I'm dying to write that one..
Jack-Rose.. ❤️ I'm running off to listen to 'My heart will go on.." after I'm done with this..

Thanks soo much, Rittu.. 😳




Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: Humzy

Lovely start

Very nicely written
Loved it
Continue soon


Thank you.. 😃

Originally posted by: Arakshiya_58

its amazing di...
love it...
fantasticly written...
cant wait to read more...
plz con.soon...
thanx for pm...


Thank you, dear.. 😃

Originally posted by: Devangana

Absolutely fabulous, fantastic, please update soon and thanks for the pm.


Thank you.. 😳

Originally posted by: Shivi1997

I love it it was awsm update soon


Thank you.. 😃



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Posted: 11 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: shurtiekta

plsss pm me also awesome update
I'm mean so gud feeling bad for both of them
next pt update soon..


Thank you! 😃
😆 I get it..

Originally posted by: shreya09

its beautiful 👏

both of them need to confess their feelings aloud...
who is this Rahul guy . i am not liking him
but the song... its one of my favorite...& the scene for this song in this story was perfect 👍🏼
amazing start.
waiting for more 😳


Thanks.. Glad you like it.. 😳

Originally posted by: saba-ramisa

really written very beautifully

love it and i really enjoyed reading very much...
thanks for the pm


Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: kunchu

That was a good one

Patha ni kyu i missed the episodes today while reading it
There was no need for that disclaimer
I trust u na
Men women n their egos... Ufff
Waiting for nxt one


Yup.. Me too.. I wish things had ended differently.. But then as you say, Men, women and their egos.. 🥱

Thanks K! 🤗

Originally posted by: shailyshukla9

awsm...wonderful...dear...

rahul kuch ajeeb lag rha h...

i wish arjun n sakshi apni feelings ek dusre se kuch spcl way mai kahe...

update soon dear...n thnx for pm...:)


Thank you!
Special way ka toh pata nahi.. But I have something in store.. 😃

Originally posted by: pihu_angad

nice...
continue soon..


Thanks.. 😃

Originally posted by: Nethravathi

OMG. Arjun & Sakshi both are very much in love with each other but both are going far away from their feelings. Arakshi ko milaado please😭😭😭


Aww.. Of course.. 😉
Thank you! 😃

Originally posted by: sweetpari4u97

beautiful update.

loved it.
superb work.
thankx for pm.


Thanks.. 😃



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Posted: 11 years ago
#48

Originally posted by: PrincessFlavia

I miss someone who isn't mine to miss
I dream about someone who isn't mine to dream about
I love someone who isn't mine to love


Avantika...

This was terrific...!!!!

Unrequited love is always painful and the way you have described it with Arjun and Sakshi is just too beautiful...!!!

The slow progression of their relationship, his pain, her hurt, his hardness, her care... they are so like and yet they are so different. She understands his pain as she has her share of sorrows but even then she lives her life which he actually refuses to do.

What is wrong with her fiance? Why am I getting very negative vibes about him?

Do continue soon. I'm waiting for the next part eagerly.

Lots of Love
FLavia


Thank you so much.. 😃

That's really kind of you to have read it..
Sometimes love isn't enough, it needs to be expressed.. And in this case, Arjun's difficult past made things worse.. They need a closure to their past, to be able to move on, perhaps.

More coming up soon.. 😃

Originally posted by: yams.s

Nice update

Saakshi has agreed to marry Rahul.

Now what will Arjun do

Continue Soon


Thank you!
More coming up.. 😃
Btw, Arjun won't have to do much.. 😛

Originally posted by: skrafty

Now that was awesome
the way u described each and every emotion was great
well seriously they both are fools
Hope they realise their mistake before its too late
waiting for the next part
continue soon


Thanks.. That they are.. 😆
They will.. They just needed a trigger..

Originally posted by: anu91

res/unres...

thanks a lot for the awesome TS...avini...😊😊
loved it so much...
waiting for the further updates...
plz update soon...


Thank you..
Glad you like it..

Originally posted by: angle1shanu

very good..

and beautifully written..
continue soon dear..


Thank you.. 😃

Originally posted by: ss_nov

nice update... sakshi is drunk... hoping some romance between them... continue soon !!!!!!!!!


Errm... I might disappoint you a bit! 😳
Thanks anyway..

Originally posted by: _Nikita_

Awwwsssmmm start
Loved it
Supperbbb..
Mindblowing..
Cont sooon
Thanks for PM


Thank you..
Glad you like it.. 😃

Originally posted by: prachi90

Awsm nd last part vs beautiful 😊


Thanks.. 😃



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Posted: 11 years ago
#49

Originally posted by: -Lila-

Avni Di, This was bloody amazeballs.

I'm reading Arakshi after ages and you just made me realise how much I missed them.
It really made me angry that we couldn't get a proper Arakshi track after all😡
But I still love whatever little we got,You're the one who got me started with Arjun anyway so I owe that to you.
Can't wait for the second part^.^


UG.. 🤗 Where have you been!
Aargh! Forget about it..
Eesh.. Why, thank you..

Originally posted by: ll-Farheen-ll

Because we are fools.Chalo atleast accept to kiya Arjun Rawte ne.😡
Awwi poor saakshi.😭Pyaar bhi hua to aise khadus se.He can't seem to get it through his thick skull & accept that he loves her as much as she does.
P.S:Aage kuch kuch hoga kya lollipop?Mind u,I mean accha wala kuch kuch not Wat u think 😆


Haan.. Khush toh bohot hogi tum! *Deewar style* 😆 Coz it's a TS..
Awwie.. Don't blame him, Gundi.. He's got his own demons to fight..
Kuch kuch hoga?! 😲 You say something like that, and then expect me not to drown in the gutter.. 🤓

Bohot kuch hoga.. Bass jootey matt phenkna.. 😛

Originally posted by: NainaSM

wowww superb😉 ... love it 😳... continue soon 👍🏼


Thank you..

Originally posted by: life93

hi avani di🤗...

awesome !!😉 sakshi and arjun !! " we are fools" what declaration😆
was he jealous ??😉...why i find this rahul fishy😕...
song is beautiful😃...
waiting for next part 😉😉


Thanks Nee.. 🤗
Coz he is fishy!
Ab jealous toh hoga na.. 😛
Next one coming up in a bit..





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Posted: 11 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Anjali.Mital

As usual you well portrayed their feelings..be it confusion, stubbornness
or deep hidden love...Hope these two will realize and, most importantly,
accept the influence and importance of the other in their life.

Continue soon... Thanks for the pm...


Thank you.. They need to talk, for that.. Which will happen soonish.. 😃

Originally posted by: _BlackPearl_

He is pushing her away from him, thinking he is saving her.


Yeah.. he thinks he doesn't deserve her.. But sometimes, two people are just meant to be..


Thanks..

Originally posted by: Areesha566

Wow dii fav as always
poor sakshi, just when things started to get better akdu messed up as always
continue soon, wanna know how will arjun and sakshi mend eachothers hearts and souls


Lol.. yeah, he did..
Thanks.. More coming up!

Originally posted by: Rehana25

Very tangle story
But I must say that very nice thought
Some time we can't understand the person in front of us
Our true love and soul mate in front of our eyes
And we didn't recognise them
But one moment Just one moment make them
Realise I thing same happen in your story
Good going
Do continue soon


Yup..
Maybe they know it, but haven't accepted it..
Thank you.. Will post soonish..


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