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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: greensakthi

nice part dr!

loved it.

con soon.

Thanks Shakti dear
Glad u liked it
stay tuned n keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: ariyabestfan

congrats for new thread..

cs is so nice..
liza bro taking out his frustration on hia mom sis n wife..
good shree was there for help liza..
plz continue soon
precap is interesting..
thanks 4 pm

Thanks Sonu dear
glad u liked it
stay tuned & keep commenting 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
congrats for new thread.. 🥳
cs is nice..😃

shree helped liza with the help of rathod and arjun...good boy..

rathod and arjun has now started their work..good officers...

liza's problem is serious..specially coz its related to her family..i hope it solves out soon..😳

loved it..continue soon..thanks for the pm..

i am again late..sowwy..
Edited by rimi_invisible - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: rimi_invisible

congrats for new thread.. 🥳

cs is nice..😃

shree helped liza with the help of rathod and arjun...good boy..

rathod and arjun has now started their work..good officers...

liza's problem is serious..specially coz its related to her family..i hope it solves out soon..😳

loved it..continue soon..thanks for the pm..

i am again late..sowwy..

Koi baat nahin dear der aaye par durust aaye 😆
well main kya bolu u to know everything
well stay tuned & keep commenting 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85
good one
liza ne shree ko kuch nhi bataya...but wo syad ye bhul gyi k wo etf me kaam krti hai...

but ek cheez samjh me nhi aayi k wo apne bhai ko ek hi baar me sudhar skti thi...use ghar se bahar fek kr...

rathore shree and chotu plan was good...ronnie sabut k sath pakada gya...wo ab kisi baat ko jhutla nhi skta...

on duty officer pr hath uthana...

huh...shree ne ye kyun kaha k wo koshish krega k case register naa ho...reason kuch bhi ho case to register hona chahiye...agar etf jaisi oranisation k members case registered karwane me hichkenge to aam logo se kya umeed ki jaa skti hai...


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Posted: 11 years ago
#86
Awesome update..
loved Shree's concern and Sam-Aisha talk..
Ronie..😡 their family had to suffer..hope ki ab thodi akal aajaye..
Jennifer..she is so cute..
hope Liza's prob get solved soon..
thanks for pm and cont soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
Thanks atharin
stay tuned n keep commenting 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: chulbuliannu

good one

liza ne shree ko kuch nhi bataya...but wo syad ye bhul gyi k wo etf me kaam krti hai...

but ek cheez samjh me nhi aayi k wo apne bhai ko ek hi baar me sudhar skti thi...use ghar se bahar fek kr...

rathore shree and chotu plan was good...ronnie sabut k sath pakada gya...wo ab kisi baat ko jhutla nhi skta...

on duty officer pr hath uthana...

huh...shree ne ye kyun kaha k wo koshish krega k case register naa ho...reason kuch bhi ho case to register hona chahiye...agar etf jaisi oranisation k members case registered karwane me hichkenge to aam logo se kya umeed ki jaa skti hai...

Thanks anu dear
thats true but ye itna aasan nahin hai as uske saath jenifer & meline ki zindigi bhi judi hai & she cannot risk jenifers future
case tab register hota jab ronnie ki akal thikane nahin aati usne ye isliye kahah ki he knows miline & jenifer suffer karenge but your point is valid too but when it comes to ur family sab sooch main pad jaate hai
stay tuned n keep commenting 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: Swara85

Awesome update..
loved Shree's concern and Sam-Aisha talk..
Ronie..😡 their family had to suffer..hope ki ab thodi akal aajaye..
Jennifer..she is so cute..
hope Liza's prob get solved soon..
thanks for pm and cont soon.

Thanks Swara dear
glad u liked it
stay tuned n keep commenting 😊😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90


PART 11 A

Next morning shree spoke to sameer & said "Sir kal main liza key aha gaya tha uske bhai ko maine aur choru ne range haath ghar main aunty uski wife aur liza ko pareshaan karte dekha hai shree ne filhaal use custody main rakha hai main bas ye jaana chahta tha ki kya is Ronnie par koi case banaye kyuki uski wife hai choti bacchi hai aur fir sharab jaise galat aadat ki vajah se wo aisa kar raha hai"sameer said in a deep voice "ye koi excuse nahin hota hai shree Dosmestic violence ka aur ye sab karne se pehle kya use patni aur bacchi ka khayaal nahin aaya ek baar"shre said "Haan Sir main jaanta hoon ki koi excuse nahin hai par Ronnie ki bhi galti nahin hai wo bhi apni nakaami ki vajah se aisa ho gaya au raise logo ko behkaane waale bahut hote hai aur male ego use bardasht nahin hus ki liza aur melini bhahi ne usko darkinaar kar ke kamana shuru kiya" sameer said "Haan shree yadi ek beta ghar ko support karta hai to use kitna accha manta hai aur yadi yahi beti kare to ghar ke saare mardo ki ego hurt ho jaati hai wo chahe khud kisis laayak naa hoo aur wo ladki hazaar guna layak hoo" shree said " Sir that's an irony par kya kare sach to yahi hai meri baat hui melini bhabhi aur Emily aunty se unhone kaha hai ki yadi wo sudharna chahta hai to hume use mauka dena chahiye shayad jenifer ka future bhi isse secure ho jaaye" Sameer nodded & said "Theek hai shree main dekhta hoon yadi mujhe vakai laga to main job hi kar sakta hoon karoonga" Shre looked at him thankfully & said "Thanks Sir yadi wo manta hai jenifer ko shayad apne papa se door nahin hona padega " sameer nodded with a smile & shree left.

After a while arjun entered & saw shree leaving the room as shree wished him entering & he nodded in response. He saw sameer indulged in file & asked him "Rathore shree kya karne aaya tha? Kuch kaam tha kya?" Sameer said haan wo liza ke case ke liye" Arjun said "Liza ka case kya hua use?" sameer told him the entire story arjun shook his head in disgust & said "rathod kya tumhe lagta hai ki kya ye sab kabhi badal paayega? Hamari hi team ki teeno female officers sab ek se ek talented aisha ek ammunition expert guns mines har cheez ki jaankaar, Riya research specialist jiska data hame case solve karne main bahut madat karta hai , Liza ek forensic doctor jo analysis se hamare case solve karne main madat karti hai kya kami hai inme jo insab ko aisa sehna pada kya fayda hai hamare aisa kaam karne ka jab hum humari hi team ki female officers ko hamare rehte hi ye sab face karna pada unchahee shadi , humiliation domestic violence jab bhi mujhe aisa sunne ko milta hai lagta hai ki ye sab bemaane hai ek aurat ko kabhi bhi wo repect nahin dete jo use milni chahiye chahe wo kaam main kitni hi acchi hoo ya kitne hi unche aude pe ho" sameer said "Main samajh raha hoon rawte tumhara kehna kuch had tak sahi hai par jo loog ye sab karte hai wo bhool jaate hai hai ki unhe bhi janam ek aurat ne hi diya hai aur hame hamare team members pe garv hona chahiye wo ladi haalat se dari nahin aur jeeti bhi aaj wo ek defence cell ka hissa hai aur bahut accha kaam kar rahi hai chalo ab zara us Ronnie ki akal thikane lagate hai"

They both went where Ronnie was kept he was now in his senses arjun & sameer both warned him verbly & interrogated him but when he didn't replied in positive manner few blows from arjun & sameer made him open his mouth in positive manner he said saab hamko maaf kardi I know humne bahut mistakes kiya hai par hum kya karta parivaar keliye hum kuch nahin kar paya jab karna chaha to ye sab .." Arjun said "Ronnie daulat kamana bura nahin par tum hamesha bhool jaate ho ki shortcuts se kabhi kuch nahin hota yadi tumne ye socha hota to na apna business gayate aur na apne parivaar ki shanti " Ronnie nodded in shame & sameer said "aur yaad rakhna main sirf tumhari biwi bacchi aur pariwaar ko dekhkar koi case nahin bana raha hoon par hamari nazar tumpar hogi yadi dubara galti se koi aise harkat ki to main bhool jaaounga kit um hamari team mate ke pariwaar ka hissa ho ab sabse pehle hum tumhe kisi acche rehab main bhej rahe hai tab uske baad tum apne ghar jaa sakte hoo aur sab naye sere se shuru kar sakte hoo" Ronnie started to cry & said joining his hands "humko maaf kardo saab" sameer said "Maafi mangni hai hai to apni biwi beti aur apne pariwaar se mango aur apne is partner ka zara pata do hum zara isse bhi milna chahte hai jo ghaate main bhi tumhare saath business karke tumhe karz bhi de raha tha" Ronnie told the details of his partner & later he was sent to a government rehab centre for his treatment. Sameer & Arjun called Liza & said "Liza Ronnie par hum koi case nahin kar rahe hai par hamari nazar hogi uspe waise maine rehab main use shift karwa diya hai uski sharaab choot jaayegi aur within month or two wo poori tareeke se sahi ho jayega par tum kya uske partner ko jaanti hoo?" Liza said "Nahin par bas ek aad baar dekha hai Ronnie ke saath usko wo kya karta hai maine kabhi nahin poocha " sameer said "Hame uspe shaq hai ki wo gadbad hai main pata karwaata hoon tum chinta mat karo aur apni family ka khayaal rakhna " Liza had tears in her eyes & said "Thanks sir aapne hamare family ke liye jo kiya hai .." cutting her short he sad "liza please ETF meri family hai aur apne pariwaar ke liye sab karte hai" liza came out of samers cabin after giving him a thankful look & after that she straight went to shree & said "Shree main tumhe thanks kehna chahti thi sir ne Ronnie ko chance diya hai tumhare kehne par I hope ki sab theek ho jaaye" Shree said "Liza wo mero vajah se nahin balki hamare bosses ki dhulayi ki vajah se line par aaya hai & ab sab accha hi hoga" liza smiled faidly to him & went to her lab & called her home to inform about Ronnie.






SCROLL DOWN FOR PART 11 B 😊😊

Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago

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