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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shreyashi19mld

read 2 parts in one go

lovely n beautiful update
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART 17 A

Sameer in no time moved out of the premises of ETF scaning for Aisha & karan & as karan was already after aisha he wanted to alret her first. He started calling on her cell but it was switched off now. Sameer became more conscious about it as normally aisha never use to switch off her mobile. He started to scan the places & wanted to find Aisha & karan fast. Here after sameer left in a huff shree told arjun about it. Arjun said "shree rathore ki last call check karo" shree traced the number & arjun called on the last received call & came to know everything. He asked shree to trace the location of aisha but shree could not as it was switched off. Arjun shree chotu & riya in no time started to scan sameer & aisha. Here sameer found some traces of karan through some local people who had seen karan taking a cab. Sameer strated to follow the path he suddenly found aishas informer whome he met 2 weeks ago duringa case. Sameer asked him about aisha & he said the he met her few minutes bback & after that she went back then he showed him karan pic & he said that he ha seen this man today he was standing few feets away from aisha & as soon aisha left he also started to move behind her. Sameer now paniced more & resumed his scaning. After searching about half an hour he finally he got the news about karan. He zoomed into the place it was bit outer area of dader & also bit isolated. He started scanning the place & finally found aisha in an unconscious state. Before he could reach aisha karan stopped him coming in front & pointing the gun said "meri dushmani aisha se hai tumse nahin tumhari vajah se last time main pakda gaya tha isliye tum yaha se zinda lautna chahte ho chup chap chale jao samjhe"

Sameer didn't said anything just punched him hard across his face twisting his arms & started approaching towards aisha. Karan tried to shoot him but before he could sameer turned & shot directly on his head & karan went dead there. He reached aisha & scooped her in his arms & moved out of the place but before that ETf reached there Arjun said "rathod kya hua aisha ko?" sameer replied "behosh hai rawte us karan ne bhaag kar attack kiya tha aisha ko shayad kuch sungha ke behosh kar diya hai use maarne waala tha par main theek waqt pe paunch gaya wo ander mar chukka hai main aisha ko leke hospital jaata hoon tum zara ye sab formalities khatam karke aao" Arjun nodded & took over the charge & after that sameer left with aisha to the hospital. Aisha was still unconscious & sameer was waiting for her to get back to senses. After 1 hour arjun too arrived with the entire team all were praying for aishas well being. After a while Doctor came out & said "Mr rathore aisha ji bilkul theek hai bas behosh thi chloroform ka asar tha thodider main hosh aa jaayega par dhyan rahe wo pata nahin kisis cheez ko leke pareshaan hai unka reaction time to yahi bata raha hai aap loog bas dhyan rakhiye ki unhe abhi koi stress na hoo baaki kal tak wo discharge ho jaayengi aur yadi koi problem ho to please mujhe bata dejiyega "sameer nodded & all sighed in relief. After waiting for another half an hour aisha came back to senses & gently tried to open her eyes & as soon as she opened her eyes she saw her team mates around her.

Sameer asked her gently "aisha ab kaisa feel kar rahi hoo?" Aisha said "fine sir par wo karan ne mujhe kuch sungha diya tha achanak aur main behosh ho gayi thi karan kahah hai wo pakd agaya kya?" sameer said "Aisha karan ab tumhe kabhi pareshaan karega he is dead " Aisha eyes widen in shock sameer said explaining her "jab main tumhe bachane aaya tha tab usne mujhpar bhi attack karne ki koshish kari thi aur mere paas koi tareek anahin bacha tha waise bhi us jaise aadmi ki koi zarrorat nahin hai " aisha nodded & said "Thanks sir aapki vajah se ab karan hame kabhi pareshaan nahin karega" sameer informed anwesha that aisha is fine now & she is in hospital. Aftera while team went back to ETf office & sameer stayed with aisha. Sameer went to aisha after taking all the details from the doctor & said "aisha I am really sorry mujhe aisa behave nahin karna chahiye tha par shayad mujhse ye sab bardast nahin hua isliye maine aise react kiya" Aisha said "please sir aapne jobhi kiya main samajh sakti hoon aapko kaisa laga hooga unlogo ki baate sunkar aur fir maine bhi aapko aane se mana kar diya par main bhi kya karti mere paas unke sawaalo ka isse accha jawaab nahin tha" sameer said "ab wo sab chodo aisha take rest tumhe thode aaram ki zarrorat hai" Aisha nodded & said "sir waise mujhe pata nahin tha aapko itn agussa aata hai hum to samajhte the sirf arjun sir ko bahut gussa aata hai" sameer said "haan kuch cheezo pe main apna gussa control nahin kar paata " Aisha gave him a light smile & he too returned it back & left the room . Next day aisha was discharged & reached home sameer had already told him about karan that he is dead. She hugged her mother & anwesha too hugged her back & said "kaise hai beta aur ye sab kaise hua?" Aisha told her the whole story & anwesha said "Bhagwaan ka shukra hai ki tujhe kuch nahin hua hai aur main bahut kush hoon karan jaise insaan ka yahi ant hona tha par tujhse ek baat kahu tu bahut lucky hai ki sameer jaise dost hai teri zindigi main jisne har jagah tera saath diya hai par ab to karan ka khatra bhi nahin hai tu kab naye sire se apni zindgi shuru karegi?" Aisha said "Maa please " anwesha said "aisha meri baat gaur se sun tu kehti thin a ki jis din teri zimmedariyo ko baatne waala mil jaayega tu inkaar nahin karegi" Aisha said with surprise"Par maa .." she said"ab koi par war nahin tu acche se sooch le kyuki aise loog jo aapka bina kisis swarth ke saath de bahut kam hote hai" & walks inside leaving a stunned aisha behind.








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Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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PART 17 B


Aisha after hearing her mother words she went into deep thoughts indeed sameer was the one who always supported her respected her he even loved kabir a lot slowly & gradually he had already developed a bond with her & her family too. Her thoughts were broken by kabirs voice who was happy to see her mummy back safe & sound he was leaving for his school & came to say bye to her mother. Aisha smiled & hugged him & bid him bye. Anwesha called aisha for breakfast & seeing her lost in thoughts said "kya sooch rahi hai beta?" Aisha said "kuch nahin maa bas.."Anwesha said "bas kya beta soochna chod aur meri meri baat pe dhyan zarror dena" She nodded & went to rest. Here in the office all were puzzled about aisha except riya & shree as they knew what happened but others required the full explanation. Sameer called shree, chotu riya & liza & also explained them the real situation & also told them not to discuss with others he is telling them to avoid any kind of confusion & they should not say anything in front of aisha & others so that she might not get hurt. All nodded in positive & resumed their duties & started the paperwork. Shree said "yaar thanks God aisha theek hai us karan ka yahi anth hona tha" Liza said Specky tum theek keh rahe hoo shayad ab aisha chain se reh paayegi" riya said "par society use kya chain se jeene degi liza? Par hum sab use poora support karenge" choutu said "Haan bilkul par rathore sir accha kiya haitna sab hone par bhi aisha ko support kiya"shree said Haan par aisha ki koi galti nahin thi chotu bas uske paas aise sawaalo ka isse accha jawaab nahin tha" & all started to work with normal chit chat.


After sameer called the day off all were ready to move out when chotu cought shree gaping at liza & wanted to say something. Chotu ina teasing way to said "shree dekhne se kaam nahin chalega thodi mehnat bhi karni padegi" shree looked at chotu in surprised way & said "kya bakwaas kar raha hai bheem" chotu said "bilkul sahi keh raha hoon mujhe dekh kar sabak lee aur apne dil ki baat jitni jaldi ho kehde accha rahega aur mujhe ye bhi pata hai ki won a nahin kahegi tune bahut help ki hai na uski" shree tried to say something but chotu said "Dekh yadi tu ye kehna chahata ki main galat bol raha hoon to rehne de main sab jaanta hoon tu mujhe bewkoof nahin bana sakta" shree sighed heavily & said "mujhe samajh main nahin aaraha chotu main kya karron?" Chotu said "ab aaya na line par is maamle main tujhe mujhse acchi slalah koi nahin de sakta tu uski pasand na pasand to jaanta hai na bas thoda sa care dikha wo waise bhi bahut naram dil ki itne main hi pighal jaayegi" shree said "nana shaq karegi" chotu said "shaq kyu karegi?" shree said "din bhar to usse ladta rehta hoon ab care dikhunga to shaq nahin karegi?" chotu said "tu kyu tension leta hai ab jaldi jaa wo jaa rahi hai use ghar drop kar ke aa" shree nodded & walked behind liza & said politely "Liza main ghar chod doon aoo" Liza raised her brow quizzically & said "kyu specky main apne ghar ka pata bhool gayi hoon ya tum mere ghar main aana chahte hoo aur itn acare mat dikhao tum normal nahin lagte ho ladayi karte hi theek lagte ho" shree smiled faidly didn't know what to reply liza was smiling at his condition quietly & said after a pause with a wide smile "accha ab chalo yahi reh ke ghar chodoge kya ?" shree smiled & went along with liza to drop her.


Here in sameer was leaving to his apartment when his cell buzzed he looked at the number it was from aishas place. He picked up the call & said "hello" anwesha on the other side said sameer beta main anwesha bol rahi hoon maaf karna itni raat disturb kiya " sameer said aunty aise koi baat nahin hai sab theek hai na koi pareshani to nahin ?" anwesha said "haan koi pareshani nahin hai pareshani ki saari vajah to khatam ho gayi hai" sameer said "haan aunty par aapki aawaz se lag raha hai jaise baat bahut serious hai" anwesha said "Haan kuch aisa hi samajh loo kya hum kal tumhare ghar ke saamne waale park aur mandir main mil sakte hai" sameer said "ji aunty bilkul main kal subah aapka wait karronga" & line went dead after that. Sameer came back home deep in thoughts that what might have happened & anwesha too sounded very conscious while talking. After a while he went to sleep thinking that what is the reason that anwesha had called her. Next morning he went to park near to his place which had a small temple as well. After finishing his daily exercise he saw anwesha coming to the park & sameer said geeting her by touching her feet & said "Batayiye aunty kya baat hai?" Anwesha said "Sameer beta tum to sab jaante ho aisha se main jab bhi uski zindigi ke baare main baat karti hoon to wo taal jaati hai usne ghar ki zimmedarriyo maim aur kabir main khud ko itna uljha liya hai ki vo kuch aur dekhna hi nahin chahti uski khud ki koi zindigi nahin bachi jaise" sameer said "Haan maine usse ye baat kahi thi par wo ye kehke taal gayi ki jab tak use koi aisa nahin mil jaata jo uski zimmedaari uske saath baant le wo shadi nahin karna chahti hai main samjhana bhi chahta tha par ye uska personal maamla hai to maine kuch zayada nahin kaha" Anwesha said "haan wo yahi kehti hai aur tumhari beeti hui zindigi ke baare main bhi mujhe pata hai aisha ne bataya tha beta shayad tumhe theek na lage par tum dono ke saath jo hua wo kismat ki baat thi par kyatum loog saath milke kismat se nahin lad sakte kya tum kush nahin reh sakte?" sameer was confused what to say he said "aunty aap kya kehna chahti hai main samjha nahin ?" anwesha took a deep sigh & said Main chahti hoon kitum dono saath milkar nayi zindigi shuru karo aisha se kehne ka koi fayda nahin hai par main tumahri rai jaana chati thi koi jaldi ya koi majboori nahin hai tum sooch loo aur fir jawaab do shayad main swarthy ho gayi hoon par jo aisha ne saha hai wo bhi to apne hisse ki kushi deserve karti haina" sameer was totally speechless after a sudden marriage proposal.











P-RECAP: what will be the answer of sameer to this proposal? & some interesting turn in riyas lige & much more 😉


So how was it guys please drop in ur comments as I write for u guys so please do let me know all ur bashing, feedback & suggestions are more than welcome excuse for typing & formatting errors love u all

Regards Goldie & Rimi 😊😊


Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Superb part hai dear thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update api
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Posted: 11 years ago
great
akhir karan ka chapter close

hona hi tha aisa logo koaisa

Sree ka feelings chotu ke samjh me ayi very good freind

ok move also nic

Anwesha aysha aur sameer ke marriage ke liye poocha

very good news

ab aage kya kahega dekhna hai

aur preacap new twist

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cont soon
Edited by SATRISHI - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: tiakhan98

Superb part hai dear thanks for pm

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Shanafr

Awesome update api
Loveit
Thanks for pm cont soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome.. Lovely.. Finally karan ka the end.. Things getting normal.. Anwesha n aisha's convo.. Anwesha n sam's convo.. Sudden proposal.. Eager to know answer as sasha.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: unishaz

awesome.. Lovely.. Finally karan ka the end.. Things getting normal.. Anwesha n aisha's convo.. Anwesha n sam's convo.. Sudden proposal.. Eager to know answer as sasha.. Continue soon.. Thanks for pm..

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