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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rinku95

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Posted: 11 years ago
superb one...

really nyc part dear..


and Kabir is Mature kid


feel sry for Sameer , but ys he have great Heart...



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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: M.V.Kohli007

superb one...

really nyc part dear..


and Kabir is Mature kid


feel sry for Sameer , but ys he have great Heart...



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Ya kabir is mature & can feel his mothers pain 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing updates
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pravalika9291

Amazing updates
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: rosepedal

great update

continue soon

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Posted: 11 years ago
ch 11
awesome update di👏👏
loved it
hopefully ronnie ab sudhar jayega😉
loved raisha convo..eagarly waiting for sam's past😊
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ch 12
awesome update di
loved it
sam's past is painful..interesting too😉
riya ko aisha ke baare me pata chal gaya..she's shocked
loved kabir-sam's convo..very sweet😳
anwesha too knows about sam's past
interesting precap..hope arjun is not hurt much😉
continu soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Godly_Affection

ch 11

awesome update di👏👏
loved it
hopefully ronnie ab sudhar jayega😉
loved raisha convo..eagarly waiting for sam's past😊
thankx for pm
~
ch 12
awesome update di
loved it
sam's past is painful..interesting too😉
riya ko aisha ke baare me pata chal gaya..she's shocked
loved kabir-sam's convo..very sweet😳
anwesha too knows about sam's past
interesting precap..hope arjun is not hurt much😉
continu soon
thankx for pm
sorry for short n late reply

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Posted: 11 years ago
Guys I here By introduce 2 characters in my story

Dr. Neelkanth Purohit & Kaatyayni Purohit : Dr. Neelkanth is a famous scientist of India & kattyayni is his wife a very simple lady . They understand each other well 😊




Hope u like them 😊




Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


PART 13 A

Next Morning shree & chotu were chatting & sameer & arjun were in their respective cabins rest were about to comne shree & chotu were chatting shree said "yaar chotu us lazario jaise admi ko na goli maar deni chahiye ek hasta kheltya pariwaar tabah kar diya usne" Chotu said "shree akele uska kasoor nahin hai apni jhooti ego ke liye loog aise logo ke chakkar main fas jaate hai" shree nodded & said " haan par aunty aor Liza kitne kush hai ki Ronnie sudhar jaayega" chotu said "Kaya baat hai shree tujhe badi padi hai liza ki kushi ki waise to saara din usse ladta rehta hai aur jab pata chala to seedharathore sir ke paas chala gaya" shree in irritated tone "dekh be bheem mujhe pareshaan mat kiya ka raise koi baat nahin hai par wo hamari team member bhi hai aur police officer bhi isliye maine .." cutting him short chotu said "ab explanation kyu de raha hai par ek baat kahu teri aur uski Jodi ek dum hitech rahegi" Shree angily said "tu bas karega pata nahin kya kya sochta rehta hai?" chotu smiled at him & said "Shree wo ri kya kehti hai ki 90% cases main.." riya entered the conference room & completed the sentence saying"Nafart se hi pyar ki shuruyaat hoti hai" & hi-5 chotu shree said pissing his teeth "Ri tubhi is bheem ke saath mil gayi aur mera mazaak bana rahi hai" riya said laughing "Sorry shree par chotu bilkul sahi keh raha hai aur liza to tumhari kitni taareef karti hai" Shree said with surprise "ri tu kyu jhoot bol rahi hai wo mere marne bhi na rooye aur tu keh rahi hai ki wo meri tarref karti hai" Riya said "sacchi shree sabse pehle tumne hi to pata kiya tha ki kuch problem hai aur.." she could not complete the sentence when arjun came out & yelled at them saying "Kya kar rahe ho tum loog aur subah subah kya shor macha rakha hai apna paper work poora karo shanty se" & he went to sameers cabin shree said chalo hamare sys ki good morning ho gayi"

All laughed at him & went back to their desks Arjun entered the cabin & said "rathore wo mujhe last case ki file chahiye thi study ke liye" Sameer gives him the file & arjun takes his seat in front of him & notices he is in deep thought he says "kya hua rathore kuch sooch rahe hoo?" sameer said haan rawte main kabir ke baare main sooch raha tha kal jab main aisha ko drop karne gaya tha to usne mujhse poocha ki kya aisha karan ko jaanti hai? Mujhe samajh main nahin aaya main kya jawaab doon wo chota sa bachha apni maa ko kitne acchi tarha samajhta hai aur aisha use lagta hai ki kabir ko kuch pata nahin hai bhale hi wo kuch na kahe par apni maa ka har dard samajhta hai aur usne kahah ki aisha kisis se apna dekh apni takleef nahin kehti islie wo mujhse poochega "Arjun smiles at sameer & said "tum sahi keh rahe hoo rathod baccha kitna hi chota ho apni maa ko bahut acche se samajhta hai shayd yahi vajah hai ki paalne waale ko janam dene waale se bada mana gaya hai aur kabir ke liye aisha uski janam dene waali maa se bhi badkar hai "sameer smiled & said "haan sahi keh rahe ho rawte khair us samar ka kya hua kuch gadbad to nahin kin a usne" Arjun said "abhi tak to nahin yadi usne koshish bhi ki to uska kya haal hoga ye wo soch bhi nahin sakta" sameer nodded & suddenly their chat was disturbed by IGs call on sameers cell informing about a new case. Sameer heard the details & called everybody in conference room.

After every one arrived Sameer started the brifing of the case saying "Team hare desh k eek bahut bade scientist Dr Neelkanth Puraohit aur unki patni kattayani purohit ghoomne ke liye nikle the Banglore ki taraf par kal se unka kahin koi pata nahin hai unse koi contact bhi nahin ho paya hai unke call details se pata chala hai ki unhe dhamkiyaa mil rahi thi kisi aatankwaadi sangathan se to hame darr hai ki kahain wo unhe koi nuksaan na paucha de hame unhe jald se jald dhoondna hoga" all nodded & suddenly Ig barged in the conference room all greeted him. He too responded with a nod & said "guys ek acchi khabar mili hai Dr neelkanth aur unki wife safe hai hame pata chala tha ki Banglore ke bahar jahah par wo the wahah achanak landslide se sab jam ho gaya tha isliye wahah signal na hone ki vajah se hum contact nahin kar paaye the" Sameer said "Fir to koi baat nahin hai sir everything is under control" Ig said Rathod par hum in dhamkiyoo ko for granted nahin le sakte halaki unka pata chal gaya hai par hum un jaise logo ki safety ko for granted nahin le sakte isliye I would prefer kitum unki security ka khayaal rakho wo private trip pe hai to tum sab unke peeche rahoge unka saaya banker" sameer was bit surprised & said "Sir par wo private trip par hai to shayad unhe ye sab theek nahin lagega aur phir hum ETF ke taur pe to nahin jaa sakte " Ig said "Main isliye yaha aayi hoon rtahod tum sab ko under cover unhe 4 din tak protect karna hoga dhyan rahe unhe ye na maloom ho kit um loog kaun ho wo loog Banglore ke hotel Paradise main hai tum loog kal hi waha chale jaao unka sweet number 4008 aur maine usi floor pe 2 sweet 4010 aur 4014 book kar diye hai main koi chance nahin lena chahta rathod tum aur aisha ek main aur rawte tum aur riya ek main unke aas paas rahoge ayr shree chotu aur liza tum logo ke liye bhi maine entrence ke paas 3 rooms book kara diye hai " All looked at each other with confused looks & sameer tried to say "par sir hum sab wo.." IG said cutting him short "rathod dekho main samajh raha hoon par kya kare karna padega warna hum unhe protect nahin kar paayenge ye bahut zarrori hai" sameer arjun aisha & riya lokked ateach other defeated & Ig Said "All the best rathod I hope sab theek hoga 4 din ki to baat hai" turning to shree "aur shree tum sabki ids ka intzaam kar doo koi issue nahin aana chahiye I want everything done by today evening aaj raat ki fight ki tickets tum book karlena bye & take care"






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Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago

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