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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome
Loved this brave riya and her plan... ekdam dhamaal
aur arjun kaha hai... cum fast naa Rawte and etf
precap gave me goosebumps bt i trust u tum ariya ko "KABHI" alag nahi karogi.
am i right?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Riya's presence of mind and courage helped the team save a lot of lives. But still they haven't given Roshni what she deserves - deserting your team in moments of danger should not be forgiven. Worried for Riya though. Please keep her safe atleast for Arnav's sake. Update soon please
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow
brilliant superb amazing update
its full of action
loved it
but precap is really scary
hope riya ko thik ho
plz continue soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thrilling update
But precap ne to meraa hosh ura li
Plz don't make her die
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 38:-

arjun's home:

riya take out her gun n get ready for fight..

riya take maid n arnav to bedroom..

riya(to maid):kuch bhi ho jaye...chahe kuch bhi..par iss room se bahar mat nikalna..

maid nooded with horrified expression..

riya was about to leave but again turn..

riya(to maid):don't worry..mere hote hue tumhe aur arnav ko koi touch bhi nahi kar payega..

she come out of bedroom..n lock it properly..

she hide herself behind a big piller in hall..

n at the next moment she hear a loud bang of breaking door of home harshlessly..

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She saw altaf entering in house with his 8 mens..

Altaf(yells):riyaaa..bahar aao..kab tak chipogi muzse..?bahot ho gaya ye hide n seek game..ab samne aao mere..ab tumhe muzse koi nahi bacha sakta..akeli muzse aur mere aadmiyo se kab tak ladogi.?sare security constables ko mere aadamiyo ne maar diya he..aur tumhari etf team..unhe mere aadmiyo ne raste me hi rok liya..(etf team was figing with his goon..)woh unhe iss ghar tak nahi pahochne denge..ab tumhari help kyon karega..(laugh)

Riya(in mind) :mein apni help khud karugi altaf..

She fired towards his men..n kill 2 mens..

Now the goons also get alerted..n hide themselves where they can..they too starts firing towards riya..

Their fights continue..

N here etf team also fighting with altaf's men..

Sam(while firing):dam it..pata nahi riya..kaise sab handle kar rahi hogi..?

Arjun look to him with worried expression..his heart skip beat when he thinks about riya n arnav..

At the next moment he kill another goon..

Arjun's home:

Riya had kill 2 more goons..she check her pistol..its empty..she again fill it with bullets..

Riya(in mind,frustratedly):bas yahi hona baki reh gaya tha..last six bullets..aur abhi bhi 4 goons aur altaf baki he..kuch soch riya..kuch soch..

But her chain of thoughts get broke when a bullet of one of goon is passed crushing her left arm..

Her hand started bleeding..she angrily shoot towards the goon..bullet straight hit to his head..n he get dead..

Riya(holding her bleeding arm tightly..in mind):5 bullets 4 men..uff..

Here arjun feels restless..

Arjun(in mind):sab thik toh hoga na..?muze itna kyo ajeeb sa feel ho raha he..(he look to watch)riya ka phone cut kiye hue 15 minutes ho gaye he..pata nahi woh kitne der unn goons ko rok payegi..(he close his eyes for some seconds n saw riya in pool of blood)no..no..ye nahi hone dunga mein..no..

He again starts firing..Anyhow he wants to reach to his home now..

In arjun's home:

Altaf's men countinuosly firing towards riya..but now riya is not answering to them as she wants to use her remaining bullets in imergency..

Due to bullet firing's noise..arnav is very horrified n crying loudly inside bedroom..his crying voice can be heared by riya n altaf's men..maid was trying to make him calm..but due to noise that little boy is very horrified..

Altaf signal his 2 men to go to the bedroom from where arnav's crying voice is coming out..

Here riya also saw altaf's men moving towards the room where she leave arnav n maid..

Riya(in mind):kuch karna hoga riya..unhe arnav tak nahi pahochne de sakti..distrct them..

She run towards kitchen..altaf n his men saw her n starts firirng towards her..

She hide herself in kitchen..they continue firing..but riya don't fire back..

Altaf smrik evily..n signal his two men to get inside kitchen..

Riya had hide herself..2 of altaf men enter inside kitchen..they were looking for her..she come from back of them..n before they could relize she shoot both of's head..both goons get died on spot..she again check her gun..only 2 bullets are remain..

But before she could do anything ..she found altaf n his one man standing infront of her..pointing their guns to her..

Altaf(laugh loudly):yakin nahi hota..ke tumhare jaise ek sidhe sadi ladki ne mere itane aadmiyo ko maar giraya..kamal he..par khair..machali(fish)aakhir jal me fas hi gayi..AB BACHAKE KAHA JAOGI..

Riya(pointing her gun to altaf):bachake toh tum nahi ja sakhoge ab..

Altaf:are..mein toh bhul hi gaya tha..iss machali ki jaan toh usake bacche me he..(he n his man laugh loudly)

Altaf(looking to his man):ja isaki jaan ko leke aa..(means arnav)riya pehale tere bacche ko tadapte hue marte dekhle..fir tuze maruga..

Altaf's man turn to get arnav from bedroom..

But before that anyone could understand..riya shoot that man..n he get dead..

Altaf get angry..n hurrily come towards her..(now riya had only one bullet remain..)

Riya(warning tone):aage mat bado altaf..warna tumhare aadmiyo ki jo halat he woh tumhari bhi hogi..

Altaf smile carelessly n still coming closer of her..

Riya shoot at him..but he bend down..n bullet missed.

Riya get frustrated because it was her last bullet..n that too goes waste..

Altaf has reach very close to her..

Riya(in mind):gun me bullet nahi he ye muze pata he par isse nahi..

She pointed gun to him..

Riya:ab tumhra khel khatam he altaf..marne se accha he ke apne aapko kanoon ke hawale kar do..

Altaf(laugh):huh..kanoon..??

He fire bullet on riya's hand which holding her gun..

Her gun droped from her hand..n her palm started bleeding..

It is 2nd bullet she get hit..

She yell in pain..he harshly pull her towards him..

But she push him n run from kitchen..

Altaf(laugh):meri rani..bhag..bhag ke jaogi kaha..

Altaf come out of kitchen..riya had hide herself behind a piller..she come out..n suddenly kick on his hand..due to this gun fell from his hand..both starts fighting(karate)..

Altaf intensionlly kick on her wounded hand..its started bleeding more..she had lost very much blood till..due to that she feel her head spinning..

Altaf took this chance n take his gun from floor..n shoot a bullet towards riya..it hit her stomatch..she fall down..she feels she don't have energy to get up now..

Altaf laugh evily..

Here arjun n etf team had finished all goons..they again get inside suv..to go to arjun's home..

In suv:

Shree(worrily):hame bahot time ho gaya..hope ri n arnav thik ho..

Chotu(worrily):meri toh jaan nikali jaa rahi he unn dono ke bare me soch ke..

Both choree look to their two bosses..

Sam trying to hide his worriness..n driving like manic..

While they saw first time arjun in so much worry..

Arjun(in mind):shit..kya ho raha he ye..?meri family itane bade problem me..aur mein kuch bhi nahi kar paa raha..yaha par meri family ki jaan khatre me he aur mein ab tak ghar bhi nahi pahucha..

Arjun's brain:ye baar baar tum meri family..meri family kyo keh rahe ho..?kya riya bhi tumhari family he..?

Arjun remember how he feels that his family..his life is complete whenever he,riya n arnav are together..

arjun(in mind):riya aur arnav ke sath hota hut oh sab kuch accha lagta he..sab perfect lagta he..

his chain of thoughts get broke when chotu speak..

chotu:riya ko call kare..?

sam:isaki zarurat nahi chotu..ham pahoch gaye..

sam stop suv infront of arjun's home..

arjun(in mind):plz..god..sab thik ho..

inside arjun's home:

riya was trying hard to keep her counsiousness..but it looks that her vision is betraying her..she countinously flattering her eyelids for not to get uncounsious..n her ears wants to stop hearing altaf's cruel laugh..

altaf come closer..n hold her wounded palm harshly..n drag her to bedroom where she kept arnav...

altaf break door..n drag her inside bedroom..

maid was sitting in a corner holding arnav near her with horrified look..while arnav is crying countinously..

altaf:kabse ro raha he..muze aise rone wale bachhe bilcul pasand nahi..ab isaka rona hamesha ke liye band kar deta hu..(turn to riya)riya tum bhi dekho..kaise tumhare bte ko mar raha hu..dont worry..usse jyada dard nahi dunga..ek goli..kaam finish..(he laugh evily,n turn to arnav.)

he points gun to arnav..

here riya lying on floor in verge of getting uncounsious..

she saw altaf pointing gun to arnav..she gathered all her courage n power..spread her hand to side table..take flower pot on it..n throw it to altaf..which is directly hit to his head..

he yell in sudden pain..n turn n saw riya trying to stand properly..

Riya gathered her all power n kick him..he fall on floor..n gun escaped from his hand..

She throw one more flowerpot on his head..his head started bleeding badly..riya somehow manage to take his gun from floor..

Altaf was about to get up..but riya kick him again..

She points gun to him..

Riya:kya..kya kaha tha tumne..?mera beta meri kamzori he..?kya kaha tha tumne har maa ki kamzori usaka baccha hota he..(smile mockingly)huh..ha..sahi kaha tha..ma ki kamzori usake bacche hote he..par tum bhul gaye..agar woh bacche maa ki kamzori hote he..toh wahi bacche ma ki strength bhi hote he..mera beta..mera arnav meri kamzori he..lekin wahi..wahi arnav meri sabse badi strength bhi he..(hit a bullet to his stomatch)aur mere bte ki taraf aakh uthakar bhi dekhne ka nateeja kya hoga ye tum samaz gaye honge..par afasos..ab bahot der ho gayi he kuch samazne ya fir samazane ke liye..good bye forever..

She shoot him more 2 bullets..this time near his heart..he get died on spot..

Riya throw the gun..n look to maid n arnav..

Maid was so much feared n horrified that still she was sitting as it is n unable to move..while arnav crying countiously..

Small smile crept on her lips..

Riya(in soft tone):arnav..baby..dont cry now..dont..

She started walking towards arnav n maid..but could not reach them as she feel darkness covering her eyes..

She was about to fall but someone hold her in strong hands..

Before a minute

Etf team reach to arjun's home..they were about to get inside when they hear 3 gunshot(which riya shoot altaf)one by one..

They hurrily rush inside home..n realized the gunshot noise come from bedroom..they rush to bedroom..

Then they found altaf lying on floor dead..n riya walking towards arnav..but about to fall..then arjun rush to her n hold her..

Present:

Riya tried to open her eyes..she saw arjun in front of her..

Riya(wisper):arjunn..?

Arjun(worrily):riyaa..?ye kya hua..?tumhe itani goliya kaise lagi..?(she also get shot by 3 bullets)

Riya:arnav..arnav..

Arjun too look to arnav..n then again to riya..

Arjun:riya...

Riya:arnav...dar..gaya he...usse apne pass lo...dar gaya he..woh..

Arjun rush to arnav n take him in his hand..hug him..n then kiss his forehead..

He was very happy to see arnav safe..but he was that much sad n worried for riya..

Shree:sir..ambulance aane me time lagega..hame riya ko hospital le jana hoga..

Arjun handover arnav to chotu..n take riya in his arm..they rush to suv..

Sam drive like manic..n somehow they manage to reach hospital..

Doctor was checking riya:

Doctor:oh my god..inako kafi blood loss ho chukka he..inaki condition kafi critical he..

Arjun(worrily):doctor kuch bhi kijiye..par isse bacha lijiye..

Doctor:ham puri koshish karege..(to nurse)inake operation ki tayari karo..

All team including roshni n aayesha gathered around riya..

Sam(cup riya's face):riya..dont worry..tumhe kuch nahi hoga..

Riya(smile in pain):ab aur dard sehene ki..aur ladne ki takat nahi he muzme sam..

Arjun(hold her hand):aise mat bolo riya..tumhe kuch nahi hoga..i promise..mein tumhe kuch nahi hone dunga..

Riya:promise..?apne sare promises toh tod chuke ho arjun..?

Arjun(cup her face):riyaa..plz..aise harna mat..tumhe kuch nahi hoga..

Riya(with tears):arjun..aaj tak tumne apna koi promise nahi nibhaya..but ab mere pass koi rasta nahi..aakhri baar tumse kuch maang rahi hu..promise me..

Arjun:riya..plz..tum aise baate kyo kar rahi ho..?

Riya:promise me arjun..hamare bich bhale hi kitani problems kyo na ho..tum isaka asar arnav pe nahi padne doge..usse kisi baat ki kami nahi hone doge..usse har khushi doge..chahe kuch bhi ho jaye..tum usaka sath kabhi nahi chodoge..promise me..?plz..

Arjun:I promise u riya..i promise..par plz..for sake of arnav..dont give up..dont give up riya..

Before riya or anyone could speak more..they hear loud yell..

Arnav(chotu has hold him):maa...maa...maaamm...mmaaammaa..mmamma..

Smile appears on riya's face..

Sam:do u hear riya...arnav ne first time..first time kuch bola he..woh bhi mom..he call u riya..

Tears of happiness rolled down from her eyes..she cant tell how much she was waiting from arnav to call her "mamma"

Sam:look riya..he needs u..u have to fight for him..u have to..

Riya(breathing heavily):muze..muze bahot thand lag rahi he..

Sam n arjun started rubbing her hands..shree n aayesha rush to call doctor..

Riya:arjun..arjun..(breathing more heavily)..

Arjun(while crying):riyaa..

Riya:I know arjun tum tum arnav ka khayal rakhoge..usse..usse kisi cheez ki kami mehsoos nahi hone doge..par..par..u know..usse inn sab cheezo se bhi jyada agar kisi cheez ki zarurat he..toh..toh woh he pyar..

Now she have to do lots of effort to speak..her voice has get lowered..darkness is covering her vision..

Riya(breathing heavily..slow tone):usse pyar..aur sath ki jyada zarurat he..usse kabhi bhi usake ma ke pyar ki kami mehsoos mat hone dena.promise me..promise me..

Arjun(with tears,holding her hand):i..i..promise..i promise pari..

Small smile crept on her lips..

Arjun keep looking to her smily lips..what had hidden in that smile..pain..sadness..love..lose..or something more..

The smile faited away..suddenly arjun's gaze move from her lips to her eyes..her black core,deep,dove shape eyes had shut..

Arjun(yell):riyaaa...no...no...riyaaa..

Precap:

No precap..

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Posted: 10 years ago
*unres*
wow..
Main kya bolu.
Meri toh bolti bandh hogayi hai.
Riya gave a karara jawab to Altaf and his goons...
Apne bete ko surakshit rakke sari goliyaan apne upar le li hai...
Everyone really shocked seeing Riya drenched in the pool of blood...
Arjun and everyone else really very sad seeing Riya in this state...
Ab kya hoga?
Please Riya ko kuch mat hone dena.
Arnav ka kya hoga?
Arjun feeling really bad...
Ab kya hoga?
Please update really soon.
Edited by ...anika... - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
It's awesome update di
Riya fighted great
OMG she got hit by 3 bullets
Please nothing should happen to her
At last Arjun came to know about her importance in his life
But it became too late
Eagerly waiting to read more
Please do continue soon di
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Posted: 10 years ago
Eagerly waiting 4 next part


con soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nxt update k baad cmnt karungi
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update...
Riya gave good reply to Altaf & his men...😃😃😃
Arjun feeling restless...😃😃😃
Finally Riya killed Altaf...😃😃😃
Riya is in critical condition...

Continue soon...

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