Case SS :- A Dream come true...Last Chapter/Pg 45 07-11-14 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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to the world of writing dear
jab itna accha likti ho to likha kyun nhi ya phir shub mohart ka intezar ho rha tha ๐Ÿ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
#32
Nice start
Aisha dream came true
Plz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
omg the same incident aayesha saw in her dream..
n that's why she is upset..
plz continue soon
thanks 4 pm..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Note :- Hi frnds...from the first chapter u all have build up so many hopes but I might not be able live upto ur expectations, sorry in advance if I disappoint someone...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Chapter - 2
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At midnight, someone got down from the car & started walking towards a house by passing through a garden, he/she stands in front of the gate, the gate was open, he/she entered the house, the lady greet him/her, kid was looking at him/her but that person points his/her gun at lady & first shoot lady & than at the kid...both died at the spot.

Aisha opened her eyes sacredly & started looking here & there...she was sweating very badly...that was only the dream she saw...she signed & mutters to herself, "Din bhar cases, laasho aur criminals ko handle karte karte ab toh sapne bhi unn hi ke aate hai"

After drinking water she again slept.

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Aisha muttering to herself, "Aisa kaisa ho sakta hai...kal raat ko jo sapna dekha aaj woh sach kaise ho sakta hai...yeh kaisa coincidence hai"

She don't know why she saw that dream, she don't even know that lady & kid, than why she saw them, she had never went there before than how can she see the same house with same interior in her dream.

She was confused like hell & thinking what to do now, should she tell others or not, but what she vll tell others bcoz she herself don't know anything & moreover what they vll think about this dream stuff & all.

That's when her phone started ringing, the call was from Sakshi.

Sakshi was worried about her so she called her when she was alone.

On phone, Aisha tried to say it normal, "Hello"

Sakshi "Aisha!!! Kya kua!!!Kaisi ho???"

Aisha "Mein thik hu Sakshi"

Sakshi "Kya theek hu...Kya hua tha wahan pe"

Aisha remembering the dream & murder spot replied, "Kuch nahi...bas aise hi...headache ho raha hai"

Sakski felt something fishy but only said, "Oh ok...take care...& rest properly"

Aisha "Hmmm"

After that both cut the call.

Sakshi to Shree, "Shree!!! Tumhe kuch ajib nahi lag raha"

Shree replied confused, "Matlab"

"Aisha ka behaviour...morning mein toh bilkul sahi thi aur ab achanak Headache"...Sakshi said confused.

Shree replied, "Arey...tum na kuch jyada hi soch rahi ho...sach mein Headache hoga warna woh case ke bich mein se kyu jati "

Sakshi said, "Hmmm...ho sakta hai"

Shree went to Rathod's cabin after knocking the door & informed him about the details he had collected & found Arjun there also.

Rathod "Kya pata chala"

Shree "Sir meine Pallavi ke saare phone records check kiye hai & they are normal, bank details mein bhi kuch khas nahi hai"

Arjun "Aur kisi se koi personal dushmani"

Shree "Pallavi ki toh kisi koi dushmani nahi hai par uske husband Ragav usske upar ek case file hua tha"

Rathod "Kaisa case"

Shree "Dhokadhadi ka, Koi Mr. Avinash hai unhone case file kiya tha yeh kehke ki un dono matlab Ragav aur Avinash ne milke ek business start kiya tha but baad mein jab business mein profit hone laga toh dheere dheere Ragav ne silently saara business apne naam kar liya"

Rathod "Shree, iss Ragav ko bulao interrogation ke liye par... ajib baat hai uski biwi aur bache ko kisine maar diya aur woh abhi tak aaya bhi nahi"

Shree "Aur aayega bhi nahi Sir"

Rathod & Arjun looked at Shree with raised eyebrows & Shree continued, "Woh Sir Ragav ki ek car accident mein maut ho gayi thi aur Avinash iss waqt mental asylum mein hai bcoz ussne apna saara paisa uss business mein laga diya aur case harne ke baad uski mental state kharab ho gayi".

Rathod "Agar aisa hai toh Avinash ke pass Ragav ki family ko marne ki wajah hai par family kyu Ragav toh mar chuka hai"

Shree "Par sir Avinash aisa nahi kar sakta woh toh mental asylum mein hai"

Arjun "Ho sakta hai ki ab woh thik ho gaya ho"

Rathod "Ho sakta hai...Shree check karo ki kya Avinash sach mein thik ho gaya hai kya??"

Shree nodded & left from the cabin.

Since it was quite late Rathod called the day off & everybody went to their respective places.

At the same time at Aisha's place, whole time she was thinking about the dream & house only.

Next day

Aisha after the sleepless night thought of going office thinking she might get some clue of all this.

Rathod, Arjun, Shree & Chotu were sitting in the conference table & discussing about the case.

Shree said, "Sir meine pata kiya hai Avinash abhi tak thik nahi hua hai...uski halat mein koi improvement nahi hai"

Sakshi said excitingly while entering inside "Mujhe kuch pata chala hai"

Rathod, "Kya pata chala hai"

Sakshi, "Mujhe pata chala hai ki Pallavi se woh saara business nahi handle ho raha hai, aur saara business kisi ko sell out karna chahati hai aur kisi turst worthy ko dena chahati hai"

Arjun, "Koi mila"

Sakshi, "Haan, ek hai Mr Rounak, woh yeh saara business kharidne mein kafi interested hai"

Rathod, "Toh isme interesting kya hai"

Sakshi, "Interesting yeh hai ki Rounak is not only interested in business but also in Pallavi"

Arjun, "Aur Pallavi"

Sakshi, "Jahan tak mujhe pata chala hai Pallavi is not a bit interested"

That's when Aisha entered in hall.

Seeing Aisha Sakshi said, "Hi Aisha, How r u feeling now"

Now everyone turned towards Aisha.

Aisha replied with a small smile, "I m fine...now"

Rathod ordered Chotu, "To get all the information about this Rounak & call him for interrogation"

Aisha asked confused, "Kaun Rounak???"

Shree said, "Arey woh kal wale case ke liye"

Aisha only muttered "Oh" which was only audible to Rathod as she was sitting near him only.

Rathod felt something is wrong with her but couldn't figure out. That's when his phone buzzed & he went out to attend the call.

After that everyone started doing their respective works.

And Sakshi tell Aisha about all the details they have collected till now about the case.

But Aisha seemed to be more confused now bcoz now it was clear that she don't know Pallavi or anyone related to this case. Than how did she saw that dream. Moreover Pallavi & Mayank were shooted exactly at the same way she had seen that in dream.

Seeing Aisha in her thoughts Sakshi nudged her saying, "Kaha ko gayi"

Aisha asked, "Kuch pata chala kisne mara hai un dono ko"

Sakshi, "Nahi...abhi tak toh nahi...bcoz except footprints koi surag hi nahi hai"

Aisha asked, "Kaise footprints???"

Sakshi said, "Sayad killer main gate se aaya tha kyunki kisi ki andar aur bahar jane ke footprints hai"

Aisha seemed thoughtful bcoz sapne mein bhi toh killer main gate se hi aaya tha.

Sakshi asked worriedly, "Kya hua hai Aisha phir kahi kho gayi...kal se dekh rahi hu tum kuch ajib behave kar rahi ho...kal murder spot par kya hua tha tumhe...aise achanak kyu chali gayi"

Aisha said, "Nahi...bas aise hi...bola tha na Headache ho raha tha isliye leave li"

Sakshi said, "Are u sure"

Aisha said, "Haan" & smiled to assure Sakshi that everything was fine but she knows that nothing is fine.

After that Sakshi left the conference room leaving Aisha behind to think.

Aisha thought of seeing dead bodies again so that she might remember them, thinking so she went to the lab where Liza was checking dead bodies.

Aisha came towards Liza & was looking at Pallavi's deadbody, that's when Liza felt someone's presence & saw Aisha standing.

Liza asked, "Aisha...tum yahan...ab kaisi tabiyat hai tumhari"

Aisha said, "Who...kuch pata chala...I mean killer ya gun ke bare mein", she was saying this while looking at Pallavi's & Mayank's deadbodies which lay in front of her.

Liza said, "Nahi...kuch khas nahi...bas itna hi pata chala hai ki ki inn dono ki maut 2 din pehle hui hai", saying this Liza got busy in her work.

Aisha was more of confused now bcoz she saw the dream a day before yesterday & they are killed 2 days before from today, meaning she saw the dream after their murder. Now this has become more riddle for her.

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waiting for reviews plzzz...๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ๐Ÿ˜ณ
Edited by Snehajain - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Res / unres
Yaah Me first ๐Ÿฅณ ๐Ÿฅณ ๐Ÿฅณ ๐Ÿฅณ ๐Ÿฅณ ๐Ÿฅณ ๐Ÿฅณ
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Very interesting sneha dear awesome
Loved the restlessness of aisha
even this all seems really interesting
I loved to see the teams concern ๐Ÿ˜Š
so they had suspects to but lets see kyahota hai
case details are going good
Thanks forthe Pm
COntinue soon
Edited by GOLD.A - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#37
Awesome awesome awesome..
Loved it very much.
Loved Sakshi's concern.
She sensed right.
Aisha is in deep think.
So am I.
Sakshi found out some interesting news.
They died two days ago?
And she saw the dream second night of their death?
Plz plz con soonish...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#38
nice start
loved arjun and sakshi convo ๐Ÿ˜†
so aisha saw the murder and the house in her dream even before it happened
pls could u send me pm for the updates ๐Ÿ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
#39
interesting very interesting


aisha confused hai, aur aisha k behave se team confused hai

sakshi ka aisha k liye concern ๐Ÿ˜Š

lab me aisha kya chk krne gyi thi i think wo kuch special search kr rhi hai


case kafi interesting hai

jinke nam business the ek mar gya ek mental assalym me


aur jise pallavi k business me interest tha use pallavi me bi interest tha


interesting very interesting
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Posted: 11 years ago
#40
awsom concept
loved it
aayesa dream come true
tht is intrsting
cont soon
thnx f rpm
sorry for late comment

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