ARAKSHI: HUM AAP KAY DIL MAY RAHTAY HAIN (THREAD 3) PART 29 PG 9 - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51
its sch a long tym since i comntd on dis stry.. misd it a lottt
d upd8s wre fab.. brilliantly writn
d case ws vry intrstng.. i jst cudn't move my eyes 4m it.. nd riya ne jo usme gadbad ki hai.. mra to gussa hi out of cntrol ho gya..
ek request hai.. plz stry end hone se phle riya ka encountr krwa do.. agr arjun krega to issme chaar chaand lg jaege.. bt plz krwa do.. jst cn't toler8 hr at ol
luvd d way arjun manofied sakshi.. it shws hw inseprabl dey r
do cntinue soon.. bt ofcrs aftr u get wel.. tke cre.. nd thnx 4 d pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: coolRD

its sch a long tym since i comntd on dis stry.. misd it a lottt

d upd8s wre fab.. brilliantly writn
d case ws vry intrstng.. i jst cudn't move my eyes 4m it.. nd riya ne jo usme gadbad ki hai.. mra to gussa hi out of cntrol ho gya..
ek request hai.. plz stry end hone se phle riya ka encountr krwa do.. agr arjun krega to issme chaar chaand lg jaege.. bt plz krwa do.. jst cn't toler8 hr at ol
luvd d way arjun manofied sakshi.. it shws hw inseprabl dey r
do cntinue soon.. bt ofcrs aftr u get wel.. tke cre.. nd thnx 4 d pm



thanks dear
and welcome back
yes don't worry
it's happen just like you say
riya encounter
hhhmmm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sudikshya

PLEASE UPDATE SOON AAPII !!! 😭😭😭

I AM VERY DESPERATE TO READ UR ALL STORIES 😳😳😳

PRETTY PLZ UPDATE SOONIISHHH 😛😛😛

I LOVE UR ALL STORIES 😃😃😃

CONTINUE SOON 😊😊😊



here is the update
hopefully you like it😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Part 29

Sakshi just in shocked...see him with wide open eyes...both eyes lock for sometime then sakshi snap and said

sakshi said: haan...main un ki hi baiti hoon...tumharay mentor.

Arjun: tumhain pata hay sakshi (he come near her and hold her palms) jab pehli dafa...tum nay mujhay force kiya tha...hand shake karnay ko (sakshi smile remember that day...nodded) tumhari hello ki awaaz sun kar...aur tum ko dekh kar main kho sa gaya tha...kyun kay mein tum may kissi ko dekh raha tha (he said in slow voice)

Sakshi: kiss ko dekh rahay thay (she ask with curiosity)

Arjun: ek bohat piyari si...masoom si bacchii ko...bari bari aankhain...black shinny poni tail...pink skin (he look her with love and sakshi lower her eyes) woh jis ko sam nay imported doll ka naam diya tha...shy with lower her eyes...like same you now (he chin her up and make her look to him) uss din tu mujhay yaad nahi aaraha tha...phir jab tum say haath milaya...tab hi feel hua kay ab khair nahi (he chuckle...like he remember his feeling)

Sakshi: kiya matlab... khair nahi (she ask with amaze)

Arjun: khair nahi...yani...maamla garbar hay...itna strong pull towards with one strange girl...shake me up to core yaar (he bend and kiss on her lips softly) tab hi toh apni un feeling ko uss rude behaviour may hide karnay ki nakaam koshish ki thi...tum ko daantna...humiliate karna...taunt karna...sab uss feeling say runaway karna tha...but nothing helpful for me and at last...I been prisoner in your beautiful heart (he inhale deep breath...and hug her tight...sakshi gather in his strong arms...they stay for while then sakshi said)

Sakshi: tum tu ab banay ho...main tu bachpan say hi...sirf tumhari prison thi (she free herself for his grip and said) woh ek nine year old small girl...jo tum ko aur sameer ko chup kar curtain kay peechay say dekhti thi...jiss ko tumhari muskarahat nay...aur tumharay hansnay nay apna prison bana liya ho...uss kay pass kahin aur dekhnay ka time hi nahi tha (she look arjun once and find him stand near her with shocked feeling...listening her carefully)

Arjun: itna piyar karti ho mujh say (he holds her shoulder and turns her to his side...he bend and look in her eyes)

Sakshi: haan...sayaad piyar lafz bohat chota hay meray liyay (she look in arjun eyes and said) arjun...pehlay woh sirf ek admiration tha...ek nine year old bacchii ki inspiration...that's it (she lower her eyes and continue) magar phir age kay saath saath woh admiration piyar main...aur phir woh piyar ishiq main...aur woh ishiq kab janoon ban gaya...mujhay pata hi nahi chala...age kay saath saath...tumhain chahanay kay andaz change hotay gay...aur aaj mera piyar junoon ban kar meray samnay khara hay (she take deep breath and lower down her gaze...arjun chin up her and seal his lips with her...after sometime he parted and said)

Arjun: sakshi mein soch bhi nahi sakta tha kay...woh ek piyari si choti si...cute si bacchii mujh say piyar karnay lagay gi (he pull her near in his arms...and tight his grip around her waist) aisa kiya tha mujh main sakshi...mein tu ek toota hua insaan hoon...jissay iss zindagi nay sirf dukh diya hay...tum tu ek full of life girl ho...mujh jaissay broken man main kiya nazar aaya (he ask with shattered voice)

Sakshi: mujhay bhi nahi pata...arjun hum piyar plan kar kay nahi kartay...yeh tu bas ho jata hay (she look up in his eyes...then place her palms both side of his cheeks and said) jaissay mujhay ho gaya...iss piyar nay mujhay jeenay ka hosla diya...har hard time main mujh ko sahara diya...arjun...mein nay aaj tak tum ko apnay aap say alag nahi mana...har festival...har occasion par tum meray saath thay...har waqt...har jagah...

Arjun: sketches ki shakaal main (he cut her sentence and asks with smile)

Sakshi shocked and quickly free herself from his tight grip and move away...arjun smile to see her shocked state...her quivers lips...her beautiful full open eyes which show a little pink colour...spread kajal...wet and join eye lashes which are stuck at one place...arjun can't hold back himself...he quickly finish the distance and before sakshi understand his intention...he capture her in his arm again with join his lips to her...sakshi prison in his arms and arjun lips sucking and kissing hard on her luscious lips...he kiss her hard like drain her all...like fill himself with all her softness...like finish his thirst...he kiss her like tomorrow never comes...his warm and salty lips not in mood to leave her so easily...sakshi feel her knee week...and not able to stand long...it's hard to bare his passionate kiss...she feel dizzy...her eyes close...just feel of his warm lips on her...arjun feel her lose grip and he scoop up her in his arm...then start walking...he take her in that room...open door and enter...make her stand and switch on lights.

Arjun: sakshi...kiya mein waqai itna khush naseeb hoon kay...tum jaissi larki mujh ko itna piyar karay (he bend near her and asks)

Sakshi look around and then look him and said: arjun...yeh hi tu woh sahara tha...jo mujhay jeenay ka hosla daita tha (she hold his palm and make him walk with him and take him one side...show him one sketch) yeh mera pehla sketch tha (arjun see...it's not look sketch but someone try to give them sketch shape...some wiggly and diagonal lines...show that she try hard to give those lines his face feature but not successful)

Sakshi: iss pehli fail attempt kay baad tu mujhay janoon ho gaya...main her qeemat par ek accha sketcher banna chahati thi (she understand his unspoken words and clear him) bas phir art school main admission lay liya...aur sketching ka pura course kiya...jiss kay baad main iss qabil ho gai kay kissi bhi shakal main tum ko apnay pass rakh sakti hoon (she take some more sketches in her hand and give him to see)

Arjun: main soch bhi nahi sakta tha...kay koi iss tarah bhi mujhay piyar kar sakta hay...sakshi ek baat batao (he just reminds one thing and asks)

Sakshi: haan poocho (she said)

Arjun: tum itna mujhay chahati thi...tum nay mujh say kabhi bhi milnay ki koshish nahi ki (he is surprise)

Sakshi: nahi...kabhi bhi nahi...neil nay mujhay bohat dafa...push kiya...tum say milnay kay liay magar main khud main itni himmat nahi paati thi...arjun (she hold his hand and said) baba kehtay thay kay jiss ko chahatay hain...uss ko bond mat karo...uss ko azad chor do...agar woh tumhara hay...toh palat kar ajaiy ga...aur agar nahi...toh uss kay janay ka gham na karo...bulkay us ski khushi main khush ho jao...kay woh tumharay nahi toh kissi aur kay naseeb main toh hay...main bhi bas issiliay... (she leave her sentence and admit her weakness in lower voice)

Arjun: tum meri shaadi kay baray main bhi...

Sakshi cut him and said: haan...janti thi sab kuch na sirf shaadi...bulkay uss kay baad jo bhi hua sab kuch jaanti thi...yeh dekho (she show him all related stuff...which contain...newspaper cuttings...some photos...articles and sketches...which she make by her self...arjun find some blurry effect on sketches...which of course tell him that she was crying while make these)

Arjun: sakshi...main nay decide kar liaya hay (he turn to her side and hold her palms) I am ready to welcome you in my world...would you like to be my wife (he ask)

Sakshi surprised for his sudden asking question...she is not ready listening so soon this proposal...

Sakshi: are you showing sympathy on me? feel pity (She asks)

Arjun: pagal ho gai ho kiya (he shrug her a little) yeh sab jo mujh ko ab pata chala hay...main iss say pehlay hi tum say apna love confess kar chukka tha (he make her to listen and continue his talk) haan...sirf riya ki wajah say thoora careful tha...but ab nahi...ab main sab kay samnay apnay relationship ko announce karna chahata hoon...tum ko apnana chahata hoon (he look her once and said) aur iss silsilay main mujhay tumhari HAAN ka intezar hay...mein kal hi bari maa (sameer mom) say baat karoon ga (he finish his talk and look sakshi side...she is in deep thought...when arjun quiet she look him )

Sakshi: nahi arjun...abhi nahi...main itni jaldhi yeh sab accept nahi kar sakti...riya ka problem abhi bhi hay (she try to divert his attention on other side)

Arjun: I don't care her any more...ab jo hoga dekha jaiy ga...magar ab main tum ko mazeed tension main nahi dalna chata...aur khud ko bhi pareshan nahi karna chahata (he said in strong voice)

Sakshi: nahi arjun...main pareshan nahi hoon...haan bas thoora dar gai thi...

Arjun: meray itnay clear love confess kay baad bhi tum dar gai thi (he wound his arm around her...pull her near)

Sakshi: haan...piyar sayad kamzoor bana daita hay (she admits her weakness)

Arjun: sakshi...meray piyar ko apni taqat banao...kamzoori nahi...samjhi ya samjhaon (he instruct her...when softly kiss on her cheeks)

Sakshi: ok...boss...samjh gai (she laugh and try to be parted)

Her clear laugh... change arjun heart feeling...he look her in detail...sakshi feel shy for his sudden change sight...she turn to opposite side and soon leave the room...arjun smile to see her shy state and switch off the light...before leave the room...he check her in her bedroom but she is not there...arjun find her in kitchen...making tea...he stand near her...looking her working...sakshi puzzle under his warm gaze...her shaking hand wasn't unnoticed from him...he take one more step and hug her from her back...his arm slid around her waist...hold tight he whisper

Arjun: kyun mujh say dar lag raha hay.

Sakshi: nahi...magar tum mujh ko aisay kyun dekh rahay ho...mujhay sharam aa rahi hay (she said with lower her gaze)

Arjun: kaho...toh saari sharam khatam kar doon (he nuzzle on her neck)

Sakshi: ji nahi...iss ki koi zarorat nahi hay...aur aap chorain mujhay...aap ko toh koi sharam bhi nahi aati (she try to free herself)

Arjun: hhmmm...tum nay sunna nahi...jiss nay ki sharam...uss kay phootay karam...aur jiss nay ki behayai...uss nay khai doodh malai (he whisper in her ears...while his hand touches her sensitive body parts...make her shiver)

Sakshi: please...arjun don't do it...please (she tries to control her moan and said)

Arjun accept her plead and leave her...said: ok...better be next time.

Sakshi pour tea in mugs...both sit in sitting room...having tea with some serious chit chat...arjun want declare his relation with sakshi but sakshi try to stop him to take any wrong step...as, she well known of riya attention...she discuss that matter with arjun and like she expected...arjun shock to hear all these truth...he discuss further more with sakshi...then she make him to promise with her...Control his anger and open his mind and eyes...arjun get disturb with this shocking truth but he know that sakshi is right...somehow he already sense some trouble in riya behaviour...it's not completely clear but only some part comes in light...and it's enough for arjun to find out complete truth...he surely do it...before he start his blissful life with sakshi...he need to be free their path from any thorn and hurdles...he want give sakshi a happy and cheerful life...and for this he have to solve the mystery behind the riya come back and even her behaviour towards sakshi...he never allow anyone to harm his love...he decide to silently try to get information and crack the case...sakshi is satisfied share all her finding with arjun...she believe on him and know that now, arjun take charge...and he never let anything happen to her.

SO, here is part finish

finally arakshi clear their diffrences

and now riya bad time start

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rehana25

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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow...awesome update... flashbacks are so cute... 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 cute romance!!!!! now arjun will be with sakshi now all riya's plans will flop... continue soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
Awesome update Rihu baby.
Loved it very much.
Wah re wah.
Aaj to ACP ji bade romantic mood mein hai.
Lagta hai Sakshi se aur door nehi reh sakte.
Arjun get to know everything.
And the sketches it just touched my heart.
Arjun wanted accept her but she denied.
She knew the whole truth now Arjun know too.
But we don't know..😔
Anyways you made me happy by showing this romantic Arjun.
Please please con soon..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
loved it😃
thanx for pm
waiting for next part
plzzz continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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finally mu got clear..
arjun and sakshi ki...besharmi ki height...
he became so naughty im just one night...
sakshi arjun se itnaaa payr karti hai..
just salute to her love...
and bachpan se jisse vo attract hui..
usi se inspiration li...
usi se ishq and
usi se joonun..
hats off...
riya ka secret kya hai..???
but ab uska banda futega...
plz..continue soon..and thanks foe PM
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: angle1shanu

finally mu got clear..

arjun and sakshi ki...besharmi ki height...
he became so naughty im just one night...
sakshi arjun se itnaaa payr karti hai..
just salute to her love...
and bachpan se jisse vo attract hui..
usi se inspiration li...
usi se ishq and
usi se joonun..
hats off...
riya ka secret kya hai..???
but ab uska banda futega...
plz..continue soon..and thanks foe PM



Thanks dear
Yes sakshi walk long way on this path
From childhood till now
All man are same just need a bit hint
And they become romantic hhhmmm 😉
Soon riya reality comes in light

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