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Posted: 11 years ago
#41
Ch7.

Shanaya was in her office,when her PA came in and said, ''Ma'am.. Comissioner sir ne apne ghar mein ek party throw ki hai..puri family ko invite kiya hai...''

''Thik hai.. Aap jaiye... Hum card dekhlenge...'' Shanaya replied.

As she finished her work,she opened the envelope and read the contents.She called up at home and told Nana and Nanu about the party and also asked them to make Abhi ready as well.

After the call,Shanaya resumed doing her pending works and went home after finishing it.

Meanwhile,in the Police Guest House:

''Comissioner sir ne apne ghar pe ek party rakkhi hai.. Aap sab inivted hai.. Shaam ko party hai...''

''Thik hai.. Aap jaiye... Thanks''... Rathore said,politely.

After a while,Arjun also comes and asks Rathore about the card.Rathore replied that it was an invitation card for today's party at Comissioner of Delhi Police's house,to which Arjun nodded positively.

Evening:

''Mumma,party mein jana zaruri hai kya? Hum kya karenge wahaan?'' Abhi asked innocently.

''Abhi beta,aap wahaan jaake Comissioner uncle ko milenge.. Comissioner uncle aapko good boy kahenge kyunki aap unki party mein aaye hai.. Aapko bara hoke police officer banna hai,hai na?'' Nanu replied.

''Haan... Police officer banunga,bilkul Papa ki tarha..'' Abhi replied,sweetly..

This brought a sudden change of emotion inside Shanaya. Nana,Nanu and Devika could feel it.Abhi and Arush were completely confused at the sudden silence. Shanaya quickly came out of her reverie and said, ''Waise,baccho... Aaj hum party se lautne ke baad ice cream khayenge,thik hai..'' Shanaya said..

''Ice Cream... Yay..'' Abhi and Arush jumped happily screaming ''Ice Cream''..

Shanaya was relieved seeing the current situation now. She prayed to Bappa for her family's happiness.

Meanwhile,Mumbai ETF reached the Comissioner's house. They were greeted by Commissioner sir and his wife... Ayesha and Liza instantly gelled with Commissioner sir's wife and later on,they were introduced to others,as well.

After a while,Shanaya and Abhi,along with Devika,Arush,Nana and Nanu arrived at the Commissioner's house. They were also welcomed cordially by Comissioner and his wife. Shanaya introduced her family with Comissioner and his wife... After that,she went inside.

Abhi and Arush were running around the whole party area and were enjoying the lights and the music.. Devika made them sit and handed a glass of juice,which they happily started to drink.

A person,clad in suit,came behind Abhi and closed his eyes with his palms. Abhi was scared and was struggling in the hold... Abhi was on the verge to cry,when Rathore recited a poem...

''Sam Mamu...'' Abhi squealed in excitement..

''Its me,Champ..'' Rathore said,happily,spreading his arms.

Abhi ran towards him and hugged him tightly.Rathore was overjoyed to see his nephew so happy.He pecked his forehead fondly.

''Kaise hai mera Champ?''

''Bohut acche hai hum,Mamu.. Aap boliye.. Aashu mami aur humare chote bhai kaise hai?'' Abhi asked.

''Aapke Mami aur Chote Bhai bohut acche hai.. Aaiye,hum aapko sabse milwate hai..'' Rathore said.

''Zarur,Mamu.. Par,pehle aap inse miliye... Yeh hai meri pyaari Devika maasi aur yeh hai mera sabse acche bhai aur dost,Arush..'' Abhi introduced them,to which they replied.

''Maasi,aap Mumma ke paas jao.. Hum Arush bhai ko humare saath le jarahe hai..'' Abhi said.

''Sure beta.. Be caeful,ok..'' Devika replied and went to Shanaya.

Rathore took the kids' and introduced them to Shree,Chotu,Liza and Aayesha.. They were amazed to see Shanaya and Arjun's son so well behaved,disciplined and well mannered...

''Dekh Shree.. Humare Arjun sir ka khoon.. Unka beta.. Ekdum Arjun sir jaise chaal... Ek aur Samjhhe ya Samjhhau... Nahiii...'' Chotu replied...

''Haan re mere Bheem.. Ekdum sach kaha tune.. Par,sanskar aur manners bilkul Shanaya jaisi... Bhagwan indono ke beech ki sari galat fehmi dur karde aur yeh teeno ek hojaye...''

After them,it was Arjun's turn to meet them...

''Rathore,tumne bu...'' Arjun asked but stopped in the middle,as he saw his son,after 4 long years.. His gaze was fixed on him,which made Abhi a bit scared.. He clutched his Mamu's collar and hid himself in his embrace..

''Abhi.. Mera bacch...''

''Sochna bhi mat,Arjun Rawte... You dont deserve to be his father.. (after a pause) Devika,Abhi aur Arush ko yahaan se le jaao... Main nahi chahti ki Arjun ka saaya iss pe pare... (turning towards Arjun). So,tum yahaan tak bhi pohuch gaye mere bete tak.. Waah re waah... Jo insaan apne bete ko najayaz bol sakta hai,usse apnepan ki kya expectations rakkha jaye? Main jaanti thhi ki tum yahaan aaoge.. Ek ajeeb si mehsoos horahi thi tumhare yahaan hone ki,par,maine taall di... Ab aur nahi... I dont want to see you near my child.. Agar mere orders ka na farmani ki,toh,Mumbai Police ke Comissioner sir ko written complaint dungi tumhare naam ki.'' Shanaya said this and left the party venue,while everyone saw this.

Precap: Arjun thinking what to do.
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Posted: 11 years ago
#42
Awsum Update! Hmm.. So all are invited for Comissioner Sir'z Party.. Abhi-Arjun too there..!! Aww..❤️❤️ Everyone lovez Abhi.. And finally Arjun saw his kid but Main.. I feel insecure shayad.. Aur waise bhi jo kuch bhi Arjun ne kiya uske baad he is really worth all of this.. Intresting Precap. Continuee Soon..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#43
Teaser for ch8:

Nanu slaps Shanaya and makes her understand that the child also needs fatherly affection,as well.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#44
awesome update
loved it
party..
abhi-arjun met..shan bich me aa gayi
precap..nanu slapped her
oh..
do continu soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
#45
wow what an update.mindblowing dear
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Posted: 10 years ago
#46
Ch8.

''Mumma,mumma...woh uncle kaun thhe aur unko mera naam kaise pata hai? Mumma batao na,please.. Aap chup kyun ho,batao na Mumma,please..'' little Abhi was constantly pleading his Mom to answer his questions.

Unable to hear anything more,she turned around and slapped Abhi hardly,on his cheeks,due to which he fell down and started crying very badly. Nana,Nanu and Devika were totally shocked.. Shanaya couldnt believe that she raised her hand on her darling son. As she went towards Abhi to carress him,she was pulled by Nanu and she gave a tight slap to Shanaya...

Devika took Abhi and Arush away to her home. She tried to calm down Abhi as he was continuously crying as his Mumma slapped him. After much efforts,Abhi stopped crying and Devika slowly and steadily told Abhi that,the uncle he met in the party is his father. Abhi was excited and very happy and he took a promise from his Maasi that she will take him to meet his father.. Devika nodded and later on,put them to sleep.

''Bas.. Bohut ho chuka,Shanu... Tu itni gir kaise gayi ki tere aur Arjun ke darmiyaan ko faasle aur mann-mutav hai uske liye tu ek bacche ko duk derahi hai? Usse haq hai apne baap ke baare mein janne ka... Maana ki usne jo galti ki hai,uske liye tu usse kabhi maaf na kare,par,tu jo galat kar rahi hai,uska kya? Ek bacche ko apne pita se dur rakhne ka? Abhi kya sochega ki uski Maa ne uske Papa se hui galti ke karan usko uske Papa se dur rakkha 4 saalo tak... Maine Arjun ke aakho mein tarap aur pashchatap dekhe hai.. Bohut pachta raha hai woh...'' Nanu said.

''Par,usne jo mere saath kia,uska kya,Nanu? Isme meri kya galti thi?'' Shanaya voiced out her sadness,in tears.

''Nahi mere bacche.. Teri koi galti nahi thi.. Tujhe sirf itna nahi pata thhha ki tere saath aisa hoga. Yeh sab unexpected thha,bete... Devika ko dekh zara.. Arush ke papa ne toh aisa bartav kiya ki humein laga woh khushi khushi yeh baccha apna lega.. Aur usne aisa kiya bhi,par,ek guilt usko khayi jarahi thi,isiliye,woh sab chhor chhar ke America chala gaya. Devika ko laga ki usne Arush aur Devika ko humesha keliye chhor dia aur bacche ko nahi apnayega... Devika toot chuki thhi.. Saal guzar gaye par kuch pata nahi chala ki kab Arush ke papa ayega,par,ekdin pata chala ki kisi haadse mein uski maut hogayi.. Yeh sab chhor... Tu ek Maa hai.. Apne bacche ke point of view se soch... Uske school mein aise kitne saare bacche honge jo Abhi ko chirhate hai ki uske Papa ne usse chhor diya hai,usske Papa usse pyaar nahi karte.. Iska ek reason yeh hai ki tune kabhi bhi Arjun ka naam uske saamne zikr nahi kiya aur nahi uske school ke amission form mein.. Beta,tu soch... Kya tu yahi chahegi ki Abhi ko sab bin baap ki aulad pukare? Kya tu yahi chahegi ki Abhi kabhi bhi apne baap se na mile? Galtiyaan sabse hoti hai,Arjun se bhi hui hai.. Par,Arjun bohut pachtaraha hai... Uske mann mein ek guilt hai ki usne uske bacche ko najayaz maana hai... Kya tu sach mein chahegi ki Abhi ke mann mein tere liye nafrat payda hojaye jo tu kabhi sehn nahi karpayegi? Sochna zarur.'' Nanu said and went away.

Shanaya slumped down and fell into thinking. Tears fell from her eyes as she had the flashback of her days in ETF with Arjun.. Those days with Arjun,etc etc.

After thinking a lot and a battle with her mind and heart,she finally gave in and listened to her. She wiped her tears and made it a note that she will have to forgive him for the sake of their son. As she was about to go her room,she felt little hands around her legs.She bent down and saw her son,Abhi,who came towards her and wiped her tears.

''I am sorry,mere bacche... Maine aapko itne saalo tak aapke Baba se dur rakkha.. Meri majburi thhi,mera baccha.. Aap apni Mumma ko maaf kardoge,bacche?'' Shanaya pleaded to Abhi.

''Aap rote huye acche nahi lagte,Mumma... Its ok,Mumma... Abhi ne Mumma ko maaf kardia.. (he leans downs and pecks his Mumma's cheeks)...'' Abhi replied happily and pecks Shanaya's cheeks.

''Thank you,mera baccha... Abh kal hum dono aapke Baba se milne jayenge... Abh aapko school mein koi nahi chirhayega ki aapke Baba nahi hai.. Aap garv se bolsakoge ki aapke Baba world ke sabse best Baba hai aur aapke Baba ek ACP hai,aapki Mumma ki tarha aur aap apne Baba aur Mumma ki tarha baare hoke ek honest police officer banoge...'' Shanaya replied..

''Yay... Hum kal Baba se milne jayenge... Yay... (He runs around the whole house,happily) Hum kal Baba se milne jayenge... Mumma,hum andar chalte hai.. Humein bohut kuch taiyaar karna hai.. Baba ko mere school friends se milwana hai,mere colouring books bhi dikhane hai,sab kuch... Bye,Mumma..'' Abhi replied and went towards his room,happily..

''Humare milne ka waqt agaya hai,Arjun... Main tumhe maaf karti hu,Arjun.. Hum dono arahe hai tumhare paas,humesha keliye..I love you,Arjun.'' Shanaya said in her thoughts and smiled and blushed a little.

While,Arjun woke up with a jerk and dreamt that Shanaya and his son,Abhi will come to visit them tomorrow..

Precap: ShanJun ka milan.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#47
Awsum Update! So I slapped Abhi..😔 Thats bad! But uske badle mujhe bhi thappad mila Nanu se. Chalo I forgave him and we are gonna reunite as a family now! Cute! Continuee Soonz!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#48
awesome update.plz update soon.kab arjun se avhi milega.
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Posted: 10 years ago
#49
awesome update di
loved it
Shanu ne Abhi ko maara.. aur naanu ne Shan ko..
oh..
well bandi ke dimaag me baat to gayi
Shan-jun.. reunion.. yipee
continu soon!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#50
Nice part.
sanayane abhi ko slap kiya. Very bad for abhi.
devika abhi ko batati he ki vo uncle uske father he.
abhi very mit his father.
nanu sanaya ko kehte he ki use apne father ke baare me janne ka pura hat he or ye bhi ki arjun ko sachme bhot pachtava ho raha he.
use abhi ko uske father se milvana chahiye.
sanaya abhi ko kehti he ki vo uske father se milne jaynge.
abhi bhot kgus hota he.
intresting, mind blowing.
owesome. continue.

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