ARAKSHI:My dream track(ff) - Page 5

Originally posted by: vikaschandra

Sorry to inturrupt but can you please tell me which are the points you liked in whole story .

Feed back recquired so that I will not loose the stanndard back.

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai

The main thing is the concept.

It's totally different and Arjun.

I loved Sakshi's Arjun very much.

His drinking coffee and choosing dress for Sakshi is fabolous..

Part 8

Shree was talking in phone while Arjun and Sameer comes there .

Shree in phone "Sirf paanch minute bachaa hain kitna waqt lagegaa tumhe."

He cuts call noticing Arjun near.Shree manages to divert topic.

Shree tells "Sir main shyam thak sooch rahaa thaa kee,Unkey team key members ko kahtara hain phir bhee Sakshi itna befikar kaisey hain lekin uss security ko dekhkar thoo yeh lagrahaa hain kee yeh ghar toh hummara office sey bhee jyaada safe hain."

Shree "Sir alaram ring honey sey 30sec key andhar who ghar key bahaar they aur then minute mey ham almost unkey kabjeey mey they.Sakshi jaldee aagayee nahee tho nahee pata kya haal karlethey who loog."

Rathore now understood what Arjun meant about this house.Security more tighter than ETF office.

Arjun "Tumney jyaada kuch dekha nahee shree.Shyam ko utnaa tight hain tho Raath ko samjho .Ek kuttha bhe unkey nazar sey bachkar nahee aa payega"

All of them go back to hall and it rings exactly 12 then and Sameer notices Arjun looking at Sakshi and viceversa.

Sameer pushes Arjun and Sakshi pushed by Ayesha .Arjun balances himself and stops Sakshi from falling in a romantic poose and Shree who was expecting this captures this at instant .All shout at once "Happy married anniversary"While their recent pose is projected all over walls of the house (Specky sen technology).Sakshi was blushing and Arjun who din't expect this was surprised .Sakshi tells thankyou to everyone.

Anoop brings a cake for them .Raaji asks them to cut the cake.Same time some one shouts a big No.

Everyone looks there an old lady entering there Arjun was shocked and happy to see her.Sakshi was now looking at Arjun's face feels proud seeing his happiness.

Arjun "Badi maa,Aap yahan iss waqt.".Arjun bends to take blessings from her and Sakshi does the same along with Arjun as if she knew it was to happen.

Badi Maa "Tumhey lagaa key main tumhaari kushee mein nahee hoongey.Tum saal gira manaarahaa hain mera banaaya huaa cake key bhina."

She removes a cake from bag and Anoop replaces it quickly and Arjun was too happy seeing this.

Badi maa "Aap yahan kaisy aye.Aapko kisney bataaya ke aaj mera shaadi kaa saal gira hain."

Badi maa "Tumney mujhee bataaya nahee.Lekin meri bhahuu hai naa ."tapping Sakshi's shoulder.

Arjun looks at Sakshi who was happy to see him smiling from heart .

Then Arjun looks at his watch .Same time a woman enters house and starts playing a song in her violin.Everyone looks at her.Sakshi was surprised to see her .she plays her music completely every one are looking at her while Arjun walks back from there.

Music stops and then Arjun starts a speech praising Sakshi He tells everyone about old cases where Sakshi deals with persons emotions and how she helped them regaining confidence to fight back.

He then tells about Sakshi's smile and how much it effected him .He tells everyone Sakshi's impact in his life while concluding he neels down before her with golden Locket in his hand showing their pic.Sakshi has tears in her eyes seing what Arjun did.Arjun clears her tears while lady who played violin says

"Arjun ney tumhaarey liye itna surprise rakhaa aur tum roo rahee hon."

Sakshi "Nita toh tumney Arjun ney bulaaya."

Nita "Mere best friend key first anniversary main kaisey miss karoo.Isliya doudhkey chalee aye."

Everyone are happy there.Badi maa asks them to cut the cake.Both Arjun and Sakshi cut the cake and feed each other then they feed all other members.

Sakshi doing her regular masthi applies cream on Ayesha and Shree.Arjun was sitting in distance and watching happy Sakshi with big smile and pride in his face.

Badi maa"Garv hain tumhey tumhaari beewi key khushiyon par."

Arjun was silent then she explains how she called him afternoon and requested her to come to surprise him.

Badi maa "Who ladkey sachmey Pari hain tumharee chupey hueh qwaish bhee usko saaf dikhengey."

Arjun smiles while his badimaa was praising Sakshi.

On other side Nita was telling Sakshi how Arjun called her and invited her.Sakshi was feelin very happyseeing Arjun .

Slowly every one disperses to their houses.Abhinav tells something to Arjun while going.Abhiram and Anoop have become friends within hours.Abhinav and Abhiram leaves to their house.

Badi maa goes to near mandir and arranges her bad near temple saying it gives her peace to be near god.Nita shares room with Raaji.

Arjun and Sakshi were meeting first time privately after so long.

Sakshi hugs him and cries saying she never expected this day will come in her life.Arjun hugs her back and says"Sirf kuch dinoo key baath hain baad mey main humeshaa tumharey saath rahoonga."kissing her.

They go back to their room .Arjun gets little romantic with Sakshi and Sakshi tring to stop him but she also wants same .She gives up hugging him tightly.

Originally posted by: vikaschandra

What about their secret marriage,Roshini's secret.mission in Delhi(to come)

Originally posted by: vikaschandra

Guys opinion recquired

I want to keep Sakshi and Roshni as sisters

I mean

Sakshi is orphan from child hood.Roshni's father has taken care of her since child hood.Keeping her seperate from family (NOne in family except Roshni accepted her in family).

Sikkindhar is Roshni's uncle who had eye on her property and he tried to marry her for property but Arjun married her.

In revenge he killed Roshni known to Arjun.But when Arjun was in comma whole Roshini's family .Sakshi was able to save her father.

Roshini taken promise of always maintaining smile in her family from sakshi.(Only Arjun left and Sakshi fall in love with him.)

Arjun and Sameer knew Sakshi by her petname SMILEY which Roshini calls her and never met her.

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai

Now coming back to the update.

It's fabulous.

Loved Saksh's surprise.

And then team's surprise.

Loved Arakshi moments.

Loved Arjun praising Sakshi in front of everyone.

And at last their cute but very little romantic scene..

Con soonish..

Though u could've wrote the speech Arjun gave.

And add a little cute romantic conversation between Arakshi.

U can elaborate the Arakshi scene..(pouting)

We didn't even heard romantic convo between them..

But overall it was awesome.

Keep up the good work and think about what I said.