ARIYA SS:Wo the jaise bhi..Banne hai ek dhuje ke liye hi. COMPLETED

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aleena

@atharin

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Posted: 11 years ago

#21

interesting concept

loved the couples especially 1st one

continue soon

also pls pm me too for next update

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Live-life

@Live-life

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Posted: 11 years ago

#22

Dude you have skills! You should totally continue! I am not kidding!

I mean seriously the first part was justsooo awesome. Seriously!

I am guessing Riya is with Arjun...THAT EXPLAINS THE PInk pen! 😆 And then That was probably Ayesha and Rathor...Kinda obvious...Awww acting all husband and wife!

So cuweeeteee...

Oh and then comes the best of all Liza and Shree...Lol...they are also Husband and wife...wow!

I know it's for a case or something...but it is still really cute. They are literally like tom and Jerry I am not even kidding!

You write beautifully dude!

Do continue soon

I am really excited for the precappp! *jumpping in the air*

😆

Continue soon

and Thanks for the pm!

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EshaalYousufzai

@EshaalYousufzai

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Posted: 11 years ago

#23

Nice one.

Though I am not an Ariyan I must say u should continue it for the sake of other Ariyan's.

Or they will miss a wonderful story..

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Tumpa12

@Tumpa12

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Posted: 11 years ago

#24

Dhoom macha dena
n dnt discontinue it yaar...nahi to dil tut jayegi mera ;(

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pink1

@pink1

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Posted: 11 years ago

#25

nice start so there are came some mission
but for mission and why riya is so silent
any happen between them update soon
and long wala update

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Pankhudi

@..Pankhudi..

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 11 years ago

#26

Nice start Najaan 👍🏼
Never saw arjun dear ...but you write good do continue !

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Tia khan

@tiakhan98

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#27

superb dear plz cont and pm

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naina

@naina25

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Posted: 11 years ago

#28

nice start...sounds interesting😊

con soon

thanks for pm

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Anjali

@Angel_Arya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#29

Awesome
Superb
loved the way you expressed each couple separately
And first part reminded me of the episode
where Arjun asked Riya...
And Arjun's famous dialog "Samjhee ya Samjhaun"...I miss that a lot😭

Sam-Aayesha were good as acting couple

Shree-Liza...😆
Poor Shree,Liza ne to order karna suru kr diya😆
Shree ne to imitate karna suru kr diya,Liza ka😆
Shree was so cute...when he said microphone pr mat chilao😆
Ab microphone uski gf hai na to care to karega hi😆😆

Chhotu was sweet

So the team is on a case...
let's see what happens next...
precap sounds interesting😉

Continue soon
Thanks for the pm

And yes,u r a good writer...first wala hi itna interesting hai to aage to aap bs chha jaoge😉
Do continue writing