Ariya SS: Kehte Khuda Ne Iss Jaha...**Completed** - Page 3

Created

Last reply

Replies

144

Views

54.2k

Users

26

Likes

497

Frequent Posters

fairyshah thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: farana786

wow loved this os
beautifully written dear
hehehe thanks for letting us know. yr honesty is aprreciated dear
.hope to read some more ariya works in futre from you 😉 as i know you are die hard arakshi but do wrte some ariya too. u r a amazing writer
an dont forget to pm me
ps:add me in yr buddy



😊 😃 hahaha nah ariya is fine. will do lol

coming diwn to 2nd part
wow amazing update
first arjun slept late and then rathod teased him.
he quickly went to mukherji mansion to meet riyas father but he was out toh he met riya
iidhar riya hearing arjuns voice daori chali ayi wah kiya unspoken pyar hai
omg arjun asked riya out 😳 😳
yeaa yaeee

will be glad to read another part of this. if you can do cont darling 😉 😉
thnks for pm yar
EshaalYousufzai thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: farana786



😊 😃 hahaha nah ariya is fine. will do lol

coming diwn to 2nd part
wow amazing update
first arjun slept late and then rathod teased him.
he quickly went to mukherji mansion to meet riyas father but he was out toh he met riya
iidhar riya hearing arjuns voice daori chali ayi wah kiya unspoken pyar hai
omg arjun asked riya out 😳 😳
yeaa yaeee

will be glad to read another part of this. if you can do cont darling 😉 😉
thnks for pm yar

Thanx darling..😆
Will try but it's hard u know.
Well if u r a pure Ariyan u will understand..😉
EshaalYousufzai thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: cute_ariya

hey when u gonna update next chapter?😭

Hey don't cry.
I did update.
Now where have u gone??😡😡
rinku95 thumbnail
16th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 3 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#24
Fantastic
Wow Ariya going out continue soon
unishaz thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#25
awesome dear.. Love it.. Continue soon..
fairyshah thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: EashaYousufzai


Thanx darling..😆
Will try but it's hard u know.
Well if u r a pure Ariyan u will understand..😉



no problem dear
wheneber u get time. if not its ok.
yap i like ariya works more but i do read some arakshi too 😉
but thanks for your hard work and this fiction rocks dear. 👏 👏
EshaalYousufzai thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: farana786



no problem dear
wheneber u get time. if not its ok.
yap i like ariya works more but i do read some arakshi too 😉
but thanks for your hard work and this fiction rocks dear. 👏 👏

I already post the third chapter in Arakshi.
I will just have to change the name..
By tomorrow I will update the third chapter here...
And thanks again..😊
Edited by EashaYousufzai - 11 years ago
Live-life thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Sparkler Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#28
Part 1
Wow...now that was a very heart touching update Eash! I mean...I literally have no words!
The update started out beautiful with Aisha and Arjun's conversation. Again what are friends for. The concern that Aisha showed was so cute. After all she is his Bhabhi! *wink wink* 😆 But I was glad he agreed to go to the party.

And then I loved the way you described Riya. I mean she looked so beautiful. Even though this is just a fiction but I felt like i was right there watching everything happen. It just felt so real. Hayeee. Poor Riya her mother died. A part of you dies when you lose someone you love. And who knows it better than Arjun.

Lord jesus! Mujhe to heart attack hi hogaya tha when you said that Riya was on the terrace moving close to the edge...But then I was even more scared because of the scorpion. Thank god! Arjun was there warna...huh i don't even wanna think about it. I hate scorpions! 🤢

And Riya can't speak. That was shocking but I was glad Arjun was there and he hugged her! Which made me smile! 😊 So nice of him.

And then Riya gave him a light kiss! Awww...well you definitely don't need words when your hearts speaks hehe! 😳 AND i JUST LOVE THE way Arjun understood her unsaid words when she was watching the couple. And you were right there was a longing...in her eyes...for love. being loved, and giving love! *sigh*

And for the first time after Roshni's death he felt a pull towards someone! and it wasn't just about feeling sorry for her because she couldn't speak. the roots went deeper! It was something called love! Jo Akdu ko ho raha hai!
*woppiieee* You are a great writer Eashhh! I love you!
❤️ Please please keep writing...now i AM off to read the next part...sorry for the late comment
*puppy face*

Oh forgot to mention That is my favorite songgg!


Edited by Live-life - 11 years ago
pink1 thumbnail
12th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 3
Posted: 11 years ago
#29
nice update oh great u make this story
ss and coming update its nice he
ask her for out with him update
soon waiting what will happen
next
EshaalYousufzai thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: Live-life

Part 1

Wow...now that was a very heart touching update Eash! I mean...I literally have no words!
The update started out beautiful with Aisha and Arjun's conversation. Again what are friends for. The concern that Aisha showed was so cute. After all she is his Bhabhi! *wink wink* 😆 But I was glad he agreed to go to the party.

And then I loved the way you described Riya. I mean she looked so beautiful. Even though this is just a fiction but I felt like i was right there watching everything happen. It just felt so real. Hayeee. Poor Riya her mother died. A part of you dies when you lose someone you love. And who knows it better than Arjun.

Lord jesus! Mujhe to heart attack hi hogaya tha when you said that Riya was on the terrace moving close to the edge...But then I was even more scared because of the scorpion. Thank god! Arjun was there warna...huh i don't even wanna think about it. I hate scorpions! 🤢

And Riya can't speak. That was shocking but I was glad Arjun was there and he hugged her! Which made me smile! 😊 So nice of him.

And then Riya gave him a light kiss! Awww...well you definitely don't need words when your hearts speaks hehe! 😳 AND i JUST LOVE THE way Arjun understood her unsaid words when she was watching the couple. And you were right there was a longing...in her eyes...for love. being loved, and giving love! *sigh*

And for the first time after Roshni's death he felt a pull towards someone! and it wasn't just about feeling sorry for her because she couldn't speak. the roots went deeper! It was something called love! Jo Akdu ko ho raha hai!
*woppiieee* You are a great writer Eashhh! I love you!
❤️ Please please keep writing...now i AM off to read the next part...sorry for the late comment
*puppy face*

Oh forgot to mention That is my favorite songgg!


Errr Nabee is it a comment or essay!!!!
Thanku for ur big comment...
No problem.
I didn't know u r Ariya or I will PM u..

Related Topics

Arjun Thumbnail

Posted by: muskan760

8 years ago

The Wait (Ariya FF) Part-42 Updated (Page-81)

Hey guys I'm here with the prologue of my Ariya story, though the title hasn't been yet decided but i hope you will enjoy it. Prologue :Life is

Expand ▼
Arjun Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen_Butterfly

4 months ago

Ariya - Tujhse Hai Rabata ❤️

Let's join in the journey of Acp Arjun Suryakant Rawte and Riya with her son Abhimanyu.

Expand ▼
Arjun Thumbnail

Posted by: Queen_Butterfly

7 months ago

Ariya in CiD recreated by queenButterfly

What will happen when Arjun and Riya works with cid team.

Expand ▼
Arjun Thumbnail

Posted by: SarafWasima

5 months ago

Ariya SS: Bandhan – A Tale of Shadows and Sunshine {Part 4, P.6}

Prologue The night was heavy. As if the air itself carried the weight of unspoken truths and unfinished emotions. A storm was brewing—not...

Expand ▼
Arjun Thumbnail

Posted by: bloomie

8 months ago

Ariya The Suspect

hey guys! Sabse pehli baat toh ye ki writing crossover stories is difficult man. Is baar kar diya, dobara nahi hoga. So before we begin, I know...

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".