Part 1
Wow...now that was a very heart touching update Eash! I mean...I literally have no words!
The update started out beautiful with Aisha and Arjun's conversation. Again what are friends for. The concern that Aisha showed was so cute. After all she is his Bhabhi! *wink wink* 😆 But I was glad he agreed to go to the party.
And then I loved the way you described Riya. I mean she looked so beautiful. Even though this is just a fiction but I felt like i was right there watching everything happen. It just felt so real. Hayeee. Poor Riya her mother died. A part of you dies when you lose someone you love. And who knows it better than Arjun.
Lord jesus! Mujhe to heart attack hi hogaya tha when you said that Riya was on the terrace moving close to the edge...But then I was even more scared because of the scorpion. Thank god! Arjun was there warna...huh i don't even wanna think about it. I hate scorpions! 🤢
And Riya can't speak. That was shocking but I was glad Arjun was there and he hugged her! Which made me smile! 😊 So nice of him.
And then Riya gave him a light kiss! Awww...well you definitely don't need words when your hearts speaks hehe! 😳 AND i JUST LOVE THE way Arjun understood her unsaid words when she was watching the couple. And you were right there was a longing...in her eyes...for love. being loved, and giving love! *sigh*
And for the first time after Roshni's death he felt a pull towards someone! and it wasn't just about feeling sorry for her because she couldn't speak. the roots went deeper! It was something called love! Jo Akdu ko ho raha hai!
*woppiieee* You are a great writer Eashhh! I love you!
❤️ Please please keep writing...now i AM off to read the next part...sorry for the late comment
*puppy face*
Oh forgot to mention That is my favorite songgg!
Edited by Live-life - 11 years ago
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