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rinku95

@rinku95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#41

Amazing update
Who was that lady?
Continue soon
Can you please pm me your story

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Raksha Tiwari

@amazingariya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#42

he guys here is nxt pt

PART 6

samjun-kisse nani

nani-ria aisha idhaar ao beta

ri-ji na...

aisha n ria dumb at d moment

same wd samjun

nani-beta ye arjun h roshni ka pati aur ye sameer uska dost aur (to samjun) ye hai ria meri choti beti ki bei aur ye aisha meri badi beti ki beti tumhari saas majhli hai(2 arj)

samjun n risha shocked

after sumtym

arjun-iska matlab ria,aisha n roshni behne hai fir usne kabhi mujhe is bare me kyu nahi bataya?

sam-ha mujhe bhi

on other side

aisha-relax ri plz itna gussa tere liye thik nahi hai

ria-maine kabhi sapne me v nai socha tha ki jis ladki se mai sabse jyada nafrat karti hu wo arjun sir ki patni niklegi humesha usne mujhse meri khushiyan chini aur is bar v uski wajah se...

suddenly dat woman

1 woman-aisa mat kaho beta isme uski kya galti galti meri hai mujhe saza do

aisha-wo to apko milni hi chahiye

ria-use nahi to aur kise blame karu usiki wajah se ap mujhe chodkar gai aur mere bhai ko mujhse alag kia na

on d other side

1small girl playing wd her doll get collapsed wd sam

sam-i m so sry

girl-kya sry apki wajah se mai gir jati to?

sam-oh badi prob ho jati tab to waise apka nam kya hai?

girl-mera nam shri... nahi bataungi mamma kehti hai ki ajnabi se bat nai karte

n she goes frm dere

sam-kitni pyari hai ise dekhkar pata nai kyu aisha ki yad ati...ye mai kya soch raha hu stop it sam

arjun hears dis

arj-(mv)-accha to rathore sab ko pyar ho gaya hai i knew it(smiles)

it fr 2day

i know chota hai bt kya karu suspense maintain karna hai na😉😆

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Shweta Gupta

@ll_megha_ll

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Posted: 11 years ago

#43

Wow dear.
Read both the parts.
It was awesome and mind blowing.
Just loved it.
Do continue soon.
And thanks for the pm.

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rinku95

@rinku95

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Posted: 11 years ago

#44

Amazing
Both girls and boys shocked seeing each other
Thanks for pm
Continue soon
Can't wait to read next after this suspense

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zubiya92

@zubiya92

Inactive

Posted: 11 years ago

#45

Wow
Awesome update
Love it
Cont soon
Thanks for pm

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Shreyashi Chakraborty

@shreyashi19mld

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#46

really beautiful

but kuch to chut raha hai

kab pata calega sab kuch

can't wait, update soon

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Shravani / Arohi

@skrafty

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#47

Awesome update

loved it

Waiting for the next part

continue soon

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

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+ 5

Posted: 11 years ago

#48

awesome update
samjun riya & Aisha got shocked to see eachother 😲
omg Aisha & riya is roshni's cousin sis 😲
but she never talk abt them with samjun 😕
riya got angry to know abt it 😡
I dnt understand why she hate roshni? 😕
aww Sameer saw girl & feel she is just like aisha 😆
plz dear no more suspense other wise i'll get heart attack 😆 😆
plz want long wala update 😭

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Raksha Tiwari

@amazingariya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#49

part 7

at dining table

evry 1's eating xcept rosh's mom as soon as she comes ri n aisha apne seat se uth kar jane lagti hai

nani-beta baith jao

ri-hum inke sath khana nai khayenge nani dam ghutta hai mera inhe dekhkar

aisha-nafrat karte hai hum inse janti hai na ap

samjun shocked

rosh's mom-dekha apne ma apki choti beti ne kitni nafrat bhar di hai meri beti k man me mere lie

ri-dnt u dare ap meri ma nahi hai

r.m.-mane ya na mane sach yahi hai tu meri beti hai janm dia h maine tujhe

ri-janm dene se koi ma nai ban jati meri ma ye hai samjhi ap tab kaha thi apki ye mamta jab ap mujhe 1 saal ka chodkar gayi thi mere baba ko dhokha dekar aur mere bhai ko v mujhse dur kar dia😭i hate u n dnt u dare 2 say anything abt my mother

suddenly a small girl-mamma...choti ma...

she comes n hugs aisha n den ria

samjun ko to shock pe shock lag raha hai😆

aisha-shrishti ap andar jao hum ate hain

shri-ok

r.m.-hm meri bat kar rahe ho tum log ise kyu nahi dekhti jisne apne hi pati ko mar dala

ri-dikha di na apne apni aukat apko ye to dikh raha hai ki usne apne pati ko mara par ye janti hai ap ki usne aisa kyu kia criminal tha wo 1 ladki ki zindagi barbad karne ki koshish kar raha tha agar wo use nahi marti to na jane kya ho jata

r.m.-ha par kya use marne se pehle 1 bar v apni beti k bare me socha

aisha-(shouts)-ha socha tha socha tha ye socha ki meri beti 1 criminal ki beti nahi kehla sakti nai chahti thi ki use ye pata v chale ki uska baap 1 criminal tha samjhi ap

aisha waha se chali jati hai aur ri v leavin a shocked n heartbroken samjun bhind

baki ka nxt update me ab to secrets v reveal kar diye so bye😊

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cuteariya

@cuteariya

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Posted: 11 years ago

#50

kya shocked laga diya re 😆 😆
omg roshni's mom is riya's real mom 😲
she cheated her husband 😡
that's why riya & Aisha hate her
poor samjun ko toh shocked pe shocked lag raha hai 🥺
omg Aisha killed her husband just to save girl life
she have daughter also
plz update soon